读后续写练习写作讲义-- 高三英语一轮复习.docx

读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。It was time to go home. “Remember to work on your class speeches for homework,” Miss Walker called as everyone started talking and packing their school bags. Jenny felt sick. She hated having to read aloud in class. She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her. Once, when Jenny was reading out her holiday diary, Lee was even looking at his watch, a silver and blue one which seemed just magical.Jenny watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school. He seemed so clever, and he had a certain sort of shining confidence. He was just one of those people who were good at everything. Jenny sighed. As she turned the comer, she saw Lees watch lying right in the middle of the path.Jenny knew she should just pick it up and return it to him, but she didnt want to run after him. Jenny bent down quickly, picked up the watch and ran home. On arriving home, Jenny put it on almost without thinking. She was surprised it fitted so well. She walked to the mirror and started practicing her speech. Words just flooded out of her. “Im going to talk about swimming. I have been lucky. Ive won lots of competitions. But when Im in a race, Im not really thinking about winning. Im just loving the feeling of being in the water” Jenny laughed with excitement. She walked across the room. She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence. Turning back to the mirror, Jenny saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass. The flashes of silver seemed almost magical. So maybe Lees watch really DID have something magic about it.The next day, as the lesson began, Miss Walker asked who was going to be brave and go first. Nobody moved. Jenny slowly raised her arm. Before Miss Walker could say anything, there was a shout from behind. “Shes stolen my watch!” Lee said angrily, “It went missing at school yesterday.”注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1：Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.Paragraph 2:Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jennys speech first.答案Paragraph 1：Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.Apparently, so immersed in the magic of the watch was Jenny that she had forgotten its there. In a panic, she dropped her arm at once, turning the stares of gossip into gasps of shock. Lee was already on his feet. Before anything hurtful could burst out of his mouth, Miss Walker intervened and calmed the class, “Quiet, please.” Then, she approached Jenny, gently held her trembling hands, and invited her talk outside the classroom. As soon as they stepped out, heads in the class performed a rhythmic dance of turning and tossing. After hearing everything, still holding hands with Jenny, Miss Walker returned.Paragraph 2:Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jennys speech first.Left alone on the podium, she seemed lost as if the only thing she knew was to look down at her empty hands. Still quivering, she suddenly caught a glimpse of silvery flash on her wrist. Almost magically, she raised her head, and the story of her life spilled out. In the end, she said, “Ive spent my whole life finding ease in the water and fear in the crowd. Maybe thats why I clanged onto this watch like a drowning man.” The class fell silent. And the first to break the silence with applause was no other but Lee.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。读后续写原文中文Everybody pushed him away. With a big black birthmark on his face, Thomas never had any friends. He was lonely, as if the world could never see the light. He used to love acting dramas in front of his mother, but now, he thinks he does not have the right to do so with such appearance.所有人都疏远他。Thomas的脸上有一个大大的黑色胎记，他从未有过朋友。他孤独，仿佛他的世界永远没有光明。他曾经喜欢在母亲面前表演戏剧，但现在，他认为他没有权利用这样的外貌做这样的事。This terrible life has begun since Thomas went to school. However, everything changed since that evening.这种痛苦的生活从Thomas上学开始。然而，一切都在那个晚上改变了。Thomas was sitting on the chair, staring out of the window while trying to forget the names that his classmates had called him earlier at school.Thomas坐在椅子上，看着窗外，试图忘记他的同学早些时候在学校叫他的“名字”(绰号)。A knock on the door broke the silence. "Thomas, here's a letter for you, " Mom said while pushing the door open. Just as Thomas reached out for the letter, Mom immediately pulled it away and said: "Let me read it for you."门的敲声打破了寂静。Thomas，这是你的信，"妈妈一边推开门一边说。就在Thomas伸手去取信的时候，妈妈立刻把信拿走了，并说："让我为你读吧。"信件内容：Dear Thomas, How are you? I'm your aunt. I know that you feel sad because of your birthmark, but you cannot change that. Therefore, instead offeeling bad for your appearance, you should stand up for yourself. Go do astonishing things that would change everybody's thoughts about you. Prove yourself. I believe in you. Regards, Aunt Janice.亲爱的Thomas，你好吗？我是你的阿姨。我知道你因为你的胎记而感到难过，但你无法改变那个。因此，你应该挺直腰板，而不是为你的外貌感到痛苦。去做一些令人惊叹的事情，改变所有人对你的看法。证明你自己。我相信你。祝好，Janice阿姨。Thomas felt a wave of warmness in his heart. That night, he carried a smile on his face to his dreams. After that day, Thomas received more letters from relatives, encouraging him to be brave to do what he wants.Thomas心里感到一股暖流。那个晚上，他带着微笑进入了梦乡。从那天开始，Thomas收到了更多来自亲戚的信，鼓励他勇敢地做自己想做的事情。With the encouragement his family had given him, Thomas joined the drama class in his school and had the chance to perform drama in his school. Unexpectedly, the whole school cheered for him and praised his acting skills.在家人的鼓励下，Thomas参加了学校的戏剧课，并有机会在学校表演戏剧。出乎意料的是，全校都为他欢呼，赞扬他的表演技巧。The teachers later signed him up to represent the school for an acting competition. Despite of his appearance, he got the first prize. His confidence grew.后来，老师们报名他代表学校参加一个表演比赛。尽管他的外貌如此，他得到了第一名。他的信心增长了。续写第一段：After all the things Thomas had gone through, he still received letters from relatives.（我的天哪，第一反应写信的是妈妈）Thomas经历了所有这些事情后，他仍然会收到亲戚们的信。续写第二段：One day, Thomas went home from school with a tired body.有一天，Thomas身体疲惫地从学校回家。续写第一段：After all the things Thomas had gone through, he still received letters from relatives. They wrote of his courage, praising his performances, and expressing their pride. Among all the letters, the ones from his Aunt Janice were always the most heartfelt, reinforcing his belief in his abilities and the importance of standing tall against adversity.  And each letter was a mirror reflecting the transformation he was undergoing, from a shy boy hiding behind his birthmark to a young man who commanded the stage, winning hearts with his performances. Thomas felt a sense of gratitude and appreciation for being fortunate enough to have such warming family members.续写第二段：One day, Thomas went home from school with a tired body. （刚开始构思的情节是：Thomas又emo了再次产生“需要解决的矛盾点”，然后妈妈来鼓励他，或者信件激励他，转念一想，第一段已经有足够的来信作为支撑，第二段可以“自强，自勉”，从外在驱动力转变为内在的生长力，这样才能看出Thomas的真正转变，做一个内心强大的人）The day had been long and exhaustive, filled with classwork and addtional rehearsals for the next big play.  As Thomas lay on his bed resting, his gaze wandered over to the pile of letters sitting on his desk, the words of encouragement from his family echoing in his mind. Without warning, a sense of profound gratitude and reinvigoration washed over him. At that very moment, he truly understood that his derived not from his physical appearance. Instead, it is his talents and the strength of his spirit that truly shone through. He fell asleep that night, not with a heavy heart, but with a sense of purpose and a dream of a brighter tomorrow. （有些长了，大家可以删改一些，作为参考）附：官方参考范文续写第一段：After all the things Thomas had gone through, he still received letters from relatives. Mom would always bring letters in and read them aloud to him. Coincidentally, the letters seemed to come very timely whenever he met challenges or doubt about himself. As he stared at the view outside the window, he saw the tree once again, but with fresh green leaves at the tips of the branches, which are reaching high into the blue sky. There are thousands of beautiful flowers around the tree. "That tree, is me, " thought Thomas.续写第二段：One day, Thomas went home from school with a tired body. He dragged himself towards Mom's bedroom door. He opened the door quietly and saw Mom sleeping on the desk. There was an opened letter on Mom's desk. He walked towards the desk, and saw the letter was unfinished. Then, a box with heart shape patterns caught Thomas's eyes. As he opened it with confusion, letters that relatives sent to him were lying in there. He read the letters one by one, and realized the words were Mom's writing. Immediately, Thomas understood all of it. He could never forget how these letters of love had changed him.学科网（北京）股份有限公司