2022年广东省七校联合体高三第二次联考读后续写试题讲解+讲义 高三英语二轮复习.docx

广东省七校联合体高三第二次联考试卷 英语读后续写试题第二节读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。When a tornado （龙卷风）touched down in a small town nearby, many families were left completely ruined. Afterward all the local newspapers carried many human interest stories （有人情 味的故事）featuring some of the families who suffered the hardest.Over Sunday, a particular picture especially touched me. A young woman stood in front of an entirely shabby mobile home, a depressed expression on her face. A young boy, seven or eight years old, stood at her side, eyes downward. Clutching （抓紧）her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, eyes wide with confusion and fear.The article that went with the picture gave the clothing sizes of each family member. With growing interest, I noticed that their sizes closely matched ours. This would be a good opportunity to teach my children to help those less fortunate than themselves. I stuck the picture of the young family on our refrigerator, explaining their difficulty to my seven-year-old twins, Brad and Brett, and to three-year-old Meghan.“These poor people now have nothing/51 said. "We'll share what we have with them." I brought three large boxes down from the room upstairs and placed them on the living room floor. Meghan watched seriously, as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned goods and foods.While I sorted through our clothes, I encouraged the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favorite things. Meghan watched quietly as the boys piled up old toys and games.Meghan walked up with Lucy, her worn, much-loved rag doll hugged tightly to her chest. She came to the box that held the toys, pressed her round little face into Lucy's flat and painted face, gave her a final kiss and then laid her gently on the top of the other toys.“Oh, honey/51 said. "You don't have to give Lucy. You have her so much.”Meghan nodded seriously, eyes filled with held-back tears. "Lucy makes me happy, Mommy. Maybe she'll make that little girl happy, too.” 注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为15。左右；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1: The boys watched, open-mouthed, as their baby sister placed her favorite doll in the box. Paragraph 2:1 looked at my children for a long moment.【试题信息】试卷名称体裁主题语境词数广东省七校联合体 2022届高三第二次 联考试卷记叙文人与社会正文英文词数353,三个词给了中文提 示，续写第一段首句15个单词，续写第 二段首句9个单词。【语篇分析】1 . what （前文主旨）一场龙卷风过后，一张受灾家庭的照片引起了作者的注意，而旁边的文字则详细写到了 每个人的衣服尺码。作者决定利用这次机会来教育孩子们帮助他人。双胞胎儿子Brad和Brett 迅速响应，小女儿Meghan目睹这些之后，竟然拿来了自己最喜爱的布娃娃Lucy,故事由此 展开。2 . why （故事主题）慷慨仁爱、弘扬善行。3 . how （写作技巧）第一人称、记叙、描写4 .具体内容（利用拉波夫叙事模式进行分析）点题这篇文章没有标题，第一段中说明了故事背景。通过阅读第一段可知，本章讲述的是龙 卷风过后的一些有人情味的故事。指向本篇文章的指向就是第二、三段，时间是一个星期天，地点就是在“我”的家里，我看 到报纸上刊登的一张图片，主要人物时“我”和“我”三个孩子（Brad, Brett, Meghan）。进展本文的进展是“我”在报纸上看到一张受灾家庭的照片，很受触动，于是鼓励“我”的 孩子们通过捐献物资的方式帮助这个家庭。“我”和两个儿子整理了不少东西，紧接着最小 的女儿拿出了自己最喜爱的布娃娃Lucy。结果/结局结局部分是需要学生续写的，通过前面的情节走向，再根据续写第一段的首句“Theboys watched, open-mouthed, as Iheir baby sister placed her favorite doll in the box.“可知， 两，个儿子对 于妹妹的行为十分震惊，而根据第二段首句“I looked at my children for a long moment.”可推测， 两个儿子也做了一些让我十分震惊感动的事情。评议本文的倒数就是评议的内容。作者震惊于小女儿的行为，并指出她不必捐出自己最喜欢 的娃娃，而在最后一自然段，Meghan希望能给自己带来快乐的娃娃，也能让另一个小女孩感 到开心。续写第一段的uopen-mouthedv也表明了两个儿子的震惊。5 .语言人物角色 1 ：Brad and Brett性格：慷慨行为：将自己的旧玩具和游戏捐出来角色2：“我”性格：善良、慷慨行为：从报纸上看到照片，鼓励孩子开展捐赠心理：touchedsurprised角色 3 ：Meghan性格：善良行为：看到家人都在捐赠后，拿出了自己最珍爱的娃娃。心理：touched场景“我”的家里语言风格通过行为动作刻画人物形象6 .情节高潮小女儿Meghan拿出了自己最珍爱的娃娃Lucy。行动受到妹妹的鼓舞，两个儿子BradandBrett也捐出了珍贵的东西。（续写第一段）伏笔前文提到“我”和两个儿子正在打包的是旧玩具旧游戏，后续应该会有新物品的对应。【素材积累】Para 1human interest stories有人情味的故事Afterward all the local newspapers carried many human interest stories featuring some of the families who suffered the hardest.Featuring为动词的现在分词做stories的后置定语，表”以为特征“；who引导的是定语从句，修饰families。Para 2I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. 定语从句 句意为：我环顾四周，最后发现了 David,他独自站在栅栏边。by oneself独自 shabby: （adj.）破旧的mobile: （adj.）可移动的depressed: （adj.）沮丧的；抑郁的A young boy, seven or eight years old, stood at her side, eyes downward. 独立主格Clutching her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, eyes wide with confusion and fear. 主表倒装Who引导定语从句；eyes wide独立主格；with confusion and fear伴随状语Para 3fortunate: （adj.） 幸运的I stuck the picture of the young family on our refrigerator, explaining their difficulty.伴随状语 Para 4fill sth. with sth.用装满某物Para 5pile up堆放；堆积Para 6Meghan walked up with Lucy, her worn, much-loved rag doll hugged tightly to her chest. 独立主 格Para 8Meghan nodded seriously, eyes filled with held-back tears. 独立主格【参考范文】The boys watched, open-mouthed, as their baby sister placed her favorite doll in the box. Without a word, Brad rose and went to his room. He came back carrying one of his favorite action figures （非谓语动词短语作状语）.He hesitated briefly, clutching the toy, then looked over at Meghan and placed it in the box next to Lucy. A slow smile spread across Brett's face. Then he jumped up, eyes twinkling （独立主格结构）as he ran to fetch some of his prized Matchbox cars （时间状语从句）.Astonished, I realized that the boys had also recognized what little Meghan's gesture meant （that和what都引导宾语从句）.I looked at my children for a long moment. Swallowing tears, I pulled all the three of them into my arms. Taking the cue from my little one, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes. I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had found on sale last week （定t吾从句）. I hoped the young woman in the picture would love it as much as I did. It's easy to give what we don't want any more （宾语从句），but harder to let go of things we cherish （定语从句），isn't it? However, the true spirit of giving is to give with your heart.