Unit7Careers写作技巧点拨.docx

Unit7 Careers写作技巧点拨求职信求职信属于应用文的范畴，通常是针对招聘广告而写的。写求职信时要讲究遣词用句，措 辞要直接，不拐弯抹角；语言要有礼貌，但不要过分谦卑。一般来说，一封求职信应分为三个部分：第一部分：写信目的。即在开头要说明写信的缘由和目的，指出得知招聘信息的渠道和要 申请的职位。第二部分：自我介绍。写信人应阐明自己的年龄、出生年月、教育背景，尤其是那些与应 征职位有关的培训、教育科目、工作经验或特殊技能等。介绍的重点应放在对自己各方面能力 的描述上，要突出自己的优势和特长，以增加自身的竞争力。第三部分：表达愿望。希望并请求给予面试的机会，因此信中要表明可以面试的时间。增分佳句开头：得知招聘信息的渠道和要申请的职位。1. I learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a.2. I am writing to apply for the job as a tourist guide in your company.3. After reading your advertisement for a secretary in today's English paper, I want to apply for the position.4. I have learned from an advertisement that your company is in need of a manager.5. I am convinced that I will be the right person for the job/position/you are looking for.主体：申请职位的原因，陈述个人经历及技能，简明扼要地说明自己能胜任的理由。1. The position is one for which I can show you some excellent qualification.2. The job sounds particularly interesting and it is the kind of work I have wanted to do for quite a long time.3. I'm sure I will be able to do it well if I get the job/position.4. English is my favourite subject and Fve won several prizes in English contests. So I think that I'm qualified for the position.5. As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a goodcommand of English that I am elected as an assistant to my English teacher.结尾：感谢对方的阅读及考虑自己的应聘，表明自己希望得到回复并表达决心。1. I would appreciate the chance to talk to you very much.2. Thank you for your consideration. I wish to get your reply soon.3. I will appreciate it if I am offered the opportunity.4. Once hired, I will devote myself to the post.5. I am looking forward to your earliest reply.满分作文特训写作要求假定你是李华，25岁，安徽大学英语系毕业，口语流利，曾当过三年英语导游，对英文 秘书工作很感兴趣，看到了报纸上某公司英文秘书的招聘广告，于是想去该公司应聘。请根据 个人情况写一封求职信。注意：1 ,词数100左右；6. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。审题谋篇第一步：审题构思很关键（明确体裁话题卜应用文，求职信：。二二二二二二二一.确定时态人称）;一般现在时为主，第一人称为主11.说明要应聘的职位英文 秘书；2.介绍自己的经历、爱好和获奖开头：写信目的; 主体：自我介绍; 结尾：表达愿望情况;7. 希望收到回复第二步：补全句子雏形现1 .看到报纸上贵公司的招聘广告，我希望能在贵公司任英文秘书一职。I have read your advertisement in the newspaper, and J hope get the job as an English secretary in your company.2 .另外，我可以熟练地操作计算机，并且一分钟可以打100个单词。(be skilled at)more,WhafsI am skilled at operating the_ computer and can type 100 words per minute.3 .我有三年的英语导游经验，如果有机会为贵公司服务，本人对一般事务必能胜任。I have three years' English tour guide experience, and I could make mysel f generally useful,if there should be any opportunity of your requiring my services.第三步：句式升级造亮点1 .用现在分词短语作状语改写第二步中的句1Having read your advertisement in the newspaper, hope tQ get the job as an English .secretary in your company.2 .用形容词短语作状语改写第二步中的句2What's jnore, skilled at_ operating the computer, I can_ type 100 words per minute.3 .用介词短语作状语改写第二步中的句3With three years' English tou匚 guide experience, could make myself gener ally useful, if there should bg any opportunity of youi requiring my seivices.第四步：过渡衔接连成篇One possible version ：Dear Sir/Madam,Having read your advertisement in the newspaper, I hope to get the job as an English secretary in your company.My name is Li Hua, a healthy boy of 25.1 graduated from the English Department of Anhui University. I can speak fluent English and can write in English as well as read all kinds of articles in English. What's more, skilled at operating the computer, I can type 100 words per minute.With three years1 English tour guide experience, I could make myself generally useful, if there should be any opportunity of your requiring my services.I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience.Thank you for your consideration.Yours，Li Hua实战演练假定你是李华，你从中国日报上看到一则广告，招聘办公室职员，你想申请这份工作。下 面是你的基本情况，请根据此情况写一则100词左右的求职信。李华：28岁，毕业于河南大学，之后在联想电脑公司工作过三年，其中的后两年担任办 公室秘书，联系电话：1398811 X XXX, e-mail: 参考词汇：中国日报(C7z加7 Daily)；办公室职员(office clerk)；联想电脑公司(Lenovo Computer Company)One possible version ：Dear Sir/Madam,I read your advertisement in the China Daily for an office clerk. Please allow me to apply for the position.My name is Li Hua. I am 28 years old this year. After graduating from Henan University, I worked for three years at Lenovo Computer Company. During the last two years I have worked as an office secretary. So I have a wide knowledge of business and I am experienced in office work. If you are interested in my application, please give me the opportunity of a personal interview. My telephone number is 1398811 X X X X , and my e-mail address is Iihua66S8.Thank you.Yours,Li Hua