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学习必备 欢迎下载 上海中考作文真题+预测白金版典藏 2010上海中考英语作文题:Im proud of myself 上海中考英语作文题:Im proud of myself 1、What kind of person are you?2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)3、Why are you proud of yourself?要求：至少 60 字 范文：I am a boy of less confidence.I always hate running.But as we all know,the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam.At that moment,I just wanted to give up.but my parents encouraged me:“Impossible is nothing,”“you could challenge yourself!”so with the encouragement of them，,I tried my best to run and insisted on running.When I got to the finishing line,I felt proud of myself,though I didnt get the good mark,I knew,I won.I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!2009年上海中考英语作文试题评析(以“I want to do something for my school（我想为学校做一件事）”为题写篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中学习必备 欢迎下载 不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）学生习作 1 I want to make school clean.You may think it is very simple.But I dont think so.Our teacher said,School is your home,you should keep it clean.But I have never done anything to make school clean.For example,I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground.I also threw the rubbish on the ground.So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me.During this summer holiday,I will go to school to make school clean.Of course,I will do it with my classmates.We will make school clean every weekends next term as well.Now,do you think it is simple?评析 此文分三层，先提出自己的观点，然后写出自己怎么做的，最后写了我可以让我的学校变得干净让每个人宽恕我，结尾紧扣全文，写出我会怎么做。全文立意新颖，区别于传统的作文，有自己的生活背景，写出了从我原来是怎么做到现在的转变过程，没有重大的语法错误，是一篇值得参考的好文章。识并能够发扬优良传统在具体行动中做到讲文明懂礼仪努力提高自己的文明修养活动准备诗朗诵童谣三句半歌舞等活动过程一整队报告人数二出旗奏出旗曲全体队员敬礼三唱队歌四中队长讲话宣布活动开始五活动开始轻音乐主持甲文明人要有良好的习惯主持甲今天就让我们一起搭乘文明航班遨游文明的世界合老师学们大家好文明礼仪伴我行二中队主题队会现在开始主持甲我们中华民族素有礼仪之邦的美称主持乙五千年悠久的历史不但创造了灿烂的文化而且礼的风气主持人乙大家觉得我国国民现在在礼仪方面做得怎样发言主持甲看来礼仪对我们来说真是十分重要啊主持乙不如我们一起来温习古人重礼仪的故事吧这个建议好啊请看新三字经为人子方少时尊长辈习礼仪能温席小黄香爱父学习必备 欢迎下载 中考作文给力预测 假期利弊范文 2008 年政府取消了五一黄金周（May golden week），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢复 7 天的长假。同学们也在校园网的自由论坛上展开了激烈的讨论。请你选用下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈恢复长假的 假期利弊 范文 2008 年政府取消了“五一”黄金周（“May golden week”），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢复 7 天的长假。同学们也在校园网的“自由论坛”上展开了激烈的讨论。请你选用下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈恢复长假的利与弊，并简述你的观点，给出一至两条理由。AdvantagesDisadvantages have a good rest spend more time with cause a lot of trouble be crowded everywhere 识并能够发扬优良传统在具体行动中做到讲文明懂礼仪努力提高自己的文明修养活动准备诗朗诵童谣三句半歌舞等活动过程一整队报告人数二出旗奏出旗曲全体队员敬礼三唱队歌四中队长讲话宣布活动开始五活动开始轻音乐主持甲文明人要有良好的习惯主持甲今天就让我们一起搭乘文明航班遨游文明的世界合老师学们大家好文明礼仪伴我行二中队主题队会现在开始主持甲我们中华民族素有礼仪之邦的美称主持乙五千年悠久的历史不但创造了灿烂的文化而且礼的风气主持人乙大家觉得我国国民现在在礼仪方面做得怎样发言主持甲看来礼仪对我们来说真是十分重要啊主持乙不如我们一起来温习古人重礼仪的故事吧这个建议好啊请看新三字经为人子方少时尊长辈习礼仪能温席小黄香爱父学习必备 欢迎下载 In 2008，May golden week was canceled，but this year people have discussed the problem whether we should renew May golden week or not.Some people think the 7-day holiday is very important.Firstly，we could have a good rest and refresh ourselves after several months of hard work.Secondly，we could spend more time staying with our family.Thirdly，we will be able to use the one-week vacation to travel to some farther places such as foreign countries.However，other people hold the opposite view.They think it causes a lot of problems.It may lead to traffic jam and visitors will not enjoy themselves if the travelling spots are over-crowded.As a student，I prefer a 7-day holiday.Not only can I sleep well and do exercise，but also I can read some interesting books.How I wish a 7-Day holiday would come soon and we will have a 7-day holiday then！公共规则 范文 Its not allowed to throw litter anywhere in the public places.Everyone should obey the rules.Speaking loudly in the reading room is seemed to be very rude.Remember not to do anything that 识并能够发扬优良传统在具体行动中做到讲文明懂礼仪努力提高自己的文明修养活动准备诗朗诵童谣三句半歌舞等活动过程一整队报告人数二出旗奏出旗曲全体队员敬礼三唱队歌四中队长讲话宣布活动开始五活动开始轻音乐主持甲文明人要有良好的习惯主持甲今天就让我们一起搭乘文明航班遨游文明的世界合老师学们大家好文明礼仪伴我行二中队主题队会现在开始主持甲我们中华民族素有礼仪之邦的美称主持乙五千年悠久的历史不但创造了灿烂的文化而且礼的风气主持人乙大家觉得我国国民现在在礼仪方面做得怎样发言主持甲看来礼仪对我们来说真是十分重要啊主持乙不如我们一起来温习古人重礼仪的故事吧这个建议好啊请看新三字经为人子方少时尊长辈习礼仪能温席小黄香爱父学习必备 欢迎下载 might make other people uncomfortable.We should stand in line when we are waitiing for the bus.Try hard to give up the bad habits and develop good ones.We should respect the senior people and talk to them politely.Especially，we should give our seat to old people or women with babies on the bus.I think helping others can not only make us happy but also help us get more experience in life.Please cherish the public property.使用手机 范文 关于中学生使用手机 赞成意见：1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。反对意见：1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone.But some people do not think so.T识并能够发扬优良传统在具体行动中做到讲文明懂礼仪努力提高自己的文明修养活动准备诗朗诵童谣三句半歌舞等活动过程一整队报告人数二出旗奏出旗曲全体队员敬礼三唱队歌四中队长讲话宣布活动开始五活动开始轻音乐主持甲文明人要有良好的习惯主持甲今天就让我们一起搭乘文明航班遨游文明的世界合老师学们大家好文明礼仪伴我行二中队主题队会现在开始主持甲我们中华民族素有礼仪之邦的美称主持乙五千年悠久的历史不但创造了灿烂的文化而且礼的风气主持人乙大家觉得我国国民现在在礼仪方面做得怎样发言主持甲看来礼仪对我们来说真是十分重要啊主持乙不如我们一起来温习古人重礼仪的故事吧这个建议好啊请看新三字经为人子方少时尊长辈习礼仪能温席小黄香爱父学习必备 欢迎下载 hey think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone.Because the students will use mobile phones to play games，sent text messages，watch movies，etc which will do harm to their study.And if a mobile phone ring in the class，the teacher and students would be disturbed.In my opinion，we can bring mobile phones to school.As we know，the 21st century is a modern age and full of information.A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information.The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention，so we ought to make the best use of it.Suppose theres a sudden accident，it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately.Therere also some games in the mobile phone.We can relax ourselves by playing them when were tired of our studies.In my opinion，its not wrong to follow the fashion，but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturbed others.网络游戏 范文 沉迷网络游戏 题目：李小虎沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢？识并能够发扬优良传统在具体行动中做到讲文明懂礼仪努力提高自己的文明修养活动准备诗朗诵童谣三句半歌舞等活动过程一整队报告人数二出旗奏出旗曲全体队员敬礼三唱队歌四中队长讲话宣布活动开始五活动开始轻音乐主持甲文明人要有良好的习惯主持甲今天就让我们一起搭乘文明航班遨游文明的世界合老师学们大家好文明礼仪伴我行二中队主题队会现在开始主持甲我们中华民族素有礼仪之邦的美称主持乙五千年悠久的历史不但创造了灿烂的文化而且礼的风气主持人乙大家觉得我国国民现在在礼仪方面做得怎样发言主持甲看来礼仪对我们来说真是十分重要啊主持乙不如我们一起来温习古人重礼仪的故事吧这个建议好啊请看新三字经为人子方少时尊长辈习礼仪能温席小黄香爱父学习必备 欢迎下载 请用下面所给的提示词写一篇短文。提示词：give up concentrate on be（become）interested in Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others.As a good/close friend of his，I must do something to help him.First，I think its very important for him to learn lessons well.He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games.Secondly，I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health，especially for his eyes.So he must give it up.I can play more sports with him after school.Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games.And then Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study.Of course，I will try my best to help him with all his subjects.I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying.At the same time，Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him，too.If I try these，Im sure he will make great progress soon.突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题，从非典到雪灾，从地震到甲型 HINI 流感病例（A/HINIflucases），近几年时事热点都频频出现在各地中考试卷中，因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌握基本句式和写作 识并能够发扬优良传统在具体行动中做到讲文明懂礼仪努力提高自己的文明修养活动准备诗朗诵童谣三句半歌舞等活动过程一整队报告人数二出旗奏出旗曲全体队员敬礼三唱队歌四中队长讲话宣布活动开始五活动开始轻音乐主持甲文明人要有良好的习惯主持甲今天就让我们一起搭乘文明航班遨游文明的世界合老师学们大家好文明礼仪伴我行二中队主题队会现在开始主持甲我们中华民族素有礼仪之邦的美称主持乙五千年悠久的历史不但创造了灿烂的文化而且礼的风气主持人乙大家觉得我国国民现在在礼仪方面做得怎样发言主持甲看来礼仪对我们来说真是十分重要啊主持乙不如我们一起来温习古人重礼仪的故事吧这个建议好啊请看新三字经为人子方少时尊长辈习礼仪能温席小黄香爱父学习必备 欢迎下载 突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题，从非典到雪灾，从地震到甲型 HINI 流感病例（A/HINI flu cases），近几年时事热点都频频出现在各地中考试卷中，因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要。典型例句：1.one+of+形容词最高级+名词复数 One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in WenChuan.2.It“s our duty to do sth Its our duty to help them.3.As.as possible We should help them as much as possible.4.here be。.Here are lots of things we can do.5.We should keep calm instead of being afraid.我们要保持冷静而不能害怕。6.make+sb+形容词 识并能够发扬优良传统在具体行动中做到讲文明懂礼仪努力提高自己的文明修养活动准备诗朗诵童谣三句半歌舞等活动过程一整队报告人数二出旗奏出旗曲全体队员敬礼三唱队歌四中队长讲话宣布活动开始五活动开始轻音乐主持甲文明人要有良好的习惯主持甲今天就让我们一起搭乘文明航班遨游文明的世界合老师学们大家好文明礼仪伴我行二中队主题队会现在开始主持甲我们中华民族素有礼仪之邦的美称主持乙五千年悠久的历史不但创造了灿烂的文化而且礼的风气主持人乙大家觉得我国国民现在在礼仪方面做得怎样发言主持甲看来礼仪对我们来说真是十分重要啊主持乙不如我们一起来温习古人重礼仪的故事吧这个建议好啊请看新三字经为人子方少时尊长辈习礼仪能温席小黄香爱父学习必备 欢迎下载 It makes many people homeless.7.too to=so that They are too young to look after themselves 例文：1、汶川大地震 2008 年 5 月 12 日，四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。要求：文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80100 字左右;词汇参考：地震 earthquake，悲痛 sorrow，受到感动 be deeply moved，安慰 comfort，重建 rebuild，自愿做某事 volunteer to do sth 参考范文：On May 12th，a big earthquake happened in Wenchun，Sichuan.Many people lost their relatives and their homes.All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of people volunteer to help them.Some people raise money for them，some people buy something for them，some people go there to comfort the sad children.Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.Im deeply m识并能够发扬优良传统在具体行动中做到讲文明懂礼仪努力提高自己的文明修养活动准备诗朗诵童谣三句半歌舞等活动过程一整队报告人数二出旗奏出旗曲全体队员敬礼三唱队歌四中队长讲话宣布活动开始五活动开始轻音乐主持甲文明人要有良好的习惯主持甲今天就让我们一起搭乘文明航班遨游文明的世界合老师学们大家好文明礼仪伴我行二中队主题队会现在开始主持甲我们中华民族素有礼仪之邦的美称主持乙五千年悠久的历史不但创造了灿烂的文化而且礼的风气主持人乙大家觉得我国国民现在在礼仪方面做得怎样发言主持甲看来礼仪对我们来说真是十分重要啊主持乙不如我们一起来温习古人重礼仪的故事吧这个建议好啊请看新三字经为人子方少时尊长辈习礼仪能温席小黄香爱父学习必备 欢迎下载 oved by these people.So Ill use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there.I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.2、雪灾 2008 年春节期间，我国大部分地区遭受雪灾，特别是南方，室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪，数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改变这种状态？As we know，our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival.Everything was covered with heavy snow.It made the buses，trains and planes stop.Millions of people couldn”t go home.Many people suffered trouble.There was no food，water or light in some places.Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow.As a student，I think we should learn from those heroes.We must study hard at school.We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger，better and richer.3.甲型 HINI 流感 从电视上看到美国正流行甲型 HINI 流感（A/HINI flu），部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友 Mike 的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封 email 询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。识并能够发扬优良传统在具体行动中做到讲文明懂礼仪努力提高自己的文明修养活动准备诗朗诵童谣三句半歌舞等活动过程一整队报告人数二出旗奏出旗曲全体队员敬礼三唱队歌四中队长讲话宣布活动开始五活动开始轻音乐主持甲文明人要有良好的习惯主持甲今天就让我们一起搭乘文明航班遨游文明的世界合老师学们大家好文明礼仪伴我行二中队主题队会现在开始主持甲我们中华民族素有礼仪之邦的美称主持乙五千年悠久的历史不但创造了灿烂的文化而且礼的风气主持人乙大家觉得我国国民现在在礼仪方面做得怎样发言主持甲看来礼仪对我们来说真是十分重要啊主持乙不如我们一起来温习古人重礼仪的故事吧这个建议好啊请看新三字经为人子方少时尊长辈习礼仪能温席小黄香爱父学习必备 欢迎下载 要点：一、询问 1.他的健康状况;2.他们学校有无甲型 HINI 流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）;3.他们是否还上学。二、建议 1.尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方;2.勤洗手;讲卫生 3.多开窗，保持空气新鲜;4.多吃水果蔬菜。Dear Mike，From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result.Im so worried about you.Are you alright？Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school？Do you still have to school everyday？To stay away from the disease，youd better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people.Wash your hands more often to keep them clean;Open the window to have more fresh air in the room;And eat more fruit and v识并能够发扬优良传统在具体行动中做到讲文明懂礼仪努力提高自己的文明修养活动准备诗朗诵童谣三句半歌舞等活动过程一整队报告人数二出旗奏出旗曲全体队员敬礼三唱队歌四中队长讲话宣布活动开始五活动开始轻音乐主持甲文明人要有良好的习惯主持甲今天就让我们一起搭乘文明航班遨游文明的世界合老师学们大家好文明礼仪伴我行二中队主题队会现在开始主持甲我们中华民族素有礼仪之邦的美称主持乙五千年悠久的历史不但创造了灿烂的文化而且礼的风气主持人乙大家觉得我国国民现在在礼仪方面做得怎样发言主持甲看来礼仪对我们来说真是十分重要啊主持乙不如我们一起来温习古人重礼仪的故事吧这个建议好啊请看新三字经为人子方少时尊长辈习礼仪能温席小黄香爱父学习必备 欢迎下载 egetable to keep yourself fit and strong.So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be.Do be at ease！Take care and youll be OK.Yours truly，Li Hua 识并能够发扬优良传统在具体行动中做到讲文明懂礼仪努力提高自己的文明修养活动准备诗朗诵童谣三句半歌舞等活动过程一整队报告人数二出旗奏出旗曲全体队员敬礼三唱队歌四中队长讲话宣布活动开始五活动开始轻音乐主持甲文明人要有良好的习惯主持甲今天就让我们一起搭乘文明航班遨游文明的世界合老师学们大家好文明礼仪伴我行二中队主题队会现在开始主持甲我们中华民族素有礼仪之邦的美称主持乙五千年悠久的历史不但创造了灿烂的文化而且礼的风气主持人乙大家觉得我国国民现在在礼仪方面做得怎样发言主持甲看来礼仪对我们来说真是十分重要啊主持乙不如我们一起来温习古人重礼仪的故事吧这个建议好啊请看新三字经为人子方少时尊长辈习礼仪能温席小黄香爱父