天津市河东区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达.docx

天津市河东区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编书面表达2023年天津市河东区中考一模英语试题九、书面表达(本大题共15分)86.假如你是光明中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你星期 三放学回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。(1)开始下雨，路上有很多行人，有放学回家的学生，还有下班的人们。(2)在人行道上的一个井盖出了问题，快要破碎了；为保证人们安全，两个男孩站在井盖旁 边告诉其他人绕行；人们纷纷表达感谢。(3)有人主动给他们打伞；有人拨打电话报警。(4)你认为参考词汇：人行道 pavement井盖manhole cover要求：(1)词数：80100词；00(2)日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数；(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。WednesdayWhen I was on my way home from school, I noticed2022年天津市河东区中考一模英语试题十三、日记86.书面表达.3月5日是学雷锋纪念日，你校师生去敬老院开展志愿者活动。假如你是李华，请通过邮件 将此活动情况介绍给Maryo活动时间：3月5日活动地点：幸福敬老院(Nursing Home)参与人员：志愿者活动形式：1.送鲜花、水果和美好的祝福。2 .帮老人整理房间、打扫卫生3 .陪老人聊天；为老人表演(唱歌、跳舞)，读报活动感想：此活动很有意义，从中学会了关爱老人、尊重老人要求：1.要点齐全，条理清晰，语句通顺，不要逐字翻译，须适当发挥。2.词数100字左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）Dear Mary,Thank you for your last E-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5thMarch.Li Hua2021年天津市河东区中考一模英语试题八、书信作文66.假设你是光华中学的学生李明，你有一个笔友王华，你们有用英语写信的习惯，上 周日你收到他的来信。请根据以下所给汉语提示给他写一封回信。要求:1.100词以上。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：支教教师 volunteer teacher 交换、交流 exchange 风土人情 local conditions and customs1 .收到王华来信感到很高兴；2 .通过来信得知王华的姐姐正在贫困地区支教，已经待在那里两年多；3 .希望王华问他的姐姐是否能把她的学生们介绍给你；4 .你打算帮助他们，送给他们一些书籍；5你希望能给他们写信，交流学习经验、分享兴趣爱好、了解他们的风土人情;6.你认为：（至少两条），并期待他的回信。Dear Wang Hua,How are you? Last Sunday, IYours答案：2023年天津市河东区中考一模英语试题One possible version WednesdayWhen I was on my way home from school, I noticed it began to rain. There were a lot of people on the road, who went home in a hurry from work or after school. Suddenly there was something wrong with one of manhole covers on the pavement, which was going to break into pieces. In order to keep the people safe, two boys stood next to the manhole cover to tell others stay away from the broken manhole cover. Many people gave thanks to them because they warned people about the danger. At that time, someone offered to hold an umbrella for them and someone else called the police for help.In my opinion, the two boys were so brave and helpful and we should learn from them. Everyone in the city should do something good to make our city more and more beautiful.2022年天津市河东区中考一模英语试题86. Dear Mary,Thank you for your last E-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5thMarch.As a member of volunteers, I got up early because I was too excited to sleep. In the morning, we volunteers brought some flowers and fresh fruit. As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we sent them our best wishes too. How happy they were!Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. After that, some of us performed activities for them, such as singing songs and dancing. Some of us read newspaper for them. Some of us chatted with them. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them. In our daily life, we should offer our seats to them on buses. And we should treat our own grandparents more kindly.If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us.Li Hua【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，也是日记。本文时态主要是一般过去时。认为 阅读料，认真审题，根据提示要点列出提纲，短文必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥。注意语 法和单词拼写。2 .例文点评：例文符合题目要求，写出了去敬老院开展志愿者活动过程，包含了所有要点。 本文格式时态使用正确，表达条理清楚连贯，没有语法单词拼写错误，符合英语的表达习惯, 运用了合适的连接词或过渡词，文章思路清晰，富有逻辑性。3 .高分亮点：(一)短语和连词的使用：As, because, too.to., then, after, such as, when, if 等。 (二) 句型：(1) Asa member of volunteers, I got up early because I was too excited to sleep.(2) As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we sent them our best wishes too. (3) When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.(4) From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them.等。2021年天津市河东区中考一模英语试题66. One possible version：Dear Wang Hua,How are you? Last Sunday, I felt very happy when I heard from you. From your letter, I know your sister is working as a volunteer teacher in a poor area and she has stayed there for more than two years. Can you help me ask her whether she can introduce her students to me or not? I am going to help the students by giving the some books. Besides, I hope to write to them so that we can exchange learning experience and share hobbies and interests. At the same time, I can learn about their local conditions and customs in order to open the mind.In my opinion, we should make some good friends as possible as we can to share beautiful things. What's more, we are supposed to offer a hand to those who are in need. As long as we work hard together, our world will be more and more beautiful.I am looking forward to your letter.YoursLi Ming 【详解】L题干解读：该题目属于书信作文。题目要求给笔友王华写一封100词以上的回信， 注意提示内容要写全，书信格式要正确。2.写法指导：根据要求列出写作要点，用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出 自己的观点。然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，人称以第一人称为主；时态以一般现在时和一般过 去时为主。在写作过程中，要注意主谓一致等问题，不要出现语法错误；最后要细心复核检 查，确保正确无误。