英语作文亮点外语学习英语写作_外语学习-英语写作.pdf

优秀资料 欢迎下载 英语作文“亮点”NMET 书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求：“应用了较多的语法结构或词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看，每篇文章都有“亮”点，即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。一、词汇选择标新立异 在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用大纲上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。A:The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.B:The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.分析:is in 是常见词语，而 situates in 则是大纲上没有的，属于高级词汇。2)在周末我们做很多作业。A:At weekends,we have a lot of homework to do.B:At weekends,we have endless homework to do.分析:B 句在表达时没有使用过于直接的 a lot of，而是使用了 endless。endless 就是由 大纲词汇 end 加后缀-less变化来的。3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。A:The bathroom and the kitchen are good.B.The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.在表达要点时，B 句使用了 well furnished,这比 good 语气强，也显得生动。在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。优秀资料 欢迎下载 二、结构造句与众不同 在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。A:There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.B:A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.大多数同学使用了 there be 结构，这是对的，但是 B 句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了 terrible,hit/strike 这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)B:Your letter of August 15th reached/got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：3)阿福救了我妹妹。A:Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)B:It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。A:We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)B:How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等；一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A 句简单句多，而且多处使用 there be 结构，显得单调、乏味，而 B 句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。5)这是一套 25 平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房；卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。A:Its a flat of 25 square metres.There is a bedroom in the flat.There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it,too.In the bedroom,there is a bed;there is a sofa,a desk and a chair as well.B:Its a flat of 25 square metres,with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.In the bedroom there is a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.有少许错误但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致有效地使用了语句间的连接成分使全文结构紧凑从历年书面表达高分文章来看每篇文章都有亮点即在用词造句或段落安排上都有独到之处要想获得高分就应在正确表达的基础上使用通过构词法变化来的新词使用同近义词或反义词等来代常见词语这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上分析是常见词语而则是大纲上没有的属于高级词汇在周末我们做很多作业分析句在表达时没有使用过于直接的而是使用了就是由大纲运用贴切自然哪怕整篇文章只用上一个也会使你的作文显示出与众不同二结构造句与众不同优秀资料欢迎下载在造句时既要使句子生动又要使其简明扼要使用与人不同的表达方式特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更优秀资料 欢迎下载 三、布局谋篇独具匠心 在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002 范文堪称典范。请看：Opinions are divided on the question.60%of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.They believe a public park should be free of charge.People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of a city.On the other hand,40%think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers,and to buy plants and young trees.They suggested,however,fees should be charged low.1)该文使用 Opinions are divided.作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested,however,fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。3)范文使用了 and,what is more,however 等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了 Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。总之，要想使自己的文章有亮点，吸引读者，在考试中获得高分，就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫，哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点，都是值得肯定的。有少许错误但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致有效地使用了语句间的连接成分使全文结构紧凑从历年书面表达高分文章来看每篇文章都有亮点即在用词造句或段落安排上都有独到之处要想获得高分就应在正确表达的基础上使用通过构词法变化来的新词使用同近义词或反义词等来代常见词语这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上分析是常见词语而则是大纲上没有的属于高级词汇在周末我们做很多作业分析句在表达时没有使用过于直接的而是使用了就是由大纲运用贴切自然哪怕整篇文章只用上一个也会使你的作文显示出与众不同二结构造句与众不同优秀资料欢迎下载在造句时既要使句子生动又要使其简明扼要使用与人不同的表达方式特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更优秀资料 欢迎下载 历年中考英语：经典作文模板总结 一、解决方法题型 考生要列举出解决问题的多种途径 问题现状 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)In recent days,we have to face I problem-A,which is becoming more and more serious.First,-(说明的现状)Second,-(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with A,we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,-(解决方法一).For another-(解决方法二).Finally,-(解决方法三).Personally,I believe that-(我的解决方法).Consequently,Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because-(带来的好处).二、说明利弊题型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）说明事物现状 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）你对现状（或前景）的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally,its advantages can be seen as follows.First-(的优点之一).Besides-（的优点之二）.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that-(的第一个缺点)To make matters worse,-(的第二个缺点)Through the above analysis,I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore,I would like to-(我的看法)(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A,we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,-(对前景的预测)有少许错误但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致有效地使用了语句间的连接成分使全文结构紧凑从历年书面表达高分文章来看每篇文章都有亮点即在用词造句或段落安排上都有独到之处要想获得高分就应在正确表达的基础上使用通过构词法变化来的新词使用同近义词或反义词等来代常见词语这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上分析是常见词语而则是大纲上没有的属于高级词汇在周末我们做很多作业分析句在表达时没有使用过于直接的而是使用了就是由大纲运用贴切自然哪怕整篇文章只用上一个也会使你的作文显示出与众不同二结构造句与众不同优秀资料欢迎下载在造句时既要使句子生动又要使其简明扼要使用与人不同的表达方式特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更优秀资料 欢迎下载 三、议论文的框架 (1)不同观点列举型（选择型）There is a widespread concern over the issue that _ 作文题目_.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 观点一_.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows:in the first place,_原因一_.Furthermore,in the second place,_ 原因二_.So it goes without saying that _观点一_.People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that _观点二_.In their point of view,on the one hand，_原因一_.On the other hand,_原因二_.Therefore,there is no doubt that _观点二_.As far as I am concerned,I firmly support the view that _观点一或二_.It is not only because _,but also because _.The more _,the more _.（2）利弊型的议论文 Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)_作文题目_.In fact,there are both advantages and disadvantages in _ 题目议题_.Generally speaking,it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly,_优点一_.And secondly _优点二_.Just As a popular saying goes,every coin has two sides,_讨论议题_ is no exception,and in another word,it still has negative aspects.To begin with,_缺点一_.In addition,_缺点二_.To sum up,we should try to bring the advantages of _讨论议题_ into full play,and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case,we will definitely make a better use of the _讨论议题_.议论文模板 1.正反观点式议论文模板：导入：第 1 段：Recently weve had a discussion about whether we should.（导入话题）Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧）正文：第 2 段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）Here are the reasons.First.Second.Finally.(列出 23 个赞成的理由)第 3 段：However,the others are strongly against it.（反方观点）Their reasons are as follows.In the first place.Whats more.In addition.(列出 23 个反对的理由)结论：第 4 段：Personally speaking,the advantages overweigh the disadvantages,for it will do us more harm than good,so I support it.（个人观点）。有少许错误但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致有效地使用了语句间的连接成分使全文结构紧凑从历年书面表达高分文章来看每篇文章都有亮点即在用词造句或段落安排上都有独到之处要想获得高分就应在正确表达的基础上使用通过构词法变化来的新词使用同近义词或反义词等来代常见词语这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上分析是常见词语而则是大纲上没有的属于高级词汇在周末我们做很多作业分析句在表达时没有使用过于直接的而是使用了就是由大纲运用贴切自然哪怕整篇文章只用上一个也会使你的作文显示出与众不同二结构造句与众不同优秀资料欢迎下载在造句时既要使句子生动又要使其简明扼要使用与人不同的表达方式特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更优秀资料 欢迎下载 2.A 或者 B类议论文模板：导入：第 1 段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others,however,argue that B is much better.Personally,I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.正文：第 2 段：There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main reason is that.Another reason is that.(赞同 A 的原因)第 3 段:Of course,B also has advantages to some extent.(列出 12 个 B 的优势)结论：第4段:But if all these factors are considered,A is much better than B.From what has been discussed above,we may finally draw the conclusion that.(得出结论)3.观点论述类议论文模板：导入：第 1 段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题 As a student,I am strongly in favour of the decision.（亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对）The reasons for this may be listed as follows.（过渡句，承上启下）正文：第 2 段：First of all.Secondly.Besides.(列出 23 个赞成或反对的理由)结论：第 3 段：In conclusion,I believe that.（照应第 1 段，构成总-分-总结构）4.How to 类议论文模板：导入：第 1 段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题 正文：第 2 段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem,but the following may be most effective.First of all.Another way to solve the problem is.Finally.(列出 23 个解决此类问题的办法)结论：第 3 段：These are not the best but the only two/three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to.(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)有少许错误但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致有效地使用了语句间的连接成分使全文结构紧凑从历年书面表达高分文章来看每篇文章都有亮点即在用词造句或段落安排上都有独到之处要想获得高分就应在正确表达的基础上使用通过构词法变化来的新词使用同近义词或反义词等来代常见词语这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上分析是常见词语而则是大纲上没有的属于高级词汇在周末我们做很多作业分析句在表达时没有使用过于直接的而是使用了就是由大纲运用贴切自然哪怕整篇文章只用上一个也会使你的作文显示出与众不同二结构造句与众不同优秀资料欢迎下载在造句时既要使句子生动又要使其简明扼要使用与人不同的表达方式特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更