江苏省苏州市工业园区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达+.docx

江苏省苏州市工业园区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编书面表达2023年江苏省苏州市工业园区中考一模英语试卷八、书面表达(共1小题;满分20分)63.时间胶囊(time capsule)，又名时间舱，是指选取有代表性意义的物品装入容器，密封后深 埋地下，并设置一个在未来打开的时间。如果你有机会为100年后的青少年准备一个时间胶囊, 你会在里面存放什么？是一张照片，一份报纸，一本书,一封信，还是其他物品？请以“ My time capsule”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1. What would you put in the time capsule? (1 or 2 items)2. Why do you choose it/them?注意：1 .词数100词左右；2 .内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥；3 .文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。My time capsule2022年江苏省苏州市工业园区中考一模英语试卷九、书面表达(本大题共1小题，共25.0分)1. 2022年，我们被很多闪光的人物感动：有为国争光的奥运健儿，有抗击疫情的医护 人员，有风雨无阻的快递小哥，有兢兢业业的社区工作人员他们都在各自的工作岗 位上奉献着光和热。五一国际劳动节来临之际，学校公众号打算以“ My ideal job”为题举 办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。要点：1 .What is your ideal job?2 .Why do you want to do such a job ? (at least 2 points)3 .How are you going to make it come true? (at least 2 points) 注意：1 .所写内容必须涵盖所有要点，并作适当发挥；2 .词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数；3 .文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。My ideal jobEverybody has his ideal job.2021年江苏省苏州市工业园区中考一模英语试卷56.青少年健康成长的社会关注度一直很高。请你根据图片信息和提示以“Tips for teenagers"为主题，写一篇英文演讲稿，介绍青少年该如何健康快乐地学习和生活。Tips for teenagers 注意：1 .对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。2 .词数90左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。3 .文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。Tips for teenagersDear all,Now, more and more people pay attention to the growth of teenagers. Here are some tips for you.I hope these tips can help you live a healthy life.答案：2023年江苏省苏州市工业园区中考一模英语试卷63 .例文：My time capsuleIn the time capsule, I would place a drawing of a scene depicting life on Mars.With the advancements made by Chinese scientists in cultivating crops like rice, and the continued progress in space exploration, I believe that we will be able to cultivate more kinds of plants and even animals in space, providing us with the foundation which is necessary to explore the outer space. Perhaps in 100 years, many of the humans, including teenagers, will have already migrated to Mars, and I am dreaming of this day's arrival. I truly believe that the support of science and technology will make it a reality.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时、一般将来时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意介绍自己会在时间胶囊里放什么，并阐述选择它/它们 的原因。写作步骤第一步，引入正文，介绍自己会在时间胶囊里放的东西； 第二步，阐述选择它/他们的原因。亮点词汇be able to能够provide.with 为提供kinds of各种各样的 高分句型 I believe that we will be able to cultivate more kinds of plants and even animals in space, providing us with the foundation which is necessary to explore the outer space.（使用宾语从句、 定语从句） I truly believe that the support of science and technology will make it a reality.（使用宾语从 句）2022年江苏省苏州市工业园区中考一模英语试卷My ideal jobEverybody has his ideal job.【高分句型一】And my ideal job is to be a writer.（引出话题，我 的理想工作是什么）First of all,I am crazy about reading.Ever since I was able to readj have read thousands of books,including classical Chinese novels and history books.I enjoy myself in the world of literature every time I read.Second,both my teacher and classmates think highly of my writing. And I have won prizes in a few writing competitions.（两点原因）To achieve my dream,! plan to take online writing courses to improve my writing skills.Also,I keep a diary to write down my thoughts,my feelings and my dreams for the future.Through hard work,1 believe I can make it.【高分句型二】（怎样实现理想）（113 words）【解析】【高分句型一】First of all,I am crazy about reading.首先，我对阅读很着迷。be crazy about 对很着迷。【高分句型二】Through hard work,! believe I can make it.通过努力工作，我相信我能做到。I believe +宾语从句，表示我相信。这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。写作时 要结合表格内容对情况进行陈述，之后给出自己的看法和建议，看法和建议需要自主发挥。 在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。2021年江苏省苏州市工业园区中考一模英语试卷【答案】例文Tips for teenagersDear all,Now more and more people pay attention to the growth of teenagers. Here are some tips for you.First, be active in class. This helps to make you feel more confident and improve your ability to express yourself. Also, make sure you get enough sleep at night. Nobody can study well when they are tired.Moreover, starting your life with good habits can help you shape your future. Get regular exercise, have a healthy diet and keep yourself clean.Finally, keep your stress under control. You should spend time enjoying life, such as joining a sports team and reading a book. In this way, you can reduce stress.I hope these tips can help you live a healthy life.【解析】【详解】L题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。以“给青少年的建议”为题，写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。分为五段式，第一段引出主题；第二段到第四段从积极 参与课堂，保证充分休息，培养健康习惯，控制压力几个方面提出建议；最后一段表达希望。写 作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。