应用文之申请信练习写作讲义 高三英语写作三轮冲刺.docx

应用文之申请信练习写作讲义题目假如你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.    写信目的；2.    个人优势；3.    能做的事。全文呈现（133字）Being a student from China, Im writing this letter to apply for the voluntary position in our local gallery where voluntary workers are in great demand. And Im really willing to expect you can consider me into this position.Given that I can speak both English and fluent Chinese and I am outgoing, sociable and responsible, I do believe I am suitable for this position. In addition, through this, I can not only improve my oral English but also introduce Chinese painting and calligraphy culture to visitors from all over the world. I would also like to hold this opportunity to deepen visitors understanding of China and its painting and calligraphy culture. I hope it is possible to be accepted as a volunteer of our gallery.Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.逐句翻译1. Being a student from China, Im writing this letter to apply for the voluntary position in our local gallery where voluntary workers are in great demand.作为一名中国学生，我写这封信是想申请本地美术馆的志愿者职位，那里目前有志愿者的需求。（申请信开头功能句式，实际上where之后的从句是没有意义的重复，可以直接删掉）2. And Im really willing to expect you can consider me into this position.希望您能考虑我的申请。（申请信功能句式，建议记忆）3. Given that I can speak both English and fluent Chinese and I am outgoing, sociable and responsible, I do believe I am suitable for this position.鉴于我能说英文、中文流利，而且我性格外向、善于交际、认真负责，我认为自己非常适合这个职位。（陈述个人优势的句式，“Given that ”在句首就是“鉴于、基于某些情况”的意思，主要用于描述某些需要纳入考虑范围的因素）4. In addition, through this, I can not only improve my oral English but also introduce Chinese painting and calligraphy culture to visitors from all over the world.另外，通过这次机会，我不仅可以提高我的英语口语，而且还可以向来自世界各地的访客介绍中国的书画文化。（这部分应该对应的是第三个写作要点“能做的事”，建议各位在自己构思的时候不要使用类似“通过这次机会让自我提升”的内容。申请信是体现个人能力优势的，作为用人单位并没有义务给你提供锻炼机会，所以类似的内容反而会削弱申请的有效性）5. I would also like to hold this opportunity to deepen visitors understanding of China and its painting and calligraphy culture.我也希望通过这次机会加深访客对中国及其书画文化的了解。（这样的内容就是可以接受的）6. I hope it is possible to be accepted as a volunteer of our gallery.希望能够成为美术馆的志愿者。（申请信结尾功能句式，建议记忆）7. Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.如果能够尽快收到回复，我会感激不尽。（申请信结尾功能句式，建议记忆）不同版本（159字）Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua, currently studying in London during my summer break. Learning that your art gallery will be hosting a Chinese painting exhibition, I am writing to apply for the volunteer position to offer my assistance in making the exhibition a success.我是李华，暑假期间正在伦敦学习。得知您的美术馆将举办中国画展，我想申请志愿者的职位，为画展的成功尽一臂之力。I believe that my personal strengths make me a suitable candidate. Firstly, I have a solid understanding of Chinese painting techniques and themes, which will enable me to provide valuable insights to visitors. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, allowing me to effectively communicate with both Chinese and international visitors.我认为我具备一定的个人优势，能够成为一名合格的候选人。首先，我非常熟悉中国绘画的技巧和主题，所以我能为参观者提供重要的理解。此外，我的中文和英文都很流利，这样我能够有效地与中国和国际参观者交流。I am confident in my ability to assist in various aspects of the exhibition, such as the arrangement of the artworks, introduction to the visitors, and social media publicity. My dedication will make me a valuable addition to your team. Thank you for considering my application. I am eagerly looking forward to the possibility of volunteering for this exhibition.我对自己的能力很有自信，可以为展览的各个环节提供帮助，如艺术品的安排，给访客的介绍，以及社交媒体上的宣传。我的敬业精神会让我成为您的团队的重要补充。谢谢您考虑我的申请。期待能为这次展览服务。Yours sincerely,Li Hua题目假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：1.    自我介绍（包括英语能力）；2.    参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；3.    希望获准。全文呈现（98字）Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply!逐句翻译1. Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China.我是李华，一个来自中国的中学生。（申请信开头个人基本信息介绍）2. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.我看了你们在网上发布的夏令营公告，我对它很感兴趣。（申请信功能句式，建议记忆）3. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it.我知道你们欢迎来自不同国家的学生，我想参加。（申请信功能句式，建议记忆）4. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English.我已经学习英语10年了，我可以说流利的英语。（陈述个人优势）5. What is more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.更重要的是，我可以向其他国家的学生介绍中国，也可以了解他们的国家。（参与活动的目的）6. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.我希望我能够被录取为你们夏令营的成员。（申请信结尾功能句式）7. Looking forward to your reply!期待您的回复！（申请信结尾功能句式）不同版本（146字）Dear Summer Camp Organizers,I am Li Hua, a high school student from China. Recently, I came across information about the upcoming summer camp to be organized in Singapore, and I am writing to apply for participation.我是李华，一个来自中国的高中生。最近，我看到了即将在新加坡举办的夏令营的信息，我写信申请参加。Allow me to introduce myself. Fluent in English, I have actively participated in various English-speaking activities, which enables me to communicate effectively with other students. As for my purpose, I believe this camp will provide an excellent platform for me to exhibit and share my knowledge of the rich culture of China. Besides, I am also enthusiastic about learning about other countries and their traditions, meanwhile fostering invaluable friendships with students from diverse backgrounds.请允许我介绍一下自己。我的英语流利，积极参与过各种英语活动，所以我能够有效地与其他同学交流。至于我的目的，我相信这次夏令营将为我提供一个很好的平台去展示和分享我对中国文化的认识。此外，我也很想了解其它国家和他们的传统，同时与来自不同背景的学生建立起宝贵的友谊。I kindly request your approval to participate in this summer camp. This experience will not only enrich my personal growth, but contribute to the success of the camp. Thank you for your consideration. I eagerly await your positive response.希望您批准我参加这次夏令营。这一经历不仅会丰富我的个人成长，而且有助于夏令营的成功。谢谢您的考虑。期待您的积极回应。Yours sincerely,Li Hua学科网（北京）股份有限公司