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Academic Writing7类常见错误类常见错误1/341.省略省略2/34Wealthy parents shouldnt spoil their children.3/34Shouldnt Im Cant Hes 4/34Shouldnt should not Im I am Cant cannotHes he is/he has he was5/342.Informal language6/34Today,newspapers report lots of crimes in horrible details.7/34lots of a host of a vast number of numerous a great deal of a great amount of 可数可数不可数不可数 8/343.Spelling9/34英美词汇差异英美词汇差异The impact of tourism on these traditional neighbourhoods must be analysed.The impact of tourism on these traditional neighborhoods must be analyzed.10/34 英式英式 美式美式 se ze/ce analyse analyze civilise civilize practise practice globalise globalizev.11/34 英式英式 美式美式 our or colour color neighbour neighbor favourite favoriten.12/34 英式英式 美式美式 长长 短短 storey story dialogue dialog archaeology archeology jewellry jewelry traveller traveler词汇长短词汇长短13/344.词汇没有特色词汇没有特色14/34例句例句1Serious crimes harm peoples lives.15/34 severe offense/criminal act damage/destroy undermine/jeopardize individuals/man/mankindseriouscrimeharmpeople16/34例句例句2The advantages of space research are more than its Disadvantages.17/34例句例句2The advantages of space research are more than its Disadvantages.18/34be more than outweigh19/34例句例句3Our world is becoming more and more reliant on modern Technology.20/34more and more increasingly+adj on a rise21/345.句子无衔接句子无衔接22/341.The environment is becoming worse.We must work together to deal with this situation.23/34分析句间关系分析句间关系 加衔接词加衔接词24/34The environment is becoming worse;therefore,we must work together to deal with this situation.25/342.Opinions from different people will help us finish our work better and faster,their opinions can serve as a sound information channel,which leads to a better solution to a problem.26/342.Opinions from different people will help us finish our works better and faster,because their opinions can serve as a sound information channel,which leads to a better solution to a problem.27/346.感情色彩过于强烈感情色彩过于强烈 love letter 式写作式写作28/34So,we should make sure that globalization does not harm our own traditional culture!29/34!改。So不要和should 连用，感情强烈。therefore30/347.宗教作为引言宗教作为引言31/34We must be friendly to others because the Bible says,“treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated.”32/34引言引言：名人名言名人名言/公认观点公认观点Bible 圣经圣经：信仰，非逻辑推理：信仰，非逻辑推理33/34满分网无偿赠书活动：限时抢报 价值298元TOEFL/SAT作文批改卡无偿领取猴哥SAT词汇蓝宝书无偿赠予100本（第四期）猴哥SAT阅读长难句108句无偿赠予 100本（第四期）猴哥托福词频9000无偿赠予100本，赠完为止！（第四期）猴哥背词团报名34/34