2017-2021年江西中考英语真题分类汇编之书面表达.pdf

2017-2021年江西中考英语真题分类汇编之书面表达一.书 面 表 达（共 5 小题）1.（2021 江西）失败乃成功之母。本卷阅读理解B 部分文章讨论了失败对于获取成功具有重要的价值。请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你如何借鉴Apple的成功经验,采取有效行动，失败为成功。写作要点：1 .What have you learned from Apples story?2.Have you ever experienced a failure?What was it?3.What will you do to turn it into a success?要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80o2.（2020江西）为了帮助学生迎接中考，在中考前几个月，老师一般都会进行复习教学.一家英语教学研究中心（English Teaching Research Center）正在对中考英语复习教学现状进行调查.请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，向他们介绍你们班的英语复习课的情况，谈谈你对英语复习课的感受及看法，并提出建议.写作要点：1.Your feelings about your English revision classes.2.Class activities：a.What did your English teacher usually do in class?b.What did you usually do in class?3.Your advice on English revision classes to your English teacher.要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于8 0,短文开头已给出，不计入总词数.I think my English revision classes were.3.（2019江西）Body image-the way people feel about their looks-is a big problem formany young people today.According to a study,more than half the teenage girls in the USAthink they should be on a diet（节食），and almost one in five teenage boys are happy abouttheir bodies and their weight.But whafs the cause?In the study,many blame（责备）the media（媒体）.Turn on theTV and youll probably see beautiful models,handsome actors and fit sports stars.Open amagazine or a newspaper,look through the Internet,and its usually the same.Many young people feel pressure to look like these perfect people.But for most,this isjust not possible.In the USA,the average（平均的）woman is 163 cm tall and weighs 64 kilos,but the average model is 180 cm tall and weighs 53 kilos.When people dont look the way many famous people look,they may become lessconfident.Some stop eating properly in order to lose weight.Students can lose so muchconfidence that they start to stop taking part in classroom activities at school.Body image problems dont disappear as we get older,either.In the UK,for example,women over 50 spend more money on cosmeticsC 化妆品）than any other age group.Older menspend a lot of money trying to avoid hair loss（损失）.Is there a solution to the problem?A 2016 study in the UK suggested that body imagelessons should be provided in schools.Others believe it*s a problem that all of society needs todeal with.As Meaghan Ramsey says,We need to judge（批判）people by what they do,not what they look like.”文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章的最后指出：“We need to judgepeople by what they do,not what they look like.n.你同意文章最后提出的观点吗？对此观点你有何看法？请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，并举例说明.写作要点：1.Your opinion（agree/disagree/*）2.Reasons（looks,personality 品性，ability,）3.An example（yourself/a person around you/a famous person/,）要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名:3.词数不少于80.4.（2018江西）假如国外中学生来你校进行为期一周的交流学习，期间计划参加一项中国传统文化的主题活动，为此向你们征求活动方案（plan）.请你根据下面表格中的信息提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你提供的活动方案，内容包括：茶或者民乐介绍，活动安排以及与之相关的理由.要求：（1）从表格中任选一个主题，合理安排活动；（2）短文条理清楚，行文连贯，内容可适当发挥；（3）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；（4）词数不少于8 0,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数.Chinese CultureIntroductionScheduleReasonsTeaPast and presentTime：_Places：tea farm,tea houseActivities：1.tea processing2.a tea art performanceFolk MusicMusic piecesandtraditional instrumentsTime：_Places：music room,school hallActivities：1.take musical instrument classes2.attend a folk music concertHello friends.Ive got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture.Firstof all,Id like to introduceHope you will have a good time.5.（2017江西）微笑是人类最美的语言.某英文报以“Smiles为题，举办中学生征文活动.请根据下面的图表信息，写一篇英语短文.内容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故事以及故事给予你的启示.提示：短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；词数不少于8 0,开头已给出，不计入总词数.Power of smiles(get on well,bring good luck,)Your own story about smiles Smiles/tWhat youve learnt from the storySmilesA smile is the most beautiful language of humanbeings._2017-2021年江西中考英语真题分类汇编之书面表达参考答案与试题解析书面表达（共5小题）1.（2021江西）失败乃成功之母。本卷阅读理解B 部分文章讨论了失败对于获取成功具有重要的价值。请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你如何借鉴Apple的成功经验,采取有效行动，失败为成功。写作要点：1 .What have you learned from Apples story?2.Have you ever experienced a failure?What was it?3.What will you do to turn it into a success?要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80。【考点】提纲作文.【分析 1【高分句型一】We should study it and learn why we make mistakes,then find ways to solve our problems.我们应该研究它，了解我们为什么会犯错，然后找到解决问题的方法。why引导宾语从句。【高分句型二】First,be confident and try to speak in public places.首先,要自信，试着在公共场合讲话。try to do sth试图做某事。【解答】Failure can lead to success.We should study it and learn why we make mistakes,thenfind ways to solve our problem s.【高分句型一】Also,we should never give up!（从苹果的故事中学到了什么）I once tried out for a speech competition.!practiced it many times.Unexpectedly,I failed.Ivenever spoken in front of the public ever since.（我经历的失败）Apple*s story is quite an inspiration for me.What can I do to make it?First,be confident andtry to speak in public places.【高分句型二】Second,ask my teachers or friends fbr someadvice and improve my language skills.Finally,be persistent and practice speeches over andover again.（怎么样才能成功）Fm sure I will succeed some day.（总结全文）【点 评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。2.（2020江西）为了帮助学生迎接中考，在中考前几个月，老师一般都会进行复习教学.一家 英 语 教 学 研 究 中 心（English Teaching Research Center）正在对中考英语复习教学现状进 行 调 查.请 你 根 据 下 面 提 示，写一篇英语短文，向他们介绍你们班的英语复习课的情况，谈谈你对英语复习课的感受及看法，并提出建议.写作要点：1.Your feelings about your English revision classes.2.Class activities：a.What did your English teacher usually do in class?b.What did you usually do in class?3.Your advice on English revision classes to your English teacher.要 求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词 数 不 少 于8 0,短文开头已给出，不计入总词数.I think my English revision classes were.【考 点】提纲作文.【分 析】【高分句型一】I think my English revision classes were boring because we repeat the same knowledge overand over a g a in.我认为我的英语复习课很无聊，因为我们一遍又一遍地重复同样的知识.I think+宾语从句.because引导原因状语从句.over and over again 反复不断地.【高分句型 二】Although she wants to make us better,its also important to reduce our stress.虽然她想让我们变得更好，但减轻我们的压力也很重要.although引导让步状语从句.Itis+形 容 词 to do sth做某事是的.【解答】I think my English revision classes were boring because we repeat the sameknowledge over and over again.【高分句型一Gradually,we seem to lose interest inlearning.（感受）In class,our English teacher always tell us the importance of review.She repeats italmost every class.This makes us feel very annoyed.Because we already feel a lot ofpressure,her words will make us feel more pressure.（老师的课上行为）I usually listen tothe teacher carefully.I kept taking notes so that I wouldnt miss anything important.（我的课堂行为）I hope my English teacher will try to say something to make us relaxed inclass.Although she wants to make us better,it*s also important to reduce our stress.高分句型二】（希望）【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务.3.（2019江西）Body image-the way people feel about their looks-is a big problem formany young people today.According to a study,more than half the teenage girls in the USAthink they should be on a diet（节食），and almost one in five teenage boys are happy abouttheir bodies and their weight.But whats the cause?In the study,many blame（责备）the media（媒体）.Turn on theTV and youll probably see beautiful models,handsome actors and fit sports stars.Open amagazine or a newspaper,look through the Internet,and its usually the same.Many young people feel pressure to look like these perfect people.But for most,this isjust not possible.In the USA,the average（平均的）woman is 163 cm tall and weighs 64 kilos,but the average model is 180 cm tall and weighs 53 kilos.When people dont look the way many famous people look,they may become lessconfident.Some stop eating properly in order to lose weight.Students can lose so muchconfidence that they start to stop taking part in classroom activities at school.Body image problems dont disappear as we get older,either.In the UK,for example,women over 50 spend more money on cosmetics（化妆品）than any other age group.Older menspend a lot of money trying to avoid hair loss（损失）.Is there a solution to the problem?A 2016 study in the UK suggested that body imagelessons should be provided in schools.Others believe its a problem that all of society needs todeal with.As Meaghan Ramsey says,We need to judge（批判）people by what they do,not what they look lik e.文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章的最后指出：We need to judgepeople by what they do,not what they look l i k e.你同意文章最后提出的观点吗？对此观点你有何看法？请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，并举例说明.写作要点：1.Your opinion（agree/disagree/）2.Reasons（looks,personality 品 性，ability,）3.An example（yourself/a person around you/a famous person/）要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80.【考点】提纲作文.【分析】【高分句型一】Thanks to the kind and hard-working people,our society is becoming better and better.多亏了善良和勤劳的人民，我们的社会变得越来越好.thanks to 多亏了;better and better越来越好,比较级a n d 比较级表示越来越【高分句型二】He has been doing so much for our society that we all admire h im.他为我们的社会做了那么多，我们都钦佩他.sothat如此以至于 【解答】I agree on the opinion.（我的观点）Compared with looks,personality and ability aremore important.Because we cant change our looks easily,but we can decide and control whatwe do.Thanks to the kind and hard-working people,our society is becoming better andbetter.【高分句型一】（原因）For example,Ma Yun,a well-known businessman,doesnt look handsome but hecreated Alibaba which has changed our lifestyle and made our life more convenient.He hasbeen doing so much for our society that we all admire h im.【高分句型二】Because of hiscontribution to our society，we even think he looks so c o o l.（例子）So lets try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attenlion to ourlooks.（总结全文）【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务.4.（2018江西）假如国外中学生来你校进行为期一周的交流学习，期间计划参加一项中国传统文化的主题活动，为此向你们征求活动方案（plan）.请你根据下面表格中的信息提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你提供的活动方案，内容包括：茶或者民乐介绍，活动安排以及与之相关的理由.要求：（1）从表格中任选一个主题，合理安排活动；（2）短文条理清楚，行文连贯，内容可适当发挥；（3）短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；（4）词数不少于8 0,开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数.Chinese CultureIntroductionScheduleReasonsTeaPast and presentTime：On SaturdayPlaces：tea farm,tea houseActivities：1.tea processing2.a tea art performanceFolk MusicMusic piecesandtraditional instrumentsTime：On SaturdayPlaces：music room,school hallActivities：1.take musical instrument classes2.attend a folk music concertHello,friends.I*ve got a plan fbr you which may help you learn about Chinese culture.Firstof alh Fd like to introduce tea.It has a long history.It is said that Shen Nong discoveredit as a drink.Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China.So we will have some interestingactivilies aboul it for you.On Saturday morning,you are going to visit a big farm where you can learn about teaprocessing.On Saturday aftemoon,you are going to a tea house after dinner where you canwatch a tea art perfoimance.Why do we plan a visit to a lea house for you?Because you can lean a lot more aboul teaculture there.You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress who shows you how acup of tea is made with tea sets,You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to piecesof traditional folk music.Hope you will have a good lime.Hope you will have a good time.【考点】图表作文.【分析】高分句型：First of alb Id like to introduce te a.首先，我想介绍一下茶.would like to do sth 表示想做某事.Hope you will have a good tim e.希望你过得愉快.这里hope后面跟一个宾语从句.【解答】Hello,friends.Fve got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chineseculture.First of all,Id like to introduce tea（高分句型）.（引出话题）It has a long history.Itis said that Shen Nong discovered it as a drink.Tea is one of the most popular drinks inChina.So we will have some interesting activities about it for you.（介绍茶的过去和现在）On Saturday morning,you are going to visit a big farm where you can learn about teaprocessing.On Saturday afternoon,you are going to a tea house after dinner where you canwatch a tea art performance.（计戈U）Why do we plan a visit to a tea house fbr you?Because you can lean a lot more about teaculture there.You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress who shows you how acup of tea is made with tea sets,You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to piecesof traditional folk m usic.（这样安排的原因）Hope you will have a good tim e.（高分句型）【点评】写作时要明确要点，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，语法正确，结合要求，注意作文题材，不要写跑题.日常积累一些短语和词句.5.（2017江西）微笑是人类最美的语言.某英文报以“Smiles”为题，举办中学生征文活动.请根据下面的图表信息，写一篇英语短文.内容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故事以及故事给予你的启示.提示：短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；词数不少于8 0,开头已给出，不计入总词数.Power of smiles(get on well,bring good luck,)Your own story about smiles Smiles/tWhat youve learnt from the storySmilesA smile is the most beautiful language of humanbeings._【考点】图表作文.【分析】这是一篇图表作文，让我们写一篇以sm ile为题的作文，这要求我们发挥自己的思维力和想象力，写出微笑的力量，写作时应该用第三人称，时态为一般现在时为主,内容包括：首先详细阐述一下微笑的力量，其次，写一个关于自己的微笑的故事，并写出从故事中得到的启示.重点句型：Smile can help us get on well with other people,which makes us trust each other.译为：微笑能帮助我们好好地与人相处，让我们比此次信任.此句中短语特多，如 help sb d o 帮助某人做某事；get on with s b 与人相处；make sb do s th 让某人干某事.一个句子中能有三个重要短语，不愧为高分句型Smile can bring good luck to us,and we will think that life is sunny and colorful.译为：微笑能给我们带来好运.我们会认为生活是阳光的多彩的，此句中有个这个重要短语bringgood luck t o 给.带来好运；and连接两个句子，构成复合句.【解答】参考范文：A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings.First,When we have a problem,conflict or misunderstanding,only smile can help us communicate and release；when we arefacing with some difficulties,only smile can help us overcome.Second,smile can help us geton well with other people,which makes us irusl each other高分句型.Third,smile canbring good luck to us,and we will think that life is sunny and colorful.高分句型I remember I fought with my best friend,I was so sad and I was afraid that we would nevertrust each other.But a smile made us be good friends again.V关于微笑的故事From thattime on,I know that no matter how large the difficulties are,no matter how much the sadnessis,you need to keep on smiling and try to use a smile to create your confidence.（从故事中得到的启示,【点评】写图表作文时，我们最好不要漏掉其中的要点，行文注意简化，不要拖沓冗长，适当写几个复合句比较用易得高分，但同时注意，适当用几个人连接词，first,besides,whafs more,last等，这样会使文章显得有层次感，同时，在作文完成的时候注意检查，修改，如果有条件的话最好能够先打个草稿，再抄到答题纸上，方能成为一篇好文章考点卡片1.提纲作文【概念】提纲作文是近几年中考英语书面表达的热点题型.命题者通常把提纲作文与其他常用文体形式（如书信、报道、通知、日记等）有机结合在一起进行考查，使该类书面表达试题综合性越来越强.1.提纲作文的特点提纲作文就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以条目的形式列出，请考生据此进行写作.这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定.因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏.2.思维空间灵活、开放为了提高文章档次,考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥.因此,该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力.3.提纲作文的写作步骤一般分为：审题，明确文体形式；构思，根据提纲全面构思文章内容，根据内容构思词语和句型结构；写作完稿，根据构思的词语和句型结构，按照合理的顺序和语言要求，连句成文.注意句子间的正确联系，注意词语的丰富和句型的多样.【写作举例】假定你们学校英语报社征集以 我最感激的人-妈妈 为主题的英语作文，请你根据要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的妈妈.要点：1、简单介绍妈妈.2、感激妈妈的理由.3、如何感激.注意：1、词 数 100左右.2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.3、开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数.Everyone has a person he wants to say thank-you to in hisdeep heart.I owe my great gratitude to my mother.案例分析第一步：审题本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你们学校英语报社征集以“我最感激的人-妈妈”为主题的英语作文，请你根据要求写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的妈妈，写作时注意以下几点：一、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：1、简单介绍妈妈.2、感激妈妈的理由.3、如 何 感 激.二、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.三、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.四.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点.第二步：构思文章应该按照 总述-分述”的结构分为四段段.第一段：点题，说明要感激的人.第二段：简单介绍妈妈.第三段：感激妈妈的理由.第四段：如何感激.第三步：完稿根据要点，按照逻辑顺序重新组织材料，力求拼写正确，行文连贯，连接自然，语言规范，词语丰富，句型多样，语法结构准确无误，表达简明扼要，慎用长难句.高分范文Everyone has a person he wants to say thank-you to in his deep heart.I am very grateful to mymother.My mother is a primary school teacher w