Unit+1+Writing+Workshop 高中英语北师大版(2019)必修第一册.pptx

A personal EmailPeriod 1Are you still in contact with your junior secondary school classmates?P18 1You are going to write an email to a junior secondary school classmate about your new school.1.Who are you going to write to?2.What do you want to tell him/her?3.What do you want to know from him/her?Now,lets read an email to talk about how to write a personal email.Reading for contentsRead the email.Answer the questions.1)Who is Fang Lan?Why is Wang Ying writing to her?2)How does her life in senior secondary school differs from junior secondary school?3)Is the email formal or informal?Why is it written this way?1)Who is Fang Lan?Why is Wang Ying writing to her?An old friend.To say Hello.To ask about Fang Lans new school life.To share her new senior secondary school life with Fang Lang.2)How does her life in senior secondary school differ from junior secondary school?It is much bigger.They dont have a fixed classroom.They have different classes and have many different clubs after class.3)Is the email formal or informal?Why is it written this way?Informal.It is written this way because they are friends.1.适应适应 adapt to2.与与.不同不同 be different from=differ from3.现在，目前现在，目前 at the moment=at present4.参加比赛参加比赛 attend a competition5.给某人机会做某事给某人机会做某事give sb.a chance to do sth.6.期待期待 look forward to doing sth.Reading for structureLabel the elements on the left of the email.(Ex.3)a.ending and wishes b.greetingc.subject line d.reason to finish writinge.questions about the other person f.information about ones own lifeg.signatureb.greetinge.questions about the other personf.Information about ones own lifed.reason(s)to finish writinga.ending and wishesg.signaturebefdag电子邮件实质上是书信的一种。电子邮箱称呼正文落款或者署名开头主体结尾打招呼，开门见山的自我介绍或者写出发邮件的背景和目的邮件的具体内容表明期望或者客套话Dear Fang Lan,Hows your life in Canada?I hope you have adapted well to the new situation and are enjoying your new school.1.问候2.背景 I am writing to share my life in senior high school with you.3.目的正文的开头通常有两类:(1)主动给对方写信，开头应当写明写信的目的或背景，再详细叙述。常用开头有:I am writing to you to.我写信给你是为了.I am sorry to hear that.得知.我很难过。I am very glad to write a letter to you.These days we are talking about.很高兴写信给你，最 近我们正在谈论.Its been a long time since we met last time.我们已经好久不见了。(2)写回信给对方，开头应当先表明感谢收到来信。常用开头有:Thank you for your letter From your letter I learnt that.感谢你的来信，从你的信中，我得 知.I am sorry for not writing to you sooner.抱歉没有早些回信。I am glad you ask me for help.感谢你向我求助。主体Your New School LifeWhat is it like?How do you feel about it and why?Is it different from your previous school life?What is your plan for yournew school life?exciting/interesting/stressful/boring/challengingexcited/interested/stressed/bored/relaxedbigger/more dynamic/lake/teachers/classmates/food/after-school activitieslearn many new thingsdevelop confidence/competence in.happier,more fruitful and satisfying lifeIm a new senior secondary school student.My new school life is very.I feel because this school What is also very different is that students in the same class.In the next three years,I hope I will.What useful expressions have you learned in previous lesson to talk about your new school life?在正文下自成段，表达祝愿或希望。常用的结束语有:Best wishes!请接受我的美好祝福!Looking forward to your reply!期待你的回信!I hope to hear from you soon.期待不久能收到你的回复。Hope my suggestions will be helpful.希望我的建议能帮到你。I hope what I said can help you.希望我说的对你有所助益。Have a good time!过得愉快!结尾写于结尾下一行。如称呼左顶格写，署名右顶格。注意首字母大写，后面使用逗号。常用的谦称有:Yours,Yours ever,Yours sincerely,Truly yours,Yours respectfully,再下一格署名署名Dear Fang Lan Hows your life in Canada?I hope you have adapted well to the new situation and are enjoying your new school.I love my new senior secondary school.Its much bigger than my junior secondary school and theres a huge gym!Do you remember Xie Zijun?Guess what Were in the same school!Its always good to have a friend,right?Life in senior secondary school is very different from junior secondary school!You know,we dont have a fixed classroom!We go to different classes for different subjects and also for different levels.Im in the same class with Zijun for English and physics but in different classes for Chinese and maths.We also have many different clubs after class.You know,I like dancing so Im in the Dancing Club.At the moment,we meet twice a week and were preparing to attend a competition.I think my new school gives me a chance to become a different person and I like the“new me”.Well,I must go now.Ive got a presentation tomorrow and I need to finish my slides.I look forward to hearing all about whats happening with you soon.All the best!,Yours,Wang YingWriting steps 1.Outlining(列提纲)2.Drafting(起草稿)3.Peer Editing（同伴校对）Writing-Step 1:OutliningComplete the outline of your email based on the format and sentences we have discussed.Subject line:_your new school life_Greeting:_Questions to ask:_Information about you:_Reasons to finish writing:_Ending:_