高考英语读后续写训练6（bike+basket）学案.docx

高考英语读后续写训练6（bike basket）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Two things changed my life: my mother and a bike basket. It's true. I would be a different person if my mom hadnt turned a bike basket into a life lesson I carry with me today A lesson about the value of efforts.My mother and father were united in their way of raising children, but it mostly fell to my mother to actually carry it out. Looking back, I honestly dont know how she did it. Managing the family budget must have been a very hard task, but she made it look effortless. If we complained about not having what other kids did, we'd hear something like, “I don't care what so-and-so got for his birthday, you are not getting a TV in your room or a big party.” We had to earn our allowance (零用钱)by doing chores(家务)around the house. I can still remember how long it took to polish the legs of our coffee table. My brothers can no doubt remember hours spent cleaning the house. We had to keep track of our belongings, and if something was lost, it was not replaced.It was one summer day. My mother drove me to the bike shop to get a tire fixed and there it was in the window white, shiny, plastic and decorated with flowers. The basket winked at me and I knew I knew I had to have it.“It's beautiful,” my mother said when I pointed it out to her, “What a neat basket.”I tried to hold off at first, but then I couldn't stand it any longer. “Mom, please can I get it? I'll do extra chores for as long as you say. Ill do anything, but I love that basket. Please, Mom, please?" 1 was desperate.“You know," she said, gently rubbing my back while we both stared at what I believed was the coolest thing ever, “If you save up you could buy this yourself.”“By the time I earn enough itll be gone! Someone else will buy it. Please, Mom, please?”“There might be another way," she said.1. 续写词数应为150左右 “Ill buy it now but you only get it after 3 weeks of double chores,” Mom explained. Finally, I got my dream basket, but soon I sadly found the same basket on others bikes!2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I. 读主题 主题：_Sample 1 2020年新高考卷The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges. Sample 2 2021年八省适应性测试During this past year, I've had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn't bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK（千斤顶）, and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.Sample 3 2017年11月浙江卷A vacation with my motherI had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.PracticeThe icy wind howled across the empty street and it was an unusually quiet day in the emergency room on December twenty-fifth. Quiet, that is, except for the nurses who were standing around the nurses station complaining about having to work on Christmas Day, for people were supposed to be spending time with their families, exchanging gifts and wishes. II. 读原文人物、情节、情感人物：_背景：_故事发生（诱因）：_角色品质：_ _问题冲突：_III. 接续上文情节，解决问题冲突（把握每段中心、情节铺陈、接续线索、不节外生枝）(P1) “Ill buy it now but you only get it after 3 weeks of double chores,” Mom explained. 中心：情节_ 情感_ 重要情节：_（ 描写） _（ 描写）(P2) Finally, I got my dream basket, but soon I sadly found the same basket on others bikes! 中心：情节_ 情感_ 重要情节：_（ 描写） _（ 描写）点题：_IV. 语言与情节联动（1）叙述的视角 第一人称 vs. 第三人称 全景（快，show） vs. 特写（慢，tell）（2）细节的铺陈显性陈述 vs. 隐性描述 细节：语言（直接 vs. 间接）、动作、表情、姿态、思想（3）情节的推进详略与推进（概括具体，上义词下义词，顺序）（4）角色的互动Ø 对手戏（主角 vs. 配角）Ø 内心戏Ø 反衬戏（人物 vs. 环境）（5）主题的升华Ø 有揭示主题的：必须要回扣，与前文主题一致，使短文完整（结构上、内容上）Ø 无明显提示主题的：含而不露 vs. 点到即止 (当不太确定主题把握是否有偏差时)（6）长度的控制Ø 故事语篇范式？（逆向构思，先构思好末段最后的结局和内容，保证预留与前文做好必要呼应所需的空间）Ø 各段写什么情节？推进方式？（冲突双方一来一往，互动推进）Action-responseØ 用多少句来写？（设计好各句的功能、句间内容的连贯与衔接）（7）扬长与避短（在充分用好原文的基础上-现学现用，自己擅长的在恰当的时机要多用，自己不会的词或相关背景知识，尽量找别的办法或写别的内容，避免自暴其短）第一段 “Ill buy it now but you only get it after 3 weeks of double chores,” Mom explained.1. 我答应了，妈妈买下（略）· I agreed immediately and Mom bought the flowery basket and kept it somewhere I couldnt find.（action-response, 一来一回构成情节）· A flood of joy surged from the bottom of my heart and I agreed at once with a bright smile across my cheeks.（情感词做主语）· “Deal!” I jumped to my feet with excitement, agreeing on the exchange without hesitation. And the basket was paid.2. 这三周付出的努力（详）· Each day, I finished my new routine of double household chores with passion and enthusiasm. （为了所爱单车篮，很乐意去完成）· From that day on, every day after school, I had no time to play and had to rushed back home to finish the double chores. I washed the clothes and cleaned the windows. It was so boring and tiring that I was even worn out, but there was always a rising voice from my mind encouraging me to keep on working for the shining basket. （再苦再累也有篮筐支持着我）· To get my dream basket, I had been burying myself into countless chores for the next three weeks, from polishing tables legs, to cleaning windows, to doing laundry. Efforts needed went far beyond my imagination. （TS + Supporting的写法，回扣原文）3. 这三周的心路历程与变化（可详）· Each night, I crossed off another day on the calendar as I counted down the days. As the days passed, the basket seemed to become even more beautiful in my imagination. The extra chores didnt bother me. The anticipation grew stronger as the days ticked down.（用划日历上的日期表达期待，画面感）· My mother and father were impressed by my efforts, but my mum never offered help. Three weeks passed slowly, but I persevered to do the chores, despite sweats streaming own my face.（家风的坚持，无论辛苦也坚持）· Tired as I was, I made up my mind to stick to it and even took joy in the process.（as表示虽然的倒装句，苦中作乐）第二段 Finally, I got my dream basket, but soon I sadly found the same basket on others bikes!1. 小女孩的反应如何?· So shocked and upset was I that I immediately went home to report this disaster to my mom. （event-emotion，用disaster代指所见）· A flush of frustration and disappointment welled up inside me, and I dragged my feet reluctantly when I followed moms bike.（情感类做主语）· A flush of disappointment surged from the bottom of my heart. I felt that what had encouraged me to put huge efforts to turned out to be just a common basket. Tears dimmed my eyes. （情感类做主语）2. 妈妈如何安抚？ +3. 点题（劳动和努力）· Seeing my sulky face, she gently wiped away my tears. Holding my little face in her warm hands, she spoke out what has become the lesson I still carry with me today. “Your basket is not the same basket. Its unique because it was not obtained by mere money but by all your worthwhile effort and waiting.” （体现妈妈形象，回扣主题）· “Whats the matter?” She asked. “Other kids have the same basket!” I moaned in a low voice with my head lowered. Hearing my words, mom stopped and looked at me straight in the eyes. “But the basket is unique to you because you earned it by your own efforts,” she said in a gentle and calm tone, patting me on the shoulder, “You hard work made it shinier than others baskets”. Having heard her words, I sunk into deep thought. It suddenly dawned on me that it was the value of my efforts that made the basket invaluable.· When I sobbed out of it to mum, she smiled, patting warmly on my shoulders. “There is always something better that we cant get. However, common as it may seem, the basket is unique to you. It is your efforts that made it valuable.” Moms words were like a beam of sunlight, driving away the gloomy clouds over my mind. The little basket was a life lesson to me, a lesson about the value of efforts.学科网（北京）股份有限公司