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hold the wrong idea 持有错误的观点持有错误的观点donate blood 献血献血do harm to 对对有害有害a small amount of 少量的少量的make a quick adjustment 做出快速调整做出快速调整patient 病人病人survive 活下来；生存活下来；生存have a better understanding of 有更好的理解有更好的理解medical knowledge 医学知识医学知识set a good example for sb.为某人树立好榜样为某人树立好榜样hold a series of activities 举办一系列的活动举办一系列的活动call on sb.to do sth.号召某人做某事号召某人做某事give away 捐献；捐赠捐献；捐赠lower grade 低年级低年级be intended to 为为准备的准备的promote friendship 促进友谊促进友谊encourage economy 鼓励节约鼓励节约be highly praised by sb.被某人高度赞扬被某人高度赞扬be strongly for 强烈赞成强烈赞成break traffic rules 违反交通规则违反交通规则littering 乱扔垃圾乱扔垃圾keep sth.in mind 记住某事记住某事keep to the right 靠右靠右run the red light 闯红灯闯红灯the pedestrian crossing 人行路口人行路口spitting 随地吐痰随地吐痰behavior 行为；表现行为；表现make a difference 起作用；产生不同起作用；产生不同1.Therefore,lets take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles.因因此此，让让我我们们负负起起责责任任来来通通过过骑骑自自行行车车建建设设一一个个低碳城市。低碳城市。2.Some people hold the wrong idea that.有有人人持持有有错错误误的的观观点点：3.We students of Senior Three are called on to give away our used books.我们高三学生被号召来捐赠旧书。我们高三学生被号召来捐赠旧书。4.I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful.我强烈赞同这个活动，因为它很有意义，很有帮助。我强烈赞同这个活动，因为它很有意义，很有帮助。5.I hope my behavior will make a difference.我我希希望望我我的的行行为为可可以以起起到作用。到作用。6.As high school students,its our duty to tell everyone around us to save water.作作为为高高中中生生，告告诉诉身身边边的的每每一一个个人人节节约约用用水水是是我我们们的的责责任。任。7.Lets start right now and spare no effort to do a little every day,every hour and every minute.让让我我们们从从现现在在开开始始每每天天努努力力一一点点点点，抓紧每一天、每一小时、每一分钟。抓紧每一天、每一小时、每一分钟。1.Our government is aiming to build an“harmonious society”.1.an改为a2.I think it is every citizens duty to work hardly to achieve this goal.2.hardly改为hard3.Firstly,we should love our great motherland,our society or our school.3.or改为and4.Secondly,we should be respect and love our parents.4.删掉be5.We should trust our fellow students and help every other.5.every改为each6.Lei Feng set a good example for us to learn from him.6.删掉him7.To build our country into a powerful socialist country,“Lei Feng Spirit”still necessary.7.still前面加is8.Because he was only a soldier,he managed to save a considerable amount of money and gave it away to poor people.8.Because改为Although/Though/While9.Whatever he was asked to do and no matter how difficult the task was,he always tries his best.9.tries改为tried10.Lei Feng died over 30 years before.10.before改为ago【20112011江西卷改编：骑自行车倡议江西卷改编：骑自行车倡议】假假 设设 你你 是是 星星 光光 中中 学学 的的 李李 华华，将将 参参 加加 主主 题题 为为“LetLets s Ride Ride BicyclesBicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1 1目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2 2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇：参考词汇：低碳生活低碳生活 low-carbon lifelow-carbon life；节能节能 energy savingenergy saving满分佳作（一）分佳作（一）Good morning,everyone,I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is“Lets Ride Bicycles”.As is known to all,with the improvement of peoples living standards,cars have become a popular means of transport,bringing great convenience to our life.However,they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.How can we solve the problems then?As far as Im concerned,riding bicycles is a good solution.For one thing,bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy-saving.Therefore,they are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas.For another,riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise,which is beneficial to our health.Therefore,lets take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles.Come on and join us!Thank you!满分分赏析析As is known to all(众众所所周周知知)和和with the improvement of peoples living standards(随随着着人人们生生活活水水平平的的改改善善)这两两个个表表达达用用来来引引出出现象象，显示示了了语言言实力力；且且有有means作作“方方式式”意意思思，是是高高级词汇；bringing现在分在分词作伴随状作伴随状语；整句；整句话显得有档次。得有档次。用用As far as Im concerned(依依我我之之见)引引出出自自己己的的观点点，这是是必必备的表达的表达观点的套点的套语。两两个个观点点用用到到了了for one thing,for another来来连接接，使使篇篇章章连贯；且且energy-saving,environmentally friendly,give off waste gas等等描描述述环保的相关保的相关词汇体体现了作者深厚的了作者深厚的语言功底。言功底。本本句句运运用用到到了了which引引导的的定定语从从句句，which指指代代前前面面整整句句话的的事事情。情。最最后后两两句句是是加加强呼呼吁吁，lets take the responsibility to和和Come on and join us!十分十分值得学得学习模仿。模仿。满分佳作（二）分佳作（二）Good morning,everyone,I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is“Lets Ride Bicycles”.As our living standards have improved,cars have increasingly become available to ordinary families.But too many cars on the road may cause many problems.For one thing,waste gas coming from cars has been a big threat to the environment.Whats more,while cars have brought convenience to us,they may also cause traffic jams.In this case,more and more people have begun to take up bicycles as an alternative way to get around.On one hand,as an energy-saving means of transportation,they dont cause any pollution to the environment.Besides,riding bicycles is a good form of exercise and can contribute to what we call low-carbon life.Therefore,lets ride bicycles,for the benefit of the environment as well as our own health.Thank you!满分分赏析析As our living standards have improved用用于于引引出出一一种种现象象，这一一说法法在在中中英英文文中中一一样常常用用；available属属于于中中高高难度度的的词汇，体体现出出水水平。平。本句的本句的while是是“尽管尽管”的意思，引出的意思，引出让步状步状语从句。从句。an alternative way(另另外外一一种种可可选择的的方方式式)，alternative是是较难词汇，能，能给评卷老卷老师好印象。好印象。最最后后一一句句加加强呼呼吁吁，简单的的一一句句lets ride bicycles就就能能起起到到这个个作作用。用。【模拟真题：提倡无偿献血模拟真题：提倡无偿献血】作文原作文原题假假如如你你是是育育才才中中学学学学生生会会主主席席李李华华，针针对对目目前前一一些些地地方方血血库库纷纷纷纷告告急急的的情情况况，请请参参照照以以下下提提示示，用用英英文文写写一一份份倡倡议议书，提倡无偿献血（书，提倡无偿献血（donate blood for free）。）。要点提示：要点提示：1.社会上对献血的错误认识；社会上对献血的错误认识；2.指出献血的意义；指出献血的意义；3.开展相关活动。开展相关活动。作文翻作文翻译同学同学们，最近，据最近，据报道，全国的一些血道，全国的一些血库供血短缺。供血短缺。一一些些人人持持有有错误的的观点点，认为献献血血会会对捐捐献献者者的的身身体体有有害害。但但是事是事实是，当身体抽出少量的血，身体会很快作出是，当身体抽出少量的血，身体会很快作出调节，正常运作。，正常运作。我我们都都知知道道，献献血血非非常常重重要要。血血对病病人人很很重重要要，没没有有血血很很多多病病人不能活下来。在我人不能活下来。在我们这样的年的年轻人中，献血是一个社会人中，献血是一个社会责任。任。我我们高高中中学学生生，对医医学学知知识有有更更好好的的理理解解，应该为其其他他人人树立立榜榜样。从从现在在开开始始，我我们学学校校会会举行行一一系系列列的的活活动来来解解释献献血血的的好好处。现在就来献血，拯救生命。在就来献血，拯救生命。学生会学生会 Boys and girls,Recently some blood banks across the country are reported to be in short supply of blood.Some people hold the wrong idea that donating blood does harm to the donors health.But the truth is that when a small amount of blood is taken out,the body will make a quick adjustment to work normally.As we know,donating blood is of great importance.Blood is important to patients,without which many cant survive.Among young people like us,donating blood is a social responsibility.We senior high school students,who have a better understanding of medical knowledge,should set a good example for other people.From now on,our school will hold a series of activities to explain the benefits of donating blood.Donate now and save a life!The Students Union【2007福建卷改编：活动报道福建卷改编：活动报道】假假设设你你是是李李华华，福福建建省省某某中中学学高高三三学学生生，请请你你根根据据以以下下学学生生会会倡倡议议书书的的内内容容给给某某英英文文报报社社写写一一封封信信，叙叙述述拟拟开开展展活活动动的的内内容容并并发发表表自自己的看法。己的看法。参考词汇：参考词汇：增进增进promote；鼓励节约鼓励节约encourage economyDear editor,I am a student of Senior Three in a middle school in Fujian Province.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【20072007福建卷改编：活动报道福建卷改编：活动报道】Dear editor,I am a student of Senior Three in a middle school in Fujian Province.In order that we can make the best of learning materials,the Students Union of our school is arranging an activity.We students of Senior Three are called on to give away our used books,newspapers or magazines to the students in the lower grades.The idea,which is intended to promote friendship and encourage economy,is highly praised and supported by the teachers and students alike.The activity will last about ten days,from June 10 to 20.As a student,I am strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful.I hope that this kind of activity will continue in the future.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【20132013安徽卷改编：倡导文明交通安徽卷改编：倡导文明交通】假假设设你你校校英英语语社社团团正正举举办办以以“讲讲求求文文明明，从从我我做做起起”为为主主题题的的征征文文活活动动，请请你你以以“On On the the Way Way to to SchoolSchool”为为题题，写一篇英语短文。写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：内容主要包括：1.1.遵守交通法规；遵守交通法规；2.2.注意举止文明。注意举止文明。注注意意：短短文文的的题题目目(On(On the the Way Way to to School)School)已已为为你你拟拟好好，不计入总词数。不计入总词数。【20132013安徽卷改编：倡导文明交通安徽卷改编：倡导文明交通】On the way to School These days,breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon,causing serious harm to the environment.Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone.As for me,it should start on the way to school.I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.If I ride a bicycle,Ill always keep to the right and never run the red light.If I walk,Ill never forget to use the pedestrian crossing.Meanwhile,Ill regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy.Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere,I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible.I hope my behavior will make a difference.