读后续写 少年打工记 公开课课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习.pptx

StoryContinuation writing读 后后 续 写写Have you done part-time jobs before?If you could earn money by yourself,how will you deal with the money?试题再现 My dad,George,only had an eighth grade education.A quiet man,he didnt understand my world of school activities.From age 14,he worked.And his dad,Albert,took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.I didnt really understand his world either:He was a livestock(牲畜)trucker,and I thought that I would surpass(超过)anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets,hitting a baseball,or throwing a football,preparing for my future as a quarterback(四分卫)on a football team.In poor weather,I read about sports or practiced my trombone(长号).The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field.He explained our basic task,the tractor(拖拉机)fired up and we were off,riding down the field looking for weeds to spray(喷洒)with chemicals.After a short way,the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed.Then we began again.This happened over and over,but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs,lambs-quarters,foxtails,and the king of weeds,the pretty purple thistle.It was tiring work,but I looked forward to the pay,even though I wasnt sure how much it would amount to.At home,my dad said,“A jobs a big step to growing up.Im glad you will be contributing to the household.”My dads words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.My labors lasted about two weeks,and the farmer said there might be more work,but I wasnt interested.I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。spray chemicals for weeds（喷洒除草药剂）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.*+3注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:The pay day arrived at last._Paragraph 2:I understood immediately what my parents were worried about._试题再现continuation writingcontinuation writing how to read?how to write?一、一、How to read?1.Clarify the setting 1.Clarify the setting whereElements of the storywhowhatwhenwhy my father,I，neighboring farmer a neighboring farmers field,at homework in a farmers fieldthe summer before my eighth gradeIts not fair that I had to contribute my money1.Beginning2.Rising action5.EndingMy dad and I didnt _ each other.I spent my _ before the eighth grade working in my neighbors _ and looked forward to _.3.Climax4.ResolutionMy father praised me since I could work for the family.Hearing that,I felt _ not being able to use my own _ and lost the _ in more work.The pay day arrived at last.How would I cope with my depression caused by my dads words?I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.Would I understand my dad finally?2 Read for the plot2 Read for the plotunderstandsummer vacationfieldthe payunfairmoneyinterestMy dad,Georgeeducation experiencepersonalityan eighth grade educationworked from age 14 to support the familyquieta livestock truckerDad worked most of his life to support his family.3 Read for characters3 Read for charactersIeducation experiencepersonalityIt was before my eighth garde.I expect to finish high school education shoot baskets;hit a baseball;throw a football in the summeractive;energetic read sports or practice trombone in poor weatherI led a carefree life and was courageous to pursue my dreama quarterback3 Read for characters3 Read for charactersmy dad,GeorgeI Dad was_ to support his familyI thought it was _ that I had to contribute my moneyworkmoneyrespon-sibilitycouldnt couldnt understand each understand each otherother4 Read for attitude4 Read for attitudewillingunfair阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.*+3注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:The pay day arrived at last._Paragraph 2:I understood immediately what my parents were worried about._试题再现How will the story proceed?backsetpping method逆推法：逆推情节，圈定合理故事二、二、How to write?How to write?Para.1:The pay day arrived at last.Para.2:I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.2.What did my parents do or say?3.How did I feel when learning the truth?根据原文已知情节和第二段开头的给出句，找出里面的关 键词（关键信息），合理推出第一段发生的故事情节；利用第一段的给出句，找出里面的关键词（关键信息），提出问题和假设，使故事情节合理发展。1.How did I feel upon receiving the pay?What did I realize and decide to do?5.What did I learn from it?How did I plan the money at first?4.What happened in the end?happyunderstandrealizesupportdidnt understandunhappystory line 明线 emotional line暗线1.gratify v.使高兴；使满意 翻译：收到了付款，我非常高兴。2.on top of the world 非常高兴，欣喜若狂 翻译：手里握着钱，我欣喜若狂，因为我的努力工作得到了回报。3.my heart sink immediately 我的心立刻沉了下去 翻译：然而，当我想起我必须贡献我的工资时，我的心立刻沉了下来。useful expressions useful expressionsHolding the money in my hand,I was on top of the world because of my hard work paid off.However,my heart sank immediately when I remembered I had to contribute my pay.Im gratified to receive the pay.How did I feel upon receiving the pay?happyunhappyHow did I feel when learning the truth?4.feel ashamed with embarrassment 因尴尬而羞愧 翻译:知道了事实后，我的脸上洋溢着幸福的光芒，然后我又因尴尬而感到羞愧。5.with tears rolling down 泪如泉涌翻译:我被深深地打动了。我流着泪向父母道歉。After knowing the truth,my face lit up with happiness and then I felt ashamed with embarrassment.useful expressions useful expressionsI was deeply moved.With tears rolling down,I said sorry to my parents.understandWhat did I learn from it?6.face up responsibility 勇于承担责任翻译:我突然意识到成长的下一个阶段是学会给予，并且勇于承担责任。I suddenly realized that the next step in growing up is to learn to give and face up to my responsibility.useful expressions useful expressionsrealize阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.*+3Paragraph 1:The pay day arrived at last._Paragraph 2:I understood immediately what my parents were worried about._Write your Write your storystory The pay day arrived at last.Though I had a total of$100 in my pocket,I still went home with a heavy heart.How I wished I could use the money to buy a pair of new sports shoes Id wanted for ages.Not much was said over dinner.However,before I went to bed that night,I overheard a conversation coming from my parentsbedroom.“Sam can do without a personal football coach.Our budget is really tight this month,”said my mom.“Dont worry.I just need to do some extra driving.A professional can help him make great progress in football.You know the boys future dream,”said my dad.I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.It was me who had misunderstood my dad all the time,not the other way around.The next morning,I handed Dad my hard-earned cash.It only seemed fair.But he just took some of it.“Thatll do for now and thanks for helping with the family expenses,son.You are really growing up,”he said.I suddenly realized that the next step in growing up is to learn to give and face up to my responsibility.Appreciate a possible versionAppreciate a possible version Though I had a total of$100 in my pocket,I still went home with a heavy heart.How I wished I could use the money to buy a pair of new sports shoes Id wanted for ages.Not much was said over dinner.However,before I went to bed that night,I overheard（无 意 中 听 到）a conversation coming from my parents bedroom.“Sam can do without a personal football coach(教练).Our budget is really tight this month,”said my mom.“Dont worry.I just need to do some extra driving.A professional can help him make great progress in football.You know the boys future dream,”said my dad.What did I feel when I got the pay?What made me understand my parents worries?The pay day arrived at last.It was me who had misunderstood my dad all the time,not the other way around.The next morning,I handed Dad my hard-earned cash.It only seemed fair.But he just took some of it.“Thatll do for now and thanks for helping with the family expenses,son.You are really growing up,”he said.I suddenly realized that the next step in growing up is to learn to give and face up to my responsibility.I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.What did I feel when I got the pay?What made me understand my parents worries?The pay day arrived at last.Though I had a total of$100 in my pocket,I still went home with a heavy heart.How I wished I could use the money to buy a pair of new sports shoes Id wanted for ages.Not much was said over dinner.However,before I went to bed that night,I overheard a conversation coming from my parents bedroom.“Sam can do without a personal football coach.Our budget is really tight this month,”said my mom.“Dont worry.I just need to do some extra driving.A professional can help him make great progress in football.You know the boys future dream,”said my dad.让步状语从句with结构省略that的定语从句被动语态现在分词作后置定语形容词搭配时间状语从句感叹句I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.It was me who had misunderstood my dad all the time,not the other way around.The next morning,I handed Dad my hard-earned cash.It only seemed fair.But he just took some of it.“Thatll do for now and thanks for helping with the family expenses,son.You are really growing up,”he said.After the talk,I went straight back to the farmer and took the extra work.强调句固定搭配合成形容词时间状语从句生动的副词