高考英语天津专版二轮复习课件：专题五 书面表达 第二节.ppt

第二节方法运用于命题专题五书面表达栏目索引一、提纲类作文二、图画类作文三、图表类作文四、(半)开放式作文 (2017天津天津)假假设设你你是是李李津津，与与你你以以前前的的外外籍籍教教师师Mrs Green 一一直直保保持持联联系系。近近日日她她来来信信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活；简要介绍自己的学习和生活；(2)告告知知你你已已成成为为八八月月底底在在津津举举办办的的第第十十三三届届全全运运会会的的志志愿愿者者，并并介介绍绍为为此此所所做的准备做的准备(如深入了解天津等如深入了解天津等)；(3)希望她有机会重访天津。希望她有机会重访天津。注意：注意：(1)词数不少于词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：第十三届全运会参考词汇：第十三届全运会the 13th National Games一、提纲类作文典例法宝法宝1“五审五审”定调子定调子(1)体裁：告知类应用文，注意告知类邮件的格式；体裁：告知类应用文，注意告知类邮件的格式；(2)人称：以第一人称为主；人称：以第一人称为主；(3)时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；(4)要点：介绍学习和生活；成为志愿者；邀请重访天津；要点：介绍学习和生活；成为志愿者；邀请重访天津；(5)层层次次：分分为为四四段段：第第一一、二二段段问问候候并并介介绍绍自自己己的的学学习习和和生生活活以以及及成成为为在在津举办的全运会的志愿者；第三段邀请外籍教师重访天津；第四段为结束语。津举办的全运会的志愿者；第三段邀请外籍教师重访天津；第四段为结束语。法宝法宝2“韵色韵色”得高分得高分该该文文除除简简单单句句外外，还还可可使使用用并并列列句句、省省略略句句及及复复合合句句(定定语语从从句句、名名词词性性从从句、状语从句句、状语从句)，做到句式多样。，做到句式多样。法宝法宝3黄金黄金“三步曲三步曲”1.遣词遣词hear from sb./tell sb.sth.about./in detail/to begin with/be around the corner/be busy doing sth./prepare for/volunteer/be held at./in order to/spend/in the library/no doubt/enhance/invite/appreciate2.造句造句(1)Im so glad to hear from you.(2)I am writing to tell you something about myself in detail.(3)The final exam of this term is around the corner so I am busy preparing for it.(4)I have already been a volunteer for the 13th National Games.(5)It will be held at the end of August in Tianjin.(6)In order to expand my knowledge of Tianjin，I spend every spare moment I have in the library.(7)There is no doubt that I will enhance its reputation through my efforts.(8)Ill appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.3.成篇成篇Dear Mrs Green，Im so glad to hear from you.I am writing to tell you something about myself in detail.To begin with，the final exam of this term is around the corner so I am busy preparing for it.What I want to stress is that I have already been a volunteer for the 13th National Games which will be held at the end of August in Tianjin.In order to expand my knowledge of Tianjin，such as its history，tradition and food，I spend every spare moment I have in the library.There is no doubt that I will enhance its reputation through my efforts.I sincerely invite you to come here again.Ill appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.Yours，Li Jin 假假设设你你是是晨晨光光中中学学的的学学生生会会主主席席李李津津。一一批批来来自自英英国国的的高高中中生生与与你你校校学学生生开开展展了了为为期期两两周周的的交交流流活活动动。现现在在，他他们们即即将将回回国国，你你将将在在欢欢送送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。1.回顾双方的交流活动回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面)；2.谈谈收获或感想；谈谈收获或感想；3.表达祝愿与期望。表达祝愿与期望。跟踪训练(2016天津天津)注意：注意：1.词数不少于词数不少于100；2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends，How time flies！Thank you.参考范文 (2017北京北京)假假设设你你是是红红星星中中学学高高三三学学生生李李华华，请请根根据据以以下下四四幅幅图图的的先先后后顺顺序序，写写一一篇篇英英文文周周记记，记记录录毕毕业业前前夕夕你你们们制制作作以以“感感恩恩母母校校”为为主主题题的的毕毕业业纪念视频的全过程。纪念视频的全过程。二、图画类作文典例注意：词数不少于注意：词数不少于60。提示词：视频提示词：视频video法宝法宝1“五审五审”定调子定调子(1)体裁：本文属于图画类作文；体裁：本文属于图画类作文；(2)人称：以第一人称为主；人称：以第一人称为主；(3)时态：以一般过去时为主；时态：以一般过去时为主；(4)要点：制作以要点：制作以“感恩母校感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程；为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程；(5)层层次次：分分为为两两段段：第第一一段段描描写写毕毕业业临临近近，决决定定制制作作毕毕业业纪纪念念视视频频；第第二段写制作毕业纪念视频的过程及最后达到的结果。二段写制作毕业纪念视频的过程及最后达到的结果。法宝法宝2“韵色韵色”得高分得高分该该文文除除简简单单句句外外，还还可可使使用用非非谓谓语语动动词词、并并列列句句、复复合合句句(宾宾语语从从句句、状状语从句语从句)，做到句式多样丰富。，做到句式多样丰富。法宝法宝3黄金黄金“三步曲三步曲”1.遣词遣词graduation come/a heated discussion/agree on/make a video/material collecting/interview teachers/take pictures/every aspect of school life/tough/debate over/compromise/unavoidable/turn out perfect/the graduation ceremony/be well received/a great sense of achievement2.造句造句(1)Graduation finally came.(2)My classmates and I decided to do something.(3)We agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.(4)Material collecting took us a whole week.(5)During this time we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.(6)The editing part after that was tough.(7)We debated over what to put into the video.(8)Some compromises were unavoidable.(9)The video turned out perfect.(10)Several days later，when the video was played on the graduation ceremony，it was well received.(11)The students and teachers shared a great time.(12)That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.3.成篇成篇Graduation finally came.My classmates and I decided to do something.After a heated discussion，we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.Material collecting took us a whole week，during which we interviewed our teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.The editing part after that was tough.We debated over what to put into the video.Some compromises were unavoidable，but the video turned out perfect.Several days later，when the video was played on the graduation ceremony，it was well received.The students and teachers shared a great time.That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.(2017河西区三模河西区三模)假假设设你你是是红红星星中中学学高高三三学学生生李李津津，你你校校周周六六上上午午举举办办了了高高三三学学生生成成人人仪仪式式。在会上你和一位女生代表同学们发言，你父亲作为家长代表讲话。在会上你和一位女生代表同学们发言，你父亲作为家长代表讲话。请请你你按按照照以以下下四四幅幅图图的的顺顺序序，写写一一篇篇英英语语日日记记。描描述述图图画画内内容容，并并谈谈谈谈自自己的感想。己的感想。跟踪训练参考范文注意：词数不少于注意：词数不少于100。(2017江苏江苏)请请认认真真阅阅读读下下面面有有关关我我国国电电影影票票房房收收入入(box-office income)的的柱柱状状图图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。词左右的文章。三、图表类作文典例Saturday Afternoon.In a Shopping Centre.Li Jiang：Hi，Su Hua.Which movie shall we see?Su Hua：Whatever.Weve got so many choices，Kung Fu Yoga，Journey to the West.Each sounds great!Li Jiang：Yeah！And some movie stars are fantastic.Su Hua：And the high-tech！.Li Jiang：Perfect！Lets get some food first.We only have 20 minutes left.Su Hua：No hurry.The cinema is on the same floor.One Day in 2016.At Home.Son：Mum，shall we go and see a film tonight?Mother：Why bother？We can stay at home and watch films online.Its convenient with our new and faster network.Son：But it feels good in a cinema.Mother：And the price.We have to pay 50 yuan a ticket.Son：Only 10 yuan more than last year.Mother：But still we cannot get the moneys worth.Some films are just boring.写作内容1.用约用约30个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；个单词概述柱状图信息的主要内容；2.我我国国电电影影票票房房收收入入变变化化的的原原因因有有哪哪些些，简简要要谈谈谈谈你你的的看看法法(上上述述对对话话仅仅供参考，原因不少于两点供参考，原因不少于两点)；3.谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。谈谈你对我国电影票房收入走向的看法，并简要说明理由。写作要求1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.不必写标题。不必写标题。评分标准内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。.法宝法宝1“五审五审”定调子定调子(1)体裁：图表类作文；体裁：图表类作文；(2)人称：以第三人称为主；人称：以第三人称为主；(3)时态：以一般过去时为主；时态：以一般过去时为主；(4)要点：概述短文内容；分析票房收入变化的原因并给出自己的看法；要点：概述短文内容；分析票房收入变化的原因并给出自己的看法；(5)层层次次：分分为为三三段段：第第一一段段总总结结归归纳纳柱柱状状图图所所含含信信息息；第第二二段段分分析析票票房房收入变化的原因；第三段提出自己的看法并给出理由。收入变化的原因；第三段提出自己的看法并给出理由。法宝法宝2“韵色韵色”得高分得高分该该文文可可多多种种句句式式并并用用，如如并并列列句句、复复合合句句(定定语语从从句句、名名词词性性从从句句、状状语语从句从句)，做到句式丰富多样。，做到句式丰富多样。法宝法宝3黄金黄金“三步曲三步曲”1.遣词遣词box-office income/witness/a constant increase/slow down/various/economic development/powerful engine/application/appeal/account for/consequently/turn away from/lead to/at a medium speed/movie industry/enjoy a slight increase2.造句造句(1)The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015.(2)That increase slowed down in 2016.(3)The reasons behind this are various.(4)The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income.(5)The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase.(6)China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year.(7)The Internet increased options for movie lovers.(8)Some viewers began to turn away from cinemas，leading to a slower growth.(9)Chinas economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years.(10)An increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies.(11)Its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.3.成篇成篇As is indicated in the graph，the box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015.However，that increase slowed down in 2016.The reasons behind this are various.The fast economic development before 2016 was probably the most powerful engine driving the constant growth in the box-office income.The application of new technologies and the wide appeal of movie stars could also account for the increase.However，China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year.And the Internet increased options for movie lovers.Consequently，some viewers began to turn away from cinemas，leading to a slower growth.Chinas economy is expected to grow at a medium speed in the coming years，so an increase is possible in the investment in the movie industry and the number of quality movies.Therefore，its box-office income will probably enjoy a slight increase.(2017陕西咸阳二模陕西咸阳二模)仔仔细细观观察察下下图图，根根据据要要求求，以以“Health Changes in Developing Countries”为题，用英语写一篇不少于为题，用英语写一篇不少于100词的短文。词的短文。1.以以下下图图为为依依据据描描述述发发展展中中国国家家的的预预期期寿寿命命(life expectancy)和和婴婴儿儿死死亡亡率率(infant mortality rate)的变化情况；的变化情况；2.说说明明引引起起变变化化的的各各种种原原因因，如如生生活活条条件件的的改改善善、医医学学的的进进步步、环环境境保保护护的认识等。的认识等。跟踪训练参考范文 (2017全国全国)假假定定你你是是李李华华。你你所所在在的的校校乒乒乓乓球球队队正正在在招招收收新新队队员员。请请给给你你的的留留学学生生朋友朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：1.球队活动；球队活动；2.报名方式及截止日期。报名方式及截止日期。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。四、(半)开放式作文典例法宝法宝1“五审五审”定调子定调子(1)体裁：书信类应用文，应注意书信格式；体裁：书信类应用文，应注意书信格式；(2)人称：以第一人称为主；人称：以第一人称为主；(3)时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；(4)要点：写信目的；球队活动；报名方式和截止日期；要点：写信目的；球队活动；报名方式和截止日期；(5)层层次次：分分为为四四段段：第第一一段段自自我我介介绍绍并并交交待待写写信信目目的的邀邀请请Eric加加入入球球队队；第第二二段段介介绍绍打打乒乒乓乓球球的的好好处处及及球球队队活活动动；第第三三段段告告知知Eric报报名名方方式及截止日期；第四段结束语。式及截止日期；第四段结束语。法宝法宝2“韵色韵色”得高分得高分除除了了使使用用简简单单句句外外，该该文文还还可可使使用用非非谓谓语语动动词词作作状状语语、并并列列句句及及复复合合句句(宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句)，做到句式多样。，做到句式多样。法宝法宝3黄金黄金“三步曲三步曲”1.遣词遣词invite/join/table tennis team/it is known that/benefit from/prevent.from./keep sb.physically healthy/as to/experienced player/give training to/at the same time/divide.into./be interested/sign up/look forward to2.造句造句(1)I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school.(2)We can benefit a lot from playing table tennis.(3)It can prevent us from getting shortsighted.(4)It can keep us physically healthy.(5)We plan to invite experienced players to give training to us every Friday afternoon.(6)We will divide the members into several groups to practice at 5：00 pm after school.(7)If you are interested，sign up on our school website before August 10.(8)Im looking forward to your reply.3.成篇成篇Dear Eric，I am Li Hua.I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school.It is known that we can benefit a lot from playing table tennis.It can prevent us from getting shortsighted and it can keep us physically healthy.As to the activities，we plan to invite experienced players to give training to us every Friday afternoon.At the same time，we will divide the members into several groups to practice at 5：00 pm after school.If you are interested，sign up on our school website before August 10.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua 2016河北区总复习质量检测河北区总复习质量检测(三三)人人们们越越来来越越离离不不开开手手机机。你你在在暑暑期期社社会会实实践践活活动动中中，对对手手机机的的使使用用进进行行了了调调查查，发发现现很很多多人人在在开开车车、过过马马路路时时都都在在使使用用手手机机。针针对对这这一一现现象象，请请你你按按下下列列要要点点用用英英语语写写一一篇篇不不少少于于100词词的的短短文文，呼呼吁吁人人们们文文明明使用手机。使用手机。主要内容包括：主要内容包括：1.描述这一社会现象；描述这一社会现象；2.你的观点和合理建议。你的观点和合理建议。跟踪训练参考范文本课结束