高中英语2024届高考读后续写素材（共三类）.doc

高考英语读后续写素材一、景色1.The island is famous for its white-sand beaches, while its shallow, glassy waters invite easy trips into coral reefs full of marine life. One side of the island is well-known for its breathtaking sunrises, while the other is even more famous for its contemplative sunsets.此段形容词众多，喜欢glassy，水有了玻璃的质感，光亮透明。invite有种拟人的感觉，水是主人，邀请你前往旅行，想一想就有清风明月相邀的意境。正是因为这样的水才让前往珊瑚礁的旅行成为现实。不去 反而辜负了这明净的水。形容词"breathtaking"用于描述"sunrises"（日出）。它强调了日出的震撼和壮观之处，给人一种非常感人的感觉。contemplative修饰sunset，用于描述某人或某物的性格或行为具有深思熟虑、内敛、冥想的特点。当将其修饰"sunrise”（日出）时，可以理解为在欣赏日出时，人们可能会处于一种深思熟虑、内省的状态。这样的日落让人不由地陷入内心的深深思考。2.The next morning when I woke up, the sun was shining through the curtains-after driving in such darkness the night before it was now all sunshine. When I opened the curtain, I was shocked. I had never expected to see such an enormous and beautiful mountain right in front of me.阳光透过窗帘照进房间，也照进了人的心房。the night before与now，过去与现在两个时间的对比。darkness与sunshine一明一暗的对比。强烈的反差 ，令人眼前一亮。打开窗帘，shocked与had never expected呼应，这是大自然的馈赠，大自然偷偷为你准备的礼物。喜出望外，惊喜连连。right in front of me，就在眼前，不虚此行。妥妥的mountain-view room。这里我们可以学习句型When.，I was shocked. I had never expected to do sth.先表达情绪shocked，在表达内心想法。比如考完试之后拿到试卷的心情。When I got my paper，I was shocked. I had never expected to see such a bad grade.3.All weekend I admired the mountains and wildlife surrounding me. And that's when I became fasicinated by the beauty of nature. 第一句是具体动作，这第二句是总结。我们也可仿写These days，he keeps reciting words，asking questions and turning to teachers for advice. That's when he becomes interested in English.4.No trip to is complete without seeing a performance of Spain's famous art form，flamingo.当我们强调某个景点非去不可，不去就是终生遗憾时 可用No trip to is complete without visiting.。这总比以前学过的must-visit强百倍。为了寻求complete，无论如何也要去一次了。二、声音紫酱脸的人傲然问，声音宏亮而清晰。the purplish-faced man asked in a loud and arrogant voice.本来还是闭着眼睛的吴老太爷被二小姐身上的香气一刺激，便睁开眼来看一下，颤着声音慢慢地说：Her perfume seemed to wake him, and he opened his eyes to see who it was and said in a slow and quavering voice:马达声音响了，一八八九号汽车开路，已经动了，忽然吴老太爷又锐声叫了起来：The engine started up but as the car moved forward the old man suddenly cried in a shrill voice:最近做金太阳的题目，遇到了his voice broke。老人回忆一把椅子与人生中重要时刻时，声音broke了。voice作主语 谓语动词可以是quaver，shake，tremble作宾语可以与lower raise 搭配I must touch it,' Aziz said, fighting with his voice.“我得摸一下，”阿齐兹说，声音都有点变。这里fight with his voice的用法可以学起来。我们还可以用 we felt a touch/note of fear in his voice。借助对方的视角，从声音的角度表现人物的情绪。声音可以指代发出声音的人有一个清脆的声音在汽车旁边叫：A maid's clear voice announced:一个声音在人堆里怒喊。thundered a voice from the middle of the crowd.拟声词的使用也能让人耳目一新。比如Tick tock 滴答声，Splash 泼水，bang 重击，巨响 Beep 嘟嘟响 Atchoo! 疼痛tweet 鸟叫声Crash 破碎。拟声词也可以作为句子的开头，给人一种未见其人先闻其声的感觉。句子不仅有了画面感还有声音的加持，有了环绕立体声的味道。三、情感类词汇与动作描写读后续写中，我们习惯了用单个的句子表达人物的感情，比如He was overwhelmed with terror.Terror crept up on him.Terror took hold of him.Terror welled up in my heart.Bravery gave way to Terror.这些句子固然不错，但是稍显单薄，如果和人物的具体动作结合起来，在一个句子中展现会收到意想不到的效果。以下部分摘抄的例句部分来自2016年浙江卷读后续写。firstJane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” 此句中angry 与之后的said在一个so.that. 结构的句子中。我们也很容易仿写出这样的句子。句子不再简单，含义更加丰富。文中还有一个相同的句子Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.secondTo her surprise, she saw nothing but forest To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. 文中这两句都用到了to one's +情感类名词，是之后动作发生时伴随的情感。这种介词短语表达感情的用法，也是简单易学的。She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.此处的with+情感名词的介词短语也可以学一学。thirdThe farther she walked, the more confused she became. the+比较级， the+比较级这一结构学生初中时已经接触，掌握起来也不费力气。walk与confused同时发生。fourJane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty.起床时又饿又渴，并列形容词作状语。在网上流传很广的范文中也出现了这一用法。Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone.很多学生活学活用，把and转变为but。fiveWeak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.这是范文中的一个句子，倒装句的用法，这也提供给我们一个思路，可以把weak换为其他的情感类词汇。sixshe hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything. too.to.结构学生应该也不陌生。seven Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream.此处的stronger可以换为任何情感类形容词，这也是经常用到的一种方式。EightHe was surprised to receive the gift.这种句子虽然简单，但是在阅卷中很少见到。看完之后，我们来练习一下吧！翻译下列句子收到这个消息，我感到非常兴奋。2.他看到同学滑倒很担心。3.我非常生气，差点把向我走来的撞倒。4.感到内疚，他决定弥补这个错误。5.他惊讶地打开了礼物。6.怀着沉重的心情，他回到了家。7.他一句话也说不出来，静静地站在那里。8.简走在森林里，疲惫而绝望。答案在此1.I was excited to receive the news.2.He was worried to see his classmate slip.3.I was so angry that I almost knocked down Rochelle who was walking towards me.4.Feeling guilty, he decided to make up for the mistake.5.In surprise, he opened the gift.6.With a heavy heart, he went back home.7.Unable to utter a word, he stood there silently.8.Jane walked in the forest, tired and hopeless.3