高考英语写作专题环境保护.docx
环境保护. 应用文写作倡议信(书)近期“公筷行动”公益广告每天在央视频道黄金时间播出。为了号召大家用餐使用公筷，请你以学生会的名义向全校师生写一封英文倡议书刊登在校英文报上。内容要点如下：1. “公筷行动”简介；2. 你的建议或想法。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear teachers and students， The Student Union【范文】Dear teachers and students，As we see, a public service advertisement is being aired on CCTV every day recently, which is about advocating the use of public chopsticks to avoid using one's own chopsticks to pick food from the same dishes. It is intended that the bacteria and viruses will be prevented from spreading.For the sake of our health and safety, I think it is good and necessary to use “public chopsticks” when dining together with others. So let's start taking action right away!The Student Union点评：1. 词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如be aired on, advocate, avoid doing, be prevented from doing, for the sake of, dine together with, take action, right away等。2. 句式美：句中使用了两个非限制性定语从句，分别由as和which引导。句用了“It is过去分词that引导的主语从句”，It作形式主语。句中think后接宾语从句，从句中it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式短语to use “public chopsticks”。练习：假定你是李华，请你给校英语报写一封倡议信，号召全校同学积极响应学校正在开展的垃圾分类活动，内容包括：1. 垃圾分类的意义； 2. 你的建议。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。参考词汇：垃圾分类 waste classificationDear fellow students, Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear fellow students，As you may have noticed, the programme of waste classification in our school has kicked off. I am writing to call on you, members of the school, to take immediate action.Every day, we produce piles of waste, ranging from plastic bottles to paper, which not only leads to environmental pollution, but is also a waste of resources. Therefore, it is urgent for us to take an active part in the waste classification programme. First, we can collect what can be recycled to save resources. Second, harmful materials should be sorted and treated properly to avoid pollution. Most importantly, we need to develop the habit of classifying waste. Let's do it!Yours, Li Hua. 读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“I just want a normal birthday party，” April told Bailey as they walked home from school.Bailey knew what April meant. April's parents loved the environment. And because April happened to be born on Earth Day, all her parties had an Earth Day theme.“Remember when you turned seven？” said Bailey.“How could I forget the ThrowOut Blowout？” said April.“We helped out at your garage sales and donated the money to charity. And when you turned eight .”“It was a Tree Spree，” finished April. “We planted maples.” “Last year, we all collected newspapers to recycle，” said Bailey. “The Print Sprint，” April groaned (抱怨)Bailey giggled, “I thought it was fun.”Later that night, as April loaded the dishwasher, she said, “I'd like to plan my own party this year.”悬念1“Sure，” said Mum. “We could have a Compost Carnival.” “Great idea！” said Dad.April cleared her throat. “I'd like to go to Maze Craze (疯狂迷宫) instead.” “Really？” said Dad, surprised. “I guess we could do that. Dad and I can send you kids there，” said Mum.April couldn't wait for her birthday! She and her friends would have so much fun. And they wouldn't have to think one bit about the Earth.At school the next day, April told her friends, “I'm having my birthday party at Maze Craze！”悬念2“You are？” said Josie. “But we always do something earthy on your birthday.” “Remember that salamander (火蜥蜴) we found two years ago？” said Tyler. “Yeah，” said April. “This year, we're not even going outside.”“Oh！” said Tyler.The following weekend, everyone gathered in the parking lot outside of Maze Craze. “Thanks for coming，” said April. “I've been so excited about my party. No shovels (铲子). No collecting recyclables. Nothing earthy about it.” She shifted her feet. “Then I got here this morning and saw this parking lot.”April's friends glanced around. Plastic bottles bounced (弹起) across the ground. Newspapers and fastfood sacks blocked the storm drain (排水道). Shopping bags rustled (沙沙作响) in the trees.悬念3注意：续写词数应为 150 左右。“What a mess！” April frowned. April looked at the collected rubbish and smiled. 一、理清文章大意关键：Who: AprilWhere: in the parking lot outside of Maze CrazeWhen: on her birthdayWhat: a normal birthday partyHow: April tried to celebrate her birthday in a new way.大意：本文讲述了April今年想在疯狂迷宫过生日。生日当天，她和朋友到达疯狂迷宫外面的停车场时，看到了很多垃圾。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1 思考：April会怎样计划自己的生日呢？悬念2思考：疯狂迷宫与环保有关联吗？与地球日主题有关吗？悬念3思考：面对眼前的这种情景，April和她的朋友会做些什么呢？三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：停车场既然这么脏乱，April会对朋友和家人说些什么呢？ April的爸爸妈妈会怎么做？大家会怎样捡垃圾？段首句2思考：朋友们的衣服会不会因为捡垃圾而弄脏？ 朋友们会祝贺 April生日快乐吗？April对明年的生日聚会有何打算？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph 1: April皱眉April建议捡垃圾大家设法捡垃圾Paragraph 2：感到高兴大家祝April生日快乐明年的打算【范文】“What a mess！” April frowned. Though she had been longing for a nonEarth Day birthday, it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess. She turned around to her friends, “How about picking up the trash first？” Her proposal was quickly approved by others and soon they were in business. April's mum grabbed some gloves from the trunk while her dad managed to remove those shopping bags in the trees. With the bags, April and Bailey collected scattered bottles. By the drain, Josie and Tyler made great efforts to clear the blockage. Many hands make light work. In a short while, three bags were filled with cans and newspapers to recycle. April looked at the collected rubbish and smiled. Then she looked up at her friends. Their neat clothes for the birthday party were soaked with sweat, but their faces glowed with satisfaction. It felt so good to do something for the Earth. “Happy Earth Day, everyone，” said April. “Now we are ready for Maze Craze.” “Happy Birthday, April！” shouted her friends. “I'm so lucky to have been born on Earth Day！” April thought to herself. “A Compost Carnival may be a good idea for next year.” 点评：1. 使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。quickly一词暗示其他人和April也有同感，因此立刻赞同她的提议。两处用了so作修饰词，表示程度，比very语气强。2. 词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。turn a blind eye to, make great efforts to, be soaked with sweat, glow with satisfaction等都是精彩的高级表达。运用了Though引导的让步状语从句。How about doing sth.? 表示建议。
