江苏省徐州市2019-2022学年高二下学期英语期末试卷汇编-应用文写作专题.docx

江苏省徐州市2019-2022三年高二下学期英语期末试卷汇编 应用文写作专题江苏省徐州市2021-2022学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题第一节（满分15分）假如你是李华, 你的朋友 Jack写信询问你的职业规划, 请你给他写一封回信, 要点如下1. 职业选择; 2. 选择原因; 3. 所做准备。注意1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Jack, _Yours, Li Hua江苏省徐州市2020-2021学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题第一节 应用文写作（满分15分）假定你是李华，你校下周将迎来一批英国学生。请你用英文写一份欢迎辞，内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2.介绍活动安排：听取校史介绍，参观校园，游览云龙湖等；3.希望玩得愉快。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends,That's all.Thank you.江苏省徐州市2019-2020学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题第一节(满分15分)66.假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom对中国传统文化有浓厚的兴趣。你校将举办一场介绍中国艺术的讲座，请写封邮件邀请他参加，内容包括:1.时间和地点；2.讲座内容（介绍中国画、剪纸和京剧）；3.准备工作（简要了解一下相关知识）。注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,Here comes a piece of good news._If you have any questions,please dont hesitate to contact me.Looking forward to seeing you!Yours,Li Hua参考答案江苏省徐州市2021-2022学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题【参考范文】Dear Jack,Im so glad to talk with you about my career plan. As a fashion enthusiast, I hope to be a fashion designer to beautify the world and people around. As you know, I am good at drawing and keen on fashion. And I plan to work part-time for a fashion design company so that I can acquire some professional skills. Of course, I am also thinking of trying my hand at CAD, which is more popular in the fashion industry.What is your career plan? Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours, Li Hua江苏省徐州市2020-2021学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)Dear friends,l would like to express the most sincere welcome to you on behalf of our school. It's my pleasure to give you a brief introduction to today's arrangements.In the morning, you will attend a lecture about our school history, then you will be shown around our school. In the afternoon, you will visit the Yunlong Lake, a famous tourist attraction. Also you will visit the museum and explore Han culture.l wish you an enjoyable and unforgettable stay here.Thats all. Thank you.一、评分原则:1.本题总分为15分，按4个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.评分时应考虑:内容是否完整，条理是否清楚，交际是否得体，语言是否准确。4.拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5.词数少于70，从总分中减去1分。二、各档次的给分范围和要求:第一档(13-15分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。内容完整,条理清楚;交际得体，表达时充分考虑到了交际对象的需求;体现出较强的语言运用能力。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第二档(9-12分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。内容、条理和交际等方面基本符合要求。所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求;语法或用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第三档(4-8分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务。内容不完整;所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对写作内容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。第四档(0-3分)未完成试题规定的任务。写了少量相关信息:语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对写作内容的理解。江苏省徐州市2019-2020学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题【答案】Dear Tom,Here comes a piece of good news. A lecture is going to be held in our school. Since youre obsessed with Chinese culture, Id like to inform you of detailed information.The lecture is scheduled at the Students Hall at 2 pm this Friday. It covers a wide variety of topics on Chinese arts, including Chinese painting, paper cuttings and Peking Opera. Im convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from this lecture. By the way, knowing briefly about these topics on the Internet in advance would be quite helpful.If you have any questions, please dont hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to seeing you!YoursLi Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生给英国朋友Tom写一封邮件，邀请他参加你校将举办一场介绍中国艺术的讲座。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：三段式：第一段写出写信目的，引出主题；第二段写出讲座具体内容；第三段表达期待对方能够参加这个讲座。要求：1. 表明写信的目的，邀请朋友参加讲座。2. 介绍活动的时间、地点、内容及需要做的准备工作。3. 表达自己期待对方能够参加这个讲座。第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）lecture (讲座); be obsessed with (痴迷于); inform sb. of sth. (告知某人某事); a variety of (各种各样的); Chinese painting (中国画); paper cuttings (剪纸); Peking Opera (京剧); convinced (确信的); dig out (挖掘出); by the way (顺便说一下); in advance (提前)第三步：连词成句1. A lecture is going to be held in our school. 2. Since youre obsessed with Chinese culture, Id like to inform you of detailed information.3. The lecture is scheduled at the Students Hall at 2 pm this Friday.4. It covers a wide variety of topics on Chinese arts.5. Im convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from this lecture.6. By the way, knowing briefly about these topics on the Internet in advance would be quite helpful.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second ; and then; finally; in the end; at last2. 表并列补充关系：Whats more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only but also; as well as; bothand3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand, on the other hand; some, while others4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so; since; thus; therefore; as a result; why 5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。Id like to inform you of detailed information.本句用来告知朋友讲座的具体信息。可以使用原因状语从句，进一步说明为什么要告诉朋友讲座的信息。润色修改为：Since youre obsessed with Chinese culture, Id like to inform you of detailed information.【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：Since youre obsessed with Chinese culture, Id like to inform you of detailed information.”，这句话为since引导的原因状语从句；其次，使用了一些固定句型和短语，如：be obsessed with; inform sb. of sth.; in advance等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇，如lecture; paper cuttings; convinced等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。