江苏省徐州市2019-2022学年高二下学期英语期末试卷汇编-读后续写专题.docx

江苏省徐州市2019-2022三年高二下学期英语期末试卷汇编 读后续写专题江苏省徐州市2021-2022学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。There was an eight-year-old girl. One day, while returning from school with her mum, she saw a wonderful Barbie doll, on the shelf of a toy shop. The Barbie was designed and packed perfectly. She insisted her mum to buy it but her mum was having a cash shortage and 50 dollar for the doll was a bit too much to afford as her husband was separated and all he was using was her savings to live their life. Now each day after her school while coming back with her mum the girl cried for that toy and all her mum could say was next month. Days passed and this continued. Mum got fed up and slapped her daughter for the first time to force her to forget about that toy, and then promised a better one (obviously low cost). However, the kid was very stubborn. She wanted that only. It was the month of winter when her mum found a job which she could do at home at night after making her daughter sleep. Finally she could have extra money, now she was a bit relaxed. On a Monday afternoon, she went to pick up her daughter as usual, but this time she didn't go alone. She bought the Barbie toy for her. The kid was glad to see that, excitedly hugging her mum. She was in joy. Each day the kid played with her doll, making her bath, combing her hair, and making her put on fancy dress. Days passed, and now she was one year older. The Barbie was not as that important. While playing, she grabbed the hair, broke her one hand, etc. Gradually she got bored and the Barbie toy was dumped somewhere unknown. Years later, she got married. And one day, she came to visit her old mum. 注意1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。She looked around her room where she grew up and suddenly she noticed her old toy box. _She took the Barbie back her home. 江苏省徐州市2020-2021学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。George and his friends have always enjoyed hanging out with each other in thesummertime.One afternoon,George and his friends Paul and James decided to go camping at their favorite spot. George brought a large tent for all of them to stay in, and all three, armed with their sleeping bags,took off for their campsite.Once they set up the tent and started a fire,they roasted hotdogs.They sat around the fire and told stories and laughed.When it started to get late,the boys decided it was time to go to bed.After getting into their sleeping bags,Paul and James fell asleep almost immediately.But just as George was about to nod off,he heard a strange noise that seemed to come from the woods.He sat straight up, his eyes open wide.Looking at his two friends sleeping peacefully, he decided that it must have just been the wind and there was no need to worry.But just as he started to nod off,he heard the sound again.It was much louder this time.Paul awoke suddenly.“Did you hear that? Is it a cry from a monkey?”he asked George. George,obviously scared,nodded his head.“James,wake up!"Paul shouted."There's something out there!”Just then, they heard the noise again.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The boys all looked at each other,their eyes wide with fear.They decided to go out together and check.江苏省徐州市2019-2020学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题第二节(满分25分)67.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Russ Fee was asleep inside his tent last summer when a series of screams woke him up. Throwing on his shoes, he ran out to check. Fee and his wife were traveling through Canadas Banff National Park to enjoy its stunning beauty and awesome wildlife. It was the latter he now encountered. Although it was dark, Fee could make out a neighboring tent in a mess. Backing out was a wolf,dragging something in his teeth.That thing was a man.Moments earlier, Elisa and Matt Rispoli, from New Jersey, were asleep with their two young children when the wolf tore into their tent.”It was like something out of a horror movie,”Elisa posted on Facebook.For three minutes,”Matt threw his body in front of me and the boys and fought the wolf.”At one point,Matt got the upper hand, pinning the wolf to the ground. But the wolf clamped its jaw onto Matt s arm, set its powerful legs, and began tugging Matt outside “while I was pulling on his legs trying to get him back,” Elisa wrote.Paragraph 1It was then that Russ Fee entered the picture._Paragraph 2Elisa called the ambulance._参考答案江苏省徐州市2021-2022学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题【参考范文】She looked around her room where she grew up and suddenly she noticed her old toy box. As she opened it and she saw the doll without one hand, hair torn off and bits damaged. Never had she thought that her mother cherished it so much and still held on to it. She was into tears and at that moment she found the half broken and damaged doll was so precious for her. Memories of her childhood came flooding back, when her mother bought her the doll and played games with her. When her mother shared with her the story how she managed to buy the doll, she embraced her mother tightly, crying with more tears. She took the Barbie back her home. She put it carefully in the shelf and examined it time and again. Undoubtedly, it was now an important thing for her, reminding her how hard her mother worked to pay for it and that she had ever forgotten its importance after she got it. She learnt to appreciate what she had. It was never too late for her to love what she had got and never let the importance go. After all, she remembered how much she had cried to get it. She hoped that if her doll was in perfect shape she could even gift her kid.江苏省徐州市2020-2021学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题第二节（满分25分)The boys all looked at each other, their eyes wide with fear. They sat in silence fora moment, not knowing what to do.George broke the silence, saying that maybe a monkey was hungry and looking for food.James said that maybe the monkey was lost and looking for its mother but Paul thought perhaps it was seriously hurt and crying help.“Someone must go out and find out what's happening,"said James. They looked at each other and the complete darkness outside. (75 words)They decided to go out together and check. Outside the tent the wind was blowing hard. They had not walked for a few steps when they heard a faint cry just to their left. lt turned out that a baby monkey was bleeding.James gently picked it up and they rushed back into the tent. They took out their first-aid kit and treated it immediately.After feeding some milk to the baby monkey, they sent it back to the woods. Watching it disappear in the woods, they smiled in relief. (82 words)【读后续写评分标准】1分档:优秀:2125良好:1620一般:11-15较差:610差:15;2.书写:书写较差以致影响交际,酌情扣分（减2分）;3.词数:150左右(词数少于130的，减2分）;4.时态:应该和原文一致，全错扣5分（部分错误，根据错的程度酌情扣分）;5.拼写:3-4个错误扣1分;6评分时，主要从以下三个方面考虑:(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;(2）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;(3）上下文的连贯性。7.建议续写内容:续写第1段内容可以是在帐篷内,他们猜测发生了什么事。续写第2段内容可以是他们走出帐篷,进行施救。附:各档次给分范围及要求第五档(21-25分)一与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理;一所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所续写短文结构紧凑。第四档(16-20分)与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理;一所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达;一比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所续写短文结构紧凑。第三档（11-15分)一与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接;一应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响意义的表达;一应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。第二档(6-10分)一与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接;一语法结构单调、词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达;一较少使用语句间的连接成分,全文内容缺少连贯性。第一档（0-5分)与所给短文和开头语的衔接较差;语法结构单调、词汇项目很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意义的表达;没有使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容毫无连贯性。江苏省徐州市2019-2020学年高二下学期期末考试英语试题【答案】Paragraph 1:It was then that Russ Fee entered the picture. Fee was shocked to see the bloody scene. Blood ran down Matts arms and face constantly. Matt looked painful and frightened, crying for help. Fee grabbed what he could to hit the huge wolf. Seeing Fee approaching him, the wolf jumped to bite Fee crazily. Matt struggled to his feet, taking his wife and children out and quickly flew in to join the battle. Matt tried to force the wolf back with two rocks he picked on the ground. Finally the wolf withdrew and escaped. The two men lay on the ground, badly injured.Paragraph 2:Elisa called the ambulance. Matt and Fee were rushed to the nearest hospital, where they received proper treatment. Soon, they fully recovered. “Thanks to Fee,” Elisa told the reporter, “Without him, the attack could have been worse.” Fees heroic deeds was reported by the local TV station. To be a hero needs a brave heart. Fee told the TV show, “I just want to secure them without thinking anything else.” What a respectable man he was!【解析】【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，上文主要讲述了Russ Fee和他的妻子当时正在加拿大班夫国家公园旅行时，听到了一连串的尖叫声，那是Elisa 和Matt Rispoli的帐篷遭遇了狼的袭击，文章描述了Matt和狼搏斗的经过，狼咬住了Matt的胳膊，开始把马特拽到外面，而Elisa也在拉他的腿，想把他拽回来。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：就在那时，Russ Fee前来帮忙了。所以后文应该是讲述Fee和狼搏斗的经过，最后Matt从地上捡起两块石头，试图迫使狼后退。最后，狼撤退逃跑了。这两个人躺在地上，受了重伤。第二段开头是：Elisa叫了救护车。本段应该写他们如何得救的。当地电视台还报道了Fee的英雄事迹。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：bloody scene，run down，cry for help等高级词汇；Fee grabbed what he could to hit the huge wolf.运用了宾语从句；Matt and Fee were rushed to the nearest hospital, where they received proper treatment.非限制性定语从句等高级句式。