高考英语-应用文写作之邀请信和投诉信备战高考英语微专题(全国通用).docx

应用文写作之邀请信和投诉信邀请信题型分析三段式谋篇思路邀请信是用于邀请他人参加某项活动或加入某个组织，包括发出邀请和谢绝他人的邀请。2020浙江1月高考和2019全国卷考查邀请信文章首段：说明活动并提出邀请主体段落：说明活动内容和参加活动的益处文章尾段：期待对方接受邀请【背诵满分靓句】1It's my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to join us.非常荣幸地邀请你加入我们。2I wonder if I/we have the honour to invite you to the party.我想知道我/我们是否能有幸邀请你参加派对。3I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.我想邀请您下周六重阳节一起去探访附近的养老院。4We are having/planning . on . （date） and we feel it would be a great idea if you can join us.我们定于（日期）（活动），如果你能来参加就太好了。5The following are some details about ./Here are some details about ./Some details about . are as follows.的细节如下。6To begin with, we will . Besides, there will be a number of/various activities such as . which will .首先，我们将。此外，将会有许多活动，例如这将7I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient to you.我真心希望你方便的话能接受我们/我的邀请。8We/I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early/earliest convenience.如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加，我们/我将不胜感激。【佳作示例】（2020·浙江1月高考）Dear George，There will be a Chinese speech contest for foreign students in our school. I'd like to invite you to compete in it （我想邀请你参加比赛）It will take place in the school hall from 9：00 to on the morning of January 18. The topic is “Traditional Chinese Culture”. Surely it is a good chance for you to show how well you've learned Chinese. If you are interested, sign up on our school website before January 10.Any early reply would be highly appreciated （如尽早回复我将不胜感激）Yours，Li Hua投诉信题型分析三段式谋篇思路投诉信是写信人对产品或服务表示不满的信件，常用于消费者利益受损，正常生活和工作受到干扰等令人烦恼的情况文章首段：直接交代要投诉的问题主体段落：说明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果文章尾段：提出解决方案，期待对方回复【背诵满分靓句】1I'm writing to make a complaint about your service standard.我写信是为了投诉你们的服务标准。2I'm . a customer who bought . from your website several days ago. I am writing to you to complain about .我是一位顾客，几天前我从你们的网站上购买了我写信向你投诉3I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about/at your unfriendly attitude to customers.我写信表达我对于你们对顾客不友好态度的不满。4To improve the situation, it is advisable for you to take the following measures.为了改进这种情况，建议你采取以下措施。5I do hope that someone will take effective measures to deal with this matter.我真的希望有人会/将采取有效措施解决这个问题。6I sincerely hope you can improve your service and that mistake won't arise again in the future.我真诚希望你能改进你们的服务并且此类错误将来不会再出现。7I would appreciate it if you could give due attention to this matter.如果你足够重视此事，我将不胜感激。8I am really annoyed about it. I trust/have great faith that you will take my complaints seriously.我对这件事真的很恼火。我相信你会认真对待我的投诉。【佳作示例】Dear Mr. Henry，I'm writing to express my dissatisfaction about the T­shirt I bought from your online store （我写信表达对我在你的网店买的T恤的不满）. When opening the package, I found it was not the blue T­shirt I had ordered but a white one. Worse still, there was a red stain on the T­shirt. I have dialed your service number many times, only to be repeatedly told it was busy. Please exchange the T­shirt for a blue one or return my money （请将T恤换成蓝色或退款）. Moreover, I'm wondering who will pay for the transportation expenses.Hopefully, you can solve the problem as soon as possible （你能尽快解决这个问题）Yours，Li Hua【检测训练】1假如你是李华，现在有两张京剧贵妃醉酒（Drunken Concubine）的演出门票，想邀请你们班上的英国留学生Jean观看。请你给她写一封英文的邀请信。写作要点：1.京剧的简介；2.提出邀请。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Jean，I know you are interested in Peking opera, a traditional art form, which has a history of more than 200 years. I am sure you would like to see a show, Drunken Concubine, performed in the national grand theatre on February 10. It is a famous drama in Peking opera and is popular with people. Luckily I have two tickets and I'd like to invite you to watch the show with me. I firmly believe that it is well worth seeing and it can arouse your interest in traditional Chinese culture. I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Lihua【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给留学生Jean写一封信，邀请她观看京剧贵妃醉酒（Drunken Concubine）。【写作步骤】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.京剧的简介；2.提出邀请。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）be interested in; have a history of; more than; would like to; be popular with; invite sb. to do; be worth doing; arouse ones interest in; look forward to第三步：连词成句1. I know you are interested in Peking opera, a traditional art form, which has a history of more than 200 years.2. I am sure you would like to see a show, Drunken Concubine, performed in the national grand theatre on February 10.3. It is a famous drama in Peking opera and is popular with people.4. Luckily I have two tickets and I'd like to invite you to watch the show with me.5. I firmly believe that it is well worth seeing and it can arouse your interest in traditional Chinese culture.6. I'm looking forward to your early reply.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut （also）, including,3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause（从句）, In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat 4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【写作点评】高分句型1 I know you are interested in Peking opera, a traditional art form, which has a history of more than 200 years.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。高分句型2 I am sure you would like to see a show, Drunken Concubine, performed in the national grand theatre on February 10. 这句话运用了过去分词作定语。高分句型3 I firmly believe that it is well worth seeing and it can arouse your interest in traditional Chinese culture. 这句话运用了宾语从句。2假定你是李华，你校打算成立Fans英语俱乐部，想邀请外教Smith参加，请你给Smith写封邀请函，内容包括：1.成立俱乐部的目的；2.活动时间、地点及安排；3.邀请加入。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Smith,I'm Li Hua,a student in Class 1 Grade 3.To arouse our interest in English learning and provide a platform for us to practice English,our grade has decided to set up Fans English Club.We'll gather in the meeting room after school every Friday afternoon,when various activities will be organized and performed,like singing English songs and having debates in English.I'm very honored to invite you to join us representing our grade.I hold the firm belief that your appearance in our club will certainly inspire us all to become more interested in English and therefore work harder at English.Hoping to see you every Friday afternoon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【写作分析】 本文要求给外教Smith老师写封邀请函，邀请他参加你校打算成立的Fans英语俱乐部。成文时应注意以下几点：（1）内容要点齐全。完整说明题干中给的内容，适当扩展。 （2）人称使用要恰当。（3）时态：一般现在时为主。（4）适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。（5）恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目要求我们在邀请信中写出的内容以及我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：介绍自己以及成立俱乐部的目的（激发英语学习的兴趣，提供练习英语的平台）；第二段：活动时间、地点及安排（让被邀请人清楚的了解活动的基本信息。）；第三段：邀请Smith老师加入（您的出现能激励我们更努力的学习英语）。【写作点评】1.使用高级句型：非限制性定语从句和将来时的被动语态We'll gather in the meeting room after school every Friday afternoon, when various activities will be organized and performed；同位语从句的使用I hold the firm belief that your appearance in our club will certainly inspire us.。2.使用了过渡词语：therefore 等。3.使用了重要短语：set up建立；be honored to感到很荣幸；become interested in对感兴趣。3你校校长李建想邀请你校交换生Peter的父亲Smith作为颁奖嘉宾参加你校新学期的开学典礼，现请你代他写一封邀请信，主要内容包括：1发出邀请；2活动安排；3你的看法；4联系方式：fgvert. schoolyahoo. Org/010-34532225。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Mr SmithIm honored to invite you to attend the opening ceremony of the new term, which is to be held at 8 on the morning of Sept. 1 （next Monday） in our school meeting hall. And we expect you to work as a guest who presents awards to students. While being there, you can not only get involved in our educational activities but also witness the growth of your child. I firmly believe its a good opportunity to strengthen the relationship between our school and parents.Would you be so kind as to tell me whether you could come in advance? For more information, please send email to fgvert. schoolyahoo. org or call at 010-35432225.Best wishes!Yours,Li Jian【写作分析】这是一篇提纲类作文，文章要点已经给出，在写这篇文章时要注意以下几点：1.整篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。2.要点要齐全，但是不要进行简单的罗列，可以采用适当的连接词，或者是表递进关系的副词如For more information使上下文衔接自然，行文自然流畅。3.注意语气，此文是写邀请信的英语短文，所以语气上应该比较诚恳，不应该出现过多的强硬语气的词语。4.此作文要分四个部分写，每个部分要更完整，最好用简单句与复合句结合的方法写作如Im honored to invite you to attend the opening ceremony of the new term, which is to be held at 8 on the morning of Sept. 1 （next Monday） in our school meeting hall.5.多采用一些高级句型，如wed better wear masks when we go outside，Its one of the most dangerous weather conditions，同时使用一些词组如not only.but also ， be honored to，held at，between and等。【范文亮点】提纲性文章难点：提纲性文章难点：扩充成句，因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出，在将短句扩充时，要精炼。其中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达，如强调句，定语从句等，就如文中“Im honored to invite you to attend the opening ceremony of the new term, which is to be held at 8 on the morning of Sept. 1 （next Monday） in our school meeting hall. ”使用的是定语从句。再者就是要多使用一些高级词汇与词组，如文中not only.but also ， be honored to，held at，between and等。最后就是要段落清新，层次分明。就像文中要多使用一些连接词语使衔接自然。4假如你叫李华，最近在某个购物网站上购买了一件夹克，但到货后发现了下列一些问题，请给该网站写一封投诉信，投诉信内容如下表：要点：1.投诉内容；2.要求重新邮寄或退款；3.询问应由谁承担邮寄费用。注意:1.书信内容包括以上要点；2.词数100左右（书信格式已给出，不计入总词数）；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam,Im writing to complain about the jacket which I bought from your website. This morning I received the jacket on time, but_I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam,I'm writing to complain about the jacket which I bought from your website. This morning I received the jacket on time, but I regret to say that there's something wrong with it.Firstly, Im pretty sure I asked you to send me a purple one. The moment the mail box arrived, I couldn't wait to open it, only to find a red one. To make things worse, I need a size 170-88A while you sent me a size 175-92B,which is too large for me. Were I in it, I would be a clown. And it is of such bad quality the zipper doesn't work at all!My concern is whether you will return me the money or have the jacket replaced and I wonder who will pay the postage.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【写作分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生根据表格内容给商家写一封投诉信。【写作步骤】体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 要求：1.投诉内容；2.要求重新邮寄或退款；3.询问应由谁承担邮寄费用。 第二步：列提纲（重点词组）complain to sb. about sth./ on time/ regret to do sth./ ask sb. to do sth./ return/ refund/ take the place of/ look forward to/ cant wait to do sth.第三步：连词成句I'm writing to complain to you about the jacket I bought from your website. This morning I received the jacket on time, but I regret to say that there's something wrong with it.Firstly, I remembered that I asked you to send me a purple one. The moment the mail box arrived, I couldn't wait to open it, only to find a red one.Worse still, I need a size 170-88A while you sent me a size 175-92B, which is too large for me. Were I in it, I would be a clown. And the quality is not good the zipper doesn't work at all!The question is whether you will return me the money or have the jacket replaced and I wonder who will pay the postage.I am looking forward to your early reply.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【写作点评】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，例如：I'm writing to complain about the jacket which I bought from your website.中which引导定语从句；The moment the mail box arrived, I couldn't wait to open it, only to find a red one.中the moment引导时间状语从句；Were I in it, I would be a clown.中使用了虚拟语气的倒装。这些句子的使用让文章色彩纷呈。5假定你是李华，是某国际学校学生会生活部长。近期同学们反映学校的餐厅有较多问题，请你给餐厅负责人Mr. White写一封投诉信。内容包括:1. 写信目的；2. 投诉的具体问题；3. 希望问题早日解决。注意:1. 词数80词左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【参考范文】Dear Mr. White,Im Li Hua, head of the life department of the Students Union. On behalf of the students, Im writing to express our dissatisfaction with the school cafeteria.First, it has a limited number of dishes and the daily specials are the same each week. Secondly, there is a lack of healthy food, such as salads or fish on the menu. Another thing is that we have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal.We would much appreciate it if you could attend to this matter as soon as poss