2021年新高考Ⅱ卷+Ⅰ卷 06 读后续写--高考真题全方位解析+二次开发 (教师版).docx

读后续写-高考真题全方位解析+二次开发 (教师版)2021年新高考卷图例：人物(绿) 时间、地点(黄) 情节(红) 情感(蓝)The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for 充满Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in thekitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. 这没什么大不了The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the 大日子；重要的一天kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it toboil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove 打开burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. 燃烧器 顺利地The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. 关小；调低Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, 喷出 极具晃动the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and 熄灭 惊恐turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! 发出痛苦的喊叫 闻到The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.文本分析人物(绿)主要人物Jenna & Jeff (twins)：母亲节为母亲做法式吐司和鸡肉粥的双胞胎次要人物Mother：平时为全家人做早饭的妈妈Father：帮助孩子们完成早餐制作的爸爸时间(黄)母亲节早上地点(黄)家情节(红)Jeff和Jenna在母亲节那天为母亲做早餐，结果面包焦了，粥也煮坏了，厨房一片狼藉情感(蓝)Jenna & Jeff： 思路构建构思框架丰富内容Para 1As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.根据首句关键词提出问题：对问题做出解答：How did their father feel on seeing the mess?Seeing the black bread and the spilled porridge, father suddenly figured out their secret.How did their father help the twins?Father offered to help.What did the twins do?They helped clean the kitchen.What did their father make for breakfast?Their father cooked a sandwich and some porridge.How did the twins feel when seeing the breakfast was done?They felt guilty about being over-confident.Para 2The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.根据首句关键词提出问题：对问题做出解答：How did their mother react when she saw the breakfast?Mother hugged the twins and showed her thanks.What did the twins say to their mother? “We would like to thank you for your dedication and care for us.”How did their mother feel about the surprise?Mothers eyes were welled up with tears.点题升华：“And from tomorrow, we will learn to make our own breakfast in order to take back our responsibility from you.”作文评价评价标准作文练习Para1 是否写出了爸爸出现之后看到一片狼藉的反应。是否有多个动作描写：例如flash; run; watch等Para 1是否写到双胞胎意识到做饭的艰难，能够与下文对妈妈说的话进行铺垫。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Seeing the black bread and the spilled porridge, Father suddenly figured out their secret. A smile of understanding flashed across his face. Without a second thought, Father offered to help. A ripple of excitement ran through them. They helped clean the kitchen while their father cooked a sandwich and some porridge skillfully. The twins stood straight and awe, watching the hustle and bustle from their father. At 7 oclock, everything was done and perfect. The twins took over the tray, feeling guilty about being over-confident about their competence in performing the house chores. Para2首句后文是否描写了双胞胎把早餐送给妈妈，妈妈的反应。是否用到了多样且恰当的语法结构，如：非谓语动词/形容词短语做状语/时间地点状语/with复合结构/定语从句/强调句.Para2结尾部分是否是圆满大结局并升华了文章，是否点出使妈妈非常感动的不仅是这个惊喜，还有孩子们的成长以及对她的爱。The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They presented the well-cooked breakfast in front of mother. Mother hugged the twins and showed her thanks. She tasted it and praised that it was the best breakfast she had ever had. However, the twins lowered their heads, shoulders drooping down. It didnt turn out as they had planned. Finally, Jenna broke out the silence, confessing “Mother, we have taken it for granted for so long that the breakfast you make for us every morning is a super easy job.” Jeff cut in “But it wasnt.” Jenna continued “On this Mothers Day, we would like to thank you for your dedication and care for us.” “And from tomorrow, we will learn to make our own breakfast in order to take back our responsibility from you.” Mother nodded with her eyes welled up with tears. What a beautiful surprise!拓展练习一、词块积累1. be filled with 充满2. There was nothing to it. 没什么大不了。3. the big day 大日子；重要的日子4. give a cry of pain 发出痛苦的喊叫5. catch the smell of 闻到二、介词填空1. 打开第二层炉子燃烧器turned on the second stove burner 2. 蒸气从锅里冒出来steam shooting out of the pot 3. 把火关小turned down the fire 4. 灭火put out the fire 三、词形变化1. excitement n. 兴奋；激动 excited adj. 激动的 exciting adj. 令人激动的2. surprise n. 惊喜 surprising adj. 令人惊喜的 surprised adj. 惊喜地3. pain n. 痛苦 painful adj. 痛苦的 painfully adv. 痛苦地4. mixture n. 混合物 mixed adj. 复杂的；矛盾的 mix v. 混合5. thankfully adv. 感谢地 thankful adj. 感谢的 thank v. 感谢6. pleased adj. 满意的 please v. 使满意 pleasing adj. 令人高兴的 pleasant adj. 令人高兴的 pleasure n. 快乐；满足四、一词多义（请根据句意猜测划线词的词义）turn1. b She turned to look at me.2. c The leaves were turning brown.3. a Please wait your turn.a. n. (依次轮到的)机会b. v. 转身；扭转c. v. 使变成；成为shoot1. b A man was shot in the leg.2. a A plane shot across the sky.3. d bamboo shoots4. c Where was the movie shot?a. v. 冲；奔b. v. 射杀；射伤c. v. 拍摄d. n. 幼苗mess5. b The room was in a mess.6. a You are messing my hair up.a. v. 弄脏；弄乱b. n. 杂乱；肮脏 五、作文素材积累1. 感叹句的使用：How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.译文：当他们把早餐带到妈妈床前的时候，她该多么满意多么自豪啊！仿写：当他们给妈妈呈上做好的早餐，表达感谢的时候，她太惊喜了！How surprised Mother was when they presented the well-cooked breakfast in front of her and expressed their gratitude to her.2. 分词做宾补：Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.译文：杰夫注意到蒸气从锅里冒了出来，锅盖开始晃动。仿写：妈妈睁开眼睛，她发现孩子们正站在床边，用期待的目光看着她。Opening her eyes, Mother found the children standing on the edge of the bed and watching her with eyes full of hope. 5 / 5