2022年全国甲卷 07 应用文--高考真题全方位解析+二次开发 (教师版).pdf
1/5 应用文-高考真题全方位解析+二次开发(教师版)2022 全国甲卷全国甲卷 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1海洋的重要性；2保护海洋的倡议。注意：1词数 100 左右；2短文的题目和首句已为你写好。审题（六何分析法）何事(what)以世界海洋日主题的投稿短文，突出海洋在我们的生活和生存中的重要性。何人(who)我(参加征文投稿)为何(why)倡议我们青少年行动起来保护海洋 何时(when)六月八日（世界海洋日）时态：一般现在时，一般将来时 何地(where)无 如何(how)显性：(1)保护海洋有哪些具体的措施；(2)海洋的重要性。隐性：(1)为何需要采取这样的措施；(2)有什么数据或者调查结果表明需要采取这样的措施；（3）采用这样的措施能带来怎样的积极成果和意义？2/5 亮点遣词 句式升级 汉语 普通词汇 高级词汇 到来 come around the corner 主题 theme with the theme of/themed 丰富的 rich is abundant in 重要的 important is of importance 增强 increase enhance 了解 know have a better knowledge of 扔垃圾 throw rubbish litter rubbish 努力 work hard spare no efforts 使用复杂句式 1.June 8,World Oceans Day,is coming.This year,the theme of it is“Protecting the harmonious coexistence between man and nature in the Marine Ecosystem”.（过去分词作定语）June 8,World Oceans Day,themed“Protecting the harmonious coexistence between man and nature in the Marine Ecosystem”this year,is around the corner.2.However,the ocean is being polluted seriously.17%of the species are affected by the presence of plastic in the ocean.（with 复合结构）However,the ocean is being polluted seriously with 17%of the species affected by the presence of plastic in the ocean.3.We should raise our awareness of marine protection.（主语从句）It is advisable that we should raise our awareness of marine protection.增添细节信息 1.The ocean is important for our existence and living.加原因：The ocean,the cradle of life,covering 70%of the earth,is rich in natural resources,which is important for our existence and living.2.Now it is time for us to take measures to protect it and call on more people to take part in it.举例：Now we should take measures to protect it and call on more people to take part in it.It is advisable that we raise our awareness of marine protection.3.However,the ocean is being polluted seriously.引数据：However,the ocean is being polluted seriously with 17%of the species affected by the presence of plastic in the ocean.3/5 巧衔顺渡(1)启 June 8,World Oceans Day,themed“Protecting the harmonious coexistence between man and nature in the Marine Ecosystem”this year,is around the corner(即将来临).(2)承 As we all know(众所周知),the ocean,the cradle of life,covering 70%of the earth,is abundant in natural resources (3)转 However(然而),these years,the ocean is polluted so seriously that news about pollution is being reported all around the world with 17%of the species affected by the presence of plastic in the ocean.(4)合 Now(现在)its time that we should take a wide range of measures to protect it and call on more people to take an active part in it.We believe(我们相信)with our joint efforts,the condition of the ocean would be improved in the near future.4/5 构思（四格写作法）点题 海洋重要性描述 June 8,World Oceans Day,themed“Protecting the harmonious coexistence between man and nature in the Marine Ecosystem”this year,is around the corner.As we all know,the ocean,the cradle of life,covering 70%of the earth,is abundant in natural resources,which is of importance to our existence and living.世界海洋日世界海洋日 However,these years,the ocean is polluted so seriously that news about pollution is being reported all around the world with 17%of the species being affected by the presence of plastic in the ocean.If we didnt protect the ocean right now,we would suffer in the near future.As the saying goes,“Actions speak louder than words”.Now its time that we should take a wide range of measures to protect it and call on more people to take an active part in it.It is advisable that we should enhance our awareness of protecting it.Whats more,we are required/suggested/proposed that we should have a better knowledge of To make the ocean clean,we students should spare our efforts to take action and call on more people to get involved!5/5 the ocean and act to protect the ocean,such as,stopping littering white rubbish into it and reducing using disposable products.We believe with our joint efforts,the condition of the ocean would be improved in the near future.海洋污染现状+建议 倡议 环境保护类句型积累 表达活动主题常用句式 the theme of.is.,themed.,whose theme is.with the theme of.,环境问题描述(1)因果关系：bring about lead to result in give rise to (2)影响：suffer from have an impact/influence/effect on be harmful to 解决措施：make policies take a wide range of measures take urgent steps seize the initiative to do whatever is necessary to protect our environment 表达建议类：It is high time that.(should)It is advisable that.We are required that.表达倡议类：With these measures.in effect,it is believed that To make,we should spare no efforts to.We believe with our joint efforts,.will be improved.
