2021年全国乙卷 07 应用文--高考真题全方位解析+二次开发 (教师版).pdf
1/5 应用文-高考真题全方位解析+二次开发(教师版)2021 年全国乙卷年全国乙卷 你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以 Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1分析优势与不足;2提出学习建议。注意：1词数 100 左右；2题目和首句已为你写好。Be smart online learners Learning online has become an important way to study recently.审题（六何分析法）何事(what)Be smart online learners 为题的讨论 何人(who)我（参赛发言稿）为何(why)(1)描述：在线学习成为学习的重要方式；(2)评论：在线学习的优势与不足；(3)告知：在线学习建议 何时(when)课上课下的英语学习时间 时态：一般现在时、一般将来时 何地(where)校外 如何(how)显性：(1)在线学习的重要性；(2)在线学习的特点。隐性：(1)在线学习的背景分析；(2)在线学习优劣势分析。2/5 亮点遣词 句式升级 汉语 普通词汇 高级词汇 然而 but however 优势 advantages strengths 有利 be good for contribute to 不利 be bad for do harm to 提及 say mention 希望 hope expect 相比 compare compared with;on the contrary;by contract 因此 so therefore 关注 watch concern 由于 because as;due to 当然 of course undoubtedly 大量 a lot of tons of 获得 get acquire 很好地 well sensibly 使用复杂句式 1.The biggest weakness of online learning is low efficiency.(which 引导非限制性定语从句）Learning online has some weaknesses,the biggest of which is low efficiency caused by a lack of self-discipline.2.Those who lack self-control will be distracted and find it hard to acquire what they want because there are tons of information online.(as 引导原因状语从句）As there are tons of information online,those who lack self-control will be distracted and find it hard to acquire what they want.3.Low efficiency is the biggest weakness of online learning,which is caused by a lack of self-discipline.(过去分词作定语）Learning online has some weaknesses,the biggest of which is low efficiency caused by a lack of self-discipline.增添细节信息 1.Learning online has some weaknesses,which.补充说明：On the other hand,learning online has some weaknesses,the biggest of which is low efficiency caused by a lack of self-discipline.2.Online learning can become mainstreamed for its obvious advantages.举例说明：Undoubtedly,online learning can become mainstreamed for its obvious advantages such as easily accessible resources,low cost and great convenience.3.Those who lack self-control will be distracted.添加因果：As there are tons of information online,those who lack self-control will be distracted and find it hard to acquire what they want.3/5 巧衔顺渡(1)启 But how to become smart learners should become our high priority(高权重).(2)承 Undoubtedly(毫无疑问),online learning can become mainstreamed for its obvious advantages(明显的优势)such as easily accessible resources(可获得的资源),low cost and great convenience,which contribute to high study efficiency.(3)转 However(然而),long screen time can do much harm to our eyesight,not to mention many online distractions especially for those lacking self-control(自制力).(4)合 Therefore(因此),we are expected to be smart online learners by sensibly managing our time online and doing eye exercises regularly.4/5 构思（四格写作法）点题 活动现状描述 Learning online has become an important way to study recently.But how to become smart learners should become our high priority.Undoubtedly,online learning can become mainstreamed for its obvious advantages such as easily accessible resources,low cost and great convenience,which contribute to high study efficiency.Besides,the current pandemic necessitates online learning when necessary.Be smart online learners However,long screen time can do much harm to our eyesight,not to mention many online distractions especially for those lacking self-control.Therefore,we are expected to be smart online learners by sensibly managing our time online and doing eye exercises regularly.Most importantly,it takes self-discipline to resist all the distractions online towards a smart online learner.分析+评论 建议 5/5 相关句型积累 开头见山，点明主题的常用句式 The issue of.has become increasingly prominent(日益重要).Recently a survey has been carried out/conducted(执行)on to find out.The topic of.has been widely debated and discussed in.In order to know about.,a school did a survey.A survey about.has been done and here are the results.呈现数据，分析原因的常用句型(1)递进类：Furthermore Moreover Additionally (2)分析类：As is shown in the chart,the majority of.,which accounts for/makes up(占据).It can be seen from.that.；As we can see from the table.The table reflects(反应出)/reveals(显示).As is vividly revealed(鲜明地显示)in the picture,.Undoubtedly,the symbolic meaning conveyed in the picture/table is.Another significant trend(显著的趋势)from the given graph/chart/data is.(3)原因类：Compared with.,The data indicates(暗示)that.If we think about this issue,we can find that it is attributed to(归因于)the following causes.Moreover,there has been a continuous increase or decrease(持续的增长/下降)since.归纳总结或发表评论的常用句型(1)个人观点类：According to.As far as Im concerned In my point of view Generally speaking (2)总结类：Overall/In short/In a word/In summary/To sum up/In conclusion,the given graph/chart/data illustrates(阐明)significant trends in.Overall,it can be concluded that.(3)建议类：It is recommended/suggested that.In conclusion,the given data/chart/graph is an essential source(必要的来源)of information,and its true potential(可能性)can only be achieved by.It is crucial(至关重要的)that.
