高中英语2024届高考复习建议信写作讲解与练习.doc

高考英语建议信写作讲解与练习一、写作框架二、背满分模板Dear Tom,(写信的缘由和目的)Learning your grades have been slipping down because of your pride and laziness, I feel sorry.(说明对方遇到的困难或问题) As for how to get higher grades,I􀆳dliketogiveyousomeadvice.(给出具体的建议,也可给出建议的理由)Firstofall,you􀆳dbetter keep working hard rather than be proud.Never forget why you started, and your mission can be accomplished.(建议一)Besides,it􀆳sagoodideatoreview the content that you have missed studying recently.(建议二)What􀆳smore,Isuggestyou make a proper study plan which you can keep up.(建议三)(表示期待)I hope my suggestions can help you.                              Yours,                              Li Hua三、建议信语言表达分点练习首段：呈现问题,表明写作目的:1.我写信表达关于我对.的观点_2.你问我关于的建议，我会尽力给一些建议_3.回复你在信中告诉我你希望.我有一些建议给你_4.很抱歉听到你在.方面有困难。我非常愿意帮助你，我的建议如下。_5.你向我征求关于如何学好汉语的建议,我给你一些实用的建议。_6.我很高兴收到你的来信,你在信中向我征求如何专心上网课的建议。_7.关于如何提高书法,我想给你一些建议。_8.我愿意帮助你并按你的要求提一些实用的建议。_中段：介绍建议的内容并说明建议的好处:1.我认为对你最合适的是.,以至于._2.你最好/做.是好的,那样的话, ._3.为什么不?/  做.怎么样？/强烈的建议你应该,这样，_4.如果我是你的话，我将./做/通过做.将是一个更好的选择，_5.就我个人的意见，你做什么将是明智的/更有帮助的。_6.在我看来,除非必要,待在家里避免出门是明智的。 _7.为什么不参加志愿者俱乐部?如果你这样做的话,你不仅能帮助他人也会交到朋友。  _8.此外,我强烈建议你准时或早一点到。  _9.另一个建议是,戴上防护口罩,以防外出时被感染。_10.如果我是你,我会经常锻炼以保持健康。_11.你最好经常锻炼,这是帮你远离感染的最重要的方法。_尾段：希望建议有用或被接受:1.我希望我的建议能够对你有作用。_2.如果你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。_3.我相信你将会考虑我的建议的。_4.我希望你将发现这些建议是有用的/有帮助的/实际的_5.希望我的建议对你有所帮助/有益。_6.我认为,如果你采纳我的建议并相信自己的话会有益处的。_四、写作练笔（1）假定你是李华。你的外国朋友David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信,内容包括:1.提出建议;2.表达祝愿。注意:1.写作词数应为 80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯（2）假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚的朋友Jim所居住的地区最近出现了新冠病毒患者,他感到很害怕,向你征求建议。请你给他提出建议,内容包括:1.你的建议和理由;2.表达祝愿。注意:写作词数应为80左右。好词at this particular time 在这个特殊时期strengthen immune system 增强免疫力stay away from 远离（3）假如你是李华,为丰富校园英语广播节目内容,校英语广播电台向全体同学征求建议。请你向负责管理英语广播电台的老师John提出三点建议,使校园英语广播内容丰富起来。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。（4）假定你是李华,你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整,正在向听众征求意见。请你写封邮件,内容包括:1.你的建议;2.你的理由。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【参考答案】二、祝贺信语言表达分点练习首段：呈现问题,表明写作目的:1.I am writing to express my views concerning/convey my concern about2.You have asked for my advice aboutand I will try to make some suggestions.3.In response to your letter telling me you hope to, I have some ideas for you.4.Im sorry to hear youre having difficulty/trouble in; Im only too willing to help you and my tips are as follows.5.Youhaveaskedmeforadviceregarding how to learn Chinese well,andI􀆳mofferingsomepracticalsuggestions.6.I􀆳mdelightedtoreceiveyourletter,inwhichyouaskedmeforadviceon how to focus on online courses.7.Asforhowto improve calligraphy,I􀆳dliketoofferyousomeadvice.8.I􀆳mwillingtogiveyouahandandoffersomepracticalsuggestionsatyourrequest.中段：介绍建议的内容并说明建议的好处:1.I think the most suitablefor you is, so that2.Youd better/Its better toIn that way,3.Why not do?/What about doing?/Its strongly advised/suggested that you shouldThus,4.If I were you, I would/It would be a good choice toBy doing that,5.In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you/more helpful to do6.Personally/AsfarasI􀆳mconcerned,itwouldbeawisechoiceif you stay at home and avoid going outdoors unless necessary.7.Whynot join a volunteer club? If you do this, you can not only help others but make friends.8.Inaddition,Istronglysuggest/advise you arrive on time or a little earlier.9.Anothersuggestionisthatyoushould wear protective mask to prevent yourself from getting infected if you go outdoors.10.IfIwereyou/WereIyou,Iwould work out regularly in order to keep healthy.11.You􀆳dbetter exercise regularly, which is the most important way to help you stay away from any infections.尾段：希望建议有用或被接受:1.I hope my suggestions can make a difference to you.2.I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions.3.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.4.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.5.Hopemysuggestionswillbeofsomehelp/benefittoyou.6.Personally,itwouldbebeneficialifyoufollowmyadvice and have faith in yourself.四、写作练笔（1）假定你是李华。你的外国朋友David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信,内容包括:1.提出建议;2.表达祝愿。注意:1.写作词数应为 80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear David,Im delighted to learn that youve started learning Chinese! Knowing that you would like to have a better command of Chinese, Im writing toshare with you some practical suggestions.With proper guidance and enough practice, yourebound to learn Chinese well.To begin with, it is advisable that you regularly watch some Chinese learning programmes, which will expose you to an authentic learning atmosphere and will help you develop a better understanding of Chinese culture.Besides, youd better make some Chinese friends and communicate with them as much as possible.With frequent communication in real life, youll eventually improve your oral Chinese and feel more confident.Hopefully my tips above can be of some help.Wish you success.          Yours,          Li Hua（2）假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚的朋友Jim所居住的地区最近出现了新冠病毒患者,他感到很害怕,向你征求建议。请你给他提出建议,内容包括:1.你的建议和理由;2.表达祝愿。注意:写作词数应为80左右。好词at this particular time 在这个特殊时期strengthen immune system 增强免疫力stay away from 远离Dear Jim,(写信意图) As for your letter asking about how to avoid being infected at this particular time,I􀆳dliketoofferyousomepracticalsuggestions.(具体的建议及理由) Furthermore, handsfrequentlyandproperly.What􀆳s more,strengthen your immune system and exercise regularly,    (表达祝愿)Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelptoyou.                           Yours,                           Li Hua（3）假如你是李华,为丰富校园英语广播节目内容,校英语广播电台向全体同学征求建议。请你向负责管理英语广播电台的老师John提出三点建议,使校园英语广播内容丰富起来。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear John,Hearing that the English radio station of our school is asking for suggestions on how to enrich the programme, I sincerely want to express my ideas.To begin with, I strongly suggest that English news should be added, through which we students can learn the latest news at home and abroad.In addition, it is advisable to invite ordinary students to the broadcasting room to do a talent show, which will become a hit of our school.Lastly, many students dont have good learning methods, so if you can invite the outstanding students to share their learning experience, your programme will come to the attention of students.I hope my advice will be of help.Looking forward to your reply.    Yours sincerely,                Li Hua4）假定你是李华,你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整,正在向听众征求意见。请你写封邮件,内容包括:1.你的建议;2.你的理由。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear English radio station,Knowing that you will adjust the broadcast time, length and column, I am writing to give my suggestions.First of all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played before the morning reading class, which will help students understand national events and stimulate their listening ability.Secondly, English pop songs can be played for ten minutes after school at noon, which can relieve students study pressure all morning.Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.Hoping my suggestions can be helpful.    Yours,    Li Hua5