高中英语2024届高考复习读后续写主旨升华必背提分金句（共八大类）.doc

高考英语读后续写主旨升华必背提分金句 一、历险脱困历险脱困类也是高考读后续写曾涉及的主题，如2020年浙江高考的拍摄北极熊遇险；2018年的父子骑马迷路；2017年的骑车游玩遇狼脱险。【情节构思】第一步：描写环境的恶劣不安、绝望或恐惧的情绪第二步：转机描写-描写听见或看见了什么情绪描写（希望努力）第三步：脱险描写情绪描写（感恩高兴）+主旨升华【主旨升华】1.My brother and I harvested a meaningful exploration and really a brand new weekend.我和哥哥收获了一次有意义的探索，这真是一个全新的周末。2.Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life.我们的迷路给我的冒险假期增添了一份特别的滋味，我将终生难忘。3.(2020·浙江卷) Grabbing the camera, I dashed out and snapped valuable pictures of the escaping bear, making the trip unforgettable for the whole life.我抓起相机冲了出去，拍下了这只逃跑的熊的珍贵照片，使这次旅行终生难忘。4.Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before.The special trip to the Wild West was deeply impressed in my mind.我以前从未度过如此惊险而又危险的假期。这次西部大荒之旅给我留下了深刻的印象。5.Feeling fortunate, I made up my mind to cherish life and not to try such adventure again.我庆幸之余决定珍惜生命，不再冒这样的险。6.It was the journey that changed me, giving me an entirely new life.就是这次旅行改变了我，给了我全新的生活。7.Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us.What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any difficult situation as long as we stay calm.最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。8.It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we shouldn't lose heart.正是这种独特的经历使我理解了无论我们面临什么困难，我们都不应失去信心。二、人与动物人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。如2020年浙江高考6月卷的人熊大战和2020年浙江高考1月卷的人狗和谐。该话题一般从两个角度展开：一是人和动物和谐相处；二是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，向别人求助，最后成功脱险的故事。【情节构思】可爱型动物故事情节：可爱型动物，如狗、鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。凶猛型动物故事情节：凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。【主题升华】可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。【主旨升华】1.This magical kitten was changing our lives and this was just the beginning.这只神奇的小猫正改变我们的生活，而这仅仅是开始。2.From time to time I look at the photo as a reminder to show respect to all animals.After all, it is we who are the visitors to their world.我不时地看这张照片，以此提醒自己要尊重所有的动物。毕竟我们只是动物世界的访客。3.When dealing with them, it's not only we who take care of them, most of the time, it's they that heal us.在和他们相处的时候，不仅仅是我们要照顾他们，大多数时候，治愈我们的是他们。4.(2020·浙江卷）Despite the chill winter wind, their home where the two lovely dogs played happily was filled with the warmth of love and reunion.尽管冬风凛冽，他们家里的两只可爱的小狗快乐地玩耍，家里满是爱和团聚的温暖。5.Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky's hand as if to express thanks.What a warm scene!狼似乎感觉好些了，它慢慢抬起头，轻轻地吻了吻贝基的手，好像在致谢。多么温暖的一幕啊！6.(2020·浙江卷）After we returned home safe and sound, we realized that something should be done for bears.当我们平安回家后，我们意识到应该为熊做点什么。三、生活趣事生活趣事类话题的读后续写是读后续写的热考话题之一，2021年浙江高考1月卷叙述万圣节南瓜卡头的趣事，2017年浙江高考读后续写叙述和健忘可爱的妈妈去旅行过程中发生的趣事。【情节构思】第一步：矛盾塑造（尴尬紧张）第二步：快乐结局塑造（感激开心升华）【主旨升华】1.(2021·浙江卷）Dad's calm smile reflected his motto "All's well with us, never fear."爸爸平静的微笑反映了他的座右铭"一切都好，永远不要害怕。"2.It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of patience.这是我第一次真正意识到耐心的意义。3.We usually take life for granted, but the story shows us that there is always beauty in our heart.我们通常认为生活是理所当然的，但这个故事告诉我们，在我们的心中永远有美丽。2.(2021·浙江卷）The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes.I felt lucky to be a part of this mischievous yet loving family.这些话让我心中满是温暖，也让我热泪盈眶。我很幸运能成为这个淘气而又充满爱的家庭的一员。四、救人读后续写很多时候会涉及自然灾害与防范、安全常识与自我保护的话题，会经常涉及危难之际，挺身而出救助他人的故事。在这个话题中有时会写到危难之际，利用所学急救知识，成功救人脱离生命危险的故事；有时会写到楼内突发火灾，警察群众舍己救人的故事；有时会写到群众路人遇到有人不幸溺水，鼓足勇气跳入水中施救的故事。【情节构思】第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境负面情绪）第二步：救人之中（挣扎努力救人相关的惊险场面和过程如释重负）第三步：救人之后（感激升华）【主旨升华】1.Take some time to learn the knowledge of first aid.It saves lives, and it works.花点时间来学习急救知识。这会拯救生命，而且很有效。2.The story shows that a good knowledge of first aid can make a real difference.这个故事表明，良好的急救知识真的可以起作用。3.Everyone should learn something about first aid, for every second will count in an emergency.每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。4.Knowing basic first-aid techniques will help you respond quickly to emergencies.了解基础的急救知识有助于你对紧急情况作出迅速的反应。2.It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。五、友情友情类话题的读后续写是读后续写的热考话题之一，2022年浙江高考主题为同学之间互助完成课题，知难而上，彼此成长的美好友情。【情节构思】第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突）第二步：友情弥补（解释、认错、弥补）第三步：友情升华（懂得珍惜）【主旨升华】1.I nodded firmly, knowing kindness and friendship bloom in both of our hearts.我坚定地点了点头，知道善良和友谊之花在我们的心中盛开。2.Without friends, the world would become wilderness.没有朋友，世界将变得荒芜。3.If you take your friends for granted, you may not have friends for very long.如果你把朋友视为理所当然，那你也许不会有长久的友情。4.There's just one sure delight - friendship, like sunrise, warm and bright.只有一种确切的快乐-友谊，像日出，温暖而明亮。5.It was on that very day that Asad made his first friend in the new school, and he truly appreciated the value of sincerity and honesty.就在那一天，阿萨德在新学校结识了他的第一个朋友，他真正认识到真诚和诚实的价值。6.It dawned on me that one loyal friend is worth ten thousand relatives.我突然明白一个忠诚的朋友抵得上成千上万的亲戚。7.We both learned to be tolerant and brave enough to always forgive.我们都学会了宽容，勇敢地去原谅别人。8.If we really value our friends and friendship, always cherish their presence and show willingness to maintain and nurture the relationship.如果我们真的珍惜我们的朋友和友谊，就永远珍惜他们的存在，并愿意维持和培养这种关系。六、个人成长个人成长类话题的读后续写是读后续写的热考话题之一，2021年浙江高考6月卷借叙述个人薪水话题，强调个人成长和对劳动的认识。2022年新高考全国卷I讲述的是走路不便的David不畏困难参加比赛，坚持到最后，赢得同学们的尊敬。【情节构思】第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）第二步：成长中（蜕变塑造）第三步：成长后的升华（喜悦感激升华）【主旨升华】1.I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfather's words.我确信，将来每当我失去耐心时，我都会记起祖父的话。2.The world makes way for the dreamer.世界总会给有梦想的人开路。3.Each man is the architect of his own fate.每个人都是自己命运的建筑师。4.Don't always complain about people.Try to look on the bright side.不要总是抱怨别人。尽量往好的方面想。5.Actually, every individual possesses talent.Be brave when you find it and also make efforts.You can create miracles in the end.事实上，每个人都有天赋。发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。6.As long as you have a dream, just go for it, and never give it up easily.Your dream might not come true in one or two days, but it will someday.只要你有梦想，就去追求，不要轻易放弃。你的梦想可能不会在一两天内实现，但总有一天会实现。7.The golden sunlight slid in Ada's room, lighting her face as well as the future path for her to follow the dream of pursuing her dream.金色的阳光照进艾达的房间，照亮了她的脸，也照亮了她追寻梦想的未来之路。8.In the same way, we need struggle to grow strong and survive.We must go through some sufferings if we really wish to spread our wings and fly.同样的，我们需要奋斗来成长和生存。如果我们真的想展翅飞翔，就必须经历磨难。七、助人为乐助人为乐话题的读后续写是读后续写的热考话题之一，2020年新高考I卷主题为卖爆米花帮助穷人的故事，传递了人间温情。【情节构思】第一步：困难描写（消极情绪困难处境）第二步：呈现助人过程（想到办法动作链）第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激感动升华）【主旨升华】1.Sometimes, a small act of kindness can be powerful enough to make a huge difference.有时小小的善行会有很大影响。2.Just as the saying goes "Roses given, fragrance in hand."正如谚语所说："赠人玫瑰，手有余香。"3.With one small gesture, you may not only spread love, but also positively influence others' lives.小善举，不仅能传递爱，还能积极地影响他人的生活。4.Actually, a small gesture of care will possibly melt people's loneliness.事实上，一个表达关爱的小举动也会融化人们内心的孤单。5.(2020·新高考I卷）It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.伯纳德在他小小的心灵深处感受到，是爱使世界运转。6.This kind act has a lasting influence on me.I always give others a helping hand if possible.这种善意的行为对我产生了持久的影响。我总是尽可能地帮助别人。7.Though many years have passed, I will never forget the lesson he taught me: only when you help those in trouble is life meaningful.虽然许多年过去了，我永远不会忘记他给我的教训：只有当你帮助那些有困难的人，人生才是有意义的。8.No good deed ever goes wasted.Therefore, share your love from your heart today and fill your life with good deeds.好事不会白做。因此，今天就分享你心中的爱，用善行充实你的生活。八、亲情亲情类话题的读后续写是读后续写的热考话题之一，2021年新高考I卷主题为给妈妈做母亲节早餐，体现家庭成员之间的爱。【情节构思】第一步：冲突构造（误会、犯错等）只有冲突才能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合（代沟）、误会等。第二步：冲突化解（解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等）第三步：亲情升华（诚实、珍惜等）【主旨升华】1.It was Henry's kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family.I will treasure it with all my heart.正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。2.I keep the little plane as a reminder of my daughter's love and also the power of words.我留着这架小飞机，以提醒女儿对我的爱和语言的力量。3.Every time I faced challenges, a thought of giving up flashed in my mind, but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going.每次面对挑战，我都想放弃，但是家人的支持给了我继续前进的力量。4.The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warmed us.透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光，和我们家人之间的爱，温暖了我们。5.From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest.从那以后，每当他打算撒谎的时候，那三颗巧克力就会在他心里敲响警钟，提醒他要诚实。5