Module11+Unit3 外研版九年级英语全册.pptx

Module taskModule 11 Photos Unit 3 -Writing courseAs we know,Tony Smith has won the prize for the subject Home and Away.Besides this photo,he took many other photos,too.In this class,we will enjoy more about his photos.Lets go.02Pre-writingMusicCity and PeopleHome and AwayNatureriverseamountaingrassanimalsmodernancientcrowdedquietbusynoisysweetwonderfulrelaxingexcitedget togetherlive abroadtravel abroadmiss homeFour Subjects of photosGuessing Game.1.She is a 14-year-old Chinese player who/that won a gold medal in the 2020 Tokyo Olmpics.Can you guess?Quan Hongchan2.It is a war movie that/which makes a box-office（票房）（票房）record(over 3billion)during this National Holiday.Can you guess?Chang Jinhu3.It is a hot place in Huizhou that/which everyone would like to go swimming in summer.Can you guess?Xunliao Bay4.It is a small machine that/which everyone of all ages likes to use it every minute.Can you guess?Mobile PhoneSportWhat subject is it?NatureMovieMusicSubjects of a photocompetition NatureScenerySportWhat subjects are they?DisasterPetFoodWeddingInsect Photos can change a persons life.Do you know this photo?It was taken by Zhang Xiuqing who is a very famous photographer ftgrf in China.This photo was taken in a poor village in Guangxi provinceprvns in 2003.This photo shows a young woman with a smile who is carrying twins on her back.I like this photo very much,because I saw her unyielding njild optimism ptmzmin the face of difficulties.The Photo I like best02Pre-writing ReadWhilereadingInformation about the photoswherewhenwhowhatwhyPre-writingRead&Learn02It was taken by Zhang Xiuqing in 2003in a poor village in Guangxi provinceIt shows a young woman with a smile who is carrying twins on her back.Because I saw her unyielding optimism in the face of difficulties.This photo _ by Miss Chen.It was in the afternoon.It _ some students who _ and a teacher _on the playground.while others _ I like this photo very much,because it shows us a _ school as well as some _ students.I love my school so much_ is a good place to study and live.was taken shows are runningis taking photos of them are cheering.beautiful active that/which Betty is my friend_ is very unhappy.who/thatBetty is my friend.Betty is very unhappy.that/which This is my pet dog.It always helps give me the shoes.This is my pet dog _ always helpsgive me the shoes.I like this photo best.Because it shows a brave boy who/that protect his baby brother.I like this photo best.Because it shows the flowers which/that are so beautiful.Choose your favourite photo to ask and answer in pairs)1.-Which photo do you like best?-I like the photo which/that2.-What does it show?-It shows that3.-Why do you like it?-BecauseThe subject of the photo _ I like is about sport.It shows a girl _ _.Her name is_.She has flowers and the medal which prove her efforts in her hands,I like this photo because_ _ who wins an olympic that/whichgold medalQuanhongchanshe has amazed the whole world.will,she trains so hard that she has won many medals.will,she trains so hard that she has won many medals.Reporting timeReporting timeThe subject of the photo _ I like is about scenery.It shows a beach _.Its name is _ .Its one of the most popular places_ many people visit it every summer.I like it beacuse _ _that whichthat which which has a beautiful sunsetwhich has a beautiful sunsetXunliao Baythat/which I believe no matterwhat happens,everyday can end beautifully just like this photo.This photo shows me and my family with some animals in Australia.It was taken when we went to Australia on little holiday last year.My mum and dad are at the front,and thats me in the middle.You can see a grey animal in the tree next to us.It looks like a bear.It is called a koala.I like this photo because it reminds me of a pleasant holiday overseas with my parents.According to the photo,I think I have a happy family.1.What does the photo show?2.When was the photo taken?3.Where is koala in the photo?4.Why does the writer you like it?5.What does the writer think?This photo shows him and his family with some animals in Australia.It was taken when they went to Australia on holiday last year.Its in the tree next to them.Because it reminds the writer of a pleasant holiday overseas with his parents.Answer these questions:The writer thinks he has a happy family.This photo shows me and my family with some animals in Australia.It was taken when we went to Australia on little holiday last year.My mum and dad are at the front,and thats me in the middle.You can see a grey animal in the tree next to us.It looks like a bear.It is called a koala.I like this photo because it reminds me of a pleasant holiday overseas with my parents.According to the photo,I think I have a happy family.Discussion:How to describe a photo and talk something about it Para.1 描述照片细节描述照片细节Para.2 我我 喜欢这张照片的喜欢这张照片的原因原因Para.3 感想感想What does it show?Why do you like it?What do you think of it?写作步步高现在的学生大部分都喜欢拍照,生活照，风景照等层出不穷。请以“My Favourite Photo”为题，描述其中一张你最喜欢的照片。词数80左右。内容包括：1.照片拍摄的日期,地点，人物；2.简要描述照片内容。3.表明自己是否喜欢摄影，并说明理由。写作训练 Work seriously 思思 路路 点点 拨拨第一步：审题第一步：审题 人称人称:_ 时态时态:_第一人第一人 称称一般过去时一般过去时+一般现在时一般现在时 Beginning开头部分开头部分EndingBody正文正文(说明照片拍摄的日期，地点，说明照片拍摄的日期，地点，人物。参考句型：人物。参考句型：I paid a visit to)Beginning开头部分开头部分Body正文正文 Beginning开头部分开头部分EndingBody正文正文 Beginning开头部分开头部分My favourite photo(10 minutes)Ending Body正文正文Beginning开头部分开头部分(表明自己是否喜欢摄影，并说明理表明自己是否喜欢摄影，并说明理由。参考句型由。参考句型:1.I love taking photos because 2.According to the photo)(简要描述照片内容。参考句型：简要描述照片内容。参考句型：1.The subject of the photo that I like best is 2.It shows 3.There is)第二步：列提纲第二步：列提纲第三步：第三步：连句成篇连句成篇 温馨提示：温馨提示：运用运用and,or,so,because,but,then 等连等连接词将以上要点连成文章，并注意句型接词将以上要点连成文章，并注意句型多样化。多样化。查（查（check by yourself）Read your passage aloud,then check it byyourself.1.要点齐了吗？2.句子结构对了吗？3.句子连贯吗？4.单词都写对了吗？5.有没错误的语法？6.书写整洁吗？朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求 展示（展示（show your passage）Beginning开头部分开头部分EndingBody正文正文(说明照片拍摄的日期，地点，说明照片拍摄的日期，地点，人物。参考句型：人物。参考句型：I paid a visit to)Beginning开头部分开头部分Body正文正文 Beginning开头部分开头部分EndingBody正文正文 Beginning开头部分开头部分Post-writing(10 minutes)时态时态2分分 Ending （6分）分）Body正文（正文（4 分）分）Beginning开头部分开头部分（3分）分）(表明自己是否喜欢摄影，并说明理表明自己是否喜欢摄影，并说明理由。参考句型由。参考句型:1.I love taking photos because 2.According to the photo)(简要描述照片内容。参考句型：简要描述照片内容。参考句型：1.The subject of the photo that I like best is 2.It shows 3.There is)作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分1515分分 内容分：内容分：7分分1.照片拍摄的日期照片拍摄的日期,地点，人物；地点，人物；(3分分)2.简要描述照片内容。简要描述照片内容。(2分分)3.表明自己是否喜欢摄影，并说明理由表明自己是否喜欢摄影，并说明理由。(2分分)内容要点完整且词数符合写作要求的作文可以得内容要点完整且词数符合写作要求的作文可以得7分，词数在分，词数在70个以下的作个以下的作文在内容分上酌情扣分。文在内容分上酌情扣分。语言分：语言分：8分分第一档：第一档：8分分 要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。第二档：第二档：67分分 要求：内容涵盖绝大多数要点，表达清楚，意思连贯，要求：内容涵盖绝大多数要点，表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少量语言错误。符合逻辑，但有少量语言错误。第三档：第三档：45分分 要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚,连贯，基本连贯，基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。第四档：第四档：13分分 要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少数正确句子，但整要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少数正确句子，但整体表达不太连贯，且语言错误较多。体表达不太连贯，且语言错误较多。第五档：第五档：0分分 空白卷或你没有相关内容。空白卷或你没有相关内容。评分档次和要求：评分档次和要求：My Favourite Photo Last summer holiday,I paid a visit to the West Lake which is very famous in China.I took a lot of beautiful photos there.The subject of the photo that I like best is about nature.It shows the water is very clean and the sky is quite blue.There is a lovely girl who is sitting on the stone bench and smiling happily.I love taking photos because it can make me remember the wonderful trip again.And according to the photos，I know how great our country is!Beginning(开门见山点明主题：照片的由来开门见山点明主题：照片的由来)Body(阐述照片内容）阐述照片内容）Ending(说明喜欢照片的原因说明喜欢照片的原因)Summary写作技巧写作技巧:巧用巧用定语从句定语从句使文章更具特色使文章更具特色。写作步骤：写作步骤：1.1.审题（判断写作类型、人称、时态）审题（判断写作类型、人称、时态）2.2.构思（内容：单词、短语、句式、结构）构思（内容：单词、短语、句式、结构）3.3.检查（拼写、语法、连贯性）检查（拼写、语法、连贯性）Talk about the photo you like best in your group.Then Write a passage about it.