读后续写情感描写--吃惊惊讶课件-2024届高考英语作文复习专项.pptx

情感描写-吃惊惊讶情感细节描写之“吃惊惊讶”形容词(adj.)副词(adv.)_ _ 惊讶的惊讶的;_;_感到吃惊的感到吃惊的;_令人惊讶的令人惊讶的;_;_令人惊讶的令人惊讶的;_令人惊讶地令人惊讶地_感到惊讶的感到惊讶的;_;_ 震惊的震惊的,震撼的震撼的;_令人惊讶的令人惊讶的;_;_ 令人震惊的；令人震惊的；_惊人地，出乎意料地惊人地，出乎意料地;_惊愕得张大嘴的；目瞪口呆的惊愕得张大嘴的；目瞪口呆的名词(n.)_惊讶惊讶;_;_ 惊奇，惊讶惊奇，惊讶;_惊奇惊奇;_;_震惊震惊动词(v.)_ _ 使吃惊，使惊讶使吃惊，使惊讶 _ _使惊奇，使惊愕使惊奇，使惊愕amazedamazingastonishedastonishingamazinglysurprisedsurprisingsurprisinglyshockedshockingopen-mouthedamazementastonishmentsurpriseshocksurpriseamaze固定短语1.1.令某人惊讶的是令某人惊讶的是 _ _2.2.惊讶地惊讶地 _ _3.3.难以置信地难以置信地 _ _脸上掠过惊讶1.1._ 脸上露出惊讶的表情脸上露出惊讶的表情=_ 脸上露出惊讶的表情脸上露出惊讶的表情2.2._ 某人脸上露出惊讶的表情某人脸上露出惊讶的表情目瞪口呆1.1._惊讶地看着惊讶地看着2.2._目瞪口呆看着某人目瞪口呆看着某人3.3._某人惊讶得张口结舌某人惊讶得张口结舌4._4._惊讶得张大嘴惊讶得张大嘴to ones amazement/astonishment/surprise/shockin amazement/astonishment/surprise/shockin disbeliefa look of surprise spread over ones face a look of surprise flashed across ones face have a look of surprise on ones face stare/look at.in surprise/astonishment look at sb.with ones eyes wide open in shock ones jaw dropped/fell to the groundones mouth drop/hang wide open in surprise情感细节描写情感细节描写“惊讶惊讶”之声音、动作之声音、动作惊惊讶讶之之声声音音1.惊奇的口气惊奇的口气/声音声音_ 2.吃惊地喊出声来吃惊地喊出声来 _3.惊讶得叫起来惊讶得叫起来 _4.惊讶得说不出话来惊讶得说不出话来 _5.惊讶得倒抽一口气惊讶得倒抽一口气 _惊惊讶讶之之动动作作1.呆住，惊呆呆住，惊呆 _ _ 2.难以置信地摇头难以置信地摇头 _3.使某人大吃一惊使某人大吃一惊 _4.晴天霹雷晴天霹雷 _a tune of surprise=a surprised tone/voice give a cry of surpriselet out a yelp of surprise be shocked beyond words=too surprised/astonished to utter aword=be speechless with shockgasp in astonishment/give a gasp of surprisefreeze with shock/stand still with shock/stop dead with shock/be numb with shockshake one head in disbelieftake sb.aback/take ones breath away come as a bolt from the blue用面部表情用面部表情+情感词汇，描写惊讶情感词汇，描写惊讶1._crossed/flashed across her face.他脸上掠过吃惊的表情。他脸上掠过吃惊的表情。2.He had _ look on his face.他脸上有种惊讶略带迷惑的表情。他脸上有种惊讶略带迷惑的表情。3.One dark brow_.一道乌黑的眉毛惊奇地挑起。一道乌黑的眉毛惊奇地挑起。A look of surprise a surprised,slightly puzzledrose in surprise用用“目瞪口呆、张口结舌、呆若木鸡目瞪口呆、张口结舌、呆若木鸡”描写惊讶、吃惊描写惊讶、吃惊 4.Barbaras _.芭芭拉芭芭拉惊讶得眼睛睁得圆圆的惊讶得眼睛睁得圆圆的。5.The moment I opened the box,my eyes_.我一打开盒子，就我一打开盒子，就惊奇地睁大了眼睛惊奇地睁大了眼睛 6.We all _ him.我们惊奇地睁大眼睛看着他。我们惊奇地睁大眼睛看着他。7.He straightened up and looked at me,_.他直起身，他直起身，目瞪口呆目瞪口呆地看着我。地看着我。8.We _,and _.我们我们惊呆了惊呆了，张口结舌张口结舌。9.When I looked at the grade on my math paper,_ _.(夸张夸张)看到数学试卷成绩的那一刻，我看到数学试卷成绩的那一刻，我惊得下巴掉在了地上惊得下巴掉在了地上。eyes rounded in surprisewidened in surprisestared wide-eyed atopen-mounthedfroze with shockour mouths fell openmy jaw dropped to the ground(声音声音)里透露出的惊讶里透露出的惊讶(倒抽一口气，惊讶的说不出话倒抽一口气，惊讶的说不出话)10.“So two are cheaper than one?”Alice said _ _,taking out her purse.爱丽丝拿出钱包，非常惊奇地说，爱丽丝拿出钱包，非常惊奇地说，“这么说，这么说，两个比一个更便宜？两个比一个更便宜？”11.Everyone _ as the cars came around the last bend.汽车转过最后一道弯道时，大人惊得倒吸了一口气。汽车转过最后一道弯道时，大人惊得倒吸了一口气。12._.我的声音里满是惊讶。我的声音里满是惊讶。13.For a few moment we stood _.一时间我们站在那里惊讶得说不出话来。一时间我们站在那里惊讶得说不出话来。14.He stared at the burn-out car _.他望着烧毁的汽车，吃惊得说不出话来。他望着烧毁的汽车，吃惊得说不出话来。15.He was _ or even to think.我惊讶得说不出话来，甚至脑子都不灵了。我惊讶得说不出话来，甚至脑子都不灵了。in a sur prised voice/tonegasped in astonishment/surpriseA note of surprise colored my voicein shocked silencein dumb disbelieftoo surprised to utter a word解III.按要求用吃惊的表达或其他描写补全下面句子，并背诵。按要求用吃惊的表达或其他描写补全下面句子，并背诵。I pulled out my lunch container from my bag.I expected them to turn away._(我的脸上掠过一丝惊讶我的脸上掠过一丝惊讶)when Mary grabbed a small piece of tofu and ate it._(她惊讶地睁她惊讶地睁大眼睛大眼睛)._(随着她惊随着她惊叫一声叫一声“这真好吃这真好吃”,several forks and spoons reached for the tofu instantly._(我目瞪口呆地看着他们我目瞪口呆地看着他们)as they were going on about how lucky I was that my mom took the time to prepare a cooked meal for me.While I didnt get to eat any of my moms fried tofu,_(但我满怀骄傲和感激但我满怀骄傲和感激).A look of surprise flashed across my face Her eyes widened in satonishmentWith her surprised cry of“This is delicious”I gaped at them/stared at them with wide eyesI was full of pride and gratitude(2021高考真题高考真题)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE(母亲节的惊喜母亲节的惊喜)The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.解The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.解Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear!The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.解注意：注意：1.续写词数应为续写词数应为150左右。左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared._ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up._解Step 1:Reading for basic elements.CharacterswhenwhereConflitProblemMain ideaThemeJenna and Jeff(twins),mother,fatherAt 6.am in the morning on Mothers DayIn the kitchen,at homeThe twins(Jenna and Jeff)have trouble in preparing their love breakfast.The twins planned to make breakfast for their mother and gave her a big surprise.Affection,warmth,love,labor happiness解Step 2:Reading for plot.(development)They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.excited&confidentThey decided to boil the porriage first.They made the French toast.Everything was going smoothlythe porridge boiled over.the stove was a mess nowJeffs hand touched the hot burner and gave a cry of pain.Jenna caught the smell of burning,the bread had turne dblak.stayed calmAs the twins looked around them in disappoint-ment,their father appeared.panicked&depressedThe twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.解Step 3:Reading for development.Para 1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared._ Para 2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up._1.How did father feel on seeing the mess?2.What did father do to help the twins prepare breakfast?3.Who cooked the breakfast at last?1.What did they say?2.How did mother react and feel?3.sublimation（主题升华）主题升华）续写第一段续写第一段(侧重描写动作和人物做早餐的场景侧重描写动作和人物做早餐的场景)1.他把这锅粥放在文火上他把这锅粥放在文火上,让杰夫看着煮让杰夫看着煮15分钟。分钟。_ _(双连动作双连动作)He put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat,_ _(非谓语动词作状语非谓语动词作状语)2.看到他们失望的表情看到他们失望的表情,他建议他们把厨房打扫干净他建议他们把厨房打扫干净,而他帮他们给妈妈做早餐。而他帮他们给妈妈做早餐。He ,and advised them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother.,he advised them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother.(非谓语动词作状语非谓语动词作状语)3.3.很快厨房里弥漫着一股香味。很快厨房里弥漫着一股香味。_4.双胞胎准备好早餐托盘双胞胎准备好早餐托盘,加上一张他们做的漂亮的卡片加上一张他们做的漂亮的卡片,走出厨房。走出厨房。The twins prepared the breakfast tray,and stepped out of the kitchen.(三连动词构成动作链三连动词构成动作链)He put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat,and asked Jeff to watch asking Jeff to watch out for it going for fifteen minutes.saw their disappointed facesSeeing their disappointed facesSoon,sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen.added a beautiful card they had madeout for it going for fifteen minutes.续写第二段续写第二段(侧重母亲看到早餐时的表情及场面神态和情感细节描写侧重母亲看到早餐时的表情及场面神态和情感细节描写)5.当他们的母亲看到眼前完美的早餐时当他们的母亲看到眼前完美的早餐时,她的脸上闪过一丝惊喜。她的脸上闪过一丝惊喜。When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,_.(无灵主语句无灵主语句)6.空气中弥漫着诱人的早餐香味，她的目光落在早餐托盘上。空气中弥漫着诱人的早餐香味，她的目光落在早餐托盘上。_,and her eyes fell on the breakfast tray.7.她惊喜极了她惊喜极了,于是兴奋地摇醒正在假装睡觉的父亲。于是兴奋地摇醒正在假装睡觉的父亲。that she excitedly shook Father,who was pretending to be asleep.(so.that.结果状语从句结果状语从句)_ _(倒装句倒装句)8.他看到早餐时装出惊讶的样子。他看到早餐时装出惊讶的样子。_9.(满分结尾句满分结尾句)Jenna察觉到她父亲的目光，他们会意地眨了眨眼。察觉到她父亲的目光，他们会意地眨了眨眼。Jenna caught her fathers eye and they exchanged _.a spark of surprise flashed across her faceAn inviting smell of breakfast An inviting smell of breakfast filling the airfilling the airThe surprise was so sweetSo sweet was the surprise that she excitedly shook Father,who was pretending to be asleep.He faked astonishment when he saw the breakfast.a knowing wink As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.One look and he knew what they were up to.father appeared.One look and he knew what they were up to.Seeing their disappointed faces,he advised them to clean up the Seeing their disappointed faces,he advised them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for mother.The kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for mother.The twins immediately cheered up and got down to work.Within half twins immediately cheered up and got down to work.Within half an hour,the kitchen was cleaned.At the same time,Father had an hour,the kitchen was cleaned.At the same time,Father had made some French toast and got the chicken porridge done.Then made some French toast and got the chicken porridge done.Then he tiptoed back to bed.The twins prepared the breakfast tray,he tiptoed back to bed.The twins prepared the breakfast tray,adding a beautiful card they had made,and stepped out of the adding a beautiful card they had made,and stepped out of the kitchen.kitchen.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.They cried“Happy Mothermother up.They cried“Happy Mothers Day!Dear Mummy!”s Day!Dear Mummy!”Mother hugged the twinsMother hugged the twins,sleepy-eyed.An inviting smell of An inviting smell of breakfast filling the air,breakfast filling the air,her eyes her eyes widened at the sight of the the breakfast tray.breakfast tray.So sweet was the surprise So sweet was the surprise that she excitedly that she excitedly shook Father,who was pretending to be asleep.He shook Father,who was pretending to be asleep.He faked faked astonishment astonishment when he saw the breakfast.Mother bit into the when he saw the breakfast.Mother bit into the toast,saying it was the best she had ever tasted.Jeff toast,saying it was the best she had ever tasted.Jeff instantly begged to have a bite.Jenna caught her fatherinstantly begged to have a bite.Jenna caught her fathers eyes s eyes and they and they exchanged a knowing wink.wink.解 As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.father appeared.Fatherathers appearing was like a savior to the two s appearing was like a savior to the two children.Knowing what had happened,instead of scolding his children.Knowing what had happened,instead of scolding his children,the father encouraged them to cook breakfast again.children,the father encouraged them to cook breakfast again.Under their fatherUnder their fathers guidance,the kids started to try again s guidance,the kids started to try again and everything was going smoothly.While they were frying the and everything was going smoothly.While they were frying the bread,father helped them adjust the fire,which was the key to bread,father helped them adjust the fire,which was the key to success.In no time,a delicious breakfast started to take success.In no time,a delicious breakfast started to take shape.Wild with joy,they couldnshape.Wild with joy,they couldnt wait to let mom taste t wait to let mom taste their homemade breakfast.their homemade breakfast.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.When their mother saw the delicious and perfect mother up.When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,she was very surprised.A warm breakfast in front of her,she was very surprised.A warm current welled up in her heart.It was not only the gift,but current welled up in her heart.It was not only the gift,but the love of the children for her that moved her very much.The the love of the children for her that moved her very much.The children said loudly,“Happy Motherchildren said loudly,“Happy Mothers Day!”Mother hugged them s Day!”Mother hugged them tightly,saying Thank you so much,Jeff and Jenna.I believe tightly,saying Thank you so much,Jeff and Jenna.I believe it will be the best breakfast in my life.it will be the best breakfast in my life.Hearing this,the Hearing this,the twins smiled proudly.twins smiled proudly.当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。父亲的出现对当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。父亲的出现对两个孩子来说就像救世主一样。父亲知道发生了什么事，没有责备孩两个孩子来说就像救世主一样。父亲知道发生了什么事，没有责备孩子们，而是鼓励他们再做早餐。在父亲的指导下，孩子们又开始尝试，子们，而是鼓励他们再做早餐。在父亲的指导下，孩子们又开始尝试，一切都很顺利。在他们煎面包的时候，父亲帮他们调火，这是成功的一切都很顺利。在他们煎面包的时候，父亲帮他们调火，这是成功的关键。很快，一顿美味的早餐开始成形了。他们欣喜若狂，迫不及待关键。很快，一顿美味的早餐开始成形了。他们欣喜若狂，迫不及待地想让妈妈尝尝他们自制的早餐。地想让妈妈尝尝他们自制的早餐。双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了母亲。当他们的妈妈看到摆在她面前双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了母亲。当他们的妈妈看到摆在她面前的美味而完美的早餐时，她非常惊讶。一股暖流涌上她的心头。感动的美味而完美的早餐时，她非常惊讶。一股暖流涌上她的心头。感动她的不仅是礼物，还有孩子们对她的爱。孩子们大声说她的不仅是礼物，还有孩子们对她的爱。孩子们大声说:“:“母亲节快乐母亲节快乐!”!”妈妈紧紧地拥抱着他们，说妈妈紧紧地拥抱着他们，说:“:“太谢谢你们了，杰夫和珍娜。我相太谢谢你们了，杰夫和珍娜。我相信这将是我一生中最美味的早餐。信这将是我一生中最美味的早餐。”听到这些，双胞胎骄傲地笑了。听到这些，双胞胎骄傲地笑了。当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他一眼就知道当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他一眼就知道他们在干什么。看到他们失望的表情，他建议他们打扫厨房，自己帮他们在干什么。看到他们失望的表情，他建议他们打扫厨房，自己帮他们给妈妈做早餐。这对双胞胎立刻振作起来，开始干活了。不到半他们给妈妈做早餐。这对双胞胎立刻振作起来，开始干活了。不到半小时，厨房就打扫干净了。与此同时，父亲做了一些法式吐司，并做小时，厨房就打扫干净了。与此同时，父亲做了一些法式吐司，并做好了鸡肉粥。然后他蹑手蹑脚地回到床上。双胞胎准备好早餐托盘，好了鸡肉粥。然后他蹑手蹑脚地回到床上。双胞胎准备好早餐托盘，加上一张他们做的漂亮的卡片，然后走出厨房。加上一张他们做的漂亮的卡片，然后走出厨房。双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了母亲。他们喊道双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了母亲。他们喊道:“:“母亲节快乐母亲节快乐!”!”亲亲爱的妈妈爱的妈妈!”!”母亲抱着双胞胎，睡眼惺忪。空气中弥漫着诱人的早餐香母亲抱着双胞胎，睡眼惺忪。空气中弥漫着诱人的早餐香味，她的目光落在早餐托盘上。这个惊喜太甜蜜了，她兴奋地摇了摇味，她的目光落在早餐托盘上。这个惊喜太甜蜜了，她兴奋地摇了摇假装睡着的父亲。当他看到早餐时，他假装惊讶。母亲咬了一口烤面假装睡着的父亲。当他看到早餐时，他假装惊讶。母亲咬了一口烤面包，说这是她吃过的最好吃的。杰夫立刻请求吃一口。詹娜和父亲对包，说这是她吃过的最好吃的。杰夫立刻请求吃一口。詹娜和父亲对视了一下，他们会意地眨了眨眼。视了一下，他们会意地眨了眨眼。