高中英语作文-读后续写-心理描写.docx

读后续写重中之重：范文素材积累，读原著，欣赏摘抄。作文专题：读后续写（心理描写）应试指导：1.阅读是续写的基础和前提 What to read读人物(Who)读事件(What,Why,How) 读背景(When,Where) 读语言(Style) 2.构思是续写的核心和关键 What to consider想文章主题 想人物交集 想故事逻辑3.行文是续写的落实和产出 What to write 写人物 写故事 写思想步骤：1. 精读文章，把握续写线索搞清楚何时何地谁发生了何事，事件是如何发展的，为什么会这样发展等问题2. 仔细审题，明了续写要求2.1 关键词关键词分类：人物类关键词能引领故事的发展， 动作类关键词能陈述动作的行为，时间地点类关键词能描述故事场景，事件类关键词能牵引故事情节， 形容词类关键词能描述事件特征或人物情感。关键词对续写内容有一定的导向和限制作用，有助于构思故事的结尾.2.2 续写部分段落首句仔细研究从第一段提示语我们得知什么，应该考虑接下去写什么， 第一段结尾如何呼应第二段开头的提示语， 第二段续写时可考虑写什么，第二段结尾如何使故事发展得合情合理。3. 再读原文，构思续写内容因为续写是对原文的延伸， 所以我们续写时要遵循原文的思路和语言风格。为此， 考生有必要细读原文，关注原文的主要情节、矛盾的冲突点或高潮处，还要关注原文的语言 风格，如细节描写或人物对话等。4. 拟写草稿， 丰富语言表达结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性， 以及上下文的衔接等。根据故事需要，续写部分需要合理地增加一些次要的情节，比如人物的表情、动作、心理活动、细节描写等。读后续写微技能指导I人物内心世界Part 1 心理及情感描写I 表达情感的单词：calm concern frighten grateful shock upset confuse regret depressed content astonish curious frown anger yawn delight thrill uncertain exhausted delighted guilty dilemma bored loneliness .II 表达情感变化的词块:4let sb. down to ones regret be ashamed ofshed tears of joy what a pity(shame) be in a good mood laugh ones head offbe clouded with grief crying ones heart out with eyes full of horror to ones disappointment have ants in ones pantswith ones knees trembling with a lump in ones throatmake ones hair stand on end glare at sb. with burning eyes be wild with joy(be overjoyed) make sb. jump out of ones skinhave butterflies in ones stomachbe pleased beyond description(words) burst into tears (burst out crying)请将上述短语填入表格适当的位置：喜悦shed tears of joy, be in a good mood, laugh ones head off, be wild with joy(be overjoyed), be pleased beyond description(words).恐惧with eyes full of horror, with ones knees trembling, make ones hair stand on end, make sb. jump out of ones skin .痛苦/悲伤失望let sb. down, to ones regret, crying ones heart out , with a lump in ones throat, be clouded with grief, to ones disappointment, burst into tears(burst out crying).愤怒/焦虑紧张/后悔遗憾be ashamed of, what a pity(shame), have ants in ones pants, glare at sb. with burning eyes, have butterflies in ones stomach.light upscarefreezetongue-tiestream downashamed练 习 1： 选词填空：1) His face lit up with pleasure.2) The man next to him was scared to death with death with eyes full of horror.3) The boy froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.4) The ladys face turn pale and she stood there tongue-tied.5) Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.6) She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning/ the blood rushing to her face.Part 2 即时训练：练习 2 用适当的形式填空：1. Hearing the news, he got very angry. Hearing the news, he was filled with anger.2. When she knew the result of the test, she felt extremely excited/ joyful/ thrilled. When she knew the result of the test, her eyes twinkled with excitement/ joy.3. She broke up with her husband, and she felt extremely sad.She broke up with her husband, and she was overcome with sadness/ sorrow/grief.4. Seeing the snake, the boy felt very fearful/ frightened/ scared. Seeing the snake, the boy was full of fear/ fright/ scare.练习 3 翻译训练:1. Nervous and worried (既紧张又焦虑), I called my mum and told her what had happened.2. Much to our shock (让我们吃惊的是), the water level on the road kept rising.3. A sense of joy and happiness (一阵欣喜的感觉) suddenly went through him.5. The moment she saw how she did for her science test, tears started welling up (热泪盈眶) in Tinas eyes and falling down her cheeks.6. Hearing the news, so desperate (绝望的) was she that she drowned sadness in wine（借酒消愁）.7. You could imagine the wide smile spreading across Tims face. (你可以想象蒂姆笑得多开心。)8. Marie was nearly paralyzed with fear (吓瘫了) as she stumbled down the road towards them, waving her arms wildly.练习 4 仿写练习：1. 1. 当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt very scared.At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. (嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)At the sight of the fierce wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.（吓呆了，不敢动弹） At the sight of the fierce wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palm weresweating.(被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗)2. 当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。When the host announced that she won the prize, she won the prize, she felt thrilled.When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.(激动得两眼放光)When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. (激动得心砰砰跳)When the host announced that she won the prize, she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. (兴奋不能自己)3. 一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。Upon hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad.Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks. (心痛，眼泪直流)Upon hearing the bad news, she , numb with grief, had trouble speaking. (悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话)Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldnt help crying bitterly. ( 被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣)4. 她感到非常羞愧。She felt ashamed.She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning. (脸上滚烫)So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face. (血液涌上脸颊) So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears. (快哭了)Part III1. Micro- writing用今天所学的知识，编一个 60 词的小故事Last week, I bought a lottery(彩票).范例： Last week, I bought a lottery(彩票). This morning, I got a call from the seller. He told me that I got the prize with 5 million yuan! I was too happy to stand faint! However, five minutes later, I was called again and was told that they made a mistake! I didnt get the prize of 5 million yuan but 5 yuan. I fell to the ground, heart broken.2. Writing阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One summer when I was about ten years old, my brother and I received a wonderful gift -tennis rackets (球拍) and balls. We had never had the opportunity to play tennis, so this was exciting. However, there was one problem - the small town we lived in did not have a tennis court.One Saturday morning my brother said, “Hey, Ive got an idea. Lets take our tennis rackets and balls to the school and hit the balls against the school building.”“Great idea! Lets go,” I agreed, not realizing what a lesson we would learn before the experience was over.When we got to the school ground, no one was around, so we began hitting our balls against the side of the two- story brick building. “Ill hit it the first time,” my brother suggested, “then you hit it the next time. Well hit it back and forth to each other.” So we began taking turns hitting the ball, gettingmore confident with each stroke. Actually, we became pretty good at returning the ball and we were hitting the ball higher and faster each time. Suddenly, the unthinkable happened - the ball got out of control and went crashing through one of the up-stair windows, leaving lots of broken glass on the ground. We looked around and no one was in sight - except - there was the guard sitting on porch hallway down the block.Quietly, I asked, “Now what should we do?”“Well,” my brother responded, “no one saw us, except that old man down there. And he probably cant see this far.”“He probably doesnt know who are anyway. Lets go home.” I added.As we picked up the rest of our balls and headed for home, we discussed whether to tell Mom and Dad what had happened. Would we be punished for our mistake? Would every penny we had saved go to pay for the window? Or just keep it a secret? All these things were carefully weighed on the way.注意：1. 所续写短文的字数应该为 150 左右；2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:But that decision was made the moment we walked into the house. As we were about to tell Mom what had happened, she asked first. Gathering the courage, we told her the truth. “Oh, my goodness!” my mother said. After a short while, Dad came up and said, “Well on Monday, you two have to talk to the principal and admit your mistake. You will probably have to pay for the window, but that is what responsibility means.”Paragraph 2:On Monday, my brother and I went to school. With our hearts beating wildly, we went to the principal and poured the whole story. Smiling, he told us he had known it from the school guard, and he was glad we were there. He said the school budget allowed for window repair, so we neednt worry. He could see our relief as he continued, adding “I am proud of you.” We felt proud too and learned it was good to be honest and responsible. 常见表达方式：1. Tired but happy, I still enjoy my life.2. To our delight and relief, there was nothing seriously wrong with him.3. Without hesitation, we rushed into the rain and started working together.4. I picture/imagine him walking through the door, wearing a shining smile.5. At this dark and hopeless moment, a wonderful idea came to him. It filled his mind with a great, bright light.6. The peasant, surprised and disturbed, swallowed a tiny glass of brandy.（upset, bewildered, shocked, perplexed, doubtful ）7. She met his gaze at last, a red flush creeping across her face.8. He went home ashamed, chocking with anger and confusion.(embarrassed, regretful, apologetic)9. He was haunted by his memories of the war.10. Two great tears ran slowly from the corners of her eyes toward the corners of her mouth.11. He stood up, bewildered.12. They looked, thunderstruck, at each other.13. They went toward the Seine in despair, shivering with cold.14. She sat waiting on a chair in her ball dress, without strength to go to bed, overwhelmed, without any fire, without a thought.15. He stood in the centre, eyes shining and his heart thundering with excitement.16. The boy froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.