高中英语2024届高考复习应用文写作练习与讲解系列0221（共三篇）.doc

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、回复信：绿色校园，我们在行动（2023年抚顺市普通高中高三模拟考试）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你上次信中提到的“绿色校园，我们在行动”为主题的植树活动，请你给他写封回信，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.介绍植树活动；3.活动意义。要求：写信词数应为80左右。写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段开门见上表明写信目的介绍植树活动（要点1）；第二段介绍植树活动的具体内容（要点2）和活动意义（要点3）；第三段期待分享对方的活动。【参考范文】Dear Peter,I hope this letter finds you well.You asked about the tree planting activity organized by our school last Saturday, and here comes my introduction of it.The activity, themed with "Green Campus, We Are In Action", aims to enhance students' environmental awareness and encourage them to give care to the campus environment.In front of the student dormitories and beside the road were students who served their purposes, some digging holes, some planting trees, some filling soil, and some watering.Each class also claimed a tree to ensure the survival of the trees.Not only did this activity beautify the campus environment, it also cultivated the students' teamwork ability, killing two birds with one stone.What about any activities in your school? Looking forward to your sharing.(127 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的彼得：见信好。听说你想要了解一下我校上周六组织的植树活动，我写信和你介绍下相关情况。此次活动主题为“绿色校园，我们在行动”，旨在提升同学们的环保意识，鼓励他们爱护校园环境。学生宿舍前和道路旁，随处可见同学们各司其职，有的挖坑，有的放入树苗，有的填土，有的浇水。每个班级还认领了一棵树，确保种植的树苗存活率。此次活动不仅美化了校园环境，也培养了同学们的团队合作能力，一箭双雕。你的学校近来有开展什么有意义的活动吗？期待你的分享。李华【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为回复信；（2）因双方是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为介绍已经开展的植树活动，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。2.本文的亮点：（1）I hope this letter finds you well运用无灵主语结构；（2）here comes my introduction运用完全倒装结构；（3）themed with以.为主题；（4）aim to旨在，目的是；（5）In front of .and beside the road were .介宾短语置于句首产生完全倒装结构；（6）., some digging holes, some planting trees, some filling soil, and some watering运用独立主格结构；（7）Not only did .否定词置于句首产生部分倒装结构；（8）., killing two birds with one stone分词短语做状语，意为“一石二鸟，一箭双雕"。二、演讲稿：我最喜爱的运动员（汕尾市2023-2024学年度第一学期高中一年级教学质量监测）假定你是学生李华，你们学校将举行英语演讲比赛，主题为“我最喜爱的运动员”。请提前写好演讲稿。内容包括：1.最喜欢的运动员简介；2.喜欢的原因。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。My Favorite AthleteGood morning, everyone! It's my great honor to share with you my favourite athlete. Thank you for your listening.写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段表示荣幸（原文已给出）并点名演讲主题；第二段介绍最喜欢的运动员（要点1）及喜欢的原因（要点2）；第三段感谢聆听（原文已给出）。【参考范文】My Favorite AthleteGood morning, everyone! It's my great honor to share with you my favourite athlete.Eileen Gu is definitely the athlete I am fond of most.Eileen Gu, also known as "Frog Princess", is a Chinese female freestyle skier.She made history at the 2022 Winter Olympics in Beijing with her skiing talent, becoming the first ever Chinese athlete to win gold at the World Extreme Games.Even more amazing is that she, unlike many other athletes, is a talented girl in the skiing world as well as an excellent student with a high score, and was admitted to the Stanford University, ranking top three in the world.It is her inspiring story that encourages me to strive for my dreams, challenge myself and go beyond my limit.(113 words)Thank you for your listening.【中文翻译】我最喜爱的运动员大家早上好！和大家分享我最喜爱的运动员，这是我的荣幸。我最喜爱的运动员是谷爱凌。谷爱凌，昵称“青蛙公主”，中国女子自由式滑雪运动员。她以其天才的滑雪天赋在2022年北京冬奥会上创造历史，成为中国首位在世界极限运动会夺金的运动员。更令人惊叹的是，不同于很多运动员，她不仅是滑雪界的天才少女，也是妥妥的学霸一枚，以高分考取了世界排名前三的斯坦福大学。正是她的励志故事激励着我要努力追求梦想，挑战自我，超越自己。谢谢大家的聆听。【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为演讲稿；（2）因文体是演讲稿，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为介绍最喜爱的运动员及喜欢的原因，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时；2.本文的亮点：（1）definitely确实地；（2）be fond of喜欢；（3）also known as后置定语，意为“以.知名”；（4）., becoming the first ever .分词短语作状语，the first ever有史以来第一次；（5）Even more amazing is .形容词作表语置于句首产生完全倒装结构；（6）as well as=not only .but also .；（7）ranking top three in the world分词短语作后置定语；（8）It is .that .强调句型；（9）strive for努力争取；（10）go beyond my limit超越我的极限。三、邀请信：邀请留学生朋友观看京剧表演（2023学年第一学期浙江省县域教研联盟高三年级模拟考试）假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Alex对中国文化很感兴趣，恰逢光明大剧院将举办一场精彩的京剧演出，请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起前往观看，内容包括：1.演出时间、地点；2.京剧文化介绍；3.期待回复。注意：写作词数应为 80左右。写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段开门见山发出邀请并说明京剧演出的时间和地点（要点1）；第二段介绍京剧文化（要点2）；第三段期待回复（要点3）。【参考范文】Dear Alex,The Guangming Theatre will witness a splendid Peking Opera performance at 2 PM this Saturday.Since you are a Chinese culture enthusiast, I am writing to invite you to watch it with me.Known as the national opera, Peking Opera is the most influential opera in China and has been added to UNESCO's intangible Cultural Heritage list.Peking Opera takes historical stories as its main performance content, which has distinct national characteristics and unique artistic charm.This performance, I believe, will not only bring a feast for both your eyes and ears, but also give you a deeper insight into Chinese culture.Would you like to join me? Looking forward to your favorable reply.(114 words)Yours sincerely,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的亚历克斯：光明大剧院将于本周六下午2点举办一场精彩的京剧演出。我写信邀请你一起前往观看，既然你热衷于中国文化。京剧，有国剧之称，是中国影响力最大的戏曲剧种，已被列入联合国教科文组织非物质文化遗产名录。京剧常以历史故事为主要演出内容，具有鲜明的民族特色和独特的艺术魅力。我相信这次演出不仅会让你大饱眼福和耳福，还会让你更加深入地了解中国文化。你愿意和我一起去吗？期待你的来信。李华【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为邀请信；（2）因两人是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分介绍京剧文化，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。2.本文的亮点：（1）witness运用无灵主语结构；（2）enthusiast热衷者；（3）known as分词短语做状语；（4）bring a feast for both your eyes and ears给你带来一场视听盛宴；（5）give you a deeper insight into让某人深刻理解某事；（6）favorable reply期待对方肯定答复的表达。4