中考英语作文技巧总结,2021中考英语作文高分技巧秘籍.docx

一般来说，观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英文基础，还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成，在修辞中称为"启、承、转、合"。"启"就是开头，"承"就是承接，"转"是转折，"合"是综合或总结。 1. 用于表示"启"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately等。2. 用于表示"承"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有second, in addition, besides, then, moreover, whats more, whats worse, for example, certainly, obviously, in other words, still, at the same time, no doubt等。3. 用于表示"转"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, otherwise, while, despite, in spite of等。 4. 用于"合"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。过渡性词和短语有in a word, in short, above all, after all, finally, therefore, as a result, on the whole, in summary等。 总之，要做好书面表达，需要大家把握以下几个原则：细读提示，抓要点：选择句型，准表达；确定线索，巧组合；适当发挥，保完整；规范书写，争高分；细查全文，除笔误。 一、写作方法十句作文法第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外，也可调整两句的顺序，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。第三段为结尾，简化为一句，是对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。三段之间的衔接要灵活运用启、承、转、合的过渡手段。二、应急百宝箱遇到要点不会表达怎么办？词数不达标怎么办？不要急，一代，五加，一扩帮你轻松解决问题。一代，五加，一扩具体说来就是： 1. 以实代虚写实 2. 增加限定语定语、状语等 3. 增加例子for example, such as 4. 增加原因进一步说明 5. 加套语（词块） 6. 加格言、谚语等进一步说明 7. 扩充建议自主发挥，点到即可三、注意事项1. 观点鲜明，文章一定有一个明确的中心论点主题。 2. 层次分明，一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。 3. 最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。 4. 通常采用一般现在时。 5. 语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语。一、开头句型。As far as .is concerned It goes without saying that.  It can be said with certainty that. As the proverb says It has to be noticed that. Its generally recognized that. Its likely that Its hardly too much to say that. What calls for special attention is that.需要特别注意的是 Theres no denying the fact that.毫无疑问，无可否认Nothing is more important than the fact that. Whats far more important is that. 二、衔接句型。A case in point is .  As is often the case. As stated in the previous paragraph如前段所述 But the problem is not so simple. Therefore然而问题并非如此简单，所以 But its a pity that. For all that.In spite of the fact that.  Further, we hold opinion that.However, the difficulties in. Similarly, we should pay attention to.  not (that).but (that).不是，而是In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势As has been mentioned above.  综上所述In this respect, we may as well (say)从这个角度上我们可以说  However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is.然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即三、结尾句型。I will conclude by saying.  Therefore, we have the reason to believe that.  All things considered总而言之 It may be safely said that. Therefore, in my opinion, its more advisable. It can be concluded from the discussion that.从中我们可以得出这样的结论 From my point of view, it would be better if.在我看来也许更好 四、万能句型。Lets take.to illustrate this.试举例以兹证明Lets take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.  It remains to be further studied.  Theres question is how.观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循，可以先写对比的一方面，再写另外一方面；也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点比较着写。 对比观点看法类作文的写作摸板The topic of 主题 is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 . Whats more, 理由二 . Moreover, 理由三 . While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 . From my point of view, I think我的观点 . The reason is that 原因 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (later) is surely a wise choice.典例一 (2020 北京)“不积跬步，无以至千里。”积累，有助于我们达成目标，实现梦想。某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。提示词语：accumulate（积累）, read, keep, make progress提示问题：What did you do to accumulate knowledge? What have you learned from doing so? Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. _ 语句构建 第一步：明确要求，理清思路。本篇书面表达是一篇提纲作文，要求考生以自律为主题，用英语写一篇短文。首先，需要确定题目；然后，然后根据提纲列出自己的观点。本文时态应以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。写作时，可使用一些复合句来增加文章的亮点。第二步：拟定提纲，确定句型。 点题：Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. 在积累知识方面你自己是怎么做的及收获：As for me, I have taken lots of measures to accumulate knowledge. First of all,. In the second place, Last but not least,In a word, I have learned a lot during the process of accumulating knowledge. 点睛： So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream. In the future, I will continue to keep accumulating knowledge and make greater progress.第三步：依据提纲，连句成篇。第四步：写好后，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。【参考范文】Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. As for me, I have taken lots of measures to accumulate knowledge. First of all, I attentively listened to the teachers, parents, and the others who could provide me with much knowledge, considering that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself. In the second place, I used to observe something carefully and took notes at the same time so that I would not miss anything important. Last but not least, when having spare time, I chose to read various books and reviewed what I had gained regularly.In a word, I have learned a lot during the process of accumulating knowledge. Just as an old saying goes, Rome was not built in one day. That is to say, one cannot succeed without persistent accumulation. So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream. In the future, I will continue to keep accumulating knowledge and make greater progress.名师点评 这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，用上了所给提示词并回答了“你是如何积累知识的？”和“你从中学到了什么？”这两个问题。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。文章中还使用了一些亮点语法和词汇：亮点句型 So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream.；亮点词汇as for；take lots of measures to do sth.；first of all；provide sb. with sth.；used to do sth.；at the same time；last but not least；in a word；step by step；make progress。这些亮点语法和词汇提高了文章的档次，体现了作者的写作水平。典例二（2020 贵州铜仁）全球新冠疫情依然严峻，而我国的疫情防控成就令人瞩目，全国万众一心，团结抗疫的画面令我们永生难忘。你的美国笔友Michael想了解你对此的所见所闻和所思所想。请你根据下面的提示内容，回一封邮件。提示：（所见所闻）我们政府采取了很多措施，执行（carry out）隔离（quarantine）治疗（ treatment）的政策（policy）；兴建（build）许多特殊的（special）医院；许多优秀的（excellent）医护人员自愿（volunteer）去帮助灾区（disaster areas）.（所思所想）作学生，我们要保护好自己，比如（至少两点）；希望全世界人民。（ work together； save more lives）要求：1. 80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 句子通顺，语意连贯，符合逻辑；3. 必须包含所有提示内容，但不要逐字逐句翻译，可适当发挥；4. 务必书写正确规范，卷面整洁。Dear Michael,Im glad to receive your email. Now Id like to share my opinions with you. Since COVID19 broke out, our government has taken many measures. First_Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【参考范文】Dear Michael,Im glad to receive your e-mail. Now Id like to share my opinions with you. Since COVID-19 broke out, our government has taken many measures. First, we have carried out quarantine treatment policy. Second, many special hospitals have been built. Third, many excellent doctors and nurses volunteered to help the people who lived in the disaster areas. As students, we must protect ourselves. For example, keep our home clean and often open the window to keep the fresh air. Try to avoid going outside or going to places where there are many people. Wash your hands as often as possible, especially before meals and after returning from public places. Whats more, we should wear a mask when going out. II hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming解题思路第一步：判断主题和体裁就新冠疫情向美国笔友Michael写信介绍自己的所见所闻和所思所想的一封信。第二步：定时态一般现在时；定人称回复笔友的信应用第一人称。第三步：列提纲：(1) 所见所闻：面对疫情政府采取的得力措施；优秀的医护人员自愿驰援灾区； 所思所想：作学生，我们要保护好自己，比如（至少两点）；希望全世界人民。:第四步：组句成篇。名师点评本文首先直入主题Id like to share my opinions with you，然后分别介绍政府的三点防疫举措和个人的防护措施，最后表达希望I hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives。本文是“总分总”结构，以第一人称为主，用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时三种时态展开陈述；内容充实，结构完整，方法合理，表达流畅，条理清晰，是一篇优秀的习作。此外还有如下高分亮点：高分短语：would like to do share sth. with sb., as students, stay at home, go out, carry out, volunteer to do, live in, for example, try to do , avoid doing, as often as possible, whats more, all over the world.高分句型：1). Third, many excellent doctors and nurses volunteered to help the people who lived in the disaster areas.（定语从句）2). For example, keep our home clean and often open the window to keep the fresh air.（并列祈使句结构）3). I hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives.（宾语从句） A (2020山东泰安模拟) 随着科技的发展,线上学习的方式也变得越来越普遍。本学期，由于新冠疫情，同学们不得不在家中进行了近三个月的线上学习。某英文网站正在开展以“ Online Learning”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用 英文写一篇短文,谈谈你在线上学习过程中的一些做法以及你对线上学习的一些看法。 要求:1. 内容应包括提示信息,语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名；3. 词数80-100词，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Online LearningWith the development of science and technology, online learning has become more and more common._ _ B (2020广东顺德模拟)人生处处是考场，人生事事皆考试。由于新冠疫情，2020年高考将延期举行，近日各地教育部门出台文件规定中考时间也相继延迟一个月。假如你叫李华，即将参加今年中考,请向校园网站的外语专栏投稿发表你的看法。内容包括：1. 你是否赞成推迟中考，理由是什么？2. 非常时期，如何有效开展中考备考？3. 寄语中考学子，一起加油、共勉。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在 答题卡上。Dear friends,I am writing this article to share my opinion about whether the senior high school entrance examination should be put off or not. This is my idea and most grateful to you for your advice!_ Yours, Li Hua AOnline LearningWith the development of science and technology, online learning has become more and more common. Because of corona-virus, the students in our school had to study online at home for nearly three months this term. During online learning, I made a plan for all the subjects. In class I listened to the teachers carefully and took some notes. In addition, after class I often watched the video again to go over the part which I couldnt understand. In order to get good grades, I also did lots of exercises. I think online learning has two sides. On the one hand, it provides more convenience for us. On the other hand, we spend much time studying on the computers every day. It will be harmful to our health.BDear friends,I am writing this article to share my opinion about whether the senior high school entrance examination should be put off or not. I agree to put it off because the epidemic is still very serious now, it will be safer for us to have the examination a month later. Besides, we can prepare for it better because not all can have online classes successfully every day.During this special period, how should we prepare for the examination? Firstly, we should make a good plan and listen to the teacher carefully. Meanwhile, we should be relaxed and keep doing exercise so that we can be healthy to face the coming challenge.In our life the examination is everywhere, so lets cherish every day and make a great effort to achieve our dream.This is my idea and most grateful to you for your advice! Yours,Li Hua【环游世界】RomeSt. Peters Cathedral is located in the worlds smallest country Vatican, which is the residence of Pope and is located in Rome in Italy. It is the center of the Christian church of Rome, European Catholics and the Vatican（梵蒂冈）papal Pilgrimage（朝拜）to the Holy See, and it is the worlds largest dome church. Trevi Fountain is a symbol of strength. Romans had a beautiful legend, as long as the fountain from the shoulder with his back to throw a coin over to the pool, there is an opportunity to visit Rome.圣彼得大教堂位于世界上最小的国家梵蒂冈内。梵蒂冈是罗马天主教皇的住所，梵蒂冈全部位于意大利的罗马市市内。它比该城其他建筑的屋顶都要高。它是罗马基督教的中心教堂，欧洲天主教徒和梵蒂冈(梵蒂冈)教皇朝圣(朝拜)的地方，是世界上最大的圆顶教堂。许愿池是力量的象征。罗马人有一个美丽的传说，只要背对喷泉从肩以上抛一枚硬类别要求人物说明文人物说明文一般包括人物的出生年月、主要经历、事迹成就、影响和评价等。首先要全面了解这个人，然后根据需要选取写作素材，简明扼要而突出重点地去介绍，力求真实准确，恰如其分。人物介绍一般都是从外形到性格，或从一般经历到创造性的贡献，在最后常有结论性的评语。事物、事理说明类事物、事理说明文用来说明事物、阐明事理。它通过对具体事物的解说，或对抽象事理的阐释，使人们对事物的形态、构造、性质、种类、成因、功能、关系或对事物的概念、特点、来源、演变、异同等有所认识，从而获得相关知识。它的主要特点是具有说明性、知识性、科学性和实用性。常用的说明方法有：列数字、下定义、作比较、举例子、作诠释等。题型设置以介绍某一事物为主，旨在考查学生对事物表述的陈述句的掌握和对事物特点的把握能力，主要采用一般现在时态。方式、方法说明类在中考书面表达题目中，方式、方法类的说明文占据相当大的比例，这类说明文题目中通常有how to。这类说明文主要是介绍为达到什么目的应怎样做，说明方法常采用举例子、分类别、作比较、下定义、引资料等方式。这类文章旨在考查学生说明方式方法的能力，主要以一般现在时态为主。说明文是中考书面表达题目中常见的写作形式。在初中阶段，说明文主要要求学生将活动、人物、地点等要素进行清楚地描述，考察学生的观察能力和将图表或所给提示词转化为完整文字信息的能力。满分技巧要写出一篇合乎要求的说明文，应注意以下几点：一审: 要想做到文章切题、要点齐全，审题至关重要。下笔之前要将所给的材料看清楚，读懂材料所要表达的内容或情景。二定: 一定要点，根据所给材料要点，定出中心句。注意适当发挥，避免逐字逐句翻译。二定方法，常用的说明方法有举例法、过程分析法、分类法、因果分析法、比较法、细节法等。要根据说明的对象、目的来选择最佳说明方法。三理: 理顺各中心句之间的关系，排列好各中心句的顺序。说明文常用的结构安排顺序有以下三种：时间顺序、空间顺序和逻辑顺序。合理的次序会使文章条理清楚，脉络明晰。四查: 查写作要点，