专题02-2023全国乙卷- 三年（2021-2024）高考英语小作文真题全解全析 .docx

优点英语三年（2021-2024）年高考英语小作文真题全解全析专题02 2023年全国乙卷真题原文学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.简要描述 2.体验和感受注意：1.词数100左右 2.题目已为你写好。Learning a New Skill_真题解析本篇书面表达是一篇记叙文，要求写作“自己在暑假中学到的新技能”，这一写作要求贴近学生生活实际的交际任务情境，符合新课标英语学习中对实用性的强调，具有较强的开放性和灵活性。考生可结合自身经历进行写作，选择自己熟悉的“技能”学习经历进行构思。整体而言，这篇书面表达的话题选择很常规、很广泛，难度偏低，题目的关键词是“新技能”，写作重点是学习“新技能”的过程和感悟。具体看这一“新技能”可以是游泳、画画、跳舞等。叙述学习“新技能”过程时，可以说说学习过程中遇到哪些困难，或者介绍学习新技能的不同阶段的表现等等。总结感悟时可适当借助谚语、熟语等进行表述，增加文采。建议采用以下三段式结构进行写作：第一段， 引出话题，即简要陈述假期中到的新技能是什么；第二段， 叙述体验，即叙述学习技能的过程，突出学的循序渐进，让内容更真实；第三段，总结感受，强调获得感。为了能更好地体现段落内容所构成的承接、递进或是转折关系，不妨段首加上表示相应关系的关联词。写作小贴士：l 审时态：以一般过去时为主。l 审人称：以第一人称为主。l 审要点：内容要点必须齐全，逻辑要清晰。范文赏析1（摄影）优点英语Learning A New SkillLearning photography is a charming and fascinating journey. For a long time, I have been obsessed with photography. Last summer, when l developed deeper into this skill, l realized it wasn't just clicking on the shutter button.Guided by my professional photographer brother, l started by choosing the right angle. The angle of the photo can significantly change the story being told. Composition is another fundamental aspect that requires careful consideration of the elements in a picture. In addition, good lighting is essential in photography. Eventually, l successfully created a visually pleasing composition.Through this experience, l have learned to be patient with myself when learning something new. Just as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”学习一项新技能学习摄影是一段充满魅力而迷人的旅程。长期以来，我一直痴迷于摄影。去年夏天，当我深入研究这项技能，我才意识到摄影不仅仅是按下快门。在我的哥哥-专业摄影师的指导下，我开始学着选择合适的拍摄角度。照片的角度可以显著地改变所讲述的故事。构图是另一个需要仔细考虑画面元素的基本方面。此外，良好的光线在摄影中必不可少。最终，我成功地创作了一个令人赏心悦目的作品。通过这次经历，我懂得了在学习新东西时要对自己保持耐心。正如俗话所说:“熟能生巧。”亮点词汇fascinating adj. 迷人的be obsessed with 沉迷于；痴迷于significantly adv. 明显地fundamental adj.基本的essential adj.必要的Eventually adv. 最终范文赏析2（游泳）Learning A New SkillSwimming is a very vital skill in life. l had a strong resolution to master it and attended a swimming class last vacation.When l reached the pool, the first thing l learned was to breathe. The coach said,“Take a breath, and breathe through your nose." l succeeded after doing it several times. Then the coach taught me to slap water. l gripped on to the railing, slapped the water with my legs and feet, and soon felt tired. With the encouragement of the coach, l did more practice and finally learned to swim.Swimming makes me confident and positive. As far as l am concerned, not only can swimming be a joyful activity, but also it can save people's lives when it comes to a dangerous situation.学习一项新技能游泳是生活中一项非常重要的技能。我下定决心要学会它，于是上一个假期我报名参加了游泳课程。当我到达游泳池，要学的第一件事就是呼吸。教练说:“深呼吸，然后用鼻子呼吸。”我做了几次之后就成功了。接下来，教练教我拍水。我抓着栏杆，用腿和脚拍打着水，很快就感觉累了。在教练的鼓励下，我进行了更多的练习，最终学会了游泳。游泳让我变得自信、乐观。就我个人而言，游泳不仅可以成为一项快乐的活动，而且在危急时还可以拯救人们的生命。亮点词块vital adj. 至关重要的resolution n. 决心slap v.拍打grip v. 紧握positive adj. 积极的；乐观的As far as l am concerned 就我而言范文赏析3（包饺子）Learning A New SkillLast winter, l learned how to make dumplings and tasted the most delicious meal with my family. It was a reunion time and my family decided to make dumplings. Under my mothers guidance, I mixed some minced pork, cabbage and other ingredients. Then I placed a small piece of filling in the学习一项新技能去年冬天，我学会了如何包饺子，和家人品尝了最美味的一顿佳肴。那是一个团圆的日子，我们一家人决定包饺子。在妈妈的指导下，我把猪肉末、白菜和其他配料拌在一起。然后，我把一团馅放在middle of a round piece of dough and folded it up. Unfortunately, the filling spread. Seeing my frustration, my mother encouraged me to try again. This time, l dipped some water, squeezed the filling together and then succeeded. To my surprise, l ate a dumpling with a coin wrapped in it at dinner, which my mother had secretly put in.The special dumpling not only involves a happy family time, but also ignites my passion for cooking. 面皮中间、再把它折叠起来。糟糕的是，馅散开了。妈妈看到了我的沮丧，鼓励我再试一次。这一次，我蘸了一些水，把馅挤在一起，成功包好了饺子。令我惊讶的是，我在晚餐时吃到了一个包着硬币的饺子，那是我妈妈悄悄包进去的。这个特别的饺子，不仅包含了幸福的家庭时光，也点燃了我对烹饪的热情。亮点词汇reunion n. 团圆guidance n. 指导minced adj. 切碎的fold up 折叠frustration n. 沮丧ignite v. 点燃范文赏析4（骑自行车）Learning A New SkillThe bicycle is such a cool vehicle that I've dreamed of riding it. Recently, l have learned to ride a bicycle.At first, when l stepped on the pedal,I totally lost control of the bicycle. l fell to the ground, but l didn't lose heart. After a while, l knew how to keep balance, but I still didn't know how to ride straight. l was afraid to move and always used my feet to keep it standing. At last, l conquered my fear and mastered the skill. | felt happy about what l had done.Learning a new skill is a tough but exciting and rewarding experience. Overall, l understand the value of persistence and the importance of taking on challenges.学习一项新技能自行车是一种很酷的交通工具，我一直梦想着能骑它。最近，我学会了骑自行车。起初当我踩下踏板时，我完全无法控制自行车。我摔倒在地，但我没有灰心。过了一会，我懂得了如何保持平衡，但我仍然不知道如何笔直地骑行。我不敢移动，总是用脚撑着，让自行车直立着。最后，我克服了内心的恐惧，掌握了这项技能。我为自己所取得的成果感到高兴。学习一项新技能是一次艰难但激动人心的、获益匪浅的经历。总的来说，我明白了坚持的价值和应对挑战的重要性。亮点词汇step on 踩上lose control of 失去控制conquer v. 征服master v. 掌握take on 承担 范文赏析5（书法）Learning A New SkillLast summer,l embarked on the journey of learning calligraphy, which is an elegant art form that I have long admired.To learn calligraphy, what a person needs first is to have a peaceful mind. It was because of impatience that l had difficulty controlling the brush, as its strokes were either too thin or too thick . Next, you require perseverance to achieve progress With patience and continuous practice, my skills gradually improved. During the process,l experienced setbacks and the joy of progress. Now l can appreciate the beauty and charm of calligraphy.Calligraphy is a combination of spirit and strength. It is also an important way of expressing oneself and finding peace in the busy life.学习一项新技能去年夏天，我开始了学习书法的旅程，对于书法这种优雅的艺术形式，我向往已久。学习书法，对于个人而言首先需要保持平和的心态。正是由于急躁，我难以控制好毛笔，写出的笔画要么太细，要么太粗。其次，你想要取得进步，就需要坚持不懈。通过耐心且不断的练习，我的技术逐渐提高了。在这个过程中，我经历了挫折，也经历了进步的喜悦。现在，我可以感受到书法艺术中蕴含的美感。书法艺术是精神与力量的结合。它也是在忙碌的生活中表达自我和寻求平静的一种方式。亮点词汇embark on 开始elegant 优雅的stroke 一笔;一划perseverance 毅力setback 挫折express oneself表达自我范文赏析6（包粽子）Learning A New SkillLast summer, l learned how to make Zongzi(or rice dumplings) during the Dragon Boat Festival.Under the guidance of my mother, I boiled, cooled bamboo 学习一项新技能去年夏天，我在端午节期间学会了如何包粽子。在妈妈的指导下，我把竹叶煮熟、leaves and prepared some fillings such as red jujube, bean paste and egg yolk. With three or four bamboo leaves on my palm, l folded the leaves into an inverted pyramid shape container. Then I used a spoon to fill it with the mixture of glutinous rice and fillings. After l finished wrapping it, l tied it up with a water-soaked length of straw.Words fail to express my happiness when l taste the Zongzi because it's highly delicious. Most importantly, l learned to respect the cultural heritage of our country in modern society.冷却，准备好红枣、豆沙和蛋黄等馅料。我把三四片竹叶放在手心，把竹叶折成倒金字塔形的容器。然后，我用勺子把糯米和馅料填进去。包好后，我用浸泡过的稻草秆将粽子绑好。当我吃到粽子的时候，那种极度美味所带来的快乐是无以言表的。最重要的是，我学会了在现代社会中尊重我们国家的文化遗产。亮点词汇Under the guidance of 在.的指导下filling 馅bean paste 豆沙glutinous rice 糯米straw 稻草秆cultural heritage 文化遗产范文赏析7（烘焙）Learning A New SkillRecently, l embarked on a journey to learn how to bake a cake, which remains a key component in celebrations.To begin with, | preheated the oven and prepared the ingredients such as flour, baking powder, eggs, sugar and butter in advance. l mixed the wet ingredients in a bowl and blended them well with a hand mixer. Then l added the wet mixture to the dry ingredients in a pan and beat them until the batter got smoothed. Finally, l put the dough into the oven for about 30 minutes and cooled it . Luckily, l made my first cake every successfully.The process of baking a cake is a tiring yet fulfilling 学习一项新技能最近，我开始了学习烘焙蛋糕之旅，它是庆祝活动中的关键组成部分。首先，我预热了烤箱，提前备好原料，例如面粉、发酵粉、鸡蛋、糖和黄油。我在碗里把湿性材料混合好，然后用手动搅拌器拌匀。接着，我把湿性材料加到盘子里的干性材料中，不断揉面，直到面团变得光滑。最后，我把揉好的面团放进烤箱里烤30分钟左右，然后冷却。幸运的是，我的第一个蛋糕做得很成功。做蛋糕是一个累人而又充实的过程。从我的烘焙经历中，我意识到只有满怀信one. From my baking experience, I learned that only with confidence and persistence can we achieve success.心、坚持不懈，才能获得成功。亮点词块component 组成部分ingredient n. 原料in advance 提前blend v. 混合fulfilling adj. 充实的 persistence n. 坚持优点英语