广东省佛山市顺德区高三下学期第二次质量检测卷读后续写课件.pptx
1.读后续写保证平均分的基本操作时间精力分配：30分钟？做题速度？结构：段落/完整程度/尤其最后一行；书写：是否打辅助线/圆润扁平/涂改统一；2.文本分析情节发展2.文本分析情节发展Background information:My daughter said“Hi”to Mr.Man with negative feedback and I tried to find out why.Rising action:I knew the reason through my neighbour and I came up with some advice.Climax:With every suggestion I made,my daughter simply said“No,not that.”_Inside,in perfect calligraphy,it simply read,“Thank you,from Mr.Man.”_Mydaughtersresponse/prepareanddeliverthegifttoMr.Manmydaughterandmyownresponse/ourinfluenceonMr.Man/thetheme2.文本分析情感变化My daughter:outgoing,joyful,cheerful,enthusiasticcuriousexpectantoverjoyed,delightedI:uncomfortablecuriousdisheartened,impatient,surprised,delighted,satisfied,relieved.My neighbour:bubblyseriousMr.Man:quiet and motionlesshappy,delighted2.文本分析性格特点My daughter:outgoing,cheerful,extrovert,helpful,creative,compassionate,kind,caring.I:patient,kind,caring.Mr.Man:sincere,loyal.3.高级句式with+宾语+宾补非谓语独立主格主从+is/was+表从倒装句无灵主语强调句定从虚拟语气同位语从句 There is no denying that.4.下水作文（段一）我感到自己有点耐心耗尽，就问女儿的看法。她告诉我，给Mr.Man送一幅特别的画可以减轻他的难过和思念。我点点头，同意了她富有创意的想法。我还没来得及提醒她准备绘画文具，她就冲去开始准备了。大约半个小时后，她手里拿着一幅画，里面画着一对夫妇在山巅看旭日东升。画的底下写着，“每天都是新的一天”。我微微一笑，示意她可以送过去给Mr.Man。第二天等我们放学归家后，我们发现门把手上挂着一封金色的信。女儿走过去，拿起信封并打开了它。4.下水作文我感到自己有点耐心耗尽，就问女儿的看法。她告诉我，给Mr.Man送一幅特别的画可以减轻他的难过和思念。Seized by a ripple of confusion and impatience,I asked my little girls opinion.She eagerly responded that sending Mr.Man a special drawing would help relieve his grief and missing.我点点头，同意了她富有创意的想法。I nodded my head and agreed with her creative suggestion.Nodding my head,I agreed with her creative suggestion.4.下水作文我还没来得及提醒她准备绘画文具，她就冲去开始准备了。Hardly had I reminded her to prepare utensils when she rushed to start her creation.大约半个小时后，她手里拿着一幅画，里面画着一对夫妇在山巅看旭日东升。画的底下写着，“每天都是新的一天”。It was after half an hour that she came to me with a painting in which a couple is sharing a full sunrise on a summit,at the bottom of which read,“Everyday is a new day”.4.下水作文我微微一笑，示意她可以送过去给Mr.Man。I smiled and signaled her to present/deliver it to Mr.Man.With a smile on my face,I signaled her to present/deliver it to Mr.Man.第二天等我们放学归家后，我们发现门把手上挂着一封金色的信。女儿走过去拿起信封并打开了它。The next day when we returned home after school,we spotted a golden envelop quietly hanging on our door handle.My daughter reached for it,picked it up and tore it open.4.下水作文想方设法试图安慰Mr.Man的女儿一看到这么精美的感谢信就兴奋地跳了起来，脸上绽放着微笑。我的内心也感到一阵满足和温暖。这种温暖源自我外向体贴的女儿，她逐渐懂得了从心理上共情他人。毫无疑问，有了她的支持，Mr.Man逐渐恢复了平日的笑容和积极态度。诚然，要走出失去至亲之痛，绝非易事。但Mr.Man还是竭力感激女儿的善意小举动。我猜，或许女儿的那幅画，真的点燃了他生活的希望之苗呢。4.下水作文想方设法试图安慰Mr.Man的女儿一看到这么精美的感谢信就兴奋地跳了起来，脸上绽放着微笑。My little one,who had spared no efforts in comforting Mr.Man,jumped excitedly at the sight of such an attractive thank-you note,a smile blooming on her red cheeks.我的内心也感到一阵满足和温暖。这种温暖源自我外向体贴的女儿，她逐渐懂得了从心理上共情他人。A sense of satisfaction and warmth flooded my heart.The satisfaction originated from my extrovert and considerate daughter,who gradually learned to sympathize others psychologically.4.下水作文（段二）毫无疑问，有了她的支持，Mr.Man逐渐恢复了平日的笑容和积极态度。There was no denying that with her support Mr.Man gradually regained his normal smile and positivity.诚然，要走出失去至亲之痛，绝非易事。但Mr.Man还是竭力感激女儿的善意小举动。我猜，或许女儿的那幅画，真的点燃了他生活的希望之苗呢。By no means was it easy to step out of the sadness of losing loved ones,yet Mr.Man strove to appreciate my girls little kind act.I bet my daughters drawing did sparkle a ray of hope in his life.4.下水作文With every suggestion I made,my daughter simply said No,not that.Seized by a ripple of confusion and impatience,I asked my little girls opinion.She eagerly responded that sending Mr.Man a special drawing would help relieve his grief and missing.Nodding my head,I agreed with her creative suggestion.Hardly had I reminded her to prepare utensils when she rushed to start her creation.It was after half an hour that she came to me with a painting in which a couple is sharing a full sunrise on a summit,at the bottom of which read,“Everyday is a new day”.I smiled and signaled her to present/deliver it to Mr.Man.The next day when we returned home after school,we spotted a golden envelop quietly hanging on our door handle.My daughter picked it up and tore it open.4.下水作文Inside,in perfect calligraphy,it simply read,Thank you,from Mr.Man.My little one,who had spared no efforts in comforting Mr.Man,jumped at the sight of such an attractive thank-you note,a smile blooming on her red cheeks.A sense of satisfaction and warmth flooded my heart.The satisfaction originated from my extrovert and considerate daughter,who gradually learned to sympathize others psychologically.There was no denying that with her support Mr.Man gradually regained his normal smile and positivity.By no means was it easy to step out of the sadness of losing loved ones,yet Mr.Man strove to appreciate my girls little kind act.I bet my daughters drawing did sparkle a ray of hope in his life.
