2024五年高考题分类训练专题5 写作.docx

专题五 写作题型1 应用文写作题组一Writing 1. 2023新课标卷, 15分假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明问题；2.提出建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式作答。Dear Ryan, I'm Li Hua from Class 3. Yours sincerely,Li Hua【写作思路】【参考范文】Dear Ryan,I'm Li Hua from Class 3. We're overwhelmed with excitement at the knowledge that an oral English class will be arranged for us（同位语从句）. But learning that we'll be randomly paired to do the oral practice, I feel an urge to express my different voice, hoping that this wouldn't offend you （现在分词短语作伴随状语）.To begin with, it couldn't be better if students with mixed levels of English could be grouped together deliberately rather than at random, so that we can help each other during our practice. Additionally, to ensure that our oral practice goes smoothly, I suggest that you put three to four students together, with one as the group leader（with复合结构）, in which case we can communicate with each other at a great depth（"介词+which+名词"引导定语从句）.Should it be possible（虚拟语气和倒装句）, I truly hope you can take my suggestions into consideration.Yours sincerely,Li HuaWriting 2. 2023浙江1月，15分上周末你参加了校学生会组织的"认识我们身边的植物"活动。请为校英文报写篇报道， 内容包括：1.活动的过程；2.收获与感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Getting to Know the Plants Around Us 【写作思路】【参考范文1】Getting to Know the Plants Around UsLast weekend, I took part in an event held by the Students' Union, which is aimed at educating us more about plants around us（非限制性定语从句）.Initially, I attended a lecture on the flower project. The lecturer asked us to write a review on it. Since tulips are my favorite plant（原因状语从句）,I did well and got praised. Additionally, I visited the desert exhibition. Learning much from it（现在分词短语作状语）, I came to understand why plants in the desert have sharp leaves（宾语从句）. Ultimately, I was introduced to a brochure about trees we usually see in life, which benefited me a lot.Undoubtedly, I gained numerous knowledge on plants and have become interested in them through this meaningful activity.【参考范文2】Getting to Know the Plants Around UsLast Sunday witnessed my participating in a meaningful activity named "Getting to Know the Plants Around Us" organized by the Students' Union（过去分词短语作后置定语）.To make us learn more about diverse plants（动词不定式短语作目的状语）, the organizers led us to a nearby botanic garden, which presented us with colorful and distinctive plants, such as daisies, daffodils and so on. Moreover, a rice expert even instructed us to observe the growth process of the hybrid rice. After his vivid introduction, the idea that it is definitely Yuan Longping's intense efforts that feed so many people on Earth（同位语从句中嵌入强调句）struck me deeply.The activity lasted for the whole day and I felt greatly lucky to have such a precious chance.Writing 3. 2022浙江，15分假定你是李华，你校图书馆新设了小组学习室。请你给留学生同学Michael写邮件邀请他同去体验，内容包括：1.位置和开放时间；2.室内设施和功能。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【写作思路】【参考范文】Dear Michael,Since the new group study room has been open recently, I would like to invite you to go there with me to experience it.The room is on the third floor in our library, which is available to all of the students in our school（非限制性定语从句）. It is said that the room is open from 8:00 o'clock to 20:00 o'clock on weekends. Meanwhile, it is equipped with a lot of advanced equipment, such as whiteboards, computers and self-service machines. I do believe that it will definitely help the students with their study and improve the efficiency（do表强调；that引导宾语从句）.Would you like to come with me to have a try in this room?Yours,Li Hua题组二Writing 1. 2022新高考卷，15分假定你是校广播站英语节目"Talk and Talk"的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Dear Caroline, Yours sincerely,Li Hua【写作思路】【参考范文】Dear Caroline,Being in charge of the English program "Talk and Talk" run by our school broadcast station, I feel much privileged to invite you to our program for a live talk show.The program, meant to promote the interest of the students in English learning and broaden their horizons（过去分词短语作后置定语）, is widely popular among us students. The interview will be held at 9 this coming Sunday morning, lasting about an hour（现在分词短语作状语）. Your talk show can cover anything related to English, or what school life is like in your country.I sincerely hope you can accept my invitation.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【一句多译】As I'm in charge of the English program "Talk and Talk", I earnestly invite you to be our guest for an interview at our broadcast station.In the interview/talk show, you can talk about anything concerning our English study, or introduce the school life in your country to us.Writing 2. 2022浙江1月，15分假定你是李华，在"中国爱尔兰文化节"活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.回忆活动经历；2.分享个人收获；3.希望保持联系。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【写作思路】本题要求考生给在活动中结识的爱尔兰朋友Chris写一封邮件。考生可根据所给要点提示合理安排写作。首段开门见山，简要表达问候，说明写邮件的目的；第二段为文章的主体部分，重点描述活动经历并分享参与这次活动的收获；末段简要表达希望和Chris保持联系。考生可适当使用亮点词汇和高级句式，以提高得分档次。【参考范文】Dear Chris,How is everything going? With heartfelt delight, I'm writing to share my sincere feeling about the China-Ireland Cultural Festival with you.Although a week has passed since you returned home（时间状语从句）, I can still recall the enjoyable time we spent together. From Chinese calligraphy to Irish paintings, we've experienced each other's culture as well as the history. Besides, we also formed a friendship which will certainly be cherished for good（which引导的定语从句）. I sincerely wish our friendship will last forever.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li HuaWriting 3. 2021新高考卷，15分你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期望和祝福。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式作答。Youth and Me 【写作思路】【参考范文】Youth and MeBelieve it or not, the first time I happened to read the newspaper Youth a couple of months ago, I felt an urge to finish reading it in one breath. From then on, I became one of its keen readers, never missing a single issue of it（现在分词作伴随状语）. While many columns leave a deep impression on me, the column that stands out most is none other than the one where you regularly put articles about foreign cultures and the most efficient ways of learning English（定语从句）. I feel privileged to have been introduced to your newspaper, which definitely contributes a lot to my progress in English study. It's my sincere hope that the newspaper will be more popular among us students（主语从句）.【一句多译】表达方式一：a couple of months ago, when I was introduced to your newspaper Youth for the first time, I fell in love with it表达方式二：it's quite a few months since I began to read your newspaper Youth, which has become my favorite now表达方式一：It's my privilege to have the chance to read Youth, a newspaper that helps me make great progress in my English.表达方式二：I'm honored to read your newspaper, which benefits my English study a lot.题组三Writing 1. 2021浙江，15分昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿，内容包括:1.展览时间、地点；2.观展感受；3.推荐观展。注意:1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【写作思路】仔细审题，明确写作步骤:1.审体裁&话题：应用文宣传稿，宣传学生国画作品展2.审时态：以一般过去时和一般现在时为主3.写作要点：（1）展览时间、地点：本月每天下午3:00到5:00，校图书馆二层大厅；（2）观展感受：感受到了中国画的魅力，了解了中国文化，丰富了业余生活；（3）推荐大家观看展览。4.分段落，构建写作框架：第一段：引出话题；第二段：介绍展览时间、地点和观展感受；第三段：号召大家来观展。【参考范文】Yesterday afternoon, my friends and I visited the traditional Chinese painting exhibition in the hall on the second floor of the school library.The exhibition opens from 3:00 to 5:00 every afternoon this month. All the paintings on display are works by students of our school. Some paintings are about scenes of nature, and some are about daily life. I am deeply impressed by the vivid scenes the paintings show and the students' skills. How talented they are! The exhibition is well worth seeing. Come and enjoy the feast of traditional Chinese painting!Writing 2. 2021浙江1月，15分假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2.介绍活动安排；3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。 【参考范文】Dear friends,We feel so delighted by your visit and I'm extending our warmest welcome to you on behalf of our school.We have made a detailed arrangement for you. First, you'll be shown around our school and have lunch at a local restaurant, where you can have a taste of authentic Chinese food （非限制性定语从句）. Then a talk concerning Chinese and New Zealand culture is scheduled to deepen mutual understanding. Aiming to promote our friendship further（现在分词短语作状语）, we also plan to organize a friendly basketball match.We sincerely hope you have a rewarding and memorable time!Writing 3. 2020新高考卷，15分假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.参加人员；2.跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；3.活动反响。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式作答。A Cross-Country Running Race 【写作思路】本题要求写一篇活动报道，介绍学校举办的5公里越野赛跑，为半开放性写作。写作时需要注意：1. 审要点。题目给了三个要点（参加人员；跑步路线；活动反响），根据要点内容合理安排每个要点的详略，参加人员简述即可，跑步路线和活动反响可以详细写作。2. 审时态和人称。题目要求报道已经发生过的活动，所以时态主要用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。3. 提分词汇和句式。写作时注意各要点之间使用合适的关联词衔接，并运用一些高级词汇和高级句式来为自己的作文提升得分档次。【参考范文】A Cross-Country Running RaceIn order to enrich our campus life, our school organized a 5km cross-country running race last Sunday. Ninety students from twenty classes participated in the race, among whom thirty were girls（非限制性定语从句）. Participants set out at 9 am from our school gate, through the Renmin Park, and finally arrived at the foot of the Nanshan Mountain. After the race, we felt that not only did the event improve our physical and psychological quality（倒装）, but it also helped us build a positive attitude towards life. We do hope that our