心灵鸡汤读后续写33MySon导学案-九24届高三英语一轮复习.docx
33 My Son 一、请根据两个提示句进行故事续写,150词左右。I didn't like Tommy. Love him? It seemed unlikely that I ever could. I knew our differences had to be dealt with soon or I would have to stop trying to be his stepmother.Tommy's natural mother had died a year before. When Tommy9s father and I married, it seemed like an ideal arrangement. His sons would have a mother and my daughters would have a father, so here were six we could combine to establish a real family.I knew I treated the boy kindly, yet I was drowning in feelings of guilt about him. It was easier with Tommy's younger brother, though I never understood why. When Tommy wasn't crying, or gulping (狂饮) milk, he was pulling on his T-shirt and stretching it. Sometimes he locked me out of my bedroom when his father was home so he could visit with him and I couldn't. Tommy would block the television screen so my daughters couldn't watch. In my eyes Tommy was rapidly developing into a thoroughly difficulty child. He was only seven.We'd been married several months and tension was building up. Each night I carefully tucked (盖好被子) him into bed and kissed him good night while he was glaring at me. I was at a loss what to do and turned to my husband, Tommy's father, who had told me that Nancy had been seriously ill and when he called the boys into the house to tell them she had died, all Tommy asked was whether he could go back out to play. My husband, drowned in his own sorrow, simply interpreted this response as childhood innocence and avoided acknowledging and talking Tommy out of his grief (悲伤).The boys did not attend the funeral and the subject was closed. The popular attitude was that life was for the living, but part of Tommy had also died.I was pretty certain the difficulty with Tommy was related to his loss. With no training in psychology, and no personal experience with death, I knew that by addressing the issue I might be opening a Pandora's box that I was ill equipped to handle. I had to take the chance as well as the courage.One night, as I tucked Tommy into bed, I sat close to him, asking “Tommy, do you miss your mother?”After the night talk, Tommy came downstairs for breakfast the next morning.二、原版品读My SonI didn't like Tommy. Love him? It seemed unlikely that I ever could. I knew our differences had to be resolvedsoon or I would have to stop trying to be his stepmother. Tommy's natural mother had died a year before and he and his brother had gone through a series of housekeepers and sitters, and now us.When Tommy's father and I married it seemed like an ideal arrangement.His sons would have a mother and my daughters would have a father, so here were six we could combineto establisha real family.Tommy was chubby and constantlystood in front of the open refrigerator door gulping gallons of milk. It wasn't necessary to correct him about anything, because with just a look in his direction tears flooded his eyes. I knew I treated the boy kindly, yet I was drowning in feelings of guiltabout him. It was easier with Tommy's younger brother, though I never understand why.When Tommy wasn't crying, or gulping milk, he was pulling on his T-shirt and stretchingit. Sometimes he locked me out of my bedroom when his father was home so he could visit with him and I couldn't. Tommy would block the television screen so my daughters couldn't watch. In my eyes, Tommy was rapidly developing into a thoroughly obnoxious child. He was only seven.We'd been married several months and tensionwas building at a phenomenal rate. Each night I dreaded the ritual of tucking Tommy into bed and kissing his fat little cheek as he glaredat me.Tommy's father had told me about their loss. Nancy had been ill a long time and when he called the boys into the house to tell them she had died, Tommy's only response was to ask if he could go back out to play. My husband, caught up in his own sorrow, interpretedthis as childhood innocenceand avoided acknowledgingand resolving Tommy's grief. The boys did not attend the funeraland the subject was closed. The prevailing attitude was that life was for the living, but part of Tommy had also died.I was pretty certain the difficulty with Tommy was related to his loss. With no training in psychology,and no personal experience with death, I knew that by addressing the issue I might be opening a Pandora s box that I was ill equipped to handle.I had to take the chance.That night, as I tucked Tommy into bed, I sat down close to him. "Do you miss your mother?” I asked. There was no trembling chin, no shining tears or hateful glances in response to this question. This time a volcanic eruptionof grief burstfrom the little boy. As he cried and sobbed.I held him in my arms and for the first time we really touched. My hugsand kisses were given by choice, not duty, and his receptionwas honest and real. After the tear storm subsided, we talked.“I understand her eyes were blue like yours J I said, still holding him. He nodded. I refused to allow him to withhold the rest so I probed deeper.“What do you miss most about your mother? I asked.“I miss her pizza. She made really good pizza,“ he said. The sobs had quieted and now he was ready to talk.When I kissed the chubby cheek and hugged the little boy that night there was love in the kisses we shared. At last we had begun to communicate, and I was able to sincerely give of myself to him and he to me.The next morning, when Tommy came into the kitchen for breakfast he casuallycalled me "Mom." T hadn't asked him to. He just did.I knew I would never take his natural mother s place. I didn't want to. She would always be special in Tommy's heart but Tommy also needed a real live mother every day. He chose me and I love him and his brother completely. (713 words)L Words for understanding (加粗的单词为熟记单词,其它认识即可):单词音标词性释义单词音标词性释义resolveri ' zD lvvt ,解决innocence'i nosonsn .天真stepmother'stepmA do(r)n.继母acknowledgeok' no li 63vt.承认housekeeper'hau ski: ps(r)n.管家griefgri: fjn.悲伤sitter'si ton.临时保姆funeral'fju: n(o)r(0)1n.葬礼idealai ' di: dladj.理想的,完美 的prevailingprl ' vei li dadj.普遍的,盛行的arrangemento' rei nd3 m9nt n.安排psychologysal ' kD hd3i 1n.心理学combinekom' bal nvt .结合handle'haendlVt.处理,应付establishI ' staebli f vt建立tremble'tremblvi .颤抖chubby1t; Abiadj .胖乎乎的chintj I nn,下巴constantly'kD nstontliadv.不断地,一直hateful'hei tfladj.可恶的gulp9A Ipvi .大口吞咽glancegla: nsn.一瞥gallon'gaehnn.加仑(液量单 位)volcanicvd 1' kaeni k adj.火山的guiltgi Itn.内疚,自责eruptionI ' rApf(9) nn.爆发stretchstretj Vt.撑大,拽宽burstb3 : stvi .爆发thoroughly10A rgliadv.非常,及其sobsobvi .抽噎obnoxiousob' no kf 9sadj .极讨厌的hughA gn.拥抱tension'tenf nn.紧张关系receptionri ' sepf nn.反应,接纳phenomenalg no mi nladj .惊人的subsidesob' sal dvi .平息dreaddredVt.害怕,担心withholdwi d' hou Id vt.不吐露,隐瞒ritual'ri tf usln.仪式,老规矩probeprau bvi追问;探究tucktA kvt.给盖好被子sincerelysi n' si oliadv.真诚地glaregle rvi .怒视casuallyksejugli adv.随意地sorrow'so rou n.悲伤,悲痛短语释义短语释义go through经历address the issue解决问题a series of一系列a Pandora's box潘多拉的盒子drown in沉浸在某种情绪里be ill equipped to do没有准备好做某事pull on拉扯in response to作为对的回答at a . rate以的速度hold sb in one's arms抱着某人caught up in陷入,卷入by choice出于自己的选择interpret.as.把.诠释理解为give of oneself奉献,贡献时间等be related to和有关take one's place代替某人IIL Read to appreciate: Fill in the blanks according to Chinese translations1 .没有必要纠正他什么,只要看他一眼,他立马就泪眼婆娑。It wasn't necessary to him about anything, because with just a look in his direction tears his eyes. (Action+Emotion)2 .我知道我对那个男孩很好,但还是沉浸在对他的内疚自责中。I knew I treated the boy kindly, yet I was in feelings of about him. (Thinking+Emotion)3 .汤米不是在哭,就是在喝牛奶,或是拉扯他的血,扯到都变形了。When Tommy wasn't crying, or milk, he was on his T-shirt and it. (Action) 4.每天晚上,我都害怕这样的例行公事:给汤米盖好被子并亲吻他那胖乎乎的小脸蛋的同时、 汤米愤怒地 瞪着我。Each night I the ritual of Tommy into bed and kissing his fat little cheek as he at me. (Emotion-i-Action)5 .没有接受过心理学的培训,没有任何关于应对死亡的个人经验,我知道解决这个问题就好像打开了一个 我还没准备好去应对的潘多拉盒子。With no training in psychology, and no personal experience with death, I knew that by the issue I might be opening a box that I was ill to . (Metaphor)6 .这一次,他没有用颤抖的下巴、哭泣的泪水或可恶的一瞥来回应这个问题。There was no chin, no shining tears or hateful in response to this question. (Emotion)7 .这一次,小男孩悲痛欲绝,悲伤像火山一样爆发了。This time a volcanic eruption of from the little boy. (Emotion)8 .他抽泣着,我把他抱在怀里,我们第一次真情相拥。As he cried and , I him in my arms and for the first time we really touched. (Emotion-i-Action)IV Language in use(1) Application of the key words: Fill in the blanks according to the Chinese sentences1 .救援机构里弥漫着沮丧情绪。Relief agencies are in frustration.2 .卡尔从床上坐起来,打了个哈欠,伸伸懒腰。Carl sat up in bed, yawned, and.3 .我给孩子们盖好被子说晚安。I the children in and said goodnight.4 .她站在那里,双手叉腰瞪着他。She stood there with her hands on her hips at him.5 .“也许你是对的。“她承认道。“Maybe you are right/9 she.6 .她打开信,激动得双手颤抖。Her hands were with excitement as she opened the letter.7 .达米安紧张地瞥了一眼手表。Damiennervously at his watch.8 .他恼羞成怒,都要气炸 了。He felt he would with anger and shame.9 .他禁不住失控地抽噎起来。He couldn't help uncontrollably.10 .她走到女儿身边,紧紧地拥抱她。She went to her daughter and her tightly.(2) Imitation of the scenes:1. "What do you miss most about your mother? I asked.“I miss her pizza. She made really good pizza,“ he said. The sobs had quieted and now he was ready to talk.When I kissed the chubby cheek and hugged the little boy that night there was love in the kisses we shared. At last we had begun to communicate, and I was able to sincerely give of myself to him and he to me.模仿:描写孩子(Sam)跟母亲因学校表现吵架后,母亲主动来到房间找孩子沟通。2. That night, as I tucked Tommy into bed, I sat down close to him. "Do you miss your mother?” I asked. There was no trembling chin, no shining tears or hateful glances in response to this question. This time a volcanic eruption of grief burst from the little boy. As he cried and sobbed, I held him in my arms and for the first time we really touched.模仿:描写当Emma Stone第一次获得最佳女演员奖时,先是惊呆了,然后喜极而泣的场景。Key:一、读后续写One nighty as I tucked Tommy into bed, I sat close to hhn, asking aTommy9 do you miss your mother?" He didn't respond, just burying his face in the pillow and sobbing. Lost for words, I held him in my arms, stroking his hair. This was the first time that we had been so close. After his sobbing quieted, I kissed his chubby check with love. "Do you know my mommy? He looked up at me in my arms and was ready to talk. That night, we opened up to each other and had a sincere talk before Tommy went into his dream. (87 words)After the night talk. Tommy came downstairs for breakfast the next morning. Seeing me busy with their breakfast, Tommy greeted me "Mom” just like my daughters. Tears welling up, 1 couldn't believe my ears. I knew I would never take the place of his natural mother, and I didn't want to. However, Tommy indeed needed a mother to grow up just like other kids. He chose to accept me and I love him and his brother as my own kids. There were still many problems to be solved, yet we started to be a real family. (90 words) 二、原作品读 III.1) correct 2. flooded 3. drowning 4. guilt 5. gulping 6. pulling 7. stretching 8. dreaded 9. tucking 10. glared 11. addressing 12. Pandora's 13. equipped 14. handle 15. trembling 16. glances 17. grief 18. burst 19. sobbed 20. held IV.(1)1. drowning 2. stretched 3. tucked 4. glaring 5. acknowledged 6. trembling 7. glanced 8. burst 9. sobbing 10. hugged2) )1 . “Are you still wide awake?” I tiptoed into his room, closed the door behind gently, and sat close to him stroking his hair. Sam didn't respond, covering his face with his quilt. "It must have been a hard week fbr you in school J I whispered, "I know how stressed you are." Sam sobbed and sprang out of his bed to hug me. This was the first time in the past week that we had been so closed and Sam was ready to talk.2 . That night, as the host announced the final result, all the people present were nervous. "The Best Actress Award goes to Emma Stone!” At first, there was no trembling body, no shining tears or cheerful shouts from Emma in response to this announcement. Then, a volcanic eruption of excitement burst from her. As she cried and sobbed, the director held her in his arms, saying, "Congratulations! For the first time, you really won Oscar!”