2024届高考英语作文专项复习读后续写助人类--热爱起重机的哈罗德讲义素材.docx

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整 的短文。A lot of people look forward to retirement after decades of working. But on the other hand, there are others who are still so passionate about their field-its difficult for them to hang up their hats.很多人在工作了几十年后都盼望着退休。但另一方面，还有一些人仍然对自 己的领域充满热情，他们很难放下帽子。Depending on the career, it could be possible to continue working if one really wants to. That is unless health issues arise and leave the person no choice but to walk away.根据职业的不同，如果一个人真的想继续工作，也可以继续工作。除非出现 健康问题，让他别无选择，只能离开。Sadly, this is what happened to a man named Harold. Unfortunately, he found himself no longer able to work as a crane （起重机）operator because of his health. He felt lonely because his children didn't visit him much.不幸的是，这就是发生在一个叫哈罗德的人身上的事情。不幸的是，他发现 自己再也不能当起重机了（起重机）操作员，因为他的健康。他感到孤独，因为 他的孩子们不常来看他。Thanks to the kindness of a stranger, Harold was able to relive his days of working on the job site.多亏了一个陌生人的好意，哈罗德得以重新体验他在工地上工作的日子。It all started when crane operator Shawn Beveridge of Ohio kept noticing a man in a wheelchair sitting outside of a nursing home. Day after day, the man would sit there watching the job site and the cranes move about for hours.这一切始于俄亥俄州的起重机操作员肖恩贝弗里奇不断注意到一名坐在轮 椅上的男子坐在疗养院外。日复一日，这名男子会坐在那里看着工地和起重机移 动数小时。Shawn was confused why the elderly gentleman showed up every day, and finally became curious enough to introduce himself.肖恩弄不明白这位老先生为什么每天都会出现，终于好奇地做了自我介绍。“Since day one when I arrived on this job site, Fve noticed him sitting there every morning from 7 am, he takes lunch when we do and doesn't leave until I shut the crane down and head out. " Shawn wrote in his blog. nI originally had thought to myself, "He's just a curious old man and wanting to enjoy his days outside VS being cooped up in his room. 1 Well after a couple of days, I myself got curious, so I walked over and introduced myself to him.”Shawn在他的博客中写道：“从我来到这个工作站的第一天起，我就注意到 他每天早上7点就坐在那里，我们一起吃午饭的时候他就吃午饭，直到我关上起 重机出门才离开。“我最初想，”他只是一个好奇的老人，想在VS被关在 房间里的外面享受他的日子。“几天后，我自己也感到好奇，所以我走过去向他 介绍了自己。Shawn learned that the man's name was Harold and the two ended up conversing for about two and a half hours.肖恩得知这名男子名叫哈罗德，两人聊了大约两个半小时。注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para 1:Another thing he found out was that Harold was previously a crane operator, but had to quit due to his health.Para2:So, he decided that he would make a deal with Harold.第一段：他发现的另一件事是，哈罗德以前是一名起重机操作员，但由于健康原 因不得不辞职。第二段：因此，他决定和哈罗德做一笔交易。文本分析：故事大意：哈罗德是一名起重机驾驶员，因为健康原因不得不离开心爱的工作岗位。但他每 天都会来到工地，坐在轮椅上，观看起重机作业。这引起了肖恩的注意。两人攀 谈了起来，肖恩得知哈罗德很多事情。决定帮助他重返珍爱的岗位，再次获得自 信。主题：帮助他人会点亮自己的精神世界。伏笔：1. He felt lonely because his children didn't visit him much.2. He takes lunch when we do and doesn*t leave until I shut the crane down and head out.续写情节：第一段：由第一句可知，重点写哈罗德向肖恩解释他对起重机的热爱，以及自己令人绝望 的病情。肖恩听到这里的反应以及做出的决定。第二段：有第二句可知，重点写两人达成的协议，肖恩让老人教授自己驾驶起重机的技能, 自己则会给老人带来咖啡和早餐。最后升华主旨。重点短语：are passionate abouthang up their hatshealth issues ariseleave the person no choice but to dowork asa nursing homefeel lonelyend up conversing好句翻译：（见原文和答案）1 .不幸的是，这就是发生在一个叫哈罗德的人身上的事情。2 .多亏了 一个陌生人的好意，哈罗德得以重新体验他在工地上工作的日子。3 .事实证明，哈罗德患有一种多年来一直在折磨他的疾病。4 .他喜欢看他过去喜欢做的事情，从未想过自己能再看到起重机或在起重机周 围。5 .小小的善举会有很大的帮助，没有什么比振奋别人的精神更有益的了。参考范文：Another thing he found out was that Harold was previously a crane operator, but had to quit due to his health. As it turned out, Harold had a disease that's been eating away at him for years. Harold explained to Shawn that he was nearing the end of his life and that he was oveijoyed to be in the presence of a crane again. He enjoyed seeing what he used to love to do for a living and never thought he'd ever be able to see or be around a crane again. Let alone be so close to seeing one in action. Shawn was saddened to learn that though Harold has two daughters and a son, they haven't visited him for the last seven years when he has been in a nursing home.So, he decided that he would make a deal with Harold. Shawn told Harold that he would come sit and chat with him every day after his shift was over so Harold could judge him on how his crane work was that day. That way Shawn could learn from Harold. In exchange, Shawn would get the senior a black coffee each morning and lunch twice a week from wherever Harold wanted. In this way, Shawn had the opportunity to make this man*s last days enjoyable. In Shawn*s company, Harold was no longer lonely, while Shawn learned a lot from this former experienced crane operator. A little act of kindness can go a long wayand there*s nothing more rewarding than brightening someone's spirits.