【读后续写】第02期：写大纲只需10句.pptx
P1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.接着P1（心理/动作链）根据P2P2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.接着P2（心理/动作链）结局（紧贴首段/需求解决）升华（归类+总结共性）写大纲：十句五定法（5句有固定依据）另外5句：跟随原文描写占比高中英语读后续写（写大纲|只需10句）固定:P1P2首句+P1尾句+P2尾两句框架构思：十句五定法（5句有固定依据）P1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.接着P1（心理/动作链）根据P2P2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.接着P2（心理/动作链）结局（紧贴首段/需求解决）升华（归类+总结共性）另外5句：跟随原文描写占比谋篇布局:写大纲 P1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.P2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.写大纲：十句五定法（5句有固定依据）P1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.接着P1（心理/动作链）根据P2P2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.接着P2（心理/动作链）结局（紧贴首段/需求解决）升华（归类+总结共性）写大纲：十句五定法（5句有固定依据）P1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.心理（twins:害怕被责备+欣喜有救星;father：理解）根据P2:cooked the breakfastP2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.心理（twins:期待+忐忑;mother：惊喜+欣慰）结局：问题解决（回归首段）升华：价值观/感叹写大纲：十句五定法（5句有固定依据）P1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.心理（twins:害怕被责备+欣喜有救星;father：理解）根据P2:cooked the breakfastP2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.心理（twins:期待+忐忑;mother：惊喜+欣慰）结局：问题解决（回归首段）升华：价值观/感叹另外5句：2个关键情节：P1爸爸帮忙做早餐+P2妈妈开心3个细节描写：动作/语言/环境写大纲：十句五定法（5句有固定依据）P1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.心理（twins:害怕被责备+欣喜有救星;father：理解）语言对话“”动作/环境clean the kitchen（原文复现、延伸）关键情节（由角色特点决定）father cooked breakfast;twins cleaned kitchen 根据P2:cooked the breakfastP2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.心理（twins:期待+忐忑;mother：惊喜+欣慰）关键情节同时空，各个角色做什么（由角色特点决定）动作/语言/环境对话“”结局：妈妈惊喜（呼应首段）升华：价值观/小感叹写大纲：十句五定法（5句有固定依据）P1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.接着P1（心理/动作链）根据P2P2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.接着P2（心理/动作链）结局（紧贴首段/需求解决）升华（归类+总结共性）写大纲：十句五定法（5句有固定依据）另外5句：跟随原文描写占比 P1:XXX.P2:XXX.写大纲：十句五定法（5句有固定依据）
