查补易混易错40 书面表达（观点看法类)（2022年中考三轮冲刺) （解析版）-中考英语备考资料重点汇总知识点归纳.docx

查补易混易错40书面表达（一）观点看法类STEP01解读考点考向一般来说,观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英文基础， 还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间 的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成，在修辞中称为”启、承、转、合“。”启“ 就是开头，“承”就是承接，“转“是转折，“合”是综合或总结。 命题趋势：分析全国近几年的中考真题可知，书面表达对“观点看法类”的话题考 查比重仅次于“做法建议类”，也是各地市高频考查方向。此类话题，通常在背景材料中说 明某种“好/坏/新的现象，或以表格或图示展示不同人群的“不同或对立”的观点， 由此让学生最终陈述自己的观点，并说明理由（注意理由要有理有据、条理清晰）。中考五星高频考点，题目难度中等，在全国各地中考试卷选填题中均有考查。02易混易错归纳易错点01：观点不鲜明。文章一定有一个明确的中心论点一一主题。易错点02：层次不分明。一个中心论点通常有儿个分论点支持，层次要分明，过渡要自然。 易错点03：最后一段不总结全文。最后一段一般要总结全文，得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突 出中心思想。滔真题好题演练2021 真题演练（2021湖南长沙市中考真题）最近，你班召开了一次以“What Are Good Parents Like?”为主题的班会。请你综合以下 同学的观点，并发表你自己的看法，写一篇短文，向学校校刊投稿。要求：（1）80词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；文中不得出现真实人名和校名。点和表达习惯，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句和复合句的使用，提升作文档次。同时 注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯、表达流畅。(2022广西柳州中考模拟)由于疫情，在线学习作为一种新型学习方式，已越来越受到师生们的欢迎。假如你是 李华，请根据以下要点，以“Online learning”为主题写一篇英语短文，参加班级的线上讨 论。在线学习优点可以随时随地学习 自主选择学习内容不足部分学生缺乏自控力你的观点是否接受在线学习？为什么？(至少一点)注意：1 .词数70左右；2 .所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息及提示词；3 .文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；4 .文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇：在线学习(online learning)；欢迎(popular)；优点(advantage)；随时随地(any time and any where)；不足(disadvantage)；缺乏(be lack of)；自控力(self-control)；知识(knowledge)；有趣的(interesting)；传统的(traditional)；Online learningMy name is Li Hua.【答案】例文Online learningMy name is Li Hua. Online learning has been more and more popular among students and teachers.It has many advantages. We can learn anytime and anywhere, choose what we want to learn freely. However, it also has disadvantages. Some students are lack of self-control, so they play a lot of games. It isn't good for their study.I think online learning is better. Because we can learn more knowledge which isn't found in books. And it's more interesting than the traditional way.【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：本文要求以“Online learning”为题，以李华的身份写一篇英语短文, 谈论线上学习的优缺点及自己的观点。根据题干中的提示进行写作，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第一、三人称为主。第一段引出话题；第二段讲述线上学习的优缺点；第三段讲自己对线上学习的观点。介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。（2022山东济南市中区中考模拟）假如你是李华，与美国笔友Mike正在对肯德基（KFC）食品展开讨论。根据你所了解 的情况，请你给他写一封邮件，谈谈你们班级同学对肯德基（KFC）食品的不同看法，并 发表自己的观点。要求：L必须包含表格内所有信息；2 .文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息；3 .词数：100词左右。优点(advantages)缺点(disadvantages)同学们的看法1 .美味 2.时尚3.体验西餐1 ,太贵 2.不安全3.垃圾食品你的观点Dear Mike,Is everything going well? Glad to have a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of KFC with you. We did a survey about it. Here are the results.Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Mike,Is everything going well? Glad to have a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of KFC with you. We did a survey about it. Here are the results.On the one hand, we think KFC has its advantages. Ifs delicious and eating in KFC is a kind of fashion. It9s also a good way to experience Western food. On the other hand, KFC also has its disadvantages. Most food in KFC is junk food, which is bad for our health. Besides, the food may not be safe because it's not fresh. What's more, the food in KFC is usually very expensive.Though KFC is delicious, I prefer traditional Chinese food which is more delicious. To keep healthy, we should eat less junk food. Ifs a good idea to have more healthy food like vegetables and fruit. Just as the saying goes, an apple a day keeps the doctor away.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。围绕“肯德基食品”发表不同的看法。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头 已给出，用于引出主题；第二段介绍学生们对这种食品的不同看法；最后一段发表自己的 看法。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。（2022山西临汾中考模拟）随着现代科技的发展，传统文化也越来越能体现中国五千年的文明史。请你写一篇短 文，用你的亲身经历来描述中国传统节日的重要性。要求：1 ,词数不少于80词，2.文中不能出现真实人名、校名。【答案】例文There are many traditional festivals in China, such as the Sring Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival. They are of great importance to us.I am a middle school student, and I spend all my time studying so that I can't meet my relatives and friends from time to time. But during the Spring Festival, I can have the chance to meet my relatives and friends to talk with them about our daily life to strengthen our relationship. Besides, I can have time to relax myself. The most important is that I can have a better understanding of Chinese culture through the traditional festivals.All in all, we should try our best to protect our traditional festivals.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据自己的经历描述中国传统节日的重要性，写作时可适 当发挥，使文章更加顺畅。2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和一般现在时为主。第一段进行总述；第二段根据自己的经 历描述传统节日的重要性；最后一段发出倡议。写作时可运用不同的句式和连接词使文章 层次清晰，逻辑清楚。不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。（2022北京市海淀区中考模拟）某英文网站正在开展主题为“做一个有准备的人”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用 英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈是什么经历让你意识到准备的重要性，以及你从中获得的益 处。提示词语：competition, worried, improve, confidence, proud提示问题： What experience taught you the importance of preparation?Please describe it.What benefits have you got from the experience?Being prepared is important.【答案】例文：Being prepared is important. Tve learned it through my experience in the spelling competition last year. Never a straight A student, I was worried that I couldn't bear the hard work needed in the first place. However, I devoted myself to the preparation, working on the difficult words. My vocabulary improved day by day. When the competition began, 1 was calm and confident. Words flowed naturally out of my lips. I won the competition, which was something I could never even dreamed of before.The benefits of the experience are not only about honor and pride. More importantly, I've learned to break free from the negative thoughts and self-doubt deep inside. Tve also realized that being prepared works miracles. All we have to do is to get fully prepared for whatever challenges that come along.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求围绕“做一个有准备的人”写一篇短文；根据提示问题和提 示词语，结合自身经历，讲述准备的重要性。2.写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用两 段式结构，第一段：阐述让你意识到准备的重要性的一次经历；第二段：阐述你收获的益 处。保证内容完整，行文流畅，结构清晰条理。（2022枣庄中考模拟）失败乃成功之母。本卷阅读理解B部分文章讨论了失败对于获取成功具有重要的价值 请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你如何借鉴Apple的成功经验，采取有效行 动，失败为成功。写作要点：1 What have you learned from Apple's story?2 Have you ever experienced a failure? What was it?3 What will you do to turn it into a success?要求：1短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3词数不少于80。例文Failure can lead to success. We should study it and learn why we make mistakes, then find ways to solve our problems. Also, we should never give up!I once tried out for a speech competition. I practiced it many times. Unexpectedly I failed.I've never spoken in front of the public ever since.Apple's story is quite an inspiration for me. What can I do to make it? First, be confident and try to speak in public places. Second, ask my teachers or friends for some advice and improve my language skills. Finally, be persistent and practice speeches over and over again.I'm sure I will succeed some day.【详解】(1)题干解读：本文要求根据阅读理解B部分文章，谈谈如何借鉴Apple的成功经验，结 合所给写作要点写一篇文章。内容包括从Apple的故事中学习到了什么，你的失败经历，要 如何将失败变为成功。(2) .写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称写作，时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。第一部 分介绍从Apple的成功中学习到了什么，时态为一般现在时；第二部分描写自己的失败经 历，时态为一般过去时；第三部分为如何把失败变为成功，时态为一般现在时。写作时要 行文连贯，条理清晰，语言准确。SamGood parents are understanding. They never push us too hard when we get poor grades.My parents are supportive. They always bring out the best in me.BobGood parents are like stars in the sky. Sometimes we can't see them, but they are always there.AmyWhat Are Good Parents Like?Recently we have had a lively discussion about what good parents are like. Different students have different ideas.【答案】What Are Good Parents Like?Recently we have had a lively discussion about what good parents are like. Different students have different ideas. Sam thinks good parents are understanding. They never push us too hard when we get poor grades. Bob says good parents always bring out the best in us. Amy agrees that good parents are like stars in the sky. Sometimes we can't see them, but they are always there.In my opinion, good parents should be good teachers as well as good friends of us. They should also set good examples for us.【详解】1 .题干解读：文章要求以“What Are Good Parents Like?”为题写一篇作文，谈谈好父母是什 么样的，综合已给出的同学们的观点并发表自己的观点，可适当发挥。2 .写作指导：写作时要以第三人称和第一人称相结合，使用一般现在时讲述大家的观点， 要做到概括全面、语句通顺，无单词拼写和语法错误。（2021湖北随州市中考真题）繁重的课业负担不利于学生的身心健康与全面发展，为树立健康第一的教育理念，你 校建议学生每天课后采取适当方式放松自己。假设你是九（1）班的一名学生，最近你对班 上同学课后放松方式进行调查。请根据以下表格提供的信息和要求，用英文写一篇短文。对象九（1）班放松方式1 .看电视（20人）2 .玩电脑游戏或上网聊天（25人）3 .阅读各种书籍（15人）4 .进行体育锻炼（10人）5 .没有时间放松（11人）你的观点哪一种（些）放松方式是适当的？为什么？写作要求：1 .文章必须包括表格中所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；2 .词数：80词左右；（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）3 .文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。参考词汇：聊天chatI'm a student of Class 1, Grade 9. Recently, I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.【答案】I'm a student of Class 1, Grade 9. Recently, I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.Different students have different ways to relax after class. Among them, twenty students like watching TV, twenty-five students often play computer games or chat online, fifteen students like reading all kinds of books, ten students often do sports and eleven students don't have time to relax.I think reading and doing sports are good for us,because we can improve ourselves byreading and doing sports can keep us healthy.【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求根据表格所提供的信息介绍一下学生课后所采取的放松方式，并 发表自己的观点，可适当发挥让文章更加连贯。2 .写作指导：本文应采用第一人称和第三人称来书写，时态使用一般现在时，注意主谓一 致。写作时，可根据表格内容依次介绍学生进行放松的方式，最后发表自己的观点，谈谈 哪种方式是好的，以及原因。（2021青海中考真题）假如你是李磊，你的笔友Anna给你发了电子邮件诉说她的烦恼，请根据邮件内容进 行回复。要求：L逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范。3 .词数100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。Dear Li Lei,My sister practices playing the violin in an after-school class, so my parents asked me to go and learn it too. But Pm just not a music girl. You know, I'm interested in sports and I want to choose what I like. Now, I'm so upset. What should I do?AnnaDear Anna,I understand your feeling. Here is what I think.I hope what I said is helpful to you.Li Lei【答案】Dear Anna,I understand your feeling. Here is what I think. Maybe your parents won't know how you feel if you don't talk to them about it. Why not honestly and kindly let them know music and you are never a good match, but sports and you are made for each other? Meanwhile, you'd better tell them you have had a clear life goal and are old enough to make your own decisions. Further-more, try to get a proper chance to prove that you are talented in sports. Only then will they know you better and let you choose what you love to do. Tm sure your parents will be up for helping you explore different options.I hope what I said is helpful to you.Li Lei【详解】1 ,题干解读：本文是一篇对电子邮件的回复。根据Anna信中所提到的烦恼，进行回复。2 .写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。在回信中针对Anna提到的烦恼，给出自己合理性 的建议，让父母知道自己并不擅长音乐，明确告知父母自己的目标是什么，这样有效地沟 通会让父母理解和支持的。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。（2021山西中考真题）在我们成长的过程中，会遇到各种各样的选择，选择读一本喜欢的书；选择做感兴趣 的事；选择与志趣相投的人交朋友在选择面前，如何客观、理性，并且遵从自己内心 的感受，这是我们应有的处事态度。请根据以上内容，结合图片信息，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1 .从以上提示中选择某个方面，谈谈你对这个选择的观点；2围绕以上观点，描述你曾经历过的一件事；3这件事带给你的思考。要求：4 .词数不少于80词；5 .提示词会仅供参考；6 .文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。Word BANKobjective adi.客观的reasonable adj ,理性的attituden.态度【答案】There is no denying that it is important for us to make a reasonable choice in life. I am a volleyball fan so T choose to join the school volleyball club, which is beneficial to my growth.In my childhood, I fell in love with volleyball. Then when I was in Grade 8,1 was eager to be a member of the school volleyball club. However, my parents wanted me to focus time and energy on schoolwork. I had a long talk with them calmly. After that, I trained hard with persistence in the club and learned what the true meaning of the teamwork was. Meanwhile, I reviewed my schoolwork as long as I finished training. To my joy, I got a satisfying result in the test. All this showed that my choice was right.Needless to say, no matter what the choice is, if it is reasonable, just make it to follow your heart. Only in this way can it bring out the best in you.【详解】1 ,题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。描述一件自己感兴趣的事，是如何遵从自己内心的感 受，并坚持下来的短文。2 .写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。描述过去的事情要用一般过去时。 分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己的经历；第三段谈谈这件事带来的思考。 写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。(2021四川成都市中考真题)你校英文校刊就“过度养育"(Overparenting)这一现象开辟专栏，展开讨论。请以 “Overparenting: Yes or No”为题写一篇短文，向该栏目投稿。Voices from】,Voices from 2 :! always lot my kid solvo tlie problems ly hiniscIL Ovcrparonting isn't good 、for his growtkI think it's OK for n)c to do diorvs or some liomcnvork for her Sho is too tnixy1 am |xx)r at nta(k My fatlier can help me a lot when I have any difficiiltyI can get good rrsitlts with niy parents' help, but I lose chances to challenge,mysdL要求：1 .简述该现象；2 .陈述图表中不同观点及理由；3 .表述你的观点及两点理由（须与图中不同）。注意：1 .请先在答题卡上填写表中空格；2 .须全面反映图表信息，但不能完全照抄；3 .文中不能出现真实的学校和姓名；4 .词数：100左右。 答案Overparenting: Yes or NoOverparenting is more and more popular nowadays. Some parents always do everything for their children because they think children are busy with their schoolwork. While other parents prefer letting their children do things by themselves and solve problems on their own.As for children, some of them think parents' help is good for them and they can get good results with parents' help. But others think they also lose chances to challenge themselves.In my opinion, I think parents should give their children more chances to challenge themselves and they should learn more knowledge not only in study but also in life to improve themselves. Then, they can take good care of themselves and have the courage and confidence to face the difficulties in the future.【详解】1 ,题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Overparenting: Yes or No”为题，结合图片和提 示要点进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2 .写作指导：写作时要以第三和第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时°作文可分为三段， 第一段介绍家长对于“过度养育”的观点；第二段介绍孩子对于“过度养育''的观点；第三段 表明自己的观点。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。（2021四川遂宁市中考真题）今年3月全国政协会议期间，江苏锡山唐江澎校长的一席话发人深思：教育应该培养 终身运动者、责任担当者、问题解决者和优雅生活者。某英文网站以“How to Be a Better Person”为话题开展征文活动，请从中学生的角度写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的做法。 要点提示：1 .健康生活（食物、运动、睡眠）；2不怕挑战（尽力解决学习、生活中的问题）；3,对人友善（乐于助人、与人和睦相处）；4.牢记责任（照顾父母，帮助弱者）o注意：1 .文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。2 .文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯。3不可逐词翻译，可适当发挥。4 .文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。提示词：responsibility职责How to Be a Better PersonAs a middle school student. I quite agree with Mr. Tang's opinions. To be a better person. I think T should do the followingthings【答案】How to Be a Better PersonAs a middle school student, I quite agree with Mr. Tang's opinions. To be a better person, I think I should do the following things.First of all, we should have a healthy life. We should eat well, take more exercise and have enough sleep. Second, we should not be afraid of challenges. We must try our best to solve the problems in our study and life. Third, we should be kind and be ready to help others. We should get on well with others. Finally, we should keep the responsibilities in mind. We should take care of parents and help the weak.【详解】1 .题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点，从不同的方面描写，写出具体应该如何 做，才能成为更好的人，可以适当的发挥。2 .写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作， 时态以一般现在时为主，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语；提出 建议多用情态动词should,要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。2022名校模拟（2022北京市平谷区中考模拟）在2022年北京冬奥会上，苏翊鸣和谷爱凌不断挑战自我，勇夺金牌。某英文网站正在开展以“我眼中的奥运冠军”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请 用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你认为是什么造就了他们的成功，这对你今后的学习和生活 有什么启发，以及你会怎么做。提示词语： train , love, challenge, insist, support, improve 提示问题：