万能模板09 日记-冲刺2023年中考英语书面表达作文万能模板-中考英语备考资料重点汇总知识点归纳.docx

09日记1 .题型分析：日记是中考英语书面表达命题的热点。日记常用来记述一天中所发生的重要的或有趣的 事情，也可以用来叙述自己当天触景而发的感受等。日记的主要体裁通常是记叙文或简单的 议论文。2 .写作攻略英文日记通常由书端和正文两部分组成。书端是专门记载写日记的日期及天气状况的。 正文的格式与其他文章相近，一般缩进4个字母，也可以顶格写。由于日记所写的事件都是 发生过的事情，所以日记通常用一般过去时。因为日记多为记叙自己的亲身经历或抒发自己 的感想，所以一般用第一人称。3 .写作点拨：一是明确格式要求。英文日记格式与中文日记格式差不多，通常在正文上一行左边顶格写日期、星期，右 边写天气状况。接着再另起一行写正文。二是把握日记的人称和时态。由于日记是记录自己亲身所见、所闻、所想、所感的事情，因此要使用第一人称;由于 是记录发生过的事情，所以时态要使用一般过去时态，若是表达客观真理、描写景色或对某 事发表评论，则用一般现在时态;若是展望未来、写学习计划等，则要用将来时态内容过渡 自然、通顺连贯、条理清晰、富有逻辑;选取自己感触最深，认为最为意义的场景、事件、 感受进行记录，要重视提示，明确中心，巧抓重点，无需面。三是合理安排内容。日记内容要按时间先后顺序展开，巧用连接词，确保日记面俱至I;要流露真情实感，力求简单明了。写日记的时候一般遵循以下步骤：第一步：介绍事件：第二步：具体阐述事情经过，补充细节；第三步：表达感想或总结该事件的意义。写日记要注意以下几点：People：py c assmales and ITninsportaition:by busPeople,my dMsmates andTransporution：by subwayOurtriptoihe Science MuseumOur trip S 尸Hongxing Fann /Feelings:pwy ehm with cototswwtcfi . wteo about _Activities：feed cMdcens：pick sirawbernes；导图一导图二注意：(1)日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点，并适当发挥；(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；(3)词数：80-100o日记格式及首句己给出，不计入总词数。Friday, May 11thToday I had a school trip.【答案】Possible version 1:Friday. May 11thToday I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.The minute we arnved, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!(98 words)Possible version 2:Friday, May 11 thToday I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7 :00.As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. Tn the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends.I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again!(99 words)【解析】写作分析：首先要确定文章的体裁，这是一篇日记，这就决定了文章的人称。其次要看到要求是冲艮据你所选择的实践 活动”进行写作，所以要在两个导图中挑选一个进行描述，不需要都写。在完全明白题目含义后就要根据导 图中的要点（包括人物、交通方式、感受、活动）进行作文，使用恰当的语句进行连接、保证作文连贯得 体即可。?必' 背范文Writing 1 （2022湖北武汉模拟预测）上周五是中国的传统佳节端午节，李华和几位好朋友相约去东湖观看了龙舟比赛，他们玩的很愉快。李华为此写了一篇周记，主要内容如下：1 .搭乘公交，八点半在东湖大门口见面；2 .天气炎热，带了帽子、饮水和望远镜；3 .多艘龙舟竞速，气氛热烈，观众热情；4 .品尝甜粽子，参观行吟阁，环湖骑行；5 .补充一到两点相关内容。表达要求：书写整洁、整齐、清晰：语句自然流畅；不得出现真实个人信息：词数80左右。提示词汇：telescope n.望远镜：the East Lake 东湖；the poetry-reciting pavilion 行吟阁Friday, June 10th【答案】例文Friday, June 10thLast Friday was China's traditional Dragon Boat Festival. Several good friends and I went to the East Lake to watch the dragon boat race. We took a bus and met at 8:30 at the gate of the East Lake. It was kind of hot, so I wore a hat and took a big bottle of drinking water. And I thought a telescope would be very useful. There were many dragon boats there. The players were fighting hard for the winner. We were all very excited about the races, too. After that, we tasted sweet zongzi by the poetry-reciting pavilion and cycled around the lake for the beautiful scenery. We really had an unforgettable Dragon Boat Festival.【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇日记类作文写作，要求写一篇端午节游玩的日记。内容上， 除了提示的四点，还需要额外补充一到两点相关内容。写作指导：本文人称上采用第一人称，时态上使用一般过去时。内容上主要包含：搭乘公交， 八点半在东湖大门口见面；天气炎热，带了帽子、饮水和望远镜；多艘龙舟竞速，气氛热烈， 观众热情；品尝甜粽子，参观行吟阁，环湖骑行；端午节真令人难忘。结构上可以采用一段 式，包含所有写作要点。注意句与句之间的衔接，保障行文的逻辑性。Writing 2 （2022.河北.滦南县教育局初中教研室二模）疫情期间，人们居家隔离。有人在家制作美食，有人在家跳舞健身。你居家隔离时做了什么？ 请写一篇日记，从学习、饮食、卫生、运动等方面介绍自己的生活，并进行反思和总结，写 出你的感受。注意：L字数80词左右；2 .开头已经给出，所给单词不计入总词数；3 .请不要写出你的真实姓名和校名。提示i司：study online, eating habits, clean, exercise, feelingsMy home quarantine （隔离）diaryDuring the epidemic （疫情），we students in Luannan stayed at home for more than one month.【答案】参考范文：One possible version:My home quarantine （隔离）diaryDuring the epidemic （疫情），we students in Luannan stayed at home for more than one month. From Monday to Friday, we studied online. The teachers taught us through Dingding, but sometimes I didn't listen very carefully. My parents cooked delicious meals fbr me, because they couldn't go out to work. I didn't do much housework and I put on weight because of being short of exercising.In the beginning, I felt excited about not going to school. But gradually I felt bored, because we couldn't go outside to play and staying at home all day is not fiin at all. I really hope that the epidemic can be over soon. I miss my classmates and teachers. I really want to go back to school.【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇日记，介绍自己在疫情期间的 生活。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时；文章开头已给出，写 作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍自己在疫情期间的学习、饮食、卫生、运动等 方面，并进行反思和总结，写出你的感受；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运 用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下 文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。Writing 3 （2022.黑龙江.哈尔滨工业大学附属中学校一模）假如你是中学生王丽，昨天你们班召开了关于学生成长的班会，请你根据以下信息完成日记, 并说一说如何成为优秀的（excellent）中学生。写作要点：1）班会的主题：我的变化2）介绍你和几名同学的成长3）小红：喜欢锻炼身体了；4）小亮：对英语感兴趣了；5）你：和父母相处得融洽了。6）说一说如何成为优秀的（excellent）中学生。写作要求：7）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。8）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。9）字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。10）至少80词。April 15th, 2022SunnyWe had a class meeting about the growth of the students yesterday【答案】例文SunnyApril 15th, 2022We had a class meeting about the growth of the students yesterday. There are lots of changes on us. For example, Xiao Hong likes doing physical exercise, Xiao Liang becomes interested in English, and I get along well with my parents.We all grow up slowly, but how to be an excellent junior student, here are some suggestions.Firstly, we should study harder and use the knowledge to solve problems. Secondly, we'd better have good manners. Last but not least, keep healthy. It's the basis of everything.【详解】题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但是要写成日记，注意格式；写作时要仔细阅 读题干要求，包含所有要点提示，以“我的变化”为主题，可适当发挥。写作指导：写作时注意第一段开头点题后，描写同学们的变化；第二段主要写如何成为一个 优秀的学生，提出建议。写作时注意时态，虽然班会是昨天开的，变化却不是昨天的变化, 因此使用一般现在时即可。在写作建议部分注意句型的灵活性，添加逻辑词，使文章句型丰 富，逻辑清晰。Writing 4 (2022黑龙江哈尔滨一模)面临世界的快速发展，21世纪的青少年应该拥有关键能力从容以对。假如你是李明，今天 你们班召开了班会，请你根据以下信息，写一篇日记，并说说21世纪的青少年应该拥有的 2个关键能力和理由。写作要点：1 .班会主题：21世纪的青少年。2 .同学们的发言：(1)很多同学认为沟通力(communication)是重要的；(2)刘丽说表达力(expression)是有帮助的；(3)说说你认为21世纪的青少年应该拥有的2个关键能力(key skill)和理由。写作要求：1 .不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2 .可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3 .字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4 .至少80词。April 14th,2022 ThursdaySunny and warmToday we had a class meeting.I hope we all have a bright future.【答案】例文April 14th,2022 ThursdaySunny and warmToday we had a class meeting. Many students think that communication is important. Liu Li says that the expression is helpful. I think it is very important to express my ideas well. First of all, no matter how knowledgeable you are, if you can't express yourself well, others won't understand your ideas. You can't communicate well with others. Secondly, the organizational ability is also very important. A chopstick is easy to break, but a bundle of chopsticks is hard to break.I hope we all have a bright future.【详解】1 .题干解读：该文章为日记，写作时候要注意符合日记的写作格式。日记内容主要 包括两部分：（1）包括同学们的发言；（2）作者自己认为的认为21世纪的青少年应该拥有 的2个关键能力。2.写作指导：写作时应以第一人称来写；时态用一般现在时；写作时要注意围绕主题，并能 准确地使用一定的语法，词汇，短语和句型。Writing 5 （2022宁夏银川市第十五中学一模）2022寒假正值北京冬奥会，你和同学们也想去体验一下冰雪运动。周六天气晴朗，你和朋 友相约到鸣翠湖滑雪场一起滑雪。请你根据以下提示写一篇日记，记录本次活动并简要谈谈 感受。文中不得出现真实姓名，80词左右，所给字数不算在总字数中。内容提示：1 .活动时间：早上10:00出发，下午5:00返回。2 .交通工具：公交车；3 .活动:滑冰，滑雪（skiing）,参观鸣翠湖（拓展至少两项活动）；4 .感受：谈自己的感受或收获。During the winter vacation of 2022, the Winter Olympics was held in Beijing. I also wanted to experience winter sports with my friends.【答案】例文SaturdaySunnyDuring the winter vacation of 2022, the Winter Olympics was held in Beijing. I also wanted to experience winter sports with my friends. We left at 10:00 a.m. and returned at 5:00 p.m. We went there by bus because Mincui Lake Ski resort was not far from here. We had many interesting activities, such as skating, sking and visiting Mincui Lake. We also had an interesting ski race. In addition, we had a game about skiing. Everyone took an active part in the game. I was so happy that I didn't want to go home.【详解】1 .题干解读：本文要求写一篇日记，记录周六你和朋友相约到鸣翠湖滑雪场一起滑 雪的过程和感受。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时行文；人称采用第一人称。写作时按照日记格式，内 容需包含时间、交通工具、活动以及自己的感受。文章确保语句通顺，条理清晰，无单词语 法错误。Writing 6 (2022.天津东丽二模)我市深入开展了“学习雷锋精神，共创文明城区”的活动。在3月5日学雷锋纪念日这天，你 校组织志愿者去天津敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇日记。活动时间3月5日活动地点天津敬老院(Tianjin Nursing Home)参加人员学校志愿者(volunteer)活动形式1 .送去鲜花和水果2 .帮助打扫卫生3陪老人聊天(chat with sb)唱歌、跳舞4 ,送去美好祝愿活动感想关爱老人、尊重老人要求：1.短文应包括表中所有要点，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息、；3.词数80100。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：老人 the elderly people；尊重 respectToday is 5th March. Our teacher took us volunteers to Tianjin Nursing Home.I hope more people can join us.答案Mar. 5th, 2021FineToday is 5th March. Oui teacher took us volunteers to Tianjin Nursing Home. As soon as we volunteers got to Tianjin Nursing Home, they gave us a warm welcome. We brought some flowers and fruits to the elderly people. We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. Then we sang and danced. How happy we were! After that, we sat together chatting with each other and gave our best wishes to them. The elderly people were very excited. We also had dinner together. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were thankful for our kindness.This activity not only makes the elderly people happy but also lets us learn more. For example, we feel it our duty to care for the elderly people and respect them.I hope more people can join u。【详解】1 .题干解读：题目要求写一篇日记，记述去敬老院做志愿者的经历，表格中的内容 要描述齐全，并适当进行拓展。2.写作指导：本文时态主要采用一般过去时进行叙事，以第一、三人称进行写作。先承接所 给开头重点描述活动内容，再另起一段表达感想。注意保持主谓的一致性，做到无标点和拼 写错误。Writing 7 （2022广东广州一模） 今天，学校"英语节''总结交流会上，你的同学李华做了发言，分享了经验。请你写一则英文 日记，记录这特别的分享。日记需包括以下要点：1 .分享者：李华，学校英语演讲比赛一等奖获得者；2 .分享内容：现场演讲、分享演讲技巧；分享学英语的方法等；3 .你的收获和感受。 注意：1 .词数80120个左右（文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥）2 .不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Thursday, March 31stDear Diary,Today, we listened to a wonderful speech.【答案】例文：Thursday, March 31st Dear Diary,Today, we listened to a wonderful speech. There were twelve students in the contest. Li Hua won the first prize. She shared her speech skills and English learning experience with us. Here are some in her speech.Before the speech, we should pick the topic and prepare for it. We should write down the outlines and organize what we are going to say. Take a deep breath to relax yourself and start the speech. She said making a speech in public made her confident and brought her great pleasure. She advised us to do a lot of reading and sing English songs. Ifs good to listen carefully and take notes in class. I learn a lot from her speech. I am sure I will do better in English.【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以日记形式记录学校“英语节”总结交流会，内容包括介绍一 等奖获奖者；谈谈现场演讲及获奖者分享演讲技巧和学英语的方法，最后谈谈自己的收获和 感受。2.写作指导：本文用一般过去时和一般现在时写作，介绍演讲及获奖者用一般过去时，介绍 获奖者的经验用一般现在时；书写要紧扣主题，分层介绍获奖者，获奖者分析的经验及自己 的收获和感受。做到中心突出，内容完整连贯。Writing 8 （2022广东广州一模） 假如你是李华，考上了一所理想高中。今天是开学的第一天，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英文日记，记录这一天的经历及感受。去学校前感到紧张，期待新学校在学校里1 .认识新的老师和同学们；2 .了解学校的规章制度；3 .参观了校园；回到家中1 .制定学习和锻炼计划；2 .你的感受注意：1 .词数：80词左右（日记的开头已给出，不计入总词数）;September 1st2 .不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Today is the first of my new school life.【答案】例文：September 1stToday is the first of my new school life. I felt nervous before I went to school. Meanwhile, I was looking forward to it. Let me introduce something about my new school life.At school, I met some new teachers and classmates. They were very friendly and helpful. With the help of my head teacher, I knew a lot about school rules. I also visited my school with other classmates. It was very big and nice. At home, I made study and exercise plans.I think I will have a good time in the new school.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇日记。根据要点提示，描述今天新学校开学的情况。3 .写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍自己在学 校的所见所闻以及回家之后的活动；第三段表达自己的期待。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到 无语法和标点错误。Writing 9 （2021 广东广州二模）学校开展“小手拉大手，科技进生活”的交流活动，你结合Grandpa Green的需求，帮他一起 在网上购买了一款智能手表，体验网上购物的便利。请你根据以下要点，用日记的方式写下 这个体验和感受。1 .日记的第一行要写清日期、星期和天气状况。日期和星期写在正文的左上角，月份 与星期可以缩写。天气状况写在正文的右上角。如果是游记，还可以写明地点。2 .日记通常使用过去时记录所发生的事件。若为议论、抒情或描述景物和人，为了生 动，也可以使用一般现在时。3 .日记的正文可以是叙事、描写、说明或议论等形式，且通常用第一人称。4 .日记虽然是记录事件，但应该适当加一些个人感悟，写出亮点。典例赏析：上周末，我校的“厨艺小达人”李华给大家上了一节云家务劳动课。请写一则英文日记， 记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点；1 .授课者：李华，15岁，福州八中学生，校厨艺大赛冠军；2 .上课内容：鱼丸的制作和烹饪，福州美食的历史等；3 .你的收获和感受。参考词汇：鱼丸(fish ball)冠军(champion)o注意事项：1 .开头已为你写好，不计人总词数；2 .意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3 .请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。Monday, June 20 Dear Diary,Last weekend, we had a special online lesson.【答案】Monday, June 20 Dear Diary,Last weekend, we had a special online lesson. The teacher was the champion of school cooking competition named Li Hua. He is 15 years old, and he is also a student of Fuzhou No. 8 Middle School. In the class, he explained the way of making fish balls and showed us how to cook them well. We were interested in making fish balls. He also introduced us to the history of Fuzhou cuisine. From this lesson, I learnt that cooking skills are not easy to master, and to become a注意：1 .词数80-120个左右（文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥）2 .不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Friday SunnyThis afternoon I taught Grandpa Green【答案】参考范文：Friday SunnyThis afternoon I taught Grandpa Green to buy a smart watch online. We had a happy shoppin g experience.First, we typed "smart watch“ on the shopping website and lots of goods appeared. Then we chose a perfect one after checking the details of the watches. It has such a big screen with big numbers that Grandpa Green can know the time easily. More conveniently, if Granpa wears it, it can not only show where he is, but also lead him to where he wants to go. Grandpa can also make some phone calls when needed. Besides, it only costs 899 yuan. It is very popular and has been bought by 6,899 people with a five-star good review. We thought it was a good choice and paid it online finally. We were looking forward to receiving the watch.Shopping online saves our time and makes our life more convenient and comfortable. And I feel happy to teach Grandpa to shop online successfully.【详解】1 .题干解读：本文是一篇日记。要求根据提示内容，写一下网上购物的体验和感受。 注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时工 作文要分别介绍选购的过程以及感受。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。master of cooking needs a lot of practice, practice makes perfect. What a special lesson we had!【详解】1 .题干解读：该题目属于日记写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；讲述授课者的个人 信息、，上课的内容，最后讲述个人的收获和感受。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述授课人的信息和 课堂内容需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。写作模板Day of the week DateWeather介绍今天是什么日子，引 出事件详细描写了今天所做的 事情Today is. I did some meaningful things.In the morning, I （事件一）.In the afternoon, I（事件二）.After that, I （事件三）.表达感想What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day! / Although I was very tired, I felt very happy because.【模板范文】Sunda