河北省近十年中考英语书面表达真题及范文汇总（2014-2023）.doc

河北省近十年中考英语书面表达真题及范文汇总（2014-2023）*评分标准*河北省的中考英语书面表达分值为15分，划分为五个档次。评分时，先根据短文的内容要点初步确定其所属档次，然后用该档次的语言要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。短文中如果出现真实的地名、校名或人名，酌情减分。语序与答案相同，但出现句首字母不大写、单词拼写等错误，可酌情给分。评分要点主要是根据书面表达要点或提示来定。以2020年真题为例，根据四幅图，确定了四个评分要点：1.送别；2.想念；3.欢迎；4.团聚。内容要点可以用不同方式表达。相同错误不重复计算。通常来说以3分为一个档次：一档：13-15分 包含了所有要点，能围绕内容要点适当发挥，内容具体、丰富；应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯，表达清楚；没有或几乎没有语言错误，具备较强的语言运用能力，达到了预期的写作目的。二档：10-12分 基本包含了所有要点，并有一定发挥，内容比较丰富；应用的语言结构和词汇能满足任务要求，句子较通顺，表达较清楚；有少量语言错误，基本达到了预期的写作目的。三档：7-9分 包含了多数要点，并有所发挥，内容不够丰富、具体，词数较少；句子不够通顺，语言表达过于简单，行文不够连贯；有部分语言错误。四档：4-6分 只包含了少数要点，内容过少；句子无条理，语言不规范，行文不连贯；语言错误较多。五档：0-3分 只包含一个要点或所写内容与要求几乎无关，内容杂乱，不知所云；语言很不通顺，用词很不准确；错误过多，几乎难以读懂。*真题和范文*2023年  王梅的英国朋友Tony要来中国学习汉语，下面是Tony给她发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复。You know, in English, given names (名字) come first and family names (姓) come last. How about Chinese names? And can you help me choose a Chinese name and tell me its meaning?注意：（1）回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题，可适当发挥。（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名，所起名字只限于备选名字。（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。备选名字：王健（Wang Jian）；李聪（Li Cong）；张友好（Zhang Youhao）Hi Tony,Im very happy to know that youll come to China to learn Chinese. _Looking forward to seeing you.Yours,Wang Mei参考范文 One Possible VersionHi Tony,Im very happy to know that youll come to China to learn Chinese. There is no doubt that it is very important and useful to learn Chinese well.We always put our family name first. They are from our family, and its surely our Chinese tradition. Then given names come last. Secondly, I prefer Li Cong as your Chinese name. I think this name represents intelligence and cleverness. Just like you! As far as I am concerned, the names are the culture of a country. A good name stands for a good luck.Looking forward to seeing you.Yours,Wang Mei2022年 假如你是学校英文网站的主编，准备在网站设立Dialogue with Teachers专栏（column），请根据下面的提示写一篇短文，谈一谈设立此专栏的目的。提示：（1）Develop a good relationship (understand, become friends)（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，比计入总词数）。We plan to have a new column - Dialogue with Teachers on the school English website._参考范文 One Possible VersionWe plan to have a new column-Dialogue with Teachers on the school English website. I think its a good way for both teachers and students to develop a good relation ship. If we often have a dialogue, well understand each other better and become friends. We will also have a chance to give our teachers some suggestions on homework, after-school activities, and even the way of teaching. Our teachers will know what we expect and theyll help us learn better.I believe with the help of the column, well enjoy a rich and colorful school life.2021年 初中生活已近尾声，同学们即将步入高一级学校。请你仔细阅读下表中的内容和所给提示，从下面两所学校中选择一所你喜欢的学校，并根据该校信息写一篇短文。提示：(1) Which school would you like to go to?(2) Why do you choose it?注意：1. 短文须包括表格中你所选学校的全部信息和提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；3. 词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。I would like to go to _参考范文 One Possible VersionI'd like to go to Purple School. Here are some reasons.First, Purple School is public and it has a long history. I think a school with a long history must be really good. Second, the teachers there are hard-working. And I think they have lots of teaching experience. Also, they often give students less homework. So I can have more free time to learn something Im interested in. Third, Orange School is private. The teachers there are young. So they might have fewer teaching methods though they are active. 2020年李硕今年五岁，他的妈妈疫情期间去支援武汉。请根据下面四幅图片及文字提示写一篇短文。注意：（1）短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示词语供参考；（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；（3）词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Li Shuo is a five-year-old boy. One Sunday afternoon, his mother was going Wuhan to help patients there                                          _参考范文 One Possible VersionLi Shuo is a five-year-old boy. One Sunday afternoon, his mother was going Wuhan to help the patients there. Li Shuo, together with his father, said goodbye to his mother at the airport. He missed his mother very much after she left. One day Li Shuo saw his mother on TV. He ran over at once and kissed her deeply. Two months later, his mother came back and received a warm welcome as a hero. When his mother finally got home, both Li Shuo and his father gave her a big hug. How happy they were to be together again!2019年文明礼貌从我做起，从现在开始，从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求，以 “When to Say Thank You”为题，写一篇短文。提示：1) When should we say “thank you” at home?2) When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school?3) .要求：1) 短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。3) 词数80个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)参考词汇:wash, encourage, openWhen to Say Thank YouIts polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us.参考范文 One Possible VersionWhen to Say Thank YouIts polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us.Being polite is a good tradition in our country.Nobody likes a person who is impolite. Its important for us to be polite. We should say “thank you” to parents when they cook for us. We should say “thank you” when they wash clothes for us. We should also be polite at school. When the teachers help us work out questions ,we should say “thank you” to them. When we get bad grades and the teachers and classmates encourage us, we should say “thank you”. When someone open the door for us,we should say “thank you”. We should say “thank you” as often as possible.If everyone is polite to others,the world will be more and more beautiful.2018年     请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。提示：（1）What are the man and the woman doing?（2）What should you do when you see people litter like this? Why?要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：throw, environment, civilized(文明的）参考范文 One Possible VersionI can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing litter away, and the woman behind him shouts “Hey! What are you doing? Put the rubbish into the dustbin!The city is our home.” I think the lady does a good job. If I see people throwing litter, I will also do that, because protecting the environment starts from the minor matters. We should do our best to protect our homes. I think its a good idea for everyone to take part in environmental protection. In the daily life, there are people who throw rubbish everywhere and do not know how to protect our cities. Therefore, we all have the responsibility to stop others uncivilized behavior.2017年英语课上，同学们正在准备举行以“真实的自我”为主题的演讲活动。请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲词，向同学们介绍一下自己。提示：(1) What are your strong points?(2) How do you improve yourself?(3)What is your dream for the future?注意：1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；3. 词数：80个左右。(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)参考范文 One Possible VersionHello, everyone!Im Li Hua and Im very happy to stand here to talk about myself. Im a kind and helpful person. Im always ready to help others when they are in trouble. I can sing and dance so well that I always give performance at our school party.When I think back what I have done before, I should help my parents do more housework. Doing housework is good for my future life.As for my dream, I want to be a teacher. Ill make friends with my kids. I want to teach everything I know!Thanks for your attention!2016年关于“说英语”问题，小华和他的英语老师Miss Wang持不同的意见，请你仔细阅读下面图中的对话内容，从中选择一个角色，按照所给的要求写一篇短文。要求：（1）用“Li Hua” 或“Miss Wang” 补全短文首句；（2）写出所选角色的观点，并续写理由；（3）短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；（4）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：shy，make a mistake，believe inI am _参考范文 Possible version 1I am Miss Wang. Your English is poor because you don't speak English. English, like any other language, is a tool of communication-the more you speak it, the better your English will become. So you should try to speak every day, as much as possible. And don't be shy or afraid of making a mistake. Your teacher and classmates are always ready to help you. The most important is that you must believe in yourself and never give up! Always remember: practice makes perfect.Possible version 2I am Li Hua. I don't speak English because my English is poor. I find it hard to speak English. I'm a little shy and afraid of making a mistake. I always feel nervous when I stand up speaking English in class. I am afraid that my classmates may laugh at me when I speak English. To tell you the truth, I don't believe in myself. The less I speak, the worse my English is. When my English improves, I will enjoy speaking it.2015年英语课上，老师要求同学们介绍个人周末计划。假设下面表格内容是你的计划提纲，请根据表格提示的活动内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你的周末计划，并在班上与同学交流。SaturdayWatch TVGo to a bookstoreSundayVisit grandparents要求：(1)发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补充要点；(2)发言稿中四个要点都要适当发挥；(3)发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；(4)词数：80个左右（已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数）。Hi,everyone! Here's my plan for the weekend.                                    Thank you!参考范文 One possible versionHi,everyone! Here's my plan for the weekend.On Saturday morning, I'm going to watch TV to relax myself after a long week's study. I like watching comedies and cartoons. On Saturday afternoon, I'm going to the bookstore to buy some books. Reading is one of my hobbies.On Sunday, I'm going to visit my grandparents because I miss them very much. I'll help them do some housework. After I come back, I'll do my homework to get ready for the next week.That's my weekend, like it? Thank you!2014年请阅读Tony从美国发来的电子邮件，并根据所给提示和要求，以李华的名义回复。Hey, Li Hua!How are you doing? Ive been busy since I came back from China.  Guess what! Im learning Chinese cooking, and I really enjoy it.One more thing, I hear you have Mid-Autumn Festival in China.Whats the date of the festival? How do you celebrate?Tony提示：（1）Ask Tony something about his Chinese cooking.（2）Answer his question about Mid-Autumn Festival.要求：（1）邮件旭包括所有提示内容，课适当发挥。（2）邮件中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）词数：6080参考词汇：the lunar calendar(阴历), moon cake, watch the moon, the symbol of reunion(团圆的象征)Hi, Tony,Good to hear from you! Its amazing that youre learning _Bye for now,Li Hua参考范文 One Possible VersionHi, Tony,Good to hear from you! Its amazing that youre learning Chinese cooking. Why are you interested in it? How are you learning?And what can you cook? Hope to enjoy your dishes next time!Yes, we really have Mid-Autumn Festival. Its on August 15th of the lunar calendar. Its one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together for a big dinner that day. We usually eat moon cakes while watching the moon at night. We believe the full moon is the symbol of reunion.Bye for now,Li Hua