读后续写必备高级句型 讲义 2024届高考英语专题复习.docx

读后续写必备高级句型一、我的续写教学思路可以简单概述为 每段设计34个微情节； 每个具体情节的内容再细分为 （1）情节发出者 （2）和上一个情节进行衔接（简单理解为用于表达之后的方式） （3）动作（包含具体动作+心理+语言） （4）情感（用状态或神态或动作表现）所以，我平时教授的续写高级句型和语法可以分成以下2大类： 每个情节可以用一句话包含多个内容维度，那么就需要学生掌握起到连接作用的高级句型和语法；或者，某些单一维度我们可以用单独的一句话来进行描写，那么就需要学生掌握一些XX描写的固定句型。每类我确定了6个句型，也就是学生只需要记住12个句型，并尽可能多地用在自己的写作中，就可以实现文章在句型上的光彩夺目了！二、分类第一类：起到连接作用的高级句型和语法1. 【衔接+动作，动作+情感】非谓语作状语2. 【衔接+动作】一就3. 【衔接+动作，动作+情感】with复合结构/独立主格结构4. 【情感+动作】so . that .倒装5. 【衔接+动作】as引导的让步状语从句6. 【衔接+动作】形容词（短语）作状语第二类：XX描写的固定句型7. 无灵主语（情绪描写；心理描写）8. 强调句（点题）9. 写人说话时的倒装（语言描写）10. 从未（心理描写）11. 迫不及待（动作描写）12. 虚拟语气（语言描写、心理描写）三、每种句式的两个例句第一类：起到连接作用的高级句型和语法1.【衔接+动作，动作+情感】非谓语作状语（1）Having hesitated for a while, I opened the door with tearful eyes.犹豫了一会儿，我含泪打开了门。（2）Adam shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.亚当浑身发抖，感觉如坐针毡。2.【衔接+动作】一就(1)Upon/On his master's arrival, the dog leapt to its feet, snorted happily and bounded forward.主人一到，那只狗就跳了起来，高兴地哼着鼻子，向前跳去。(2)The moment mom opened the bathrooms door, I made my way rapidly to my bedroom.妈妈一打开浴室的门，我就飞快地跑回卧室。(3)No sooner had Adam caught sight of the man's frightening face and strong build than he hung down his head to avoid making eye contact with him.亚当刚看到那人可怕的脸和强壮的体格，就低下头，避免与他目光接触。3.【衔接+动作，动作+情感】with复合结构/独立主格结构(1)With the distance from the hole getting closer, the dog apparently smelled something familiar.随着离洞的距离越来越近，狗显然闻到了熟悉的东西。(2) Adam waved at them excitedly, eyes shining and his face glowing with joy.亚当兴奋地向他们挥手，眼睛闪闪发光，脸上洋溢着喜悦。4.【情感+动作】so . that .倒装(1)So exhausted was my father that he fell asleep as soon as his head hit the pillow.我父亲太累了，以至于他头一碰到枕头就睡着了。(2)So nervous was I that my mind went blank.我太紧张了，脑子一片空白。5.【衔接+动作】as/though引导的让步状语从句Cold and exhausted as/though we were, the kids' smiling faces cheered us up.虽然我们又冷又累，但孩子们的笑脸使我们振奋起来。6.【衔接+动作】形容词（短语）作状语(1) Eager to see her beloved daughter, the woman quickened her pace towards the building.（因为）急于见到她心爱的女儿，这位妇女加快步伐向那座建筑物走去。(2) Determined to crawl out of the hole, he gathered strength to rise to his feet.（因为）下定决心要爬出洞来，他鼓起力气站了起来。第二类：XX描写的固定句型1. 无灵主语（情绪描写；心理描写）(1)It occurred to me that the man was a thief.我突然意识到这个男人是小偷。(2)Silence blanketed the classroom.教室里一片寂静。(3)Their laughter lingered around the house.他们的笑声在屋子里回荡。2. 强调句（点题）(1)It was through commitment and sweat that I can change myself inside and out.正是通过投入和汗水，我才能彻底改变自己。(2) It was your effort that determined whether you can succeed.是你的努力决定你是否成功。(3) It was on that day that he realized that what his son needed was nothing but company.是在那一天，他才意识到他儿子需要的仅仅是陪伴。3. 写人说话时的倒装（语言描写）(1)“,” came the low voice of Tom.“,”Tom低声说道。(2)“,” murmured Tom.“,”Tom喃喃地说4. 从未（心理描写）Never (in his life) had he received such a heartwarming present.他（一生中）从未收到过如此温暖人心的礼物。5. 迫不及待（动作描写）Hardly could Charles wait to share the exciting news with Joe. Charles迫不及待地想和 Joe 分享这个激动人心的消息。6. 虚拟语气（心理描写、语言描写）(1)But for this experience/If it had not been for this experience/Without this experience, she wouldn't have realized that she should spend more time with her family.要不是这次经历，她就不会意识到她应该花更多的时间和家人在一起。(2)If I had not quarreled with Jack/Had I not quarreled with Jack, I wouldn't have been trapped in the awful situation.如果我没有和杰克吵架，我就不会陷入这种糟糕的境地了。三、每种句式重复进行操练第一类：起到连接作用的高级句型和语法1.【衔接+动作，动作+情感】非谓语ing作状语（1）【衔接+动作】Having waved goodbye, she turned and walked away.挥手告别后，她转身离去。（2）【衔接+动作】Shouting for help, he ran towards the nearest house.他大声呼救着，跑向最近的房子。（3）【衔接+动作】Seeing the look on her face, he knew he had hurt her feelings.看着她脸上的表情，他知道他伤害了她的感情。（4）【动作+情感】Having finished the work, he felt a great sense of achievement.完成这项工作后，他感到了一种巨大的成就感。（5）【动作+情感】Walking along the bustling street, she couldn't help but feel a sense of excitement.沿着繁华的街道走着时，她不禁感到一阵兴奋。（6）【动作+情感】He ran across the finish line, grinning with pride and joy.他跑过终点线时，骄傲和喜悦的笑容洋溢在脸上。（7）【动作+情感】They sat together under the tree, laughing and enjoying the simple pleasure of being together.他们一起坐在树下时，笑着享受在一起的简单快乐。2.【衔接+动作】一就（1）Upon seeing the beautiful sunset, she couldn't help but take a photo.一看到美丽的日落，她就忍不住拍了一张照片。（2）On finishing his work, he decided to treat himself to a cup of coffee.一完成工作，他决定犒劳自己一杯咖啡。（3）On spotting the familiar face in the crowd, he waved excitedly.一在人群中看到那张熟悉的面孔，他兴奋地挥了挥手。（4）On realizing his mistake, he immediately apologized to the team.一意识到自己的错误，他立刻向团队道歉。（5）Upon completing the challenging task, she felt a sense of accomplishment.一完成这项具有挑战性的任务，她就感到了一种成就感。（6）On reaching the summit, they were rewarded with breathtaking views.一到达山顶，他们就被令人叹为观止的景色所奖赏。3.【衔接+动作，动作+情感】with（复合）结构/独立主格结构（1）With his heart pounding, he nervously approached the stage to give his speech.【情感+动作】他心跳加速，紧张地走上舞台发表演讲。（紧张）（2）With tears streaming down her face, she bid farewell to her loved ones at the airport.【情感+动作】她泪流满面，在机场向亲人告别。（难过）（3）With a bright smile lighting up her face, she expressed her joy at seeing her long-lost friend.【情感+动作】她脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容，表达了她见到久违的朋友的喜悦。（喜悦）（4）With the task completed, she felt a sense of relief wash over her.【动作+情感】任务完成后，她感到一种如释重负的感觉涌上心头。（5）With the letter written and sent, she felt a weight lifted off her shoulders.【动作+情感】信写好了，寄出去了，她感到肩上的重担卸下了。（6）With a furrowed brow, he conveyed his confusion at the complex instructions.他眉头紧锁，表达了他对复杂指示的困惑。（7）With a sigh of relief, she collapsed into the chair, her anxiety finally lifting.她松了一口气，瘫坐在椅子上，焦虑终于得到了缓解。（8）With a twinkle in his eye, he couldn't hide his excitement about the upcoming adventure.他眼中闪烁着光芒，无法掩饰对即将到来的冒险的兴奋。（9）With a shrug of her shoulders, she indicated her indifference to the outcome of the event.她耸耸肩，表示她对活动结果漠不关心。（10）With a nod of approval, he silently communicated his support for the decision.他点头表示同意，无声地表达了他对决定的支持。（11）With a pensive gaze, she stared out the window, her thoughts clearly elsewhere.她凝视着窗外，目光沉思，显然心不在焉。（12）With a sudden burst of laughter, he couldn't contain his amusement at the joke.他突然大笑起来，无法抑制对这个笑话的乐趣。（13）With a determined look in her eyes, she grabbed the rope and began her ascent up the mountain.她眼神坚定，抓起绳子开始往山上攀登。4.【情感+动作】so . that .倒装（1）So breathtaking was the view from the top of the mountain that they forgot about their tiredness.从山顶俯瞰的景色如此令人叹为观止，以至于他们忘记了疲劳。（2）So captivating was her performance that the audience gave her a standing ovation.她的表演如此引人入胜，以至于观众起立为她鼓掌。（3）So frightening was the thunderstorm that the children hid under the bed.雷雨如此可怕，以至于孩子们都躲在床下。（4）So moving was the speech that many in the audience shed tears.演讲太感人了，许多观众都流下了眼泪。（5）So precious was the moment that he wished he could freeze time.这一刻如此宝贵，以至于他希望时间能静止下来。（6）So awkward was the silence that she felt compelled to say something.沉默太尴尬了，她觉得必须说点什么。5.【衔接+动作】as/though引导的让步状语从句（1）Hard as he worked, he still couldn't catch up with the rest of the class.尽管他很努力，但他仍然赶不上班上的其他同学。（2）Brave as he appeared, he was actually trembling with fear inside.尽管他看起来很勇敢，但内心实际上在因害怕而颤抖。（3）Young as he was, he showed remarkable maturity in handling the situation.尽管他很年轻，但在处理这种情况时表现出了非凡的成熟。（4）Beautiful though the dawn was, it paled in comparison to the radiance of her spirit.尽管黎明如此美丽，但与她灵魂的光辉相比却黯然失色。（5）Strong as he appeared, he was actually quite vulnerable when it came to his family.尽管他看起来很强壮，但当涉及到他的家庭时，他实际上非常脆弱。6.【衔接+动作】形容词短语作状语（1）Determined to win the race, the athlete trained harder than ever before.决心要赢得比赛，这位运动员比以往任何时候都更加刻苦训练。（2）Keen to explore the new city, the tourist set out early in the morning with a map and a camera.热切希望探索这座新城市，游客一大早就带着地图和相机出发了。（3）Anxious to finish the project on time, the team worked late into the night.急于按时完成项目，团队一直工作到深夜。（4）They started the hike, unaware of the challenges that lay ahead.他们开始徒步旅行，却没有意识到前方的挑战。第二类：XX描写的固定句型1. 无灵主语（个人+群体）个人-积极（1）An overwhelming feeling of joy washed over her as she held the long-awaited trophy in her hands.当她把盼望已久的奖杯捧在手中时，一种难以言表的喜悦之情涌上心头。（2）A glow of pride shone in his eyes as he received the praise for his accomplishments.当他因自己的成就而受到赞扬时，他的眼中闪烁着自豪的光芒。（3）A wave of relief washed over him as he realized he had not forgotten his keys.当他意识到自己没有忘记带钥匙时，他如释重负。个人-消极（1）A chill of fear ran down her spine as she heard the creaking sound from the attic.当她听到阁楼里嘎吱作响的声音时，一股恐惧的寒意沿着她的脊椎往下窜。（2）A pang of regret shot through his heart as he realized he had missed the opportunity.当他意识到自己错过了机会时，一阵悔意涌上心头。（3）A wave of guilt washed over him as he realized the mistake he had made.当他意识到自己犯下的错误时，一阵内疚的浪潮涌上心头。群体-积极（1）A feeling of joy spread through the crowd as the winning team emerged onto the field.当获胜队伍出现在球场上时，一种欢乐的感觉在人群中蔓延开来。（2）An atmosphere of anticipation filled the air as the countdown to the launch began.随着发射倒计时的开始，空气中充满了期待的气氛。群体-消极（1）A pall of gloom descended upon the crowd as the news of the defeat spread.当失败的消息传开时，人群中笼罩着一层阴郁的气氛。（2）A ripple of anxiety ran through the audience as the lights suddenly dimmed.当灯光突然变暗时，观众中泛起一阵焦虑的涟漪。2. 强调句（点题）（1）It was her perseverance that finally led her to success.是她的毅力最终引领她走向成功。（2）It was the look in her eyes that convinced him she was telling the truth.是她眼神中的坚定让他相信她说的是真的。（3）It was not the money, but the principle behind it that mattered to him.对他来说，重要的不是钱，而是钱背后的原则。（4）It was only then that he realized the magnitude of his mistake.直到那时，他才意识到自己错误的严重性。3. Not until倒装+only when倒装（1）Not until she held the letter in her hands did she believe that she had been accepted into the prestigious university.直到她手里拿着那封信，她才相信自己已经被那所名牌大学录取了。（2）Not until she heard the doorbell ring did she remember she had forgotten to buy the groceries.直到听到门铃响了，她才想起自己忘了买杂货。（3）Only when the rain stopped did the children venture out to play.只有当雨停了，孩子们才敢出去玩耍。（4）Only when he faced a challenge did he realize his true potential.只有当他面对挑战时，他才意识到自己的真正潜力。4. 从未（心理描写）（1）Never would she forget the kindness shown to her by the stranger during her difficult times.她永远不会忘记在她困难时期，那位陌生人给予她的善意。（2）Never in his wildest dreams did he imagine that he would win the prestigious award.他做梦也没想到自己会赢得如此声望卓著的奖项。（3）Never did she expect that a simple act of kindness would change someone's life forever.她从未料到一次简单的善举会永远改变一个人的生活。（4）Never had the students been so engaged and attentive during a lecture.学生们在讲课过程中从未如此投入和专注过。5. 不能（动作描写）“Hardly could + 主语 + 动词原形”（1）Hardly could she believe her eyes when she saw the long-lost painting hanging in the gallery.当她在画廊里看到那幅失踪已久的画时，她简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。（2）Hardly could the family contain their joy when they received the good news.当收到这个好消息时，这家人几乎无法抑制他们的喜悦。（3）Hardly could the runner catch his breath after sprinting the final lap.那个赛跑运动员跑完最后一圈后几乎喘不过气来。6. 虚拟语气（要不是，如果没有）（1）If it weren't for that challenging project, he would never have understood the importance of teamwork.如果不是因为那个具有挑战性的项目，他永远不会明白团队合作的重要性。（2）Without the failure in her first attempt, she wouldn't have learned the value of perseverance and hard work.如果没有第一次尝试的失败，她就不会懂得坚持不懈和努力工作的价值。（3）Had it not been for the support of her friends, she would have given up on her dreams long ago.如果不是朋友们的支持，她早就放弃梦想了。（4）But for the guidance of her mentor, he would not have discovered his true passion in life.如果没有她导师的指导，他就不会发现自己生活中真正的激情所在。（5）If it had not been for the difficult times they faced together, they would not have appreciated the strength of their relationship.如果不是因为他们共同面对的困难时期，他们不会欣赏他们关系的力量。学科网（北京）股份有限公司