专题15 读后续写无灵主语仿写训练五大类75例 2（讲义）-2024年高考英语读后续写高分宝典 解析版.docx

优点英语2024年高考英语读后续写高分宝典专题15读后续写无灵主语仿写训练五组75例2（讲义） 解析版第一类公式：主语(情感状态的名词)+有灵动词+sb第二类公式：主语（身体部位/音容笑）+有灵动词+sb第三类公式：主语（表示时间和地点的名词）+有灵动词+sb第四类公式：主语（表示自然现象的名词）+有灵动词+sb(一)常见此类名词优点英语fog雾rain 雨水snow 大雪wind 大风earthquake地震sunshine阳光mist 薄雾moonlight 月光snowstorm暴雪(二)常见有灵动词blanket 覆盖come 到来bring 带来prevent 阻止strike 使突然想起hit 击中；使想到threaten 威胁rule 统治(三)句型常见含义风雨袭击/笼罩/阻止(四)经典例句呈现1. 浓雾笼罩着整个大地。The thick fog blanketed the field. 2. 午夜时分，天空变得更清晰，星星也变得更明亮。At midnight the sky became clearer and the stars grew brighter.3.一场暴风雪今天袭击西部地区，带来了严寒低温。（hit）A snowstorm hit the West today, bringing with it low temperatures.4. 浓烟笼罩着整个小区。Thick smoke blanketed the whole community firmly. 5. 黑暗、阴雨的黄昏，风和雷鸣的云把我完全控制在它们的力量之中。The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power.即时训练一：完成下列各句1. 突然下了一阵雨，风停了。A sudden shower killed the wind.2. 大雨使游客无法欣赏满月。The heavy rain prevented tourists from enjoying the full moon.3. 夜安静。除了我自己的心跳，什么声音也听不见。The night was quiet. Not a single sound could be heard except my own heart beat .4. 凉爽的微风吹过安静的公园。A cool breeze blew through the quiet park.5. 大雨倾盆，洪流暴涨，狂风肆意冲击房屋。The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against the house.即时训练二：根据提示翻译下列各句6. 雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在老树的树枝上。(blanket)_6. Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches of old trees.7. 微风轻抚着他的头，仿佛抚慰了他所有的疲惫。(stroke)_7. The gentle breeze stroked his head, as if comforting all his tiredness.8. 想到这个情景我心中充满了恐惧。 (fill)_8. The sight of the scene filled me with excitement.9.友谊就像萤火虫的光芒。颜色越暗，光线就越亮。(be)_9. Friendship is like the light of fireflies. The darker it is, the brighter the light will be.10.鹅毛般雪花在空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的图画。(dance)_10. The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.第五类公式：主语（表示思考动作行为的名词）+有灵动词+sb(一)常见此类名词thought 想法absence 缺乏presence 出席 到场glance 瞥一眼look 看一看idea 主意feeling 感觉sight 看见visit访问(二)常见有灵动词remind 使提醒make 使得let 让drive 促使send 送走leave 使得；离开overwhelm 压垮；淹没arouse 唤醒fill 充满change 改变bring 带来occur使想起优点英语(三)句型常见含义使人(四)经典例句呈现1. A brilliant idea suddenly popped into my mind. 我突然想到了一个绝妙的主意。2. A ten minutes walk brought us to the museum.步行十分钟我们就走到了博物馆。 3. The knocking sound on the door put a sudden brake to her thought.敲门声突然打断了她的思想。4. The sight of the picture reminds me of the unforgettable trip to Hangzhou.一看到这张照片我就想到了难忘的杭州之行。5. The thought of seeing her son very soon filled her heart with great happiness.想到不久就要见到她的儿子，她心中感到十分快乐。即时训练一：完成下列各句1. 仔细比较两种方法就会发现其中的区别。Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference. 2. 接触不同文化可以促进创造性。Exposure to diverse cultures can arouse creativity. 3. 好的习惯能提高效率，而坏的习惯恰恰相反。Good habits lead to efficiency while bad ones result in the opposite. 4. 这个故事使我想起了一句谚语“不能以貌取人”。 This story reminds me of a saying that “Never judge a person by his appearance”.5. 应当认真考虑健康和安全问题。Careful consideration should be given to issues of health and safety.即时训练二：根据提示翻译下列各句6. 他的名字我一时想不起来了。(escape)_6. His name escaped me at the moment. 7. 我突然想到一个可怕的想法。(strike)_7. A terrible thought suddenly struck me.8. 看到这个情景我心中充满了恐惧。(fill)_8. The sight of the scene filled me with horror. 9. 专注于读书让他忘记了时间。(make)_9. Being absorbed in books made him forget the time. 10. 他重游故居，不禁回忆起许多美好的回忆。(bring)_10. A visit to the places where he had lived brought back many fond memories. 读后续写“无灵主语”多角度训练一、用“无灵主语”改写下列句子。1. In the past four years, our production has increased. （改为时间作主语）_The past four years has witnessed an increase in production. 2. At dusk, he was wandering about in the street. （改为时间作主语）_Dusk found him wandering about in the street3. We walked for ten minutes and got to the hotel. （改为距离作主语）_A ten minutes walk brought us to the hotel.4. Many great historic events happened in the city. （改为地点名词作主语）_The city had witnessed many great historic events. 5. I forgot his name at the moment. （改为状态行为名词作主语）_His name escaped/failed me at the moment.二、用“无灵主语”翻译下列句子。1.你早点出发的话，中午就能到。_1.An early start will get you there at noon.  2. 他从未想到做志愿者的经历会对他之后的生活产生如此深远的影响。_2. It never occurred to him that the experience of a volunteer would have such a profound effect on his later life.3. 当她打开盒子时，她的手激动得发抖。_3. Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the box.4. 当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。_4. When the host announced that she won the prize, a wild excitement took hold of her.5. 中国共产党在上海成立。_5. Shanghai witnessed the birth of the Chinese Communist Party.6.似乎过了两个小时，保罗叔叔的农舍就出现了。_6. After what seemed two hours, Uncle Pauls farm house came into sight.7.我没有注意到这一错误。_7. The mistake slips my attention.  8.我没有时间把这一话题说完。_8. Time fails me to finish the topic.  9. 沿着草地走上几步，我就来到一个豪华的大宾馆前。_9. A few steps across the lawn brought me to a large, splendid hotel.10.想到不久就要见到她的儿子，她心中感到十分快乐。_10.The thought of seeing her son very soon filled her heart with great happiness. 三、“无灵主语”一句多译。1. 一想到他的母亲便使他吃不下饭。(appetite)He thought of his mother and didnt want to eat.The thought of his mother made him lose his appetite.The thought of his mother led to his loss of appetite.2. 看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。At the sight of the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy.Seeing the helicopter, Jane beamed with wild joy.The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, Jane's face lit up with delight.3.当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。Knowing the result of the test, she felt a surge of excitement.Knowing the result of the test, she was overcome with excitement.When she knew the result of the test, she felt thrilled.When she knew the result of the test, her eyes twinkled with excitement.When she knew the result of the test, her heart was pounding with wild joy.When she knew the result of the test, a wild excitement took hold of her.4. Sam感到非常生气。Sam felt very angry.Boiling with rage, Sam shook his fist at me.Filled with fury, Sam was unable to utter a single word.Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing with anger.Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.四、划出下列短文中的“无灵主语”。However, finding it wasnt so easy. The sick pet was black with a white spot on the nose, which was uniquely uncommon. Her attempt to find nearby in vain, a flush of disappointment swept over April. However, at the thought of the girls misty eyes, April continuously went to extraordinary lengths to find a matching pig. Fortunately, her persistent efforts paid off. In a store 8 kilometers away from her clinic, she found an identical pig. Hardly had she returned to the clinic when she called the girl, “Honey, good news for you. Dorothy has pulled through and you can take her home!” On hearing the news, the girl hurried to the pet store with her grandmother.However, finding it wasnt so easy. The sick pet was black with a white spot on the nose, which was uniquely uncommon. Her attempt to find nearby in vain, a flush of disappointment swept over April. However, at the thought of the girls misty eyes, April continuously went to extraordinary lengths to find a matching pig. Fortunately, her persistent efforts paid off. In a store 8 kilometers away from her clinic, she found an identical pig. Hardly had she returned to the clinic when she called the girl, “Honey, good news for you. Dorothy has pulled through and you can take her home!” On hearing the news, the girl hurried to the pet store with her grandmother.五、片段训练把划线句子改成无灵主语句式At that moment, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first. Jenny made her way to the platform with full confidence. (1) She began to talk like a flash flood. "How could she make it? We've never seen Jenny give so terrific a speech." (2) The whole class whispered to each other and even Miss Walker nodded with approval. (3) Immediately Jenny finished her speech, the class clapped for her. Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth.1. _2. _3. _1. Words began to flood out of her. 2. Whispers went around the classroom, and even Miss Walker nodded with approval. 3. Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class. 五、最新模拟试题演练Test 1（2023上·河南南阳·高三统考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。April has been a vet(兽医) for many years. Throughout her practice, there have been many unusual cases. Some were quite sad and some were even funny. But most of all she remembered one time on a rainy day a little girl came to her with her little guinea pig(豚鼠).She was in tears and asked April to save her beloved pet. “This is my only friend. I really love my Dorothy,” the girl said. April examined the animal and realized that it was very ill. The pig looked young. Probably, it was already sick when it was sold to the girl. The vet saw many childrens tears, and each time she felt awful. But she always found strength to say that she couldnt save the pet.However, this time she looked at the girl and couldnt say anything. April saw how simply the girl was dressed and thought that her family didnt make a lot of money. Therefore, the pig wasn't just a pet for her, but a real treasure. “Tell me your phone number, so I can call you after the operation,” April said. “Ill give you my grandmothers phone number, because I live with her. My parents were gone. Grandma said that they had gone somewhere far and for a long time. By the way, they gave me the pig before leaving,” the girl said. April wrote down the number, and when the girl left the clinic, she burst into tears. She realized her parents had died and the girl didn't know the truth yet. How could she tell her that her guinea pig was going to die? April looked at the animal helplessly and wondered what she could do. Suddenly she came up with an idea. But before doing it she put the guinea pig to sleep, and went to the nearest pet store during lunchtime. She wanted to buy exactly the same guinea pig and give it to the girl.注意：1. 续写词数应为 150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。However, finding it wasn't so easy._Her grandmother understood everything, but the girl didn't notice the switch. _【答案】However, finding it wasnt so easy. The sick pet was black with a white spot on the nose, which was uniquely uncommon. Her attempt to find nearby in vain, a flush of disappointment swept over April. However, at the thought of the girls misty eyes, April continuously went to extraordinary lengths to find a matching pig. Fortunately, her persistent efforts paid off. In a store 8 kilometers away from her clinic, she found an identical pig. Hardly had she returned to the clinic when she called the girl, “Honey, good news for you. Dorothy has pulled through and you can take her home!” On hearing the news, the girl hurried to the pet store with her grandmother.Her grandmother understood everything, but the girl didnt notice the switch. Eyes twinkling with excitement, tears of joy streamed down her cheeks. Meanwhile, grandma directed a meaningful look at April, a great sense of gratitude flowing in her aged eyes, saying tearfully, “My dear doctor, youve really saved Dorothy and also protected her owners sunshine.” With her hands held tightly by grandma, April truly realized a tiny gesture of kindness may brighten up someone's life. Roses given, fragrance in hand. With her heart lightening up with happiness, April was determined to keep kindness alive in her clinic and guard everyones “Dorothy”.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了一位兽医April多年来的一次特殊经历。在她的执业生涯中，有许多不寻常的病例，有些令人伤心，有些甚至很有趣。但最让她难忘的是在一个雨天，一个小女孩带着她的小豚鼠来找她。April看到女孩朴素的穿着，想到她的家庭可能不富裕。因此，这只豚鼠对她来说不仅仅是宠物，而是真正的珍宝。她如何告诉她她的豚鼠即将死去呢？April无助地看着这只动物，想知道她能做些什么。突然，她想到了一个主意。但在这之前，她让豚鼠入睡，并在午餐时间去了最近的宠物店。她想买一只完全一样的豚鼠，并送给女孩的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“然而，找到它并不容易。”可知，第一段可描写April经过一番努力终于找到了一个一模一样的豚鼠，并告诉了小女孩这个好消息。由第二段首句内容“她的祖母什么都明白，但女孩没有注意到这个换了。”可知，第二段可描写小女孩非常开心，没有发现那不是原来的豚鼠，她的祖母很感激April。2.续写线索：不容易白点寻找打电话兴奋感激紧握双手感悟3.词汇激活行为类寻找：find/search/pursue/seek尝试：attempt/endeavor/strive/explore保护：protect/safeguard/defend情绪类失望：disappointment/despair/discouragement/dismay激动：excitement/thrill/ecstasy/euphoria【点睛】高分句型1. The sick pet was b