【课件】读后续写亲情妈妈的雨衣 课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习写作专项.pptx
Continuation Writing【个人成长】妈妈雨天骑车接我放学 When school was over,the day was fading and it started to drizzle(毛毛雨).I stood at the school gate,with a loaded backpack on my shoulders.It was Friday again:a weekend of joy with unlimited sleeping hours and dinner courses specially made to my taste,a weekend at home.I waved goodbye to my friends as they jumped into their fathers warm and comfortable cars.Curiously,this gave rise to a disturbing feeling in me.It was not exactly what they called jealousy,but something like dismay(沮丧).I knew all I could expect was an old bike Mom would ride along on,with the badly-oiled chain creaking(嘎吱作响)against the wheel to announce her arrival.点题点题 Every Friday when Mom came to pick me up for the weekend,it was a moment full of great expectation and great unease.I always felt my face burning as we rode our way in and out of the numerous cars and saw my friends faces sticking out of the car windows.It was like stepping into a ballroom with beautifully dressed ladies and finding yourself in a smelly T-shirt.To tell you the truth,Mom is quite a headache once in a while.She just looks a homely middle-aged housewife.Being a practitioner of DIY,she knits most of my sweaters,chiefly in old styles.Whenever caught by some curious classmates asking what brand my sweaters are,Id force a smile and reply in a half joking manner:homemade.I couldnt remember when I started to find her such an embarrassment.As a little boy,I relied on her so much.She had been working at home,cooking in the kitchen,knitting by the lamp or riding across town to buy me a book I badly needed.It had always been much fun riding with mom.But just now there seemed to be something standing between us,something that made her so strange to me and me to her.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Today she showed up in a raincoat.Mom tried to cover me with the back of the raincoat again as a storm set in.这篇文章讲述在同学家长众多的汽车中间，我的妈妈雨天骑车接我放学。曾经，和妈妈一起骑车对我来说是一件开心快乐的事情。而如今，这让我有点尴尬难堪。我和妈妈中间不再亲密无间，我们中间似乎有些陌生，有点隔阂。那这段雨中回家之路该如何是好呢？01问题导读问题导读1.从文章里对妈妈的描述来看，妈妈是一个什么样的人？2.我小时候对妈妈是什么样的情感态度？现在又是怎么样的？这样的对比描写对下文续写有什么帮助？3.从第二段开头句可以推断出第一段妈妈做了什么动作？我对此有什么样的反应？4.这篇文章的主旨想要表达什么？1.从文章里对妈妈的描述来看，妈妈是一个什么样的人？从文章里对妈妈的描述来看，妈妈是一个什么样的人？2.我小时候对妈妈是什么样的情感态度？现在又是怎么样的？这样的对我小时候对妈妈是什么样的情感态度？现在又是怎么样的？这样的对比描写对下文续写有什么帮助？比描写对下文续写有什么帮助？从文章的这些描写“dinner courses specially made to my taste、Being a practitioner of DIY,she knits most of my sweaters,chiefly in old styles、She had been working at home,cooking in the kitchen,knitting by the lamp or riding across town to buy me a book I badly needed”可以看出妈妈是一个勤劳善良能干的妈妈，并且十分爱我。我小时候很依赖妈妈，和她一起骑车很开心(As a little boy,I relied on her so much,It had always been much fun riding with mom)。现在，我觉得妈妈骑车接我，我觉得让我很尴尬，我们之间变得有点陌生，有点隔阂(But just now there seemed to be something standing between us,something that made her so strange to me and me to her.)。这样的对比描写可以推断出续写情节里，我对妈妈的冷漠和隔阂会发生转变。3.从第二段开头句可以推断出第一段妈妈做了什么动作？我对此有什么从第二段开头句可以推断出第一段妈妈做了什么动作？我对此有什么样的反应？样的反应？4.这篇文章的主旨想要表达什么？这篇文章的主旨想要表达什么？从第二段开头句可以推断出第一段妈妈给我盖过一次雨衣，可能我拒绝了她的好意。这篇文章续写结尾是我不再觉得妈妈骑车接我会让我尴尬丢脸。我对妈妈的冷漠，隔阂会因为妈妈对我的爱而改变。Todaysheshowedupinaraincoat.As she was pedaling in my direction,a feeling of embarrassment bubbled up inside me.Soon,Mom,with the raindrops dripping from her bangs,came to a stop,asking anxiously,“Waiting for a long time?”Making no reply,I stepped forward,jumping onto the backseat.Before Mom could cover me with the back of her raincoat,I simply threw it aside and complained,“Shall we go now?”Obviously,my coldness left Mom confused.For a split second停顿了一秒,a deadly silence hung over us and I ducked my head to avoid any eye contact with her.(95w)Momtriedtocovermewiththebackoftheraincoatagainasastormsetin.She whispered,“Its raining heavily”and then mounted the bike.Seeing her bending forward and pedaling up a slope with all her might用尽全力蹬上斜坡,I instantly felt a pang of guilt 内疚的感觉.With the raindrops beating against the raincoat,I felt as if they were slapping my face打脸.My coldness and ignorance turned a precious ride into a torture折磨.Just then,Mom turned back,“Are you cold?We will be home soon.”It was at the moment that I came to realize love comes in various forms and there is nothing to be ashamed of.(93w)下水文下水文:4、亲情主题句、亲情主题句 Family and friends are hidden treasures.Family,a wonderful shelter and a 24-hour harbor,is always there for us.Family love is the greatest gift in life.Family is to us what harbor is to ships.(家庭之于我们就像港口之于船只)“Family is a life jacket in the stormy sea of life.”J.K.RowlingFamilies are the compass that guides us.Family:where life begins and love never ends.Todaysheshowedupinaraincoat.Once she saw me,Mom called my name excitedly.Almost everybody present looked in her direction.I drooped my head and fixed my stare on the middle of the road,sweat forming on my forehead.When she tried to cover me with the back of her raincoat,I simply threw it aside.In silence,shot her a blaming glance and threw my backpack heavily into the front basket of the bike.Without a single word,I jumped onto the backseat.(87w)Momtriedtocovermewiththebackoftheraincoatagainasastormsetin.Reluctantly,I pulled it over.With the wind roaring angrily and the raincoat dancing,it felt warm and secure inside.Mom bent forward and pedaled with all her strength.I started to feel guilty of my coldness,tears welling up in my eyes.Quietly,I slipped my hands around Moms waist and gently pressed my face against her back.In the crying wind and pout ring rain,I felt my misunderstanding of Mom melt away.(92w)参考范文参考范文:参考范文参考范文:1.朝某人的方向看过去：2.我低下头，盯着路面看，汗水在额头冒出来：3.默默地，沉默地：4.我责备地看了某人一眼：5.没有说一句话，我跳上自行车后座：6.不情愿地：lookinonesdirectionIdroopedmyhead,fixedmystareonthemiddleoftheroad,sweatingformingonmyforehead.insilenceshootsbablamingglanceWithoutasingleword,Ijumpedontothebackseat.reluctantly参考范文参考范文:7.外面风在咆哮，雨衣再抖动，雨衣里面感到温暖安全：8.妈妈弯着腰，用尽全力骑车。9.我为自己的冷漠感到愧疚，泪水涌出。10.我把手放在妈妈的腰上，把脸轻轻地贴在她的后背上。11.在倾盆大雨中，我对妈妈的误解消逝了。Withthewindroaringangrilyandtheraincoatdancing,itfeltwarmandsecureinside.Mombentforwardandpedaledwithallherstrength.Istartedtofeelguiltyofmycoldness,tearswellingupinmyeyes.Quietly,IslippedmyhandsaroundMomswaistandgentlypressedmyfaceagainstherback.Inthecryingwindandpouringrain,IfeltmymisunderstandingofMommeltaway.
