读后续写How to show fear 课件-2024届高三英语写作专项.pptx

How to show fearin continuation writing How to show “fear”1.描写心理感受 2.面部表情 3.肢体动作 4.心理活动 （想什么）5.环境描写一、Expressions For the feeling of “fear”n.:great/extreme fear terror/horror 恐惧，惊恐 panic 恐慌（不知所措）alarm 惊慌 vt.:terrify 使恐惧/惊恐adj.:panicky 恐慌的alarmed 惊慌的 scared/frightened害怕的 terrified 恐惧的fear/fright 害怕 scare/frighten使.害怕 panic（vi.&vt.）(使）恐慌alarm 惊慌 great/extreme feargreat/extreme fear Expressions For“fear”n.:fear/fright 害怕;terror/horror 恐惧，惊恐;panic 恐慌;alarm vt.:scare/frighten;terrify;panic(vi.&vt.);alarm 惊慌 adj.:scared/frightened;terrified;panicky;alarmed Choose the proper words to fill in the blanks:1.At the sight of the giant grey bear,I felt _.2.At the sight of the giant grey bear,a wave of _ flooded over me.scared/frightened/terrified/panickyfear/fright/terror/horror “无灵”主语句 A wave of terror +flooded over +me.“无灵”主语句 描写心理的高级句式 “无灵”主语 +有灵动词 +sb无生命的情感名词）（）“无灵”主语句 “某人感到”burst wave A flood of+rush sense/feeling hint/trace(一丝）情感状态名词+sb 有灵动词 ）（）慢慢产生_ 掠过_ 席卷_ 抓住,控制_ 淹没_ 吞噬_+涨涌_+压倒_ creep uponpass/run through sweep over seize flood over swallow well up overwhelm/overcome“一阵/一种向某人袭来”用“无灵”主语句，续写描述感受的句子：当她意识到她在森林里迷路时，Realizing she got lost in the forest,_ a wave/rush.of panic/terror/fright/fear seized/swept over her.she was seized/swept over by a wave/rush.of panic/terror/fright/fear.二、Expressions For“physical reactions 肢体反应”吓呆了 freeze scream couldnt help crying throat tighten(vi.)cover ones eyes with ones hands ones legs feel weak ones heart was pounding/beating violently shiver/tremble sbs palms sweat(vi)/be in a cold sweat(n.)喉咙发紧 sb eyes/mouth be wide open.Various ways to combine the feeling and the physical reactions1.因为恐惧，呆住了2.惊恐地尖叫 1.肢体动作+with+情感n.（原因：得）3.太害怕了，以至于一动也不敢动。肢体动作+in+情感n.（状态：地）I froze with terror/horror.I screamed in terror/horror.I was too scared to move an inch.I was so scared that I dared not move an inch.2.too.to;sothat从句 4.那条狗突然跳出来冲向我，我吓呆了，一动也不敢动。When that dog jumped out at me,I froze with terror,too scared to move an inch/,so scared that I dared not move an inch.3.主句肢体动作，too.to/sothat从句（补充）5.A strong sense of horror seized me.I trembled all over and my palms were sweating.4.情感 和动作 分开造句：无灵主语句。+肢体动作句。（多个肢体动作用并列句）6.Because I was overwhelmed with a strong sense of horror,I held the rope tightly.(请改用非谓语做状语升级句子）Overwhelmed with a strong sense of horror,I held the rope tightly.5.情感adj.,+主句（肢体动作，主语必须是人）7.请给上句加多一个肢体动作：心砰砰地跳。Overwhelmed with a strong sense of horror,I held the rope tightly，with my heart pounding violently.5.情感adj.,+主句（肢体动作，主语必须是人）,+with 复合结构.Overwhelmed with a strong sense of horror,I held the rope tightly，with my heart pounding violently.6.情感adj.,+主句（肢体动作，主语必须是人）,+独立主格结构。独立主格结构？：下面哪题可以用非谓语合并两分句？1.I held the rope tightly.I shouted,“Help!Help!”2.I held the rope tightly.My heart was pounding violently.I held the rope tightly,shouting“help！Help！”（能用非谓语做状语的前提是：两句的主语要一致）那主语不一致就不可以用非谓语了吗？I held the rope tightly,_ pounding violently.可以，在非谓语前加上自己的主语。my heart加上自己独立的主语，这样的非谓语做状语，叫独立主格结构。1.When spring comes,everything will come back to life.2.Because all the work was finished,we can go home now.Spring _(come),everything will come back to ingAll the work _(finish),we can go home now.finished(独立主格结构用ing 还是done，取决于它前面那个“独立主语”)1.看到一头大棕熊，我害怕极了，心脏砰砰狂跳,双腿发软。2.害怕极了，我的喉咙发紧，手心出汗。(用with 复合结构，或独立主格结构）3.她脸色发白，眼里满是恐惧。(用with 复合结构，或独立主格结构）4.她吓得浑身发抖。Let s practice!1.看到一头大棕熊，我害怕极了，心脏砰砰狂跳,双腿发软。Atthe sight of a giant brown bear，I was swept over by terror.My heart was pounding violently and my legs felt weak.2.害怕极了，我的喉咙发紧，手心出汗。(用with 复合结构，或独立主格结构）3.她脸色发白，眼里满是恐惧。(用with 复合结构，或独立主格结构）Her face turned pale,(with)her eyes filled with terror.4.她吓得浑身发抖。She shivered/trembled all over with terror/fear/fright.Let s practice!Overwhelmed with terror,I felt my throat tighten,(with)my palms sweating.三、What will you say and think when you are frightened?1.我大脑一片空白，只想离开这个恐怖的地方。2.他问自己/喃喃说：“我该怎么办？我该怎么办？”3.她大声喊：“救命！救命！”/她大声呼救。4.她祈祷/希望直升机helicopter会再一次回来。5.她祈求好运。My brain went blank.I just wanted to leave this horrible place.He asked himself/murmured,“What should I do?What should I do?”She shouted/cried,“Help!Help!”/She shouted for help.She prayed/hoped that the helicopter would come back again.She prayed for good luck/fortune.“心理活动和语言描写”以伴随状语，加入之前的句式里。被火震惊到了，Lucy僵住了几秒钟，然后拼命冲向他们的营地，同时大喊救命。Shocked by the flames,Lucy froze for a few seconds,and then desperately dashed to their camp,shouting for help in the meantime.四、What is atmosphere for“fear”？1.除了森林，她什么都看不到。2.黑暗笼罩森林。3.夜幕降临（fall /settle in），风在她的四周可怕地怒吼着。4.天空乌云密布。5.刺骨的（biting）寒风咆哮，像锋利的小刀一样割着我的脸。6.大雨倾盆，溪水上涨，狂风咆哮，撞击着窗户。7.她听到狼的嚎叫声。She could see nothing,but the forest.Darkness covered/ruled the forest.The night fell/settled in,and the wind howled around her.The sky was covered with dark clouds.The biting wind was howling,cutting my face like a sharp knife.The rain poured down,the streams rose,and the wind howled,hitting the window.环境描写不仅起到烘托人物心情，渲染气氛的作用，还能推动情节的发展。She heard the howling of wolves.结合环境描写，肢体动作，神态，心理活动和语言，表现一个人在森林迷路过程中可能出现状况和恐惧。环顾四周，除了森林，她什么都看不到。意识到自己迷路了，她感到十分害怕，双腿发软。她继续往前走，祈祷着好运。可两个小时后，夜幕开始降临，很快，黑暗笼罩森林。听到狼的嚎叫声，她吓得浑身颤抖，想着自己可能会死在这里。Looking around，she could see nothing,but the forest.Realizing she got lost in the forest,she was swept over by a rush of fright，（with)her legs feeling weak.She kept walking,praying for good fortune.However,two hours later,the night began to fall.Not long after that,/Soon,darkness covered/ruled the forest.Hearing the howling of wolves,she shivered with terror,thinking she might die in the forest.当她看不见弟弟的时候,她感到十分惊慌。When she lost sight of her brother,1.(a wave of)panic seized /overwhelmed/overcome her.2.she was seized by/overwhelmed with/overcome with(a wave of)panic.她十分生气，一把抓起桌上的油画，把它撕成碎片。1.She was overwhelmed with anger,and she grabbed the painting on the table and tore it into pieces.2.She was so overwhelmed with anger that she grabbed the painting on the table and tore it into pieces.3.Overwhelmed with anger（原因状语/伴随状语）,she grabbed the painting on the table and tore it into pieces.看到台下的观众，她非常紧张，头脑一片空白。1.Seeing the audience below the stage,a burst of nervousness swept over her her mind went blank.（错）2.Seeing the audience below the stage,she was swept over by/was overwhelmed with a burst of nervousness.3.At the sight of the audience below,she was so overwhelmed with nervousness that her mind went blank.他十分沮丧，低下头，眼里满是泪水。2.He was so overwhelmed with frustration that he.1.Overwhelmed with frustration,he lowered his head,with his eyes full of/filled with tears.全用过去时态：1.激动地鼓掌：2.激动得发狂：3.高兴得挥舞双手：4.他既惊讶又失望：5.雷鸣般的掌声从群众中爆发出来：6.他想出一个主意：clapped with excitement went wild with excitement waved ones hands with great joy He felt a mixture of surprise and disappointment 1.He came up with an idea.2.An idea occurred to him.Thunderous applause burst out from the crowd.Expressions For“physical reactions 肢体反应”吓呆了 be frozen with fear.etc scream in terror couldnt help crying throat tighten(vt.)cover ones eyes with ones hands ones legs feel weak ones heart was pounding/beating violently shake/tremble sbs hands sweat/be in a cold sweat 1.When that dog jumped out at me,I was frozen with terror,too scared to move an inch.那条狗突然跳出来冲向我，我吓呆了，一动也不敢动。How to combine“physical reactions and emotion”with+情感n，too.to.,情感adj.短语做伴随状语2.I was seized/overcome by a strong sense of horror.I trembled all over and my palms were sweating.我害怕极了我害怕极了,浑身发抖浑身发抖,手心都出汗了。手心都出汗了。并列句3.He panicked,covered his eyes with his hands and screamed loudly in fright/fear/terror.他惊慌失措他惊慌失措,用手蒙住眼睛用手蒙住眼睛,惊恐得大声尖叫。惊恐得大声尖叫。并列谓语（动作链）4.He was thrown into panic,his hands shaking with fear.+独立主格结构5.Overwhelmed by a strong sense of horror,I held the rope tightly,my heat pounding violently.句首放情感adj.，+主句（肢体动作）仿写：1.When that dog jumped out at me,I was frozen with terror,too scared to move an inch.2.I was seized/overcome by a strong sense of horror.I trembled all over and my palms were sweating.3.He was thrown into panic,his hands shaking with fear.4.Overwhelmed by a strong sense of horror,I held the rope tightly,my heat pounding violently.1.看到一头大棕熊，我吓呆了，一动不敢动。2.At the sight of a giant brown bear,我害怕极了，心脏砰砰狂跳,双腿发软。3.At the sight of a giant brown bear,我一下子慌了，手心出汗(（独立主格）4.害怕极了，我的喉咙发紧，双腿发软。Atthe sight of a giant brownbear，I was frozen with terror,too scared to move an inch.I was seized by terror.My heart was pounding violently and my legs felt weak.I was thrown into panic,my palms sweating.with+情感n，too.to.,情感adj.短语做伴随状语（独立主格）（并列句）句首放情感adj.，+主句（肢体动作）Overhelmed/Overcome/Seized by a strong sense of terror,my throat tightened,my legs feeling weak.turn pale Expressions For“facial facial expression”eyes full of/filled with terror 1.看到一头大棕熊，她脸色发白，眼里满是恐惧。（with 复合结构）Atthe sight of a giant brownbear，her face turned pale,with his eyes filled with terror.Expressions For“Psychological activity”心理活动描写”1.我大脑一片空白，只想离开这个恐怖的地方。2.去那里的路上我有一种毛骨悚然的感觉,3.他问自己：“我该怎么办？我该怎么办？”My brain went blank.I just wanted to leave this horrible place.I got a real creepy feeling on the way there.He asked himself,“What should I do?What should I do?”1.除了森林，她什么都看不到。2.黑暗笼罩森林。How to describe the atmosphere.She could see nothing,but the forest.Darkness covered/ruled the forest.衬托人物，渲染气氛Shocked,Grady froze for a few seconds,and then desperately dashed to their camp,shouting for help in the meantime.but the wind had fanned the flames of the fire towards our tent.Frightened by the flames,I ran out of the tent immediately.She stood there shocked with her eyes wide open=She was shocked and stood there,and her.Exhaustedandcold,thethoughtthatwemightdieExhaustedandcold,thethoughtthatwemightdiehereflashedacrossmymind,whichmadehereflashedacrossmymind,whichmademequiverwithanuncontrollablemequiverwithanuncontrollableterror/horror/fright(terror/horror/fright(难以控制地发抖难以控制地发抖).).4.Lookingatthevastsea,Ifeltasenseof4.Lookingatthevastsea,Ifeltasenseoffearsurgingthroughmywholebody.(fearsurgingthroughmywholebody.(在身体涌动在身体涌动)Astimetickedby,fearcreptuponmyheart(Astimetickedby,fearcreptuponmyheart(爬上我爬上我心头心头)andIcouldhardlytellhowlongI)andIcouldhardlytellhowlongIcouldploughon(couldploughon(前行前行).).6.Thethoughtofhopelessnesssentshiversdown6.Thethoughtofhopelessnesssentshiversdownmyspine(myspine(让我后脊背发凉让我后脊背发凉).).TearsoffrustrationandhorrorgushingfrommyTearsoffrustrationandhorrorgushingfrommyeyes,IfeltIhadsunkintohopelessness.eyes,IfeltIhadsunkintohopelessness.11.Asenseofterrorsweepingthroughmybody,I11.Asenseofterrorsweepingthroughmybody,Ishoutedinpanic,“Help!Help!”shoutedinpanic,“Help!Help!”展开想象：结合环境描写，肢体动作，神态和心理活动，尝试表现一个人在森林迷路过程中可能出现状况和恐惧。terrified“无灵”主语句 “某人感到”burst wave A flood of+rush sense/feeling hint/trace(一丝）情感状态名词+sb 有灵动词 ）（）慢慢产生_ 掠过_ 席卷_ 抓住,控制_ 淹没_ 吞噬_+涨涌_+压倒_ creep uponpass/run through sweep over seize flood over swallow well up overwhelm/overcome“一阵/一种向某人袭来”用“无灵”主语句，翻译句子:当她以为自己把票丢了时，她着实惊慌起。_at the thought that she had lost the tickets.A wave/rush.of panic seized/swept over her“无灵”主语句 burst wave A flood of+rush hint/trace(一丝）情感状态名词+sb 有灵动词 ）（）掠过_ 席卷_ 突然侵袭_ 淹没_ 吞噬_压倒 _ pass/run through sweep over seize flood over swallow overwhelm/overcome“一阵/一种向某人袭来”情感名词：自豪_ 开心_ 悲伤_ 后悔_ 生气_ 害怕_ 伤心_ 恐慌_ 紧张_ 尴尬_ 好奇_ 兴奋，激动_ 绝望_ 沮丧_ 感激_ sorrow joy/happiness prideregret anger fear/fright/terror sadness panic nervousness embarrassment curiosity excitement despair frustration gratitude当她看不见弟弟的时候,她感到十分惊慌。When she lost sight of her brother,1.(a wave of)panic seized /overwhelmed/overcome her.2.she was seized by/overwhelmed with/overcome with(a wave of)panic.她十分生气，一把抓起桌上的油画，把它撕成碎片。1.She was overwhelmed with anger,and she grabbed the painting on the table and tore it into pieces.2.She was so overwhelmed with anger that she grabbed the painting on the table and tore it into pieces.3.Overwhelmed with anger（原因状语/伴随状语）,she grabbed the painting on the table and tore it into pieces.看到台下的观众，她非常紧张，头脑一片空白。1.Seeing the audience below the stage,a burst of nervousness swept over her her mind went blank.（错）2.Seeing the audience below the stage,she was swept over by/was overwhelmed with a burst of nervousness.3.At the sight of the audience below,she was so overwhelmed with nervousness that her mind went blank.他十分沮丧，低下头，眼里满是泪水。2.He was so overwhelmed with frustration that he.1.Overwhelmed with frustration,he lowered his head,with his eyes full of/filled with tears.