高中英语2024届高考作文亮点结构讲解（共三大类）.doc

高考英语作文亮点结构一、with+n/with复合结构的灵活运用1.With millions of people likely to take on DIY projects over that coming weeks, new research shows that more than half of people are planning to make the most of the long, warm summer days to get jobs done.（ with+n.+adj在本句子中表示“有”)在未来几周，会有数百万人可能进行DIY项目，新的研究表明，超过一半的人计划充分利用漫长、温暖的夏天来完成工作。2.The western half of the US was full of grizzlies when Europeans came, with a rough number of 50,000 or more living alongside Native Americans.（ with+n.+doing 在本句当中表示“有”)当欧洲人来到美国时，美国西部地区到处都是灰熊，大约有5万只或更多的灰熊生活在印第安人身边。3.With the right combination of animals and plants, he figured, maybe he could clean up waste the way nature did.（ with+n.在本句当中表示原因)他认为，有了正确的动植物组合，也许他就可以像大自然一样清理垃圾。4.As cities balloon with growth, access to nature for people living in urban areas is becoming harder to find. （ with+n.在本句当中表示原因)随着城市的迅速发展，生活在城市地区的人们越来越难以接近自然。5.The kids literally come to school with bags of snacks and large bottles of soft drinks孩子们真的带着一袋袋零食和大瓶软饮料来学校.（ with+n.在本句当中表示方式)6.It was full of ideas that were new to me, so I spent the summer with my head in and out of that book.（ with+n.+介词短语在本句当中表示方式 )书中充满了对我来说很新鲜的想法，所以整个夏天我都在那本书里进进出出。7.The position enabled us to look over the lake with the sunset in the background.（ with+n.+介词短语在本句当中作定语）这个位置使我们能够俯瞰到以日落为背景的湖面。8.She likes sleeping with the window open.（ with+n.+adj.在本句当中表示 方式)她喜欢开着窗睡觉9.With over 2,500 bikes stored in our five rental shops at strategic locations, we make sure there is always a bike available for you.（ with+n.+done 在本句当中表示原因)因为有2500多辆自行车已经被存放在了位于战略位置的五家租赁商店中，我们确保随时为您提供自行车。10.With many creative ideas filling my mind, I firmly believe I can be qualified for the position as a chief editor.（ with+n.+doing 在本句当中表示原因)随着很多有创意的想法填充我的头脑，我坚信我能胜任主编这项工作。11.With a lot of homework to do, I will not go to your party.（ with+n.+to do 在本句当中表示原因)因为有很多作业要做，我不会去参加你的聚会。注意9、10、11句的区别。请仔细品出以下例句的区别：With the boy leading the way，we found the village easily.（小男孩与带路是主动关系）有那个男孩带路，我们很容易就找到了那个村庄。With the boy to lead the way，we will find the house easily tomorrow.（小男孩将带路）有这个男孩将要带路，我们明天会很容易找到那所房子的。With a lot of problems to settle, the manager is very busy.(经理还没有解决问题，要去解决) 经理有许多问题要去解决，所以他很忙。With a lot of problems settled, the manager feels relaxed. (问题已经解决)解决了许多问题后，经理感到很轻松【汉译英翻译】1.他静静地躺在草地上，闭着眼睛，思绪万千。2.他忐忑不安地走上了讲台。3.Ellis呆在那，嘴巴张得大大的。4.因为灯灭了，我们无法继续学习了。5.真遗憾，那位伟大的作家去世了，工作还没完成。6.因为有许多任务要完成，我想我今晚不能去听音乐会了。7.随着期中考试的临近，所有的学生都在不遗余力地准备。【参考答案】1.He lay on the grass quietly, with his eyes closed and his mind wandering.2.He stepped on the platform with butterflies in his stomach.3.Ellis was stunned there, with the mouth widely open.4.With the lights off, we could not go on with our study.5.It was a pity that the greater writer died with his work unfinished.6.With a lot of tasks to finish, I dont think I can go to the concert tonight.7.With the mid-term examination approaching, all the students are sparing no effort to prepare for it.二、非谓语动词作定语1.Before there was the written word, there was the language of dance.（过去分词作前置定语,表被动）在文字出现之前，就有了舞蹈语言2.Also, the changing world of healthcare means hell always be learning new things and facing exciting challenges.（现在分词作前置定语表进行或者表达“令人.”）此外，不断变化的医疗保健世界意味着他将永远学习新事物并面临令人兴奋的挑战。3.School students presented a series of extraordinary performances showcasing immense talent within our fine arts community.(现在分词作后置定语，和所修饰的名词之间是主动关系，替换了定语从句，显得更简洁）学校的学生们进行了一系列非凡的表演，这些表演展示了我们美术界的巨大才能。4.Volunteers came with carloads of donated clothing and toys. (过去分词作前置定语，和所修饰的名词之间是被动关系，替换了定语从句，显得更简洁）志愿者们带着几卡车捐赠的衣服和玩具来了。5.Teenagers climbed dozens of flights of stairs to deliver water and food to elderly people trapped in powerless high-rise buildings.(过去分词作后置定语，和所修饰的名词之间是被动关系，替换了定语从句，显得更简洁）十几岁的孩子爬上几十层楼梯，给被困在无力的高层建筑里的老人送水和食物。6.The bridge to be built next month is of great significance.(不定式的被动语态作后置定语表将来，表被动）下个月要建的那座桥意义重大。7.The system has the ability to run more than one program at the same time.(不定式修饰名词ability)该系统能够同时运行一个以上的程序。温馨提示：1.后面可以用不定式作定语来修饰的常用名词有 ability，capability, opportunity, chance, potential, plan, way， attempt，effort, hope, wish，right 等）2.当中心词被序数词，形容词最高级，the only， the very，the last，the next 等修饰时Tom was the first person to come here.【汉译英】1.上周做的调查表明，有80%的同学选择着这周末去远足。2.这个展览会将在下周五举行，请你为它写个简介好吗？3.那个正在学走路的孩子太萌了。4.经常参加社区活动，你就会提高和别人沟通的能力。5.他是唯一一个获得机会去那所顶尖名校做研究的学生。【参考答案】1.The survey conducted last week shows that 80% of the students prefer to go hiking at this weekend.2.Would you please write a brief introduction to the exhibition to be held next Friday?3.The baby learning to walk is cute.4.Get involved in community activities and you will enhance the ability to communicate with others.5.He is the only person to gain the opportunity to do some research in that top university.三、非谓语作状语替代状语从句不定式作状语：1.I came here to see you(目的)2.We were very excited to hear the news(原因)（不定式表原因往往放在表达心里感受的词后面）3.He hurried to the school only to find nobody there(不定式表示出乎意外的结果，前面往往会有only)分词作状语1.Being a student, I must study hard.（原因）2.（While）crossing the street, be careful.（时间）3.Given a chance, I can surprise the world.(条件)4.Having been told many times, he still repeated the same mistake.让步5.The teacher entered the lab, followed by the students.伴随状语6.His parents died, leaving him an orphan.（表结果，主句里的原因导致的这个结果是意料中的）继续品味非谓语作状语的内涵与简洁1.Armed with a keen sense of smell and sharp night vision, they journey to find food after resting all day.（Armed with.过去分词作原因壮语，after resting.作时间状语，由于 rest这个动作也是主句的主语发出来的，所以用分词比用状语从句更简洁 ）因为有敏锐的嗅觉和敏锐的夜视能力，它们在休息了一整天后开始寻找食物。2.With less of their natural habitat remaining, the bats are forced to seek food closer to people, bringing them into contact with other threats.（表结果）随着自然栖息地的减少，蝙蝠被迫在离人类更近的地方寻找食物，这就使它们接触到其他威胁。3.For thousands of years, people have told fables to teach a lesson or to pass on wisdom.(表目的）几千年来，人们通过讲寓言来传授知识或传授智慧。4.Her fable begins, borrowing some familiar words from many age-old fables.(表方式）她的寓言开始了，借用了许多古老寓言中的一些熟悉的话。5.He exposed his sharp teeth, glaring at us .(表伴随）他露出锋利的牙齿，朝我们怒目而视。6.From then on, I made a decision to put a big jack on my big jeep, longing to help more like me who used to ask for help on the road to the best of my ability.(表原因）从那时起，我决定在我的大吉普车上放一个大千斤顶，渴望能帮助更多像我一样的人，在路上尽我最大的能力寻求帮助。【汉译英】1.现在，简感觉身体好多了，因此她开始沿着小溪走，希望这能把她带到湖边2.因为沮丧和无助，埃里克再也控制不住自己的情绪，哭了起来 3.简醒着躺在黑暗中，非常想和汤姆和她的家人在一起。4.这座山如此吸引人，使我们立刻爱上了它。5.汤姆去了办公室，却发现没人在那里6.虽然珍妮被单独留在家里，她一点也不害怕。7.简是个害羞的女孩，别人不跟她说话她从不说话。8.当被问到这样一个奇怪的问题时，他不知所措。【参考答案】1.Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.（表原因）2.Depressed and helpless, Eric couldn't control his emotion any longer and burst into tears.（表原因）3.Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.（表伴随）4.The mountain was so attractive, making us fall in love with it at once.（表结果）5.Tom went to the office, only to find nobody was there.（表出乎意外的结果）6.Left alone at home, Jenny didnt feel afraid at all. （表让步）7.Jane is a shy girl and she never speaks until spoken to.（表时间）8.(When) asked such a strange question, he was at a loss.（表时间）5