初中英语2024届中考复习热点话题作文讲解练习系列0518（共4篇）.doc

中考英语热点话题作文讲解练习（一）【写作任务】Show your changes是这周五英语活动课的讨论话题。假如你是九年级一班的王乐，请你根据所给提示写一篇英语演讲稿，与同学们分享自己的变化。写作要求:1.包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥；2.条理清晰，语句通顺，行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；3.不少于80词 （开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。【指点迷津】审题体裁：记叙文时态：一般过去时、一般现在时、现在完成时人称：第一人称小贴士：“苟日新，日日新，又日新！”生命，就是要向前，要不断变化、改变、成长、进步。点拨本篇习作要求我们以王乐的身份，讲述自己的变化。我们可以按照总分总的结构来完成。第一部分：用一句话陈述自己的变化；第二部分：将过去的自己和现在的自己进行比较。根据提示内容，可以从以下四个方面着手。第三部分：重申变化，与开头呼应，并说明这种变化对你的影响。谋篇布局【语料储备】Words & phrasesweigh change fat/ heavy thin/slim healthy/unhealthy brave outgoing activeconfident proud popularquiet silentshyused to make fun of laugh at control the weight put on medium build healthy lifestyle SentencesMy life has changed a lot since I used to be and .I was too shy to It was difficult for me to I started instead of On the one hand on the other hand Now, Im so brave that Im not afraid of Try to change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.Joining clubs is a good way to deal with shyness.Take action and try to change bravely.【自我展示】Good afternoon, everyone!Today Id like to share my own experience with you.We all completed an unusual task during the summer vacation.And I have changed a lot since then.In the past, I ate a lot of meat.As a result, my weight became 60 kilograms and I became a fat girl.Some of my classmates often laughed at me.So I used to keep silent and spend a lot of time staying alone in the library.To finish the homework and control my weight, I tried my best.On the one hand, I began to do more exercise, running for half an hour every morning.On the other hand, I developed healthy eating habits.Till now, I have lost 10 kilograms in weight.Now Im of medium build.How happy I am! Whats more, I am now a member of our school swimming team.I have become outgoing and confident.My life has become more interesting and colorful than before.（二）【写作任务】假如你是李辉，你所在的英文俱乐部正在举办“我与传统工艺有个约会”的主题活动，要求每位成员用英语介绍一种传统工艺或是一位传统匠人。请你根据下列提示，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍旗袍匠人梁玉华。写作要求：1.包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥；2.条理清晰，语句通顺，行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；3.不少于80词 （开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：career 事业；effort 努力【指点迷津】审题话题：传统文化时态：一般现在时、一般过去时人称：第三人称小贴士：传统手艺看似微小，却并未缺席每一次中华文化的演进；它们看似传统，却因手艺人的不懈改进而历久弥新。点拨该篇写作要求学生根据所给提示，写一篇短文来介绍旗袍匠人梁玉华。写作时，可将短文分成以下三个部分：第一部分：导入话题 ，引出要介绍的人物；第二部分：人物介绍，包括个人情况 （出生地、出生日期等） 和旗袍制作事业 （学艺过程及成就等）；第三部分：介绍该人物为保护和传承这份手艺所付出的努力。谋篇布局【语料储备】Words & phrases material step skill experience process complete include choose lifelong so far in danger try ones best keep alive die out set up pass down make a differenceSentences Born in ., Liang is known for making So far, she has been making qipao for years. Liang has years of experience in Its hard / not easy to To keep this art form alive, she Then she made it her lifelong career. Now Liang is worried about the future of the traditional art. She set up online courses to share her skills. She hopes her effort can help make a difference.【自我展示】Qipao is a kind of traditional Chinese dress for women.Nowadays, there are still some people who are excellent at making qipao.Liang Yuhua is one of them.Liang comes from Tianjin.Born in 1951, she has fifty years of experience in making qipao.She started to learn the art of making qipao at the age of 20.So far, it has been her lifelong career.It is not easy to make qipao.Liang has to take more than 200 steps to finish one, including choosing materials and cutting the cloth.These years, Liang has been spending much time teaching students how to make qipao, as she worries that qipao-making skills are in danger of dying out.To keep this traditional art form alive, she even gives lessons online to teach young people some basic skills.She believes her effort will help make a difference.（三）【写作任务】假如你是李辉，当你的美国网友Mike知道你的爱好是吹奏中国传统乐器埙时，他发来一封邮件，想要了解这种古老的乐器是如何被发明的。请你根据下列信息，给他回复一封邮件。写作要求：1.包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥；2.条理清晰，语句通顺，行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；3.不少于80词（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：hunting tool 狩猎工具；hollow 中空的【指点迷津】审题话题：发明与技术时态：一般过去时、一般现在时人称：第三人称小贴士：纵观历史，人们通过自己的想象力和创造力发明了很多事物。小到铅笔、橡皮、某一种乐器，大到火车、飞机甚至宇宙飞船，发明正在不断改变着我们的生活。点拨本篇【写作任务】要求介绍中国传统乐器埙的发明。根据导图提示可知，我们首先需要介绍这项发明的历史、灵感来源、原理和发明原因，其次应简单说明它的材质及形状。谋篇布局【语料储备】Words & phrases invent idea tool develop create stone rope throw widely musical instrument have a history of the invention of in ancient times tie .to . have relation to throw .at . have fun be used for daily life Sentences It has a history of more than / at least years. People got the idea from . was invented by It is said that the invention of .has relation to . Xun comes in different shapes, like . Xun was invented by people in ancient times for fun. People used stones, bones or clay to make xun. Necessity (需要) may be the mother of invention, but play is certainly the father.【自我展示】One possible version:Dear Mike,Xun is one of the oldest musical instruments in China.It has a history of at least 7,000 years.Let me tell you more about it.The invention of xun has relation to hunting.The idea came from a hunting tool.In ancient times, people often tied stones to the rope and threw them to hunt animals.Some of the stones were hollow.When they were thrown, they could make a special sound.According to this, people invented a kind of musical instrument for fun, which was widely known as xun.At first, people used materials like stones or bones to make xun.Soon it was common to see xun made of clay.Xun comes in different shapes, like an egg, a fish, a ball or a pear.Since youre so interested in it, Ill send you a clay one.Hope youll like it.Yours,Li Hui（四）【写作任务】There is a special tradition in the Netherlands.Parents drive their children into a forest and drop them off.The children have to find their way back home all by themselves.Its called “dropping (放生)”.Does this sound like a good idea or a bad idea?在英语活动课上，老师给出了以上这段文字，并要求大家就该话题进行讨论。请你根据下列提示，选择其中一方观点，写一篇发言稿，与同学们交流。写作要求：1.包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥；2.条理清晰，语句通顺，行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；3.不少于80词。参考词汇： attack 攻击【指点迷津】审题话题：生活与学习时态：一般现在时人称：第一人称、第三人称小贴士：家庭是我们的第一所学校，父母是我们的第一任老师。每对父母都有自己的教养方式。你的父母是在各方面都将你照顾得无微不至，还是既温和又权威地引导你成长呢？点拨该篇写作要求学生就荷兰家庭的“放生”现象发表自己的看法，属于议论文。题目给出了两方的观点，写作时只需要选择其中一种即可。议论文通常采用“总分总”或“总分”结构。总：提出自己的观点、见解或立场；分：给出自己持有这一观点的理由；总：进行总结（这部分可视情况省略）。谋篇布局【语料储备】Words & phrases agree disagree support manage difficult dangerous awful scared brave independent safety on ones own at risk in trouble get lost look after take care of be good for deal withSentences表明观点: In my opinion, I totally agree I support this idea. From my point of view, To my mind, it is necessary 陈述理由： It is enjoyable to Besides, it is a good chance for us to Whats more, it can also teach us Parents should allow their children to It is good / bad for childrens development. The purpose / goal is to build their independence. We should work out problems on our own.【自我展示】Possible version 1:I strongly support the idea of “dropping”.I think its exciting for us to manage a trip in the forest by ourselves.It will also be enjoyable to see different plants and cute animals along the way.Besides, trying a trip by ourselves is not only a good chance to learn to work out problems on our own, but also a good way to help us build independence.In my opinion, children should be educated not to depend too much on their parents.At the same time, parents should provide children with more chances to deal with different problems.Possible version 2:I think “dropping” is a terrible idea, even if it may help us grow up.Its very dangerous for children to walk without parents in the forest.Wild animals may attack them and they may get lost, which would make them feel scared.So I dont think it is good for the mental health of young children.Whats more, learning should be fun and bring pleasure.And there are many other ways to develop childrens independence.All in all, its not necessary to put children at risk when there are better ways to help them learn and grow.8