初中英语人教新目标七年级下册Unit 9写作指导.doc

七年级英语下册Unit 9写作指导【写作目标】用英语描写人物。【写作任务】假如你所在的英语社团本周的活动是口头描述自己最好的朋友。请你用英语写一篇短文，为发言做准备。【指点迷津】描写自己最好的朋友属于描写文，其写作要点如下：(1) 内容：可以先简述好友的个人情况，如姓名、年龄等；然后重点从好友的外貌、穿着、性格等方面进行详细描写；最后可以对好友进行总体评价，让他人对其有更全面的了解。(2) 人称：以第三人称为主。(3) 时态：一般现在时。【谋篇布局】【衔接】对John的外貌特征进行描写时，文中首先概述了他的身高、身材，然后介绍了他的发型、脸型及面部的细节特征，这些部分形成一个语义网，达到在内容上的连贯。在(4)中，第一句描写了 John 的脸型及面部细节特征，第二句用“很英俊的男孩”进行概括。行文时我们可将两个句子合并为含with介词短语(用来描述主语的外貌特征)的一句话，这样既保持了原句的意思，又提升了句子的简洁性。【连句成文】同学们，根据【谋篇布局】的练习，赶快动笔完成这篇短文吧！ 【收藏夹】【小试身手】假如在英语课上，老师给大家展示 了 一 对 双 胞 胎(twins)的图片和一些相关信息，请大家据此对双胞胎的外貌进行描写来完成课堂小练笔。 【答案】谋篇布局(1) is my best friend; is 11 / eleven (years old)(2) is tall and thin(3) has short straight brown hair(4) has a round face; big eyes; a small mouth; is a very handsome boy(5) wears a black hat(6) likes / loves wearing / to wear sports shoes(7) likes / loves making / to make friends(8) is very friendly; always says hello to other people / others(9) is a nice boy连句成文John Green is my best friend. He is 11 years old.John is tall and thin. He has short straight brown hair. He is a very handsome boy with a round face, big eyes and a small mouth. Sometimes, he wears a black hat. He likes wearing sports shoes. He is very outgoing and he likes making friends. He is very friendly. He always says hello to others with a smile.All in all, John is a nice boy. I feel lucky to have him as my best friend.小试身手One possible version:The young girls in the picture are Remee and Kian. They are twins but they look different in many ways.Remee, the girl on the left of the picture, has fair skin and blue eyes. Her hair is curly and blonde. Kian is the girl with dark skin and she is on the right of the picture. She has brown eyes and curly black hair.The twin sisters look different, but they wear the same dress and have big smiles on their faces. They're happy together!3