高一英语Book1U4 Part5 Writinging正反观点对比类议论文（教师版）2.0.pdf
Unit 4 Teen faints after skipping meals 1 1 1 1 Part Five Writing 正反观点对比类议论文 目标层级图 掌握应用文日记体的相关内容 LV.6 综合运用 LV.3掌握日记的写作框架LV.6掌握日记的相关表达和亮点句式Book 1 Teenage experiences 2 2 2 2 Unit 4 Teen faints after skipping meals 3 3 3 3 Book 1 Teenage experiences 4 4 4 4 文体指导 正反观点对比类议论文指的是以议论为主要表达方式的文体。就某一方面的问题通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非的方式来表达作者的观点和看法。一般只是要求就某一热点问题或者是观点来谈谈自己的看法。在陈述自己的观点时，可以运用议论文的一些写作方法来论述自己的观点，从而增强说服力。【真题导入】微信朋友圈已经成为非常受欢迎的社交平台。最近你班针对“是否允许父母看你的微信朋友圈”这一话题开展讨论，大家发表了不同的看法。请根据下面所给内容，介绍讨论情况并表达自己的观点。不同观点 理由 30%支持(1)青少年缺乏社会经验，需要父母的指导；(2)允许父母看微信朋友圈有助于父母与子女沟通。70%反对(1)每个人都需要隐私；(2)微信朋友圈应该是青少年和同龄人交流的平台。你的观点 表明自己的观点并说明理由。（不少于两点原因）注意：(1)词数 120 左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；(2)参考词汇：微信朋友圈 the Moments of WeChat；参与 involvement；隐私 privacy；代沟 generation gap。Recently our class has held a heated discussion about whether our parents should be allowed to see our Moments of Wechat._ _ 【范文赏析】Recently our class has held a heated discussion about whether our parents should be allowed to see our Moments of Wechat.Opinions vary from student to student.There are 30%of the students who are for it.The reasons are as follows.To begin with,as teenagers,we need our parents guidance especially in terms of social experience.Furthermore,without parents involvement,the generation gap between our parents and us may tend to become bigger and bigger.Instead,parents involvement can lead to better communication and a closer relationship between parents and children.However,70%of the students argue against it.For one thing,we hold the view that everyone needs some privacy.If parents are allowed to see our Moments,we wont have our own secrets.For another thing,the Moments of WeChat is mainly a way of communicating with friends of our own age.If our parents are allowed to see it,we cant share our thoughts with our friends freely.From my point of view,it is meaningful to let parents see our Moments,which makes them happy and stops them from worrying about me.Besides,our parents feel like seeing our Moments,which shows their care and love for us.【框架结构与注意点】写正反观点对比类议论文时，要做到要点完整，条理清晰。各段之间层次分明，以使文章有条理。写作时应注意下面几点：1.主体结构：本文可分为三部分：Unit 4 Teen faints after skipping meals 5 5 5 5 开头部分：论点的提出或引入辩论话题；第二部分：使用论据来论证论点，通常先是列举正方的观点及其理由，然后列举反方的观点及其理由。第三部分：表达个人的看法或者得出结论或提出解决问题的措施或建议。2.主体时态：第一段用现在完成时 或 一般过去时，当陈述正反两方观点时，用一般现在时 3.主体人称：议论文常用第三人称。经典例题 近日教育部(the Ministry of Education)要求加强中小学劳动教育，这一举措引发了人们的热议。请你根据下面表格中的内容，写一篇短文给校报英文版投稿。学生的观点 一部分学生：劳动教育有助于身体健康，全面发展。另一部分学生：劳动教育占用学习时间，影响成绩。你的观点 注意：1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ _ （一）谋篇布局 再审题过程中先确定写作文体类型和写作主题，然后确定时态和人称，最后根据写作要求整理正文结构的内容大纲。体裁：_ 正反观点对比类议论文 时态：_ 以现在时为主 主题：_ 加强中小学劳动教育的热议 人称：_ 以第三人称为主 第一段：_ 教育部的举措引发了人们的热议；第二段：_ 学生的不同观点；第三段：_ 自己的观点。（二）遣词造句 1.词汇(1)immediately adv.立刻，马上(2)be of great benefit to 对大有好处(3)get into shape 强身健体(4)take up 占用(时间)(5)have a negative effect on 对有消极影响 Book 1 Teenage experiences 6 6 6 6 (6)as far as Im concerned 就我而言，在我看来 2.句式(1)最近，教育部发布了一项要求。Recently，the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement(2)学生在校期间应接受劳动教育，这立刻引发了激烈的争论。Students should be given labor education while at school,which has immediately led to a heated debate.(3)一些学生认为这将对他们的健康有很大的好处。Some students think that it will be of great benefit to their health.(4)这将使他们能够强身健体。It will enable them to get into shape.(5)另一方面，一些学生认为这种教育将占用他们的时间。On the other hand，some students hold the view that this kind of education will take up their time.(6)他们的时间会花在学习上。Their time will be spent studying otherwise.(7)这会对他们的成绩产生负面影响。And it will have a negative effect on their grades.(8)所以在我看来，学生一定要接受劳动教育，这样他们才会更加珍惜劳动所带来的。So as far as Im concerned，students definitely should receive labor education so that theyll value more what labor brings about.3.句式升级(1)用 that 引导同位语从句合并句子 1、2 Recently,the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school,which has immediately led to a heated debate.(2)用现在分词短语作状语合并句子 3、4 Some students think that it will be of great benefit to their health,enabling them to get into shape.(3)用 which 引导非限制性定语从句合并句子 5、6 On the other hand,some students hold the view that this kind of education will take up their time,which will be spent studying otherwise.4.亮点句式背诵 引入辩论话题(教师带领学生翻译，并解释预警)(1)Recently,a heated discussion has been held in our class on/about whether.or not.(2)There are different opinions among students concerning this topic.(3)Opinions vary on this topic./Opinions are divided on this issue.列举正方的观点及其理由(教师带领学生翻译，并解释预警)(1)Some students are in favor of the idea that.(2)30%of the students think/believe/state/argue/hold the view that.(3)Some students find it understandable/reasonable/meaningful that.Unit 4 Teen faints after skipping meals 7 7 7 7 列举反方的观点及其理由(教师带领学生翻译，并解释预警)(1)Students who are strongly against it dont think so.(2)On the contrary,some people hold an opposite opinion,saying.(3)However,others dont agree with them with the idea that.连接词(教师带领学生翻译，并解释预警)(1)For one thing.For another.(2)Firstly.Secondly.Whats more/whats worse,worse still.Last but not least(3)besides,moreover,furthermore,in addition,plus,undoubtedly（毫无疑问地是）,admittedly（诚然）,clearly(4)therefore;as a result;because;(5)however;on the contrary;(6)to sum up;all in all 个人看法(1)As far as I am concerned,I am for the first view,because.(2)Personally speaking,I firmly believe that it is wise to do sth.(3)After weighing the advantages and disadvantages of.(4)In my opinion,its advantages outweigh its disadvantages,for.5.常用模板背诵 模板一 Para1 _ had a discussion about whether_.Para2 Opinions are divided on this issue._ of the students think _ should _.Whats more,_.But/However/On the other hand,_ of the students think _ shouldnt _.Para3 In short,_ have not arrived at any agreement yet.(In my opinion,_.)模板二 Nowadays,there is a widespread concern over the issue on which _.But it is well-known that the opinions concerning this hot topic vary from person to person.A majority of people think that _.In their views,there are _（数字）factors contributing to their choice as follows:In the first place,_.Furthermore,in the second place _.So it goes without saying that _.People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that _.In their point of view,on the one hand,_.On the other hand,_.Therefore,there is no doubt that _.As far as I am concerned,I firmly support the view that _.It is not only because _,but also because _.模板二难度较大，教师可以根据学生程度选择性使用，或在使用时可以对标黄的进行讲解。（三）连句成篇 _ _ _ _ Book 1 Teenage experiences 8 8 8 8 _ _ Recently，the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school，which has immediately led to a heated debate.As for students，opinions are divided.Some students think that it will be of great benefit to their health，enabling them to get into shape.On the other hand，some students hold the view that this kind of education will take up their time，which will be spent studying otherwise.And it will have a negative effect on their grades.Its true that students are given little chance of laboring nowadays，thus lacking the sense of labor.So as far as Im concerned，students definitely should receive labor education so that theyll value more what labor brings about.【过关检测】1.翻译下列句子（1）上周我们班召开了“教师是否应该在自习课讲课”的班级讨论会，大家观点各不相同。Last week,our class held a discussion about whether teachers should teach in self-study class.Different people have different opinions（2）63%的人认为网上结交外国朋友是可以理解的。63%of the students find it understandable that students make foreign friends online.（3）另外，考虑到安全问题，他们辩驳说学生还小不足以照顾自己，可能会受伤。Besides,taking safety into consideration,they argue that students are not old enough to take care of themselves,and may get injured.（4）相反，25%的人反对，他们认为这是浪费时间，肯定会影响学习。On the contrary,25%of the students are against it.They argue that it takes up f time and will have a negative impact on their studies.（5）我认为，户外活动对我们有好处，强身健体的同时也有利于学习。In my opinion,it is good for us to go for some outdoor activities,which can help us build our body and will be beneficial to our study at the same time.2.短文填空 最近，你班同学参加了某英文网站组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：高中学生是否有必要做志愿者？请根据表格提示写一篇短文，介绍此次讨论的情况并发表自己的看法，然后发表在该网站上。73的同学赞成 1.帮助他人，促进社会和谐发展；2.有助于培养责任感。27的同学反对 1.高中学生年龄尚小，不能适应某些工作；2.没有时间，有很多作业要做。你的看法？注意：词数 120 左右。参考词汇：和谐的 harmonious Unit 4 Teen faints after skipping meals 9 9 9 9 Recently our class have had a discussion whose topic was(1)_ it was necessary for high school students to do voluntary work.Opinions were(2)_(divide)on the topic.73%of the students(3)_（支持这个观点）for the reason that(4)_(volunteer)to help others made a contribution to building a harmonious society.(5)_（而且）,they believed a good sense of responsibility could be formed.(6)_（然 而）,27%of the students were against the idea.They argued that(7)_（一方面）,teenagers were too young to take up some work.For another,students time was limited with so much homework to do.From my point of view,its(8)_(benefit)for us to do voluntary work,for we can not only gain(9)_(value)experience but also a better understanding of(10)_(social).参考答案：whether;divided;supported the view/are in favor of/are for;volunteering;Moreover;However;for one thing;beneficial;valuable;society 上述文章填完之后也可以用来作为范文赏析，教师可以对其中的好的表达进行拓展讲解 链接高考 三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。一些同学认为(正方)另一些同学认为（反方）1应从儿童时期开始学习英语 2儿童时期记忆力好，可以记 住很多单词 3能为以后的英语学习打下坚实的基础 1.不应从儿童时期开始学英语 2.儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又要学英语，易混淆 3.会影响汉语学习和今后的英语学习 讨论未取得一致意见 注意：1文章的起始句已给出 2词数：100 左右；3参考词汇：基础 foundation;汉语拼音 Chinese pinyin The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Book 1 Teenage experiences 1010 1010 The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood.Opinions are divided on this issue.Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood.As little boys and girls have a very good memory,they can learn a lot of English words by heart.This will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning.But others do not agree.Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school.If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time,it will be very likely for them to mix them up.This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning.In short,the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.
