【课件】高中英语作文人物介绍.ppt

高中英语写作之人物简介类作文高中英语写作之人物简介类作文Learning Aims：1.Learn some words expressions and structures to describe a person 2.Write a passage about Jane Goodall.Preparation for writing 1、Birthday and birth place 1)出生于出生于年年月月地方地方2、Family background 2)在他父母的帮助下在他父母的帮助下 3)当他是一个小孩子的时当他是一个小孩子的时候候 4)在他的童年时代在他的童年时代 5)过着幸福过着幸福/艰难的生活艰难的生活 6)在在岁的时候岁的时候1)was/were born onin 2)with the help of his parents 3)when he was a small boy 4)during his childhood 5)live a happy/hard life 6)at the age of3、Education1)从从大学毕业大学毕业 2)当他在大学的时候，当他在大学的时候，他主修他主修3)在在方面有天赋方面有天赋 4)获得博士学位获得博士学位1)graduate fromdepartment of university,2)When at college,he majored in,3)have a gift for4)gain a doctors degree4.Big events in his life1)把自己一生的时间把自己一生的时间奉献给奉献给2)做做方面的研究方面的研究3)do sth with great determination and perseverance.4)win/get(the)first prize 1)devote his lifetime to ,2)do research about/into 3)带着巨大的决心和毅力带着巨大的决心和毅力干干 4)获得一等奖获得一等奖 5)赢得一枚金牌赢得一枚金牌6)获得诺贝尔奖获得诺贝尔奖7)become a world champion8)因因而获得奖章而获得奖章9)be awarded the title of5)win a gold medal6)win the Nobel Prize for 7)成为世界冠军成为世界冠军8)be awarded a medal for9)获得获得称号称号5、Evaluation1)one of the best(most important)2)被每个人尊重被每个人尊重3)his hard work brought him great success.4)be regarded as 5)set a good example to us 6)对对.评价高评价高7)把把专用于专用于/奉献给奉献给1)最好的最好的.之一之一 2)be respected by everyone.3)他的努力工作带给他的努力工作带给了他巨大的成功。了他巨大的成功。4)被看做被看做5)给我们树立了良好给我们树立了良好的榜样的榜样6)speak highly of7)devote.to.Then how to describe a person?一、写作内容一、写作内容1.age,sex,birth-place,background(概况概况)2.appearance,character(外表、性格外表、性格)3.Education(教育背景教育背景)4.big events in his or her life(in order of time)(经历、生平经历、生平)5.evaluation(评价评价)1.职位头衔：职位头衔：用用同位语同位语,年龄性别与家境也可用年龄性别与家境也可用同同位语位语。如：如：孙淑伟是来自广东的孙淑伟是来自广东的14岁男孩，他是世界跳水冠岁男孩，他是世界跳水冠军。军。Sun Shuwei,a world champion in diving(同位语同位语),is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.例句仿写：例句仿写：亚伯拉汗亚伯拉汗林肯林肯(Abraham Lincoln),于于1809年年2月月12日出生于肯塔基州。日出生于肯塔基州。(Kentucky)Abraham Lincoln,the son of a poor family,was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809.二、句式模板二、句式模板2.介绍出生介绍出生:介绍出生的时间、地点和家境用介绍出生的时间、地点和家境用分词结构分词结构,使文章更简洁。使文章更简洁。如：如：姚明于姚明于1980年出生在上海，是一位世界著名年出生在上海，是一位世界著名的篮球运动员。的篮球运动员。Yao Ming,born in Shanghai in 1980(定语定语),is a world famous basketball player.例句仿写：例句仿写：Marie Curie 1867年年11月月7日出生于波兰，是世日出生于波兰，是世界上最著名的科学家之一。界上最著名的科学家之一。Marie Curie，born in Poland on November seventh 1867,was one of the best known scientists in the world.查尔斯查尔斯狄更斯出生在贫苦的职员家庭，他几乎狄更斯出生在贫苦的职员家庭，他几乎没有受过什么教育。没有受过什么教育。Born into a poor clerk s family(原因状语原因状语),Charles Dickens had little schooling.例句仿写：例句仿写：1930年袁隆平出生于一个贫困的家庭，于年袁隆平出生于一个贫困的家庭，于1953年年毕业于西南农业大学毕业于西南农业大学(Southeast Agricultural College)Born into a poor family in 1930,Yuan Longping graduated from Southeast Agricultural College.3.描写外貌描写外貌:巧用巧用with短语。短语。如：如：My Chinese teacher is a beautiful lady,with long hair and big eyes(她长着两只大眼睛她长着两只大眼睛,留着长发留着长发).例句仿写：例句仿写：我的老板是一位有着黑色的头发，一双大眼睛的我的老板是一位有着黑色的头发，一双大眼睛的英俊年轻人。英俊年轻人。My boss is a handsome young man,with black hair and big eyes.4.生平事迹：生平事迹：尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓语动尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。词短语和倒装等高级语句。如：如：In his life,he got many honours，one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award.在他的一在他的一生中，他获得了许多荣誉，其中包括获得生中，他获得了许多荣誉，其中包括获得“2005年年感动中国年度人物感动中国年度人物”的称号。的称号。(定语从句定语从句)例句仿写例句仿写:Joan Goodall 在猩猩的自然环境中研究在猩猩的自然环境中研究猩猩，这让她更多地理解了猩猩的行为。猩猩，这让她更多地理解了猩猩的行为。Joan Goodall studied the chimps in their own environment,which made her fully understand chimp behaviour.In 2006,having broken the world record and got the gold medal(在他打破世界纪录并在他打破世界纪录并获得金牌之后获得金牌之后),he became the idol(偶像）偶像）of the youth.(分词短语做时间状语分词短语做时间状语)例句仿写：例句仿写：对自己的生活很满意，他不在乎名声和财富。对自己的生活很满意，他不在乎名声和财富。Satisfied with the his life,he cares little about his fame and wealth.Not only does he show interest in science,but also he has a gift for music.他不但对科学极感兴趣，而且他还有音乐天赋。他不但对科学极感兴趣，而且他还有音乐天赋。(倒装句式倒装句式)例句仿写：例句仿写：他不仅专注自己的研究，而且关心社会福利事他不仅专注自己的研究，而且关心社会福利事业。业。Not only is he devoted to his research,but also he concerns himself with the welfare project.写成长经历请按时间顺写成长经历请按时间顺序。如序。如when he was a small boy，at(the age of)five，in 2006，a year later等。等。5.评价评价:尽量运用短语。尽量运用短语。如：如：Lei Feng set a good example to us(给给我们树立了一个良好的榜样我们树立了一个良好的榜样),so all the people show great respect for/to him(很敬重他很敬重他).Next,lets move to practice!四四.写作写作(一一)Jane Goodall,1934年出生于英国。她是著名的动物年出生于英国。她是著名的动物学家学家(zoologist)。毕业于剑桥。毕业于剑桥Cambridge University)大学。大学。从小就梦想在自然环境中研究动物。从小就梦想在自然环境中研究动物。1960年来到非洲研年来到非洲研究猩猩。究猩猩。取得成就：取得成就：1)在在Joan Goodall 之前，没有人完全了解猩猩的行为：之前，没有人完全了解猩猩的行为：吃肉；一起狩猎；像家庭成员一样交流，生活。吃肉；一起狩猎；像家庭成员一样交流，生活。2)保护并尊重黑猩猩，反对用于实验和娱乐。帮助建立保护并尊重黑猩猩，反对用于实验和娱乐。帮助建立动物自然栖息地。动物自然栖息地。3)得到许多荣誉。得到许多荣誉。Jane Goodall,born in England in 1934,is a world famous zoologist,who graduated from Cambridge University.Since her childhood she had wanted to work with animals in their own environment.In 1960,she achieved her dream-she arrived in Gombe to study the chimps.Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour.Her work changed the way people think about chimps.For example,one important thing she discovered was that chimps hunt and eat meat.She actually observed chimps hunt as a group.She also discovered how chimps communicate with each other.She has argued that wild animals should be left in the wild and not used for entertainment or advertisements.She has helped to set up special places where they can live safely.Joan Goodall devoted all her time to studying chimps.She gained many honours.She inspires those who want to cheer the achievements of women.(二二)1)居里夫人居里夫人(Marie Curie)1867年年11月月7日出生于波日出生于波兰一个教师家庭。兰一个教师家庭。2)以第一名的成绩毕业于巴黎大学以第一名的成绩毕业于巴黎大学(Paris University)物理系。在校期间学习勤奋。物理系。在校期间学习勤奋。3)居里研究所居里研究所(Curie Institute)的创始人，新元素钋的创始人，新元素钋(Po)，镭，镭(Ra)的发现者。被称为镭的母亲。的发现者。被称为镭的母亲。4)1903年和丈夫同获诺贝尔物理奖。年和丈夫同获诺贝尔物理奖。1911年获得诺年获得诺贝尔化学奖。贝尔化学奖。Born into a teachers family in November,1867,in Poland,Madam Curie was one of the greatest physicists.In 1891 she went to study in Paris University.When she was studying in Paris,she lived a poor life,but she worked very hard.So she graduated from Paris University winning first.Madam Curie devoted all her life to her research.She was not only the founder of Curie Institute,but also the discoverer of two kinds of radioactive matter-polonium and radium.She was regarded as the mother of Ra.In 1903 she and her husband were given the Nobel Prize for physics.She received a second Nobel Prize for Chemistry in 1911.So she became the first scientist in the world to win two Nobel Prizes.Madam Curie was one of the greatest scientists in the world.She set a good example to us,so all the people show great respect to her.Thats all,thank you!