南京市专题14 书面表达-备考2024江苏中考英语易错知识梳理与变式精练（牛津译林版）(教师版).docx

专题14 书面表达 目 录01 易错知识梳理（包括：易错点讲解、典例、易错分析、举一反三）02 易错变式精练（包括：真题重现、模拟演练）易错知识梳理 【易错点1】写作步骤：1审题：确定文体、时态、人称、提示、写作要点或主题（时态、人称若出现错误，往往不止错一两句）2根据题目提示或说明，列出提纲：写出或勾画已给出的要点词汇短语，形成基本语义单位；若没有给出任何中英文要点提示，可以先写出中文-英文要点提示；同时注意文章条理清晰。（一定不能想一句写一句）3将要点扩展成句，连句成文。注意：运用自己熟悉且有把握的词汇、句型。遇到不会的词要找同义词、近义词代替。基本功不扎实的同学建议少用复合句；注意避免汉语式的英语。注意上下文的衔接。根据意思需要，句子之间可加上必要的连接词或过渡词。若是书信等文体，开头或结尾可能需要特定的语句，不要遗漏。4检查时态、人称、单复数、单词拼写等。【典例】Sunshine School为了倡导青少年有梦想、有行动，成为对社会有用之人，学校英文校刊开展了主题为“Be a strong Chinese teenager”的征稿活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示和要点，展开合理想象，写一篇英文短文，参加征稿活动。注意：1.语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范。 2.表达中请勿提及真实的姓名与校名。3.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Be a strong Chinese teenagerWith the fast development of science and technology, China has become one of the most powerful countries in the world. A strong China needs strong teenagers, so its our duty to improve ourselves. _【易错分析】1审题：第一人称；一般现在时，可用should、祈使句等表示建议；围绕“Be a strong Chinese teenager”，从“梦想”“健康”“学习”“志愿者工作”方面自行展开描述，可适当补充其他方面。2要点、提纲：“品质”方面：honest/诚实；thankful/感恩；friendly/友好；behave politely/礼貌举止“学习”方面：be interest in our study/对学习感兴趣；work hard/努力学习；have good study methods/有好的学习方法；listen carefully/认真听课；go over in time及时复习“健康”方面：be in good health/身体健康；healthy food/健康饮食；do sports/运动“梦想”方面：have a clear dream/有明确的目标；keep trying ones best/一直努力“志愿者工作”方面：do some voluntary work/做志愿者工作；community center/社区中心3拓展成文：（“_”为上一步的要点，“ ”为提纲之外补充的词汇语句，使得文章内容更丰富）I think we have lots of things to do. First, we should learn to be honest and thankful. We are supposed to be friendly to others and behave politely in public. Second, we should be interest in our study and we must work hard. Have a clear dream and keep trying our best to realize it. Thirdly, we should have good study methods, such as listening carefully in class, going over what we have learnt in time. At the same time, its helpful to be in good health. Wed better have enough healthy food instead of junk food, And its necessary to spend some time doing sports every day. Last but not the least, lets doing some voluntary work at our community center or in the old Peoples Home. Its meaningful for us to do something for others. If we follow these, we will be stronger.4检查【举一反三】在春节热播电影热辣滚烫中，贾玲通过坚持不懈的努力，实现了自己的人生价值，过上了“热辣滚烫”的人生。作为九年级的学生，我们正需要不屈不挠的毅力，不断拼搏的勇气。全力坚持做好每一件小事，成就更好的自己。请以“We Only Live Once”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。要点：1. 最近或多年来你坚持并全力以赴去做的一件事及理由；2. 它给你的学习和生活带来了怎样的影响。注意：1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2. 词数100左右。文章的开头已为你写好、不计入总词数。We Only Live OnceDear classmates, Its my honor to make a speech here. _Thank you!【范文】“_”标出的是要点，即成文之前先罗列中文或英文要点，写作步骤参考【典例-易错分析】Its my honor to make a speech here. Have you ever tried your best to do one thing? Have you ever lived your life to the fullest? Today I want to share the thing I keep doing these years with you. When I was in Grade 7, I couldnt speak English well because of my poor pronunciation, so I was always laughed at by others. I made up my mind to improve my spoken English no matter how hard it was for me at that time. These years I get up at 5 oclock every morning so that I can spend at least half an hour practicing speaking English. To correct my pronunciation, I also read English aloud after the tape every day. Now my English has greatly improved. This leaning experience has made a great difference to my life. I am not as shy as I used to be. Besides, when facing difficulties in study, I will never give up. Im ready to take on any challenge in the future.【易错点2】问题型-书面表达：问题就是写作要点【典例】成长中的青少年有着丰富的情绪体验。当取得进步时，你也许会和人分享喜悦；当日记被偷看时，你可选择冷静后再面对；当伤心时，或许你会运动流汗来稀释悲伤；当心中忧惧时，可设法强大自己学校网站英文版在征稿，期待你的分享。请根据提示，自拟题目，描述一次经历。写作要点：1. What experience would you like to share? 2. What have you got from the experience?写作要求：1. 用英文表达，题目自拟；2. 积极向上，言之有理，结构完整，逻辑通顺；3. 语言流畅，符合英语表达习惯；4. 书写清晰美观，词数120左右。【易错分析】1审题：记叙文；一般过去时；围绕“情绪”描述一次经历及收获；第一人称；需自拟标题2要点、提纲：总起：ups and downs/起伏不定；something unpleasant/不愉快的事；eel disappointed/感到失望；accept/接受；control/控制具体经历：clean up our classroom/打扫教室；ask some questions/问问题；no one left/没有人留下；felt angry/感到生气；control anger/控制愤怒；calm down/平静下来；clean up/打扫干净；be in order/有序；feel proud of/感到骄傲收获：be the master of my emotions/成为情绪的主人；courage/勇气；face negative emotions/面对负面情绪3拓展成文：（“_”为上一步的要点，“ ”为提纲之外补充的词汇语句，使得文章内容更丰富）Be the Master of Your EmotionsLife is full of ups and downs, and sometimes things dont go as planned. When something unpleasant happens, we often feel disappointed or even angry. One of our choices is to accept our emotions and dont let them control us.One day, it was our groups turn to clean up our classroom. When school was over, I went to the teachers office to ask some questions. After I hurried back to our classroom, I found there was no one left. I felt angry and wanted to return home at once. Upon stepping out of the classroom, the advice of controlling anger jumped into my mind. I started counting from one to ten to calm down, and I made it. In the end, I decided to put down my schoolbag and took the broom. I spent almost one hour cleaning up our messy classroom. When I was sure that everything in our classroom was in order again, I felt proud of what I had done. I successfully controlled anger to be the master of my emotions. This experience has inspired me to have the courage to face negative emotions in the future.4检查【举一反三】近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。为此，国家提出了把劳动教育 (Labor Education) 纳入中小学国家课程的方案。现在你校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育发起征文。请你以“Developing Labor Education in Our School”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文参赛。内容包括：1. Whats the importance of Labor Education? 2. What housework do you usually do at home? 3.What is your advice on Developing Labor Education in your School?4. Whats your opinion?要求：1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和所在学校的名称。2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Developing Labor Education in Our SchoolIts reported that Labor Education has been included in the education of schools in China. _【范文】“_”标出的是要点，即成文之前先罗列中文或英文要点，写作步骤参考【典例-易错分析】Developing Labor Education in Our SchoolIts reported that Labor Education has been included in the education of schools in China. Through labor we can exercise and develop our abilities. Besides we will not be afraid of difficulties. We can also learn to depend on ourselves. Only in this way can we understand our parents better and value what weve got. Many students hate doing housework, but I like to do. I usually sweep the floor, clean the table, wash clothes, even cook. I almost do housework every day. I think we can receive labor education by growing vegetables, having some DIY competitions, taking part in some volunteer activities and so on in our school. As teenagers, we are not only flowers but also hope of country, even humans. So we need to be stronger, more responsible and have more life skills. So I think it is not only meaningful but also necessary for us to receive labor education.【易错点3】回复型-书面表达：来信/邮件中提示写作要点【典例】假定你是李华，接到笔友Tommy的邮件询问有关垃圾分类的情况。请根据邮件内容给他回复，词数100字左右。To: Lihua 2024From: TommySubject: Waste sortingDear Li Hua,I hear that you are carrying out waste sorting in Yangzhou. Would you please share your ideas with me?Why should you carry out waste sorting?What do you do about waste sorting at school or at home?What else can you do to protect the environment?Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.All the best,Tommy要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；（3）词数在100词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。相关词汇：厨余垃圾kitchen waste；可回收垃圾recyclable waste；有害垃圾hazardous waste Dear Tommy,Im happy to hear from you. In your mail, you asked about waste sorting here in Yangzhou. Now Ill tell you something about it. _ _ All the best,Li Hua【易错分析】1审题：第一人称；一般现在时；根据来信可知回信要点有：为什么应该实行垃圾分类；如何垃圾分类；其他保护环境的方法2要点、提纲：为什么应该实行垃圾分类：more beautiful/更漂亮；separate into/分离；rubbish bins/垃圾箱；save resources/节约资源；making use of/利用；pollute our environment/污染环境如何垃圾分类：take actions/采取行动；collect information/收集信息；different/不同的；paper/纸；kitchen waste/厨房垃圾；food/食物；plastic/塑料；batteries/电池；tell about/告诉；the importance of/重要性其他保护环境的方法：keep power off/关闭电源；in use/使用；make a big difference to/起作用3拓展成文：（“_”为上一步的要点，“ ”为提纲之外补充的词汇语句，使得文章内容更丰富）Im happy to hear from you. In your mail, you asked about waste sorting here in Yangzhou. Now Ill tell you something about it. In order to make an effort to make our city more beautiful, we carry out waste sorting. We separate the wastes into different types, and then throw them into the rubbish bins. We will be able to save resources by making use of recyclable waste. Hazardous waste will not pollute our environment after special treatment. Here are some actions we can take to make the waste sorting better while we are at home. First, we can collect more information about waste sorting and prepare different rubbish bins for different wastes. Paper can be recycled, while kitchen waste can be collected as food for pigs. Above all, such harmful waste as plastic and used batteries should not be mixed with other wastes. Whats more, we can tell our parents and relatives about the importance of waste sorting.As well as waste sorting, keeping power off while electricity equipment is not in use is also a good idea to protect our environment.If everybody takes actions, we can make a big difference to our environment.4检查【举一反三】假定你是李华。你班交换留学生Simon即将返校，他对“校园科技周”非常感兴趣，他写了一封邮件向你询问相关信息，请你根据邮件内容和所给提示写封回信。注意：1.词数90左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.邮件需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺；3.邮件中不得泄露个人信息；4.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Hi Simon, Im very happy to tell you about our School Technology Week._Im sure you will enjoy the Technology Week.Li Hua【范文】“_”标出的是要点，即成文之前先勾画的中文或英文要点，写作步骤参考【典例-易错分析】Im very happy to tell you about our School Technology Week. It will be held in the No. 2 building in two weeks. There are many different kinds of activities in the Week. First, you can watch science fiction films like The Wandering Earth. Second, some students will tell stories about scientists like Deng Jiaxian. Whats more, our school will share the latest news about technology and show creative ideas about robots. You are crazy about robots, right? Great, there are some smart robot shows you can take part in here. Then you can see and experience how excellent they are.Im sure you will enjoy the Technology Week.【易错点4】思维导图型-书面表达：只给出哪些方面，不给出要点；或只给出其中几个要点，需要补充【典例】Now we have learned a lot about the role models（榜样）. It is their own core abilities（核心能力）that make them able to serve the country. What core abilities do you need in the future? Why? What will you do to improve these abilities? You will give a speech at the graduation ceremony. Please choose ONE core ability to write an English draft for it.注意：1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3词数80左右。Good morning, everyone!My name is Li Hua. Its my great pleasure to talk about “core abilities” today._ Thats all for my speech. Thank you for your listening!【易错分析】1审题：选择一个核心能力，介绍原因及如何提升；一般现在时；主要是第一人称2要点、提纲：你需要的核心能力，及原因：sports/运动；pay attention to our health/重视健康；keep healthy/保持健康；prevent diseases/防止疾病如何提升核心能力：relax/放松；make a plan of/计划；go out/外出；do some outdoor activities/户外活动；body and mind/身心；important/重要的3拓展成文：（“_”为上一步的要点，“ ”为提纲之外补充的词汇语句，使得文章内容更丰富）Good morning, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Its my great pleasure to talk about “core abilities” today. I think sports are the core abilities that we should have. COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health. We should spend more time doing sports to keep healthy and improve the ability to prevent diseases. We students should relax ourselves often. We need to make a plan of exercising and do sports for at least twenty minutes every day. On the weekend, it is better for us to go out and do some outdoor activities with our friends. It is good for our body and mind.I think it is very important to do sports. I hope that everyone can keep doing sports and try his best to keep healthy.Thats all for my speech. Thank you for your listening!4检查【举一反三】暑期临近，你和父母决定外出旅行，出行前，你会认真为家人做好旅行攻略。为此，你将结合以下提示用英语写一篇旅游计划书。要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2. 必须包括提示中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；3. 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4. 不能出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。Travel PlanThis summer holiday, I decide to travel with my parents. We have a discussion about that. Now Id like to share the travel plan._ _【范文】“_”标出的是要点，即成文之前先罗列中文或英文要点，写作步骤参考【典例-易错分析】Travel PlanThis summer holiday, I decide to travel with my parents. We have a discussion about that. Now Id like to share the travel plan.Beijing is my first choice. Its the capital of China with deep and rich culture. A great number of tourist attractions lie there, drawing millions of visitors attention from around the world. The Summer Palace used to be the place where the emperors spent their summers. How amazing! Much treasure is hidden in the Palace Museum. Im so curious about anything about Beijing that we must put it the first place to go to.We need to carry a map, a camera and some medicine. The map can guide us when getting lost. We will take pictures of some wonderful moments. When we get sick, medicine is a great help to us. Of course, we need to book tickets and hotels before we leave. Ill consider that rather than getting my parents to do it.I hope that my parents will have a great time and we can have good communication through this. After this trip, we can understand each other better.【易错点5】图片型-书面表达：即需要描述的大部分内容在图片中【典例】请仔细观察下面图片并发挥想象，用英语写出一篇涵盖每张图片内容且结局完整的故事。故事的开头已经给出。注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名学校名称；2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数80左右。Millie is a middle school student who loves playing with little animals. One day, when she was on her way to school, _