初中英语人教新目标八年级下册unit1-10单元话题写作讲解和范文.doc

八年级英语下册单元话题写作讲解和范文Unit 1 Whats the matter?1.几天前,Lisa得了感冒,妈妈给她量了体温,发现她发高烧，于是带她去医院。在路上,Lisa看到一个小男孩摔伤了膝盖,于是让妈妈带小男孩一起去了医院。医生给了她一些建议，另一个医生对小男孩的膝盖进行了包扎并告诉她们小男孩没有什么大碍。最后,Lisa的妈妈给男孩的妈妈打了电话请根据上面的文字材料,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文,描述故事梗概,要求语言通顺流畅,可适当发挥。【参考范文】Several days ago, Lisa caught a bad cold.Her mother took her temperature and found she had a fever.So she took her to the hospital.On their way to the hospital， Lisa saw a little boy fall down and hurt his knee.The boy was hurt so badly that he couldnt move at all.So Lisa asked her mother to take him to the hospital together with them.The doctor gave Lisa some medicine and asked her to lie down and have a good rest.And another doctor bandaged the little boys knee and told them that there was nothing serious with him.Then Lisas mother called the boys mother.When the boys mother came， she thanked Lisa and her mother.If everyone helps a little，the world will become a warm family.2.你的朋友Jack由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛，并且睡不好觉。写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况，并给出你对他的建议。要求：（1）内容包含所提供的信息，可适当发挥；（2）书写认真，句子通顺；（3）词数：80词左右。【参考范文】Jack is my friend.He likes playing computer games very much.He often sits in the same way for too long without moving.Now he has a headache, sore eyes and a sore back.He doesn't sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day.I think he should take breaks away from the computer.He shouldn't use the computer for a long time.He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night.I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.Unit 2 Ill help to clean up the city parks.【写作话题】本单元主要围绕“volunteering”这个话题展开，讨论如何向别人提供帮助，以“志愿活动（volunteering）”为话题的书面表达通常以描述某项志愿的计划或安排为话题，涉及的时态通常是一般现在时和一般将来时。【写作指导】 常用短语：打扫干净 clean up 讲故事 tell stories捐赠 give away打扫房间 clean the room参加 take part in志愿做某事 volunteer to do分发 give out/hand out名言警句：1）The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine.赠人玫瑰，手有余香。2）Nothing so popular as goodness.最受欢迎的是善行.3）Flowers need leaves, and people need help.花要叶扶，人要人帮。4）Helping others is a virtue.助人为乐是一种美德。【写作任务】1.假如你是Li Hua，上周你的学校举行了一次关爱贫困生的志愿者活动，下面请你给你的朋友Li Ming 写一封信，告诉他你的志愿者活动。时间：上周六 地点、活动：参观希望小学1.分发食物；2.帮忙打扫卫生 ；3.听老师讲一些贫困生的故事 ；4.在操场募捐。要求:1.句子通顺,语意连贯；2.包括表格中所有提示内容,但不要逐字逐 句翻译,可适当发挥；3.不少于80词。_【参考范文】Last Saturday we visited a hope school.Its a great way to to know some other childrens life.we had a party with the studens there and gave out food there.We also helped them clean up their classrooms.The head teacher tola some stories about some hardworking students who are from very poor families.And in order to raise money for them, we held a big sale in our playground the next day.We raised a lot of money.I think being a volunteer is really great and I would like to help more people.2.根据汉语提示及要求,以Lilys Dream为题写一篇短文.提示: 1.lily是一个中学生,她想成为一名职业演员.2.她同时也是一名志愿者,经常参加一些志愿者服务活动,业余时间她还上表演课.3.现在她遇到了一些麻烦,无钱上表演课.她想出了许多办法,如: 打电话给家长、主动辅导孩子的美术、张贴启事寻找工作挣钱等。4问题解决了，她可以继续上课了，她的梦想回实现的。要求：1、条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。2、不少于80个单词。【参考范文】Lily is a high school student.She wants to be a professional actress.As a volunteer, she often volunteers her time to help other people.At the same time she takes acting lessons.Now she has run out of money for acting lessons.She needs to come up with ideas for making money.She called up parents to offer children art lessons.She even put up signs for asking for jobs.Now she'll be able to continue her lessons, and she can become a professional actress one day.Unit 3 Could you please clean your room?【写作话题】本单元的话题和“家务劳动（housework/chores）”有关。该话题常见的书面表达种类多样，可以描述你做过的家务劳动，也可以发表对“学生做家务”的观点或看法。【写作指导】必背短语：take out the rubbish 倒垃圾do the dishes 洗餐具fold the clothes 叠衣服sweep the floor 扫地make ones bed 整理床铺clean the room 打扫房间do housework/chores 做家务help sb.do sth.帮助某人做某事take care of 照顾必背表达1.I think/believe that 2.I agree/disagree 3.I think its fair/unfair for children to4.I think children should /shouldnt because5.For example, they should/shouldnt because【写作任务】1.假如某报社正以“Should we teenagers do chores at home?”为题进行征文比赛活动,请你根据下面的提示内容用英语写一篇征文稿。要点提示： 要求：(1)表达正确,语句通顺；(2)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥；(3)不少于80词。Should we teenagers do chores at home?【参考范文】Should we teenagers do chores at home?Now many students dont like doing chores at home.There are two main reasons.One is that they think its their parents job to do chores at home.The other is that they think doing chores takes up their time for study.But I think we should help do chores at home because our parents are busy with their work and often tired after work.I often do chores at home，like making the bed，watering flowers，cleaning the rooms，taking out the rubbish and doing the dishes.I think doing chores is relaxing.I also feel great to help my parents.2.目前中学生学习任务重，压力大，而丰富多彩的业余生活，有利于开拓视野，调节身心，提高学习效率。请以“My Spare Time”为题，写一篇作文谈谈你的业余生活，如看书、看电视、玩电脑、做运动、做家务等。要求：包含提示所给要点，语言流畅，意思连贯，不必逐字逐句翻译，可以适当发挥拓展；词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。【参考范文】I am a middle school student.Though I m busy with my lessons,my sparetime is still colorful.After school I usually play sports .Sports help me to keep healthy and study better.I often do some reading in the evening.I think books give us much knowledge.So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time.Sometimes I watch TV or surf the internet.On weekends, I often help my parents with the housework.I sweep the floor,wash the clothes and learn to cook.I enjoy myself in my spare time.Unit 4 Why dont you talk to your parents?【写作话题】本单元围绕“人际交往”这一话题,涉及谈论青少年在生活、学习中遇到的困惑或烦恼，以及相应的一些建议。写此类短文首先应该掌握常用的提建议的句型，根据一定情景，明确提建议的方法，再根据所提供的信息展开合理的发挥，使句子意思完整。【写作指导】必背短语1.work out 成功地发展；解决2.argue with sb.和某人争吵3.say sorry (to sb) (向某人)道歉4.in ones opinion 依看5.talk with sb.和某人谈一谈municate with sb.和某人交流7.agree with sb.同意 (disagree with.不同意）8.get on/along well with sb. 与某人相处9.be good for.对.有好外10.deal with .处理，应对11.give sb.a lot of pre ssure 给某人施加很大压力12.cause a lot o f stress 造成许多压力【必背句型】1.I dont really agree with because 我不同意因为2.Its bad for your study and health to surf the Internet until late at night.上网直到深夜对你的学习和健康是不利的。It is +形容词+for sb to do sth 做某事对某人而言是3.In my opinion, it is important for children / parents to 我认为，对于孩子/父母来说是重要的in ones opinion 依看。用来表达某人的想法。4.I believe it is better if children / parents 我认为如果孩子们/父母.会更好5.If children , they will 如果孩子们.,他们将会1.本周五英语活动课的主题是“谈谈你对上课外补习班的看法”。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文谈谈自己的看法，在活动课上与同学们分享。【思路点拨】1.审题：(1)该写作任务要求谈谈对上课外补习班的看 法。这一话题贴近学生的现实生活，学生们有话可说。(2)同学们既可以支持上课外补习班，也可以反对上课外补习班。但是必须做到观点明确，有说服力。2.布局：亮明观点 .have different opinions .agree with .阐述原因 .reasons are as follows .tired and bored .makes their children stressed .总结 . have time to relax .【参考范文】Different people have different opinions on taking after-school classes.Some think they're interesting and useful, but others think they're boring and useless.As for me, I agree with the second one.The reasons are as follows.First, now students have many classes and exams at school, which make them really tired and bored.Second, some parents send their children to all kinds of after-school classes, and they always compare them with other children.It makes their children stressed, and it is not good for their health.2.某中学英语报正在开辟专栏讨论中学生如何减压的话题。假设你叫李华，请从以下几个方面，用英语写出你的具体做法，向该栏目投稿。词数 80 左右。内容要点：1.与他人交流 ；2.参加体育活动 ；3.参加娱乐活动 ；4.真他减压方式。Dear editor,There are many ways for us junior high school students to relax ourselves.As for me, when I feel stressed, I usually communicate with my friends, parents or teachers.Sometimes, I will do sports with my classmates, such as riding bikes, going swimming and so on.I go to the movies or listen to light music in my spare time, too.What's more, going on a trip is another way to make me relaxed.I believe we'll live more happily, be healthier and learn better if we are more relaxed.Yours,Li HuaUnit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?【话题谈论过去正在发生的事情】讲述大事件发生的时候人们正在进行的各种活动。要求同学们会对过去的事情进行描述，写作时要运用相应的过去时态，如一般过去时或过去进行时。【参考范文】1Dear Mrs Help,I have a big problem and hope to get your advice.My desk mate, Zhang Jun, often talks to me in class.Yesterday, in our Chinese class, while Mr Chen was telling an interesting story to us, Zhang Jun kept talking to me.I tried to stop him doing that, but I failed.When Mr Chen found we were talking, he was very angry.He asked us to go to his office after that class.I do not know what to do.Could you give me some advice?Yours,Zhou Yang【参考范文】2I saw an accident while I was going to school last Wednesday morning.At about 8:00, a man was driving a truck along the road near our school when it suddenly hit a tree.Luckily, the driver wasnt badly hurt, but the apples on the truck fell onto the ground.Soon many people came to help.Two teachers took the driver to the nearest hospital.A tall boy stood in the middle of the road and directed the traffic.A girl called the police.At the same time, some other students picked up the apples and put them onto the truck.When I saw this, I thought everyone was great and ran to join them.Unit 6 An old man tried to move the mountains.【话题神话和故事】讲一个故事。具体到书面表达中要求同学们掌握讲故事时常用一般过去时，叙述的过程中一定要使用once upon a time, then, as soon as, so that, unless, so that等过渡语言。【参考范文】1A crow felt very thirsty.He looked for water everywhere.Finally, he found a pitcher.But there was not much water in the pitcher.His beak could not reach it.He tried again and again, but he still could not reach the water.When he wanted to give up, he came up with an idea.He picked up a small stone and dropped it into the pitcher.Then he took another and dropped it in.Gradually, the water rose.The crow was able to drink the water.【参考范文】2Once upon a time, there was a tiger in a forest.He thought that he was the king of all the animals.He was quite rude and impolite to other animals.So other animals didn't want to play with him.One day, a lion came and had a fight with the tiger.The lion won the fight.Then he said to the tiger, “You should take care of people around you and be polite to them.It is very important to get on with other animals.”The tiger thought the lion's words were right.So he accepted the lion's advice.Finally, the lion, the tiger and other animals lived a happy life in the forest.Unit 7 Whats the highest mountain in the world?【话题世界上存在的事实】描述地理和自然现象，写作时应使用一般现在时以及形容词和副词的比较级和最高级来陈述事实，常用句型有as原级as, 比较级 than, (one of) the 最高级in / of。最后应将文章升华至保护自然的高度。【参考范文】1Animals are peoples friends.But many wild animals are endangered.Their living places are becoming smaller.And many of the wild animals cant find enough food to eat.At the same time, humans are killing animals for their fur, skin, teeth and meat.I think people should do something to protect endangered animals.They can build nature reserves and dont kill animals or eat their meat.【参考范文】2Dear Tom,Yesterday I visited the Great Wall in China with my parents.Its really great.Let me tell you something about it.There were many tourists visiting it.Its more than 6,000 kilometers long and five meters wide.In ancient times, it is quite difficult to build such a great wall.Without modern machines, the workers did all the jobs with their hands and wisdom.The Great Wall is famous all over the world.It shows the wisdom of the Chinese working people.I hope you can come and see with your own eyes one day.Yours,TonyUnit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet?【话题谈论最近的事件及经历】以文学和音乐为话题，掌握现在完成时的用法。【参考范文】1Mo Yan is a famous Chinese writer.He was born on February 17, 1955 in Shandong.When he was a primary student, has family was very poor.His mother often told him to work hard.And she hoped he would be a useful person in the future.Ever since then, he has worked harder than before.He wrote many famous novels, such as Red Sorghum and Frog.He won the Nobel Prize for Literature in 2012.His success tells us a truth: nobody can beat you unless you beat yourself.【参考范文】2During the winter holiday, I spent much time in reading books.I finished reading the book Journey to the West.It was written by Wu Chengen.Its really a fantastic fiction.It is mainly about the adventurous stories of Xuan Zang and his three disciples.They experienced 81 dangers and disasters and fought against different monsters.My favorite character is Monkey King.He was clever and brave.From this book, I learned that we should be brave and have confidence in ourselves, no matter how many difficulties we meet.Teamwork is also important to us.Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum?【话题谈论过去的经历】讲述我们在一些有趣的地方经历的有趣的事情，写此类短文首先应该掌握常用一般过去时和现在进行时，不要面面俱到，选取最有特色、最熟悉的一个方面来写。【参考范文】1My HometownHave you ever been to Changsha? It is one of the most popular cities in China.The people here are very friendly.It is in the southeast of China.I think it is better to visit it in September or October because it is not too hot or too cold.There are a lot of famous places, such as Yuelu Mountain and Orange Beach.Besides, you can find a lot of delicious food here.The most famous food is Stinky Toufu.Welcome to Changsha.【参考范文】2Have you ever been to Beijing?I have been there 3 times.I think its really a beautiful city.I fell in love with it when I first traveled there.It has many nice places like the Great Wall, the Birds Nest, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum.In Beijing, you can buy what you want easily, because there are supermarkets everywhere.The streets are wide and clean.I believe you will have a good time if you go there.Unit 10 Ive had this bike for three years.【话题谈论自己拥有的东西和周围环境】要求同学们写作时要运用相应的现在完成时态，特别是用since和for来表达时间段。【参考范文】2I have a doll for 9 years.And I still like it very much.When I was a child, my parents were busy with their business.Sometimes they had to work even on weekends, so I had to stay at home alone.I often felt lonely and scared at home.After my aunt knew that, she bought the doll for me.It is a Mickey Mouse.I have talked with it about my happiness and sadness since I was young.And it has become my best friend.The doll helps me a lot.I love my doll.【参考范文】1My favorite thing is a toy bear.I have had it for nine years.My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday.I like it very much because it is so cute.Its special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old.The toy bear has given me so many memories.I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it.I think it is one of my best friends.8